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U r our Half world # 1 /MG /FF

Sonia.KN IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Hey Buddies tons of thanx for giving me huge response ...n encouragement when I had made my mind to quit...U all guys supported me...So I gonna bore u all with my Fiction
                        
                           Thread # 1
                  'You R Our Half World '              
                  
                                Intro 
My name is Adda ...Eleven years old girl...Me n my Mom Geet ...we both live in a small house ...She is a  teacher  in the same school...where I go...She  talks less with other world ...But She always has answer to any question ..which I ask her.. except one question...where is my Papa..?..When ever I ask her...She jast says ...I m ur whole world n U r mine...But I know She has something..in her heart..which She always hides from me...She always tells me lie...Mamma always misses my Papa...Even me Mumma...Where r u Papa...we both r not whole world for each other..we r living in half world...coz  'U R OUR HALF WORLD'..PAPA...I know u r also living in half world lik us... come soon to us so to  complete our world...Adda n Mumma is waiting for u 


                                                               ur daughter 
                                                              Adda Handa Smile


guys if u lik this plz comment n hit lik so that I can go for this

lov
tons of thanxLOL


Index
Part 1 n Part 2/ Page 2 

Part 3 n Part 4 /Page 4

Part5-Page 6

Part 6-Page 9

Part 7-Page 14

Part 8 - Page 16

Part 9 - Page 19

Part 10 - Page 20

Way to Next Threads
 # 2

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plz guys comment n hit lik..if u want n twist n turn giv me idea...tons of thanx again

Jass


Edited by Jass.KN - 30 January 2012 at 2:49am

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wow wat an intro yaar ..just loved it 
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amazing intro dear...
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lovely intro Smile
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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 7:26am | IP Logged
nice one...
is this OS or SS?
Ada is Geet's 11 year daughter...
who is the father?
cont soon...
Sonia.KN IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 8:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

nice one...
is this OS or SS?
Ada is Geet's 11 year daughter...
who is the father?
cont soon...


Hey Even I don know this is OS/SS/FF...it depends on my buddies...what they want !!!Big smile

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 10:01am | IP Logged

Hey Buddies here is my OS/SS ..I dont know what this gonna b..only ur response can encourage me to write more..plz comment respond towards this 

             U R OUR HALF WORLD


            *Set Up : A small town near Shimla *


 

During fall winters this far away hilly area …seems lik any metropolitan  with flood of tourists ….especially newly weds... married during Jan or Feb as..In north India most of marriages take place in this season ..so they come here …for their honeymoons...Kids fed up with their studies during exams…come here with their parents…to refresh their minds….Even in this crowd…nature always smiles on this place…with….sprouting plants..trees ….The carpet of Guldaudi in different colors…n sweet smell ...always welcome everybody...who comes here….Small or big size lilies always dance …to  entertain visitors ….when a pleasant air touches them….

 

But for Me this is jst a change of season….I never observe this beauty of nature….nothing attract n effect me more….When my life in which I watched many seasons... that gave me nothing... that never made me happy…that never showed me  any ray of hope ..then what these materialistic things means to me …I hav jst one reason to liv ..n that reason is my daughter Adda…When whole world left me alone….She was the reason ….which compelled me to liv….n my lif which had no way to move ahead ..suddenly got destination..as Adda…My 11 year old daughter…For me ...She is my whole world

 

About 12 years back when I was jst 17…..I was also lik any other teen age girl….who had dreams to get a perfect partner..lik any film hero or any sports person….who had dreams for higher studies …to do good job..n then a perfect lif…I also had same…When He came to my lif.

 

My family from Hoshiarpur ... very much conservative  ..My Daarji (grand pa) was against my higher studies…But my father protested him..n I got a chance to continue my studes but on one condition. that was …I could only go to Girlz college..in near by town…I had opportunity ..so how could I miss it…which was going to change my lif..my dream for higher education…But I was not aware that within few days… He was gonna change my lif forever…

 

I hav reached at my lil home's main door..where me n my daughter have built our world…For me She is my whole world…I can convince her only by saying so…But in reality We r living in half world….Why u left me n Adda alone….come to us 'You r our half world' n with u only...we r able to create a whole new world

 

Now Adda will b waiting for me…for dinner….I should b with her …darkness is spreading all over..n She is jst a lil child ...scared of this darkness 

 

                                                                                                                                                      Geet Handa

                                      

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Edited by Jass.KN - 07 October 2011 at 12:34am

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