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shria19 Senior Member
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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 10:06am | IP Logged
really nice

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
diii.. it was beautiful
mjhe bohot had tak samjh aaya bt kahin main nhi smjh payi...
wo urdu aati nhi na isiliye
bt jo bhi samjha it was indeed vryy beautiful...
thanks 4 the pm
loved it
 may god bless u

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Posted: 30 December 2011 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
wowww so beautiful os loved it

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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
yaar, i dont know proper hindi and here you write such nice sounding urdu...!!!
i didnt understand completely but what i understood , i liked.

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Posted: 12 May 2012 at 2:44pm | IP Logged

Random thought… hit me at 3 am in morning..so I wrote it on cell than in morning when I read it, it was making sense…

 

Though I have a strict habit of not sharing  my shairy with anyone, but than somehow Liaba's word .. I thought to give it a chance… tu yeah apki nazar

 

 

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Yaad,

Kuch guzri hui seehiya raaton ko roshn kerti,

Yaad tanhiyoon ki shamoon ka Aks bhi hai,

Yaad mehfil mein ghonjti khamoshi bhi hai,

Yaad humsafar bhi,

Had-e-safar bhi hai,

 

Yaad,

Yaad soohkay hue pairaoon ki tooti hoi shakhoo jaisai,

Girti sambhalti, sambhal k girti bhi hai,

Yaad in kamzoor lamhoon ko Seechti hui dhal bhi hai,

Yaad sukooon bhi hai,

Yaad meri tarap bhi hai,

 

Yaad

Un sitara raatoon ki bhi hai,

Ghass per latay Un bhandy hoay haathoon ki bhi hai,

Yaad hijar mein doobay hue dil ki bhi hai.

yaad vassal ki bhi hai, kuch Azal ki bhi hai,

 

 

Yaad,

Yaad kuch ranjhishon k akas bhi hai,

Khwaishon ka madawa bhi hai,

Yaad mehais haraf nhi, ek shakas bhi hai,

Yaad teri bhi hai,

Yaad meri bhi hai,

 

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Posted: 12 May 2012 at 2:54pm | IP Logged
Beautiful poem Fiza..in shayri we call it, "Nasri Nazam" n i like to read nasri nazams in which you can express your emotions flawlessly...
very expressive..
thanks for sharing with us...


Edited by Maria. - 12 May 2012 at 2:55pm

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Posted: 12 May 2012 at 2:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maria.

Beautiful poem Fiza..in shayri we call it, "Nasri Nazam" n i like to read nasri nazams in which you can express your emotions flawlessly...
very expressive..
thanks for sharing with us...


thank alot dear..Smile
ya i know.. but somehow i found this form most difficult.. maybe cause i am in gazal wirting from always...
thnku

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Posted: 12 May 2012 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
WOW di beautifully written...
Though i got it like 80% but still the way u wrote it, ws just WOW...Loved how u portrayed 'YAAD' here...aaahh its the memories that make us laugh nd cry at the same time...
Brilliant dii...

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