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Yaad ..nazam..pg 7 (Page 5)

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Posted: 26 December 2011 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
omG its Fabulous Fiza.

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Posted: 26 December 2011 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

Originally posted by --Ruchi--

Mesmerizing...Day Dreaming Day Dreaming

The first word came in my mind after reading this...Its awesome Fiza di...
aap kyu aisa kah rahi ho that its not up to the mark...
Plz don do injustice...its really beautiful...

I loved itHeart 
And loved these lines-

Na tumahray her lafaz mein pazeerai hoon, na meray her harf mein taghfakur, na her lamah izhar ho, na meray haraf haraf shikayatein.. ..na tum khabi sharikay safar raho,han  humsfar magar tum hi tum rahoo

Yaha aahaly zaman k daar bhi ho, per log se befikri bhi, jaha her lamha tumhara sparsh na ho, per yeah ehassa zaorri'jaha ahatoo se waqfiyat aur khamsohi mein shidaat ho..


they are so so beautifully writtenDay Dreaming

If I say more than I will ruin the beauty surely...bas itna kahna hai ke


Ye jo ek dard-e-mohabbat ki khalish hai Hasrat

Maqsad-e-dil hai yahi, jaan-e-tamanna hai yahi...

Love u di Heart


 
 
thnku so much jani..
phew u liked it...
wasy ap k zauq ki daad dani paray gi...lovly shair u added...
n abt ur signature...love for the sake oflove
 

thank u di..actually aapka OS padte time yahi sher mind me aaya tha..so I addedSmile
and signature...SIGH!!!..for the sake of love...!

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Posted: 26 December 2011 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
fiza-ji... Hug

bade muddat ke baad aaj mauka mila hai kuch kehne ka aapse.. humaari urdu ki hadd appko toh pata hi hai.. isliye hum kuch zyada kehne ki gustakhi toh nahi karenge.. par sirf itna kehna chahenge ki aapke in khubsurat lafzon mein itni roshni hai.. jo bejaan dil mein bhi dhadkan jaga de.. usse phirse mohabbat karna sikha de..

thank you for such an wonderful OS Fiza-ji

HeartHeart
~jiya~

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Posted: 26 December 2011 at 1:21pm | IP Logged

Fiza dii cudnt understand it fully...coz u know na i dont understand urdu well...

But ya somehow understood that its wriiten very beautifully and has a deep thought...Aab kya thought hai yeh zaida samajh nahi aaya...

Love u dii...

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Posted: 26 December 2011 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
Beautiful Fiza
loved it thnx 4 d pm

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Posted: 26 December 2011 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
beautiful one fiza
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 8:07am | IP Logged
Very Nice OS

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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 8:36pm | IP Logged
 i like the titte...Smile
beautiful wordings although i didnt understd it completely kch words tu sach mai difficult thei... itnei mushkil urdu samjh nai aati... Unhappy
 
but it was really lovely...
 
thnkas fo rthe pm dear...

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