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Posted: 12 May 2012 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
Firstly I was overwhelmed.. urdu main OS na sahi.. shayari mil gaiy.. aur woh mere liye kisi bhi urdu OS say kahin behtar hain... So firstly thank you for writing it.. and most importantly sharing it.. I know you usually don't.. Thanks you so much for at least sharing this. :) 

Kya likha hain..la-jawab kar diya.. waqai main bohat he khoob likha hain, bohat he khubsoorati say aap ne ek aise jazbat ka zahir kiya hain. Dil ko chuu liya aap ne. Amazing Fiza... No words to describe. Brilliantly written.Superb. :))


So I'm clueless about such stuff.. mujhe shayari parhne ka shauk toh bohat hain.. par itna janti nahi hoon..
Nazam aur shayari main faraq kya hain? Ermm

.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 12 May 2012 at 3:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by .SilentPrincess

Firstly I was overwhelmed.. urdu main OS na sahi.. shayari mil gaiy.. aur woh mere liye kisi bhi urdu OS say kahin behtar hain... So firstly thank you for writing it.. and most importantly sharing it.. I know you usually don't.. Thanks you so much for at least sharing this. :) 

Kya likha hain..la-jawab kar diya.. waqai main bohat he khoob likha hain, bohat he khubsoorati say aap ne ek aise jazbat ka zahir kiya hain. Dil ko chuu liya aap ne. Amazing Fiza... No words to describe. Brilliantly written.Superb. :))


So I'm clueless about such stuff.. mujhe shayari parhne ka shauk toh bohat hain.. par itna janti nahi hoon..
Nazam aur shayari main faraq kya hain? Ermm

.SilentPrincess


thanks alot dear... i am extremly glad u liked it

Nazam shayari ki hi ek kisam hai...

Nazam mein free hand hota hai...  hum 4 lines ek sath likh sakty hain... us mein gazal ki traha qafia milna zaroori nhi hota...

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Posted: 12 May 2012 at 9:56pm | IP Logged
Its beautifulHeart
di can I request you some thing? 




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Posted: 12 May 2012 at 10:03pm | IP Logged
wow wow wow its so beautiful

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Posted: 13 May 2012 at 12:29am | IP Logged
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Posted: 13 May 2012 at 4:51am | IP Logged
amazing poem..
bahut bahut pyari haan...
bus.. koi isse is waqt mere saamne .. gaa k suna.. de..
chaar chaand lag jayengi..
is poem ki khubsoorti ko..
aur agar..
mithi mithi baarish ne iska saath diya to kya kehna...

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Posted: 13 May 2012 at 4:54am | IP Logged
lovely poem..
so.. lovely...

mere pass..
words nahi isko describe karne k liye..
you are just..
amazing writer...
just.. the best of everyone
(no offences)

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Posted: 13 May 2012 at 8:27am | IP Logged
Beautiful poemSmile
Beautifully writtenClapClap

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