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part 63

Aap ussen kahoge mera baren main
aap ussen kaho ge.. wo Geet ka garv hain..my pride.. our pride

he nodded... our pride.. ussen ki khushi ka tho mano koi tikhana hi na raha
she slowly pulled away to meet his gaze.. do u like garv?
He smiled in acceptance. ..whole of him craving to be lost in her arms again for ever.

She felt really odd the way she was behaving .. hugging, slapping.. uff.. Geet tu yeh kya kar rahi hain. She questioned herself struggling to break away completely from him. She quickly snorted her nose & looked at him in attitude. He maintained a very calm posture unlike the turmoil deep inside.

Aap bharah javoo mujhe baby ko ready karna hain
he first wondered why she wanted him to go out & the next moment he knew it would be to feed him. He hid his smile & went out. She arranged babies bag to carry along & came around his crib. Like she knew exactly when he would wake up he ..she lifted him in her arms & kissed his droopy eyes..
utt gaya mera sona..
he smiled delightfully seeing her around.
She ran her fingers around his lips.. he smiled.. jumping...like a code word between mother & son.. both excited abt feeding. She cutely placed him in her lap & like always he couldn't wait.. he already began to search.. & before even she could open fully he began to feed. She smiled in peace looking at his face. His eyes that began to doze off again.. she slowly patted his cheek .. he continued to feed again. She turned him around & fed him from the other side.. guplo was all full & merry.. she kissed his cheeks wiping his mouth. She put him on her shoulder & rocked him until he burped. She smiled & called Maan.
Maan baby ka diaper do
then followed her list commands
Maan baby ka blue wala pant dena..
yeh wala blue nahi light blue..
iski shirt..umm
Maan passed it
yeh kaun se top di.. dehkiya  bilkul hi match nahi kar raha
wo upper walen shelf main hain..
by the time baby was ready Maan almost drained out.
All the while she cradled the baby in her lap.. softly patting baby powder & changing his dress.


Maan never thought they would ever be able to step out of the house today at the rate at which she was getting him ready. She finally checked the bag once again & gave to Maan. She carried the baby & went down.

Maan was little worried abt Geet insisting on carrying the baby. He reluctantly offered main baby ko uttavoon.. she instantly snapped.. nahi
ok
.. he pulled his hand away as she turned away from him cocooning the little one... he admired his fate..babaji's blessing on them.. all of them together.. his life.. his soul.. his love.. he chuckled.

 

In the cab..geet kept talking to baby. She sat away from the window eventually cuddling closer to Maan. He smiled & looked out on the other side.. resting his hand on the window. The moment they reached the mall, Geet led them to the baby's shop.
She eyed Maan to give her the list from her purse.
Maan looked at bit confused..she cutely blushed at his confused look.
Maan mera bag se wo list nikalo na plz.. she said softly
he chuckled & opened her purse.. he looked at her once before doing so..
beech walen zip main hain
she looked back the baby & kissed his nose.. mama aapke liya.. bahut saly shopping kal rahi hain
papa ne tho kuch bhi nahi liya
meanhile he opened all the zips & still couldn't find it
Her cute face was getting restless..making him tensed
she twisted her lips & gave the baby to him.. he knew how much she hated to part from their baby even for a min. she pulled it out within secs & took hold of the baby instantly.


As she selected the things she kept checking with baby.
Another couple passing by waved at the baby..
Geet looked at Maan uncomfortably..
well that was the princess not used to people coming into their personal space ..she hated anyone looking at the baby.. her hands went around the baby & her body curved into maans structure.
lady looked at Geet ' bilkul aapki thara hain aapka beta
Geets face delightfully
wohi naak..
bilkul aapki aanken
the guy..as h elooked at maan.. nahi nahi aanken tho papa jaisen hain
Geet frowned & looked at maans eyes
the lady fought back dehko .. baby ki anken mama ki tarah brown hain
the guy looked carefully at the baby & then at Geet. Maan immediately pulled her aside...
challo.. wo wallen section abhi baaki hain

she smiled inwardly & walked with him to the other section

Geet teased.. u where J right
Maan blushed.. yes.. he was.. how could he see anyone looking at his Geet
he became conscious.. J.. why would she think like that.. she doesn't know anything yet.. oh god again she will misunderstand
nahi nahi .. wo main.. wo.. tumhe..nahi mera matlab hain
she kept the finger on his lips.. no argument..baby ki anken mama ki tara brown hain
aap kitna bhi J feel karlo its not going to change

why will I feel J for that he said without thinking
phir aap mujhe yun wanha se keench kyun layen??..

 

 

precap
wonder wat will maan explain

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Edited by muskanp - 26 September 2011 at 1:43pm

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