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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Tanyaz

wow Ashu, what a sweet story ...

I love Archana in  your story , the best part was Soham selecting daddy's tie ...


Thank u so much😉 Like u only i m a big fan of archana but cant stand by her side after watching the episodes these days they r butchering her character.. so imagination mein hi sahi archana is  perfect..😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

ArMan FF (Kahan ho tum??)

Part 1

In the morning archana comes out after her bath, soham and manav still sleeping.. archana stands beside the bed and starts wiping her hair with th towel… water sprinkles on manav's face and he wakes up.. archana sees this she suddenly sits beside manav who is still on the bed… archana starts wiping manav's face with the towel and says "sorry manav who mera dhyaan nahi tha aapki neend khul gayi.. manav starts looking at her naughtily he starts moving his fingers on archana's face… archana smiling  manav says ek kiss de do..  archana says kya manav subah-subah chodiye mujhe jaane dijhiye.. manav holds her tightly.. manav says de do na… archana says aawaj maat kijiye soham uth jayega.. manav – haan ek kiss de do fir nahi karunga... Archana then has no option so she place a kiss on his cheeks..

Manav – aare yahan chahiye pointing towards his lips… Archana – aab bahut ho gaya aapne bola aur diya na.. aab chodiye jaane dijiye mujhe..  manav still not leaving her.. then soham starts crying.. archana says to manav "bola than a maine awaaj maaat kijiye" archana picks soham in her starts patting him and takes him to the kitchen..

Manav having a holiday and he is playing with soham archana comes and tell mein swati ke ghar ja rahi hu pooja ke liye thodi der mein aa jaungi aap soham ka dhyan rakhiye.. manav says han aur jaldi aa jana hum aaj ghoomne jayenge soham ko lekar

Manav calls archana "kahan ho tum main aur soham intazar kar rahe hai tumhara soham  ro raha hai main use bahar le jar aha hoon tumhe bhi raaste mein pick kar lunga fir hum soham ko thoda ghuma layenge…"

Archana – aap mat aaiye main train se jaldi aa jati hu fir hum saath mein jayenge.. sirf aap station ke paas intazar karna…"

Manav – "lekin mein aa raha hu na?"

Archana  don't listen n tell mein aa rhi hu train se aap soham ko lekar aaiye aur han soham ko sambhalna

Manav tells han thik hai station pea a jaogi toh phone kar dena..

Manav dresses soham and takes him out.. Manav holding soham in his hands and walking on the road.. both of them enjoying..

Suddenly manav starts feeling strange like something bad has happened.. archana's face starts coming In front of his eyes.. Soham also starts crying..

Manav hears loud crowd noise outside the station and he comes to know that in ghatkopar train blast has occurred.. manav becomes shocked and stunned.. he calls archana but her phone was switched off he gets worried… his eyes fills with tears and soham also crying.. he tries to stop him.. manav consoles himself "archana ko kuch nahi hua hoga shayad who ghar chali gayi hogi.. He goes home but door is locked manav gets more worried.. soham in his lap crying.. manav starts going back to the station to search archana.. He meets sulochana on the stairs.. and tells her what has happened sulochana gets worried nd starts crying.. manav tells sulochana to take care of soham and tells her mein archana ko kahin se bhi dhundhkar launga use kuch nahi hua hoga gives sulochana house key and looks at soham with tears in his eyes and leaves from there…

(to be continued…)

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG nahi Archana ko mat maro!
 
Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ashu 🤗

I'm happy you decided to post here as well 😃 Love the way you write 👍🏼 
Now be a good girl and post part 2, stop torturing people 😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 2

Manav goes to the railway station where the blast occurred searches archana here and there…  He looks around people crying searching their family.. some people's dead bodies and some injuried.. He walks here and there looking for archana and also sometimes calling her name "archana archana…" then he takes his vollet out opens it and looks at archana's photo in the vollet with tears in his eyes.. He removes the photo and starts asking everyone but no one responds him…

He asks a man sitting on the floor aapne inhe kahin dekha hai kya? Yeh meri biwi hai kabse use dhund raha hu nahi mil rahi hai.. The man tells him no and tells him to go to the nearby hospitals were all the peoples are taken look there u may find ur wife… Manav goes to the hospital searches archana everywhere in the hospital asks everyone but he didn't find her.. he comes out of the hospital totally shattered.. goes to the police station and launches a FIR and give them archana's photo..

Manav walking on the road tears falling from his eyes continuously remembering the days spent with archana and also remembers what archana told him one day "manav mein apke saath hamesha rahungi aapko kabhi chodkar nahi jaungi yeh waada hai mera aapse" Manav totally shattered sits on the side of the road crying with face of archana in front of his eyes filled with water..

(Song – Kabse usko dhund tha hu bheegi palkon se yahan

Aab na jane woh kahan hain tha jo mera aashiyan

raaba mere mujhako bata di mujhe kyu yeh saaza??

Aab saare bandhan todakar yaadon ko tanha chodakar

Mein gham se rishta jodakar jaoon kahan…)😭

Manav stands up walk some distance see's a ganpati mandir goes inside the mandir and remember all the times when he came with archana there... he folds his hands in front of the ganesh idol and says "bappa aaj tak mein aapke yahan itni baar aaya par kabhi aapne liye kuch nahi maanga par aaj mein meri archana ko aapse mangta hu mujhe usse milwa do mein uske bina nahi jee sakta aur na hi mera beta… aapko archana ko mere liye kahin se bhi lana hoga kyunki jab tak manav ki saanse chal rahi hain archana ki bhi saanse chalti rahegi.. Manav archana ke bina aadhura hai aur uske bina aadhura rahega.. aapko usse mujhe milana hi hoga.. manav folding his hands and falls on his knees in front of bappa.. 

Sulochana calls him and asks him about archana but he tells that he searched her everywhere but didn't find her….. Manav again goes to the railway station…

(to be continued)


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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww poor Manav... hope Archu is fine!