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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 3:30am | IP Logged
Hi Everyone !!
This is my first Creative thread Embarrassed
but before saying anything i want to give a big n heartful thankx to Dada fr Supporting me Clap

Nw,I hav written two poems,first based on Our lovely Duo's friendship wich is very Close to our hearts but now According to me has vanished Sumwhere in thin air..
And other one is about Daya sir's Missing Smile..

I dnt knw if they are gud or bad but they r the justure of my heart..
I hope u all will like them and if u dont,Ur Jute Chappal,Rotten eggs n Tomatoes r heartly Welcumed.. Smile
Poems will be posted soon in next two posts..
P.S-plz dont comment till both poems arent posted..
Thankx Smile

Edited by ..Candy.. - 28 May 2013 at 3:45am

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 3:32am | IP Logged
First poem


The hope is yet to be done..
The friendship journey is yet to rebegan..

That care and concern for each other,
That hand of assurance always on shoulder..

The support of a brother and Naughtiness of a friend,
That friendship was the most beautiful thing for me on this land..

That friendship that taught us the meaning of a friend,
But now it looks like going out of the hand..

When everyone stepped back,that friendship came aloud,
But nw it seems to be Sumwhere lost in the Crowd..

The art of understanding the other without asking a word,
It seems that friendship from FW's vision is blurred..

The friendship that showed how to Sacrifice even ur life for the other,
But Sumhow it looks that now about each other they dont even bother..

I want that friendship back at any cost..
Dnt want it in Crowd to be lost..

The Hope is yet to be done,
The friendship journey is yet to Regan..

Edited by PARO..16 - 27 September 2011 at 4:11am

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 3:42am | IP Logged
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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Congrats on your own thread, waiting for poems :D

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Second poem-Missing Report

After being not able to that SMILE everywhere..
I went to Police Station and filed my Report there..

'Officer,Officer!' I called out,
Officer came out asking "Wats dis Noise all about?"

I requested him Sir,I want to file a missing Report..
I Have tried to find it wd all afforts..

He asked me What exactly is Missing?a Thing or a person??
I said its a Smile,that lost without any Reason..

At first he thought i am Mad as i was jumping like a tribe,
Then putting his thought apart,he asked me to describe..

I said that smile is pure,gentle and comes directly frm his Heart,
and noone can describe it even the Scholer of Art..

The smile used to come when he did Naughty deeds,
That smile used to come when he Shyed..

After loosing that Smile in thin Air..
He is Incomplete which is not fair..

I said it is Daya Sir's Cute Smile and started Day Dreaming there..
He said 'Ahem,Ahem! Do u know it must have lost where?

I said i dont know Sir and Started Crying there,
He Called his Officers and odered them to find that Smile Everywhere...

I said Sir please find it at any Cost or rather,
Many Hearts around the World will Surely Shatter..!!

He said that he will find Where the Smile has lost,
And give it back to Daya sir at any cost..

Still Waiting for the Day wen he would find that thing,
Smiles on Many faces that thing will Rurely bring..!!

Edited by PARO..16 - 27 September 2011 at 7:33am

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 4:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PARO..16

First poem


The hope is yet to be done..
The friendship journey is yet to rebegan..

That care and concern for each other,
That hand of assurance always on shoulder..

The support of a brother and Naughtiness of a friend,
That friendship was the most beautiful thing for me on this land..

That friendship that taught us the meaning of a friend,
But now it looks like going out of the hand..

When everyone stepped back,that friendship came aloud,
But nw it seems to be Sumwhere lost in the Crowd..

The art of understanding the other without asking a word,
It seems that friendship from FW's vision is blurred..

The friendship that showed how to Sacrifice even ur life for the other,
But Sumhow it looks that now about each other they dont even bother..

I want that friendship back at any cost..
Dnt want it in Crowd to be lost..

The Hope is yet to be done,
The friendship journey is yet to Regan..
 
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 5:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PARO..16

First poem


The hope is yet to be done..
The friendship journey is yet to rebegan..

That care and concern for each other,
That hand of assurance always on shoulder..

The support of a brother and Naughtiness of a friend,
That friendship was the most beautiful thing for me on this land..

That friendship that taught us the meaning of a friend,
But now it looks like going out of the hand..

When everyone stepped back,that friendship came aloud,
But nw it seems to be Sumwhere lost in the Crowd..

The art of understanding the other without asking a word,
It seems that friendship from FW's vision is blurred..

The friendship that showed how to Sacrifice even ur life for the other,
But Sumhow it looks that now about each other they dont even bother..


I want that friendship back at any cost..
Dnt want it in Crowd to be lost..

The Hope is yet to be done,
The friendship journey is yet to Regan..


except that LINECry

its just ClapClapClap



on UR REQUESTWinkWinkLOL




Edited by gadhadada - 27 September 2011 at 5:26am

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 5:30am | IP Logged
Amazing poem. Clap
You've portrayed their great friendship so beautifully.

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