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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 7:46am | IP Logged



chalo kisi ko tou khayal aaya kay meray BHAI ki MISSIN SMILE ki REPORT THANAY mein likhwa dayBig smileBig smileBig smile... CID mein nahiWinkWinkWink

again a



now on UR REQUEST againWinkLOL
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Edited by gadhadada - 27 September 2011 at 8:28am

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 8:19am | IP Logged
Just read poem on Daya sir and it's really out of the world. I liked the way you started and the concept is really great. The end was good too and I hope the most precious smile comes back soon. Smile

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 8:22am | IP Logged
GD ... please stop quoting poems re ... it maes the page slow while opening !!!
 
 
@Paro ,,,... lovely one dear ... the smile on was just fabolous and really touchin !!!!I'm oo aiting for that smil to b found !!

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 @bhavna dii... SO SORRY... I EDITED MY POST...

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Great job.AWESOME.ClapClapClap
ClapU jst got a picture of our duo's frndship.CongratsClapThumbs Up


Edited by reshmaramesh - 27 September 2011 at 9:11am

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PARO..16

Second poem-Missing Report

After being not able to that SMILE everywhere..
I went to Police Station and filed my Report there..

'Officer,Officer!' I called out,
Officer came out asking "Wats dis Noise all about?"

I requested him Sir,I want to file a missing Report..
I Have tried to find it wd all afforts..

He asked me What exactly is Missing?a Thing or a person??
I said its a Smile,that lost without any Reason..

At first he thought i am Mad as i was jumping like a tribe,
Then putting his thought apart,he asked me to describe..

I said that smile is pure,gentle and comes directly frm his Heart,
and noone can describe it even the Scholer of Art..

The smile used to come when he did Naughty deeds,
That smile used to come when he Shyed..

After loosing that Smile in thin Air..
He is Incomplete which is not fair..

I said it is Daya Sir's Cute Smile and started Day Dreaming there..
He said 'Ahem,Ahem! Do u know it must have lost where?

I said i dont know Sir and Started Crying there,
He Called his Officers and odered them to find that Smile Everywhere...

I said Sir please find it at any Cost or rather,
Many Hearts around the World will Surely Shatter..!!

He said that he will find Where the Smile has lost,
And give it back to Daya sir at any cost..

Still Waiting for the Day wen he would find that thing,
Smiles on Many faces that thing will Rurely bring..!!


Edited by Naomi. - 28 September 2011 at 6:30am

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 10:43am | IP Logged
@ Candy...

At Firstly ...


your Poems are...


So that...




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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 10:50am | IP Logged
@paro:hey Friendship poem superb...Thumbs Up
Heart touchingHeart
Reallly i luved it
@Naomi:thanks for ur PM

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