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                                                  part 64


he lovingly pulled d duvet on her till neck..obviosuly taking care of her finger which was injured...
he kissed d finger lovingly n too too gently..not to hurt her...
" plz take care baby..plz..."..he whispered too emotionally..
n kissed d delicate end of her lips...
a soft smile curved on her lips wid his touch...
he was just waiting for dat smile of hers..
he smile at dat smile of hers..taking a relief dat she is fine...
n left half-heartedly...

...

meanwhile...

annie hurriedly entered khuraman mansion only to find a worried dadi walking restlessly here n dere in hall...
annie neared her...
annie - dadi...aap pareshan lag rahe ho...
dadi angrily - pareshan na ho to kya kare hum..tum bachhe kab kya karte rehte ho...na hum koi batata hai na hi batana jaroori samjhta hai...
annie hardly ever see dadi getting in her life...
annie immediately carrased dadi shoulder...
annie - dadi aap shant ho jayiye..baithiye yahan pe..
annie made dadi sit on sofa n places herself beside dadi...
annie also made dadi drink sum water...
n waited for dadi too calm down...
annie - dadi aap etni pareshan mat hoyiyena..aap ki tabiyat kharab ho jayegi..
dadi - hum thik hai..kuchh nahi huva hai hume...
annie consoled her - achha thik..batayiye..aap pareshan kyu hai...
dadi - maan ki vajah se...abhi kuchh der pehle humne unhe daudte huye kahin jate dekha..hum unhe rokne koshish ki par wo ja chuke the...wo kafi pareshan lag raha tha...

annie - kyaaa...bhai bahar gaye hai...par dadi unhone hi mujhe immediately ghar aane ke liye kaha..kyunki unhe mujhse kuchh baat karni thi aur ab khud hi...
dadi - maan ne tumhe ghar bulaya...to fir wo khud khan chale gaye...unka cell bhi ghar par hi hai..
annie - but bhai never forgets his cell ever..
dadi - yahi toh..hume bahot chinta ho rahi hai unki...
annie - dadi relax...its maan bhai..kis prob me itni himmat hai jo maan bhai ko pareshan kare...
dadi looked at annie...
n both burst into laughter...
dadi kissed annie forehead lovingly...
annie - btw dadi..mene 2 week ki chhuti li hai colge se...
dadi got confused - par kyu..2 weeks..its too muchh..
annie - dadi..geet ke bhai ki shadi hai..mere pure group ne chhuti li hai...
dadi - okk..par padhai ka kya..notes n all..how vil u..
annie giving cheeky smile - dadi..uska bhi bandobast ho gaya hai...chilll...
dadi - aap 3 shaitanon ke rehte hum chill kaise kare..batayiye..ab dev ko hi dekh lijiye..subah se gayab hai..abhi tak ghar nahi aaye...

just den maan entered mansion...
n noticed annnie n dadi looking at him continuously...
maan - aap dono mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe ho...
dadi - maan...aap bhagte huye kahan chale gaye the...
maan looked at dadi wid blank expressions...

ohhh goddd...wat vil he ans now..n dat too in front of annie.no waysss
annie vil kill him teasing 24/7..

maan - wohh..umm..dadi..uhhh..
annie - bhai aapne mujhe ghar bulaya aur khud gayab ho gaye...
maan was trapped now...
dealing wid dese two women is not dat easy..he thought...
maan - dadi..dar asal adi ka impo*nt call aaya tha..so i had to rush...
annie believed him.
but dadi tried to read his confused expressions...
maan dared not look at dadi...
annie - waise bhai..aap ko mujhse kya baat karni thi...
maan - to my room..now...
saying so maan started to leave...
but dadi stopped him..
dadi - maan...hume aap se kuchh baat karni hai..dinner ke baad hume humare room me miliye...
maan worriedly - ji dadi maa...
saying so dadi left...
while moved to his room followed by annie...

...

geet's sleep was disturbed by her cell ring...
geet looked at no..but it was private number..
geet sleepily - hello...
no reply came..
geet - hello...who is it...
still no reply...
geet lazily hanged cell n tried to sleep again...
but cell rang again...
geet was pissed off now...
she came out of bed n received d call.shouting...
geet - hello...
no reply...
geet - agar baat nahi karni to call kyu kiya...agar dobara call kiya na..to mujse bura koi na hoga...
saying so she hanged n made her way to washroom...

...

in maan's bedroom...
annie - kya huva bhai...
maan - dev ka accient ho gaya hai..
annie's eyes widened in shock - wattt...
tears started to roll out of her eyes..
maan immediately consoled her - relax bachha..he is fine..usse chot nahi aayi hai...thnkfully...bus left hand me jara si kharoch aayi hai..he is ok...but..
annie relaxed a bit still in tears - but wat bhai..
maan - dat gal..nt..she is in hospital..she got sum minor injuries on her forehead n hands...
annie - but...ye sab kab huva..kaise huva..
maan - again dat gal is resposible for dis..dev ne kahan ke wo gusse me thi sumthing sumthing..ne gusse me usne...
annie - wattt..is she mad...
maan - i dnt understand...
maan was loosing his control now...
maan angrily - agar dev ko kuchh ho jata toh...i want u to haav ur look into dis..
annie - matlab bhai..
maan - im not sure about dis gal for dev...dev kehta dat she loves him but she is overpossessive...
annie - upto dis exrent..its not called overpossessiveness..its obssesion...
maan - exactly..ye pagalpan hai...kya tum us ladki se kabhi mili ho...
annie - no bhai..jitna bhi sunna hai dev bhai se hi...
maan - tum usse milo..usse janane ki koshish karo..i want every single detail about her past toom..aise kitna chize hai jinke liye wo pagal hai..u r understanding..??
annie - yaah bhai..me samjh rahi hu...
maan - me janana chaht hu ke wo ladki dev ke liye sahi hai ya nahi..i cnt afford sumthing kind of dis to happen again...
annie carefuly carrased maan shoulder - bhai..aap pareshan na ho...me apko uski sari info bata dungi...
maan - me kisi detactive ke jariye bhi pata karvata par uske paas rehkar tum uska bartav...uski soch..family ki taraf aur dev ki taraf uska behaviour..sab notice kar sakti ho..
annie - i vil do dat bhai..dnt worry...
both maan n annie hugged each other worried for deir dev...
...

...

aftr freshing herself..
geet made her way out of room...only to find rano continuously calling sum1..
rano - 2 hafte dopahar me nahi soyegi to kuchh nahi hoga...
geet hugged rano from back - sorry mumma...pata nahi ankh kab lag gayi..

rano on phone - hello..me mr.brij handa ki maa(pause)..ji..invitation card abhi tak pohoche nahi(pause)..aap ne aaj hi ki date di thi (pause)...ji sham tak jarur pohocha dijiyega(pause)..ji..shukriya...
saying so she hanged...
 
geet - mumma..me kal karan aur shweta se mil lungi aur sab kuchh fix kar dungi..
rano - thik hai...jate waqt mehmano ki list bhi leti jana...aur untni ganpati ki murtiyon ka intezam karne ke liye bolna..
geet - alroght mumma...
rano - aur baki shopping ke liye kab ja rahi ho..  
geet - parso mumma..kal ka poora din to wohi sab me lag jayega...decorations..themes n all...
rano - thik hai..uske agle din me chali jaungi...mehmano ke liye kuchh sareeyan aur bahot kuchh lena hai...
geet - mumma..apne bho shopping kar lena thik hai...aap hi ke bete ki shadi hai..yaad hai na..
rano smiled - haan baba..tu hai na...mere liye shopping kar le...
geet smiled - wo to hai...
rano - achha ab mujhe chhod to sahi..bahot kaam hai...
geet hugged her more tightly - nahi...
rano - bachho jaise behave mat kar geet..bahot kaam hai..
geet kissed ranos' cheek n left ...
while rano got busy wid her things...

...

8:00pm
maan knew she must hav awaken..
so he immediately dialle her no...
geet smiled n received - boliye..
maan - uth gayi..??
geet - haan..kab ki uth gayi...
maan - ab dard kaisa hai...
geet - ab dard nahi ho raha..
maan - jaan tum koi 2 saal ki bachhee ho kya..tum apna khayal rakhna kab sikhogi...
geet made baby face - me jaan bujhke thodi kiya..chot mujhe lagi hai aur aap bhi mujhe daat rahe ho...
maan sighed - jaan..me daat nahi raha hu...im worried..
geet - me abhi thik hu na..aap pareshan mat hoyiye...
maan - tum mumma ko dikhaya...
geet - nahi..mumma dategi..
maan smiled - chalo koi to hai..jo tumhe daat sakta hai..
geet made angry face - yani ke aap chahte ho ke mumma mujhe date..
maan - mene aisa kab kaha..
geet - aapne abhi kaha..
maan - achha gussa mat karo...agar dard for se shuru ho to mumma ko bata dena..unke paas koi achha ilaz jarur hoga...
geet - hmm...maan...
maan - ek baar jaan kaho na..
geet smiled..blushed...litle mised expression..
maan smiled too at his chilish behaviour...
maan repeated whispering- kaho na..
geet lovingly - ek shart par...
maan was litle surprised..ab isme kya shart ho sakti hai...
maan - aur shart kya hai...
geet blushed - jab jab me aapko JAAN kehke bulaungi...tab tab..
maan was eager to know - tab tab...
geet whispered barely speaking - tab tab aap mujhe SHONA kehke bulayenge...
...
MAAN SMILED FULLHEARTEDLY...
he so much loved it...
her sweet demand blew him to land of love...
geet - jawab dijiyena...
maan - mujhe sochne to do... <3 SHONA <3 ...

maahi*...
...maahi*... 

geet blushed..her cheeks turning into dard pink shade...
geet whispered..barelu speaking - <3 jaan <3
...
maahi ve...maahi maahi ve...
maahi ve...maahi maahi ve...
...
maan's heart went heavy wid d urge n dezire hidden in her whisper...
his throat went dry...he had to swallow his breath...
his swallowing breath didn't go unnotuced by geet...
whose heart was pouncing..dancing inside...

maahi*...

...
maan - tumne dinner kiya...
geet - nahi...aapne..
maan - nahi...achha suno..
geet - hmm...
maan - dinner thik se kar lena...aur mumma ki help karna..she must be tired...
geet smiled - okk..ab dadi ki tabiyat kaisi hai...
maan - dadi thik hai..par aaj meri class lene wali hai..
geet surprised - kya...
wid just dat word she started laughing...
while maan made angry surpring face...
maan - tum has rahi ho...
geet tried to stop her laughter..still giggling...
geet - achha nahi has rahi...
maan - ...
geet - maan nahi has rahi na me...
maan - ...
geet - maan ab kuchh boliyen...
maan - ...
geet - jaan...

oh goddd.
she knows...she knows..how to melt him...
how on d earth vil he b able to stay angry wid her even for a min...
he smiled...
not able to bear her emotional assault...
maan - plz shona...
geet blushed...for sum reason she felt goosebumps wid dat word from his mouth...
geet - take care...
maan - i shud say dat...
geet smiled - byeee
maan - hmm..

wid dat both haned...

...

on dinnet table...
dadi - where is dev...
maan - dadi..his frnd had an accident..so he is in hospital..
dadi - nothing serious right..??
maan - dadi relax..nothing serious..just a small accident..his frnd vil b discharged tom..so he is cuming tom..he called me sum time ago..
annie - dadi..u didn't hav ur evening medicines..nakul told me..
maan - wattt...
maan was super angry now...
while dadi made angry face at annie to speak dat in front of maan...
while annie didn't budz... but also made angry face at dadi..
maan - dadi...mujhe kitni baar ye baat apko samjhni hogi..dnt skip ur medicines...
dadi made baby face - humari baat...
maan - kuchh nahi sunna hai mujhe...annie..kal ki dr.malhotra ki appointment fix kar lo..
dadi - maan no..plz..i promise me aaj ke baad medicines time par lungi...
maan - meri kasam...
maan was serious wid dat...so wat dadi..
dadi - ye etni badi baat nahi jiske liye hume aapn ki kasam khani pade..i vil never do dat again...
maan - plz dadi..aap samjti kyu nahi...u r everything dadi..
annie tried to ease d situation - ye aaj sab etne emotional kyu ho rahe hai...
maan n dadi laughed at dat...
maan - dev is fine dadi...
dadi - m sure...but u meed to me aftr dinner..i need to talk to u..
maan - ok...

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