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Aas Pass part 3 updated

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Characters        

Kavya:22 years old very rich,handsome n a sweet guy who's parents r dead but he is living with his grand father

Prem:22 years old guy he have his own factories n he is also very rich n he is Mukti's fiancee

Anjali:20 year old bubbly,cute n a very good looking girl who is living in College Hostel these dayz she is also member of 5NG.she loves cricket,books n music.

Mukti:member of 5NG the only thing she know in her life is eat eat n talk kiya pata kal ho na ho.

Kripa:Anjali's friend n another member of 5NG.she is event organizer in her College

Sneha:20 years old.she likes poetry n she loves 2 participate n competitions n she is also a member of 5NG

Pooja:last member of 5NG.she is crazy about music but her choice is not tht good she like(pop songs n dhoom dhatka songs)

5Naughty Galz(5NG):is a name given by teachers n other galz in College 2 Anjali,Mukti,Kripa,Sneha n Pooja

                           part 1

Anjali:let's go guys v r gettin late for Sneha's competition she is goin to kill us

Kripa:we hope so tht Sneha will win this competition

Mukti and Pooja: hurry up we want 2 sit right infront of the stage

         Competition hall

K,M,A and P were sitting in second row they were screming go Sneha go u can do it come on Sneha v r proud of u we all know that u can do it

other people were getting irritated by all this

1 lady:a larkiyoon plz chup karo kitna bolty hoo

A:kyoonnnnnnnn

M:tumahary hubby kee tareef main kuch nahi bool rahy

K:a aunty humara mood kharab nahi karo

P:sahi kaha Kripa paji

1lady:kasi stupid larkiyan hian

A:aaaaaa anunty plz haan humy kuch na kaho or ager hum stupid hian bhi tu kiya app kon sa apny bety(son)k sath mery shadi kerwany wali thee

n they start laughing

A:hey galz look at that bodha(old man)on stage look's like he is going to get a heart attack in few minutes and he is the judge of today's competition I am sure kuch hee minutes main yeh stage sy gira(fall) hee gira

and all of them start laughing a guy who was sitting infront of thier row turned around in anger n he gave a bad look to Anjali

A:hey galz yeh larka na kaisy ghoore ghoore k dekh raha hai jaisy he is related with that bodha(old man)

M,K,P shut upppppppppppp

n that guy again turned n gave a really bad look to Anjali and that guy wassss??

keep guessing who is this guy

 

 

 



Edited by simal01 - 25 January 2006 at 5:24pm

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hi guys this is my 1st time tht I m writing  something so plz tell me if u like it or not n plz bear with me I m not tht good actually not good at all I will wait 4 ur replys

Edited by simal01 - 20 January 2006 at 3:21pm
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oh its just aweeeee i m so happy tht u start it finally ok now i cant wait for your next part so plz wirte it asap ok thankx n guys give her some comments i like all the characters in this story so hope u guys will like it 2 ok thankx
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hey i m still waiting y u took so long for the next 1 so plz post it soon ok thankx.n tell us whos is this guy ok
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Posted: 22 January 2006 at 12:25am | IP Logged
hey u know wat u shouldnt write this anymore coz i dont know y everybody is so mean n they r not givin u any response so u can do 1 thing send me your story in pm coz i like it ok so i will wait thankx
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Posted: 22 January 2006 at 1:56pm | IP Logged
hey terename thnxs alot 4 liking my story n may b otherz don't like it bcoz it's not good anyways I will post the next part 4 u right here if u like it thn I don't need 2 send it in pm

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                    Part 2
recap:a guy turned around n gave a bad look to Anjali

n tht guy was none other than Kavya he gave a bad look to Anjali

A:yarr yeh laraka tu mujhe ankhoon hee ankhoon main kha jaye ga

M,K n P could u plz shut up

A: fineeeeeeeee
Sneha got the first prize for tht competition

               After some dayz

 Mukti:yarr mera dil bilqul bhi nahi kerta yeh Hostel ka khana khany ko

A:u r right mera bhi dil nahi kerta mera dil ker raha hia k main abhi k abhi gher chali jaoon

K:but we still have a semster we can't go Sneha is lucky jis ka gher yahan hai

M:ya right she must b eating good food like Pizza,KFC or may be butter chicken with Naan

P:hey guys I m just getting sick of listening all this k khana achaa nahi hai hum bore ho rahy hai kiya karee y don't u guys listen to some good songs

She was about to play the sings when K,M n A yelled nooooooooooooooooooo plzzz tumahare woh stupud songs sunanay sy bahter hai k hum yeh khana kha lain ya fer bore ho lain

P:ok than why don't u guys go out

Mukti in anger you know wat Pooja you have given a good idea first time in your life let's go guys

Kripa n Pooja no Mukti sorry we have test tommorw we don't want bad marks tum Anjali ko sath ley jao jo k kabhi bhi test fail nahi ker sakty

Anjali:ok Mukti let's go

A n M went to a Restuarant

W for waiter
W:good evening mam how can I help you?

A:2 lemonade plz

W:is that everything for you

A:app behray(Deaf) tu nahi hain na
 
W:no mam i m not

A:fer main ny kuch aur  order kiya kiya

W:no

A:tu fer

M n A start laughing

W:your lemonade mam

A n M: thnxs

after taking 1 sip they just throw it out

A:wat the hell is this Lemonade ?

M:ya you guys call this Lemonade n take 20 ruppes per glass

A:lierrrr this is water n you have these lemon pieces on top of glass just to make sure that this is Lemonade

W:than don't pay for it Mam

M:yyyyy we are not your relatives here is your 40 ruppes

A:ya here is your money but we will never come here again let's go Mukti

n when she turned around there were 2 guys talking about her n thoze guys were Kavya n his friend

A:(talking 2 herself) y is this guy is always there where ever I go

wana know y Kavya is always there where Anjali go is this a coincident or some thing else........

               



Edited by simal01 - 22 January 2006 at 2:27pm
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this is the first ka fan fic i have read and its is fab
continue soon

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