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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 12:08pm | IP Logged

I AM PMING U BECAUSE OF VALIYAH, SO IS K SIR YA PIR NA HO TUSORRY..

 

 

Kitna arsa beet gaya , kitni rutain humny in dareejo per guzar di, phir bhi, zindagi hai k chaly jarahi hai, Na rukh ti hai, na thak ti hai, na chalny dayti hai, na gir ker sambhal ny dayti hai, na tanha tanhai mein khud se milny dayti hai. Chahti hai tu her woh chah jis ki chah na tu dil mein hai, na laboo per

 

Aur phir, woh aur us k unhokay sawal, khud haumian khamsoh ker k , pochti hai k chup kyun hoo, khud humain tanha ker k pochti hai k tanha kyun ho.

 

Hass ker hum se khati hai, Qurbaat k her ek rishta tu diya tha hum ny tum ko, na sambhaly tum se tu dosh humra kyun ker hai..

 

Fakhir se hum ny bhi khadiya us ko, qurbaat se rishto ki shansai tum ny li, tu her ilzam, her gunha tum per hai

 

Kitny ajab se hain yeah rishtay, ya  yun khay sirf  woh ek rishta, hath bahra day do khojay us mein hum, hath chora lay tu kho jay khud se hum. Ajab se khel hai, tamesha bhi hum, tamasbeen bhi hum.

 

Aur jab ab khud ko chopay, daar 'o- deewar ko apany haslo se band ker k , chup chap in sanatoo mein kho gay tu dekho, suno, yeah awazein, shour kerti , kanoo ko cheerti, roh ko dhalati yeah awazien, nhi suni humain yeah awazein.

 

 cheeik cheeil ker kyun asss, is toothy hoay khandar k bahar , bekauf saadein laga rahi hai, loot jay is se kaho, khuda k lya loot jay is se kahoo,ab k nhi kholein gay hum koi girki , koi dareeja. Na day koi asi saada , ab in sookhay hua paato mein uraan ki taqaat nhi, ab in houtoo ko muskan ki addat nhi

 

is ehsaas-e-musarayt ko farmosh ker chukay hum, is rishyt-e-yaqqen se bay -atebaar hu chukay hum

a zindagi ab laut ja, yaha na aayy

aa zindagi ab laut jay aha na aa

 

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Woh mjhy ko dekhti hai aur zoor se hasti hai,

Yeah maahaz tumhara kasoor hai, maahaz tumhara tasvoour, tu jab taut gaya sab kuch tu hum zalim kyun, humain tu sab ny hamesha un hi paya hai , her nafaas , her nasal sab ny tumhain yeahi batay hai

Yeah la-hasil se mazil bhi tum ny choni, hum ny kab thi dekhlai. Tu rasaty k taayoon bhi tumhara ho, hum kyun ker tum ko dekhlain. Is rahguzr mein tum khoojao tu hum tum ko kuch kyun badlain, yeah sab kuch tumhara hai, dard bhi dawa bhi. Na hum tumhary masiha, na hum tahary koi taabeeb,

So chalna bhi ab tummy hain, na cahlo tu bhi tum per hai.

Sab kuch ab tumhra hai maya bhi , aur fani bhi

Sab kuch ab tumhara hai zindagi bhi, aur ''



Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 May 2012 at 2:45pm

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
YA ALLAH...ShockedShocked
Fiza API...Embarrassed
hats off...StarStarStar
awesome OS...ClapThumbs UpClap
i loved it...EmbarrassedBig smileEmbarrassed
kuch word hain jo samajh nhi aya bt over all jo samajh aya woh bhttt hi lajawab hain...ClapEmbarrassedClap
i jst loved it...Big smileEmbarrassedBig smile
d deep thought inside it is jst awesome...ClapStarClap
apko na sach mein ek book likhni chahiye...Approve
ap itna accha kese likhti hain...Wink
hum sach bol rahe hain humey bhttt accha laga...Embarrassed
pata nehi kyun thora sa sukun laga...Day Dreaming
bhttt bhttt bhttt accha hain...Clap
maine har ek word samajh ne ke liye ek ek line bhttt bar parhe...WinkLOLWink
bt seriously i loved it lodsss...Embarrassed
d deep thought inside it is really awesome...StarClapStar
beautifully written...ClapClap
i loved it to d core...Embarrassed
i jst loved dis lines...brilliantly written...Day Dreaming


So chalna bhi ab tummy hain, na cahlo tu bhi tum per hai.

Sab kuch ab tumhara hai maya bhi , aur fani bhi

Sab kuch ab tumhara hai zindagi bhi, aur i think maut bhi!!!



love u lodsssHugHugHug


Edited by 18anila1 - 27 September 2011 at 12:50pm

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Fiza, i read it completely. (finally)
it was very nice.
thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
oops...sorry double posting...Ermm

Edited by cutiepie12 - 27 September 2011 at 1:28pm

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
fiza jee...Hug
it ws sooo guuuddd...loved it completely
awww...m totally in awe of it

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 3:16pm | IP Logged
Be intha khobsourat or Lajawab 
bohat ancha laga 
Thanks for pm 

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
fiza that was reallly nice...
very touching...very well written...:):)
 
P.S...i understood most of it...

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luvedd it

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