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Yaad ..nazam..pg 7 (Page 2)

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
Wl'Allah doctor sahiba
urdu tu waqi kamal kia hai
likhai say jhalakta hai ka urdu adab say shaqaf bhi hai
per kahin kahin mahasoos hota hai k es thyreer ko urdu
mumakaml urdu may rakhnay k liay thora bhoat jaaber karnay paraha hai bechare, likhai per
baharhal kavish kafi achi hai ap ki

sub sy bhar k yah k fe'zamana noojawan aur woh bhi teeb say taloq rakhnay walay, urdu adab say na sirf shaqaf rakhtay hain bulkay acha likhtay bhi hain

khoob bhoat khoob
 


Edited by snow007 - 28 September 2011 at 4:31pm

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 4:18am | IP Logged
beautiful!Clap

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Amazing OS Fiza
thnx 4 d p

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wow fiza it was so real...
i loved it...
 
life is realy strange and difficult to gues and spend...
loved it...Hug

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fizuuu- a beautiful piece of  writing
simplyyy loved it
oye hoye- my cascade is so talented
feel proud of u
thanx 4 writing such a lovelyyy os
muahhh

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simply beautiful fiza...very nicely written...Smile

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wah jee wah, apne to hume ruswa kardiya, kaise kaha ke iss ka sir aur pair nahi...waise zaroorat bhi kya hai sir pair ki isse mehsoos karne ke liye bas Dil ka hona zaruri hai , baki sir aur pair gaya tel lene...lol...!

waise yeh hunar itne dino tak kaha chupa kar rakha tha madam...ek ek alfaaz sedha dil ko chu gaya...!

Na day koi asi saada , ab in sookhay hua paato mein uraan ki taqaat nhi, ab in houtoo ko muskan ki addat nhi

kya khub likha hai hume to tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi mil rahe...!

waise valliyah ke wajah se aapne  pm kiya iske liye hum tahe dil se aapke shukar guzar hai...!

p.s...ab zara comments par gaur farmaiye aur batayiye ke kya hum galat the...!



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