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ArMan FF Kahan ho tum? part 2 pg2

Guggu_Minty IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 10:42pm | IP Logged

Hey guys this is my first attempt to write here I m not so much good at writing like Usha akka and omshreejanu but still tried my hands bcoz I know u all guys are pissed with the soham donating track like me.. so just a imaginary story for all of u hope u like it' I m just too busy with my studies so I will update the second part later.. Plz read it and leave your comments'Wink

 Part 1

Archana tells Manav that she will give soham to varsha but manav refuses and scolds her and go away as we saw in the precap. Archana becomes sad and she goes to her bedroom, there soham was playing with his toys on the bed, when he see's archana he tries to call her "mum muma" archana smiles and goes to him and start playing with him, both of them spend some time happily and then after that archana puts him to sleep and gives him a kiss, she was still siting beside him and looking at her cute little boy sleeping she says "soham main bhi tumhe aapne se aalag nhi karna chahti, varsha ko nahi dena chahti' main bhi tumse bahut pyaar karti hu par'

Suddenly manav comes he looks at her angrily and goes inside the washroom, After sometime manav comes and archana says manav' Manav looks at her he makes himself calm and makes archana understand..

Manav ' Archana tum soch bhi kaise sakti ho ki hume soham ko varsha ko dena chahiye humesha ke liye? Pehle hi hum hamara ek baccha kho chuke hai aur phir bhi tum.. mere liye soham aur tumse badhkar iss duniya mein koi nahi hai' Soham humare pyaar ki nishani hai, bahut minnato ke baad humne usse paya hai aur mein usse dubara khona nahi chahta' Varsha ka dard hum bhi samajh sakte hai.. akhir humne bhi hamara bacha khoya tha baccha khone ka dard kya hota hai humse behtar aur kaun samajh sakta hai? Isliye soham ko hum humse kabhi alag nahi karenge' (manav has tears in his eyes)

Archana also has tears in her eyes, She understandsand she tells manav "thik hai manav main aab firse soham ko dene ki baat nahi karungi soham hamara hai aur hamesh hamara hi rahega"'

Manav becomes happy and they both hug eachother manav says  to archana varsha ki halat mentally thik nahi hai hume satish se kehkar usse acche doctor ke paas le jana chahiye.. archana says haan manav mein kal hi satish ji se baat karungi..

Suddenly soham starts crying Archana goes to him and says kya hua soham kyu ro raha hai' puts him to sleep again.. At night soham sleeping in between ArMan, Manav says  to archana "kitna pyara lagta hai  na yeh sote hue" Archana says "haan bilkul aap ki tarah'" Both of them smiles and manav falls asleep.

Archana thinking main varsha ko kal doctor ke paas le jaungi'

(to be continued)   

Edited by ashunaik94s - 23 October 2011 at 2:12am

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shootingstar27 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Happy to see you more active here AshuHug
Lovely story Thumbs Up It will be music to my ears to hear Soham call ArMan,aai baba Day Dreaming 
You wrote the whole scene beautifully,could picture Soham and Archu playing together,Archu realising her mistake,Manav's tears,both of them staring at a sleeping Soham Day Dreaming 
If only Ekta and her writers didn't have twisted minds,we could witness all this Ouch 

Edited by shootingstar27 - 26 September 2011 at 12:06am

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Tanyaz IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 12:12am | IP Logged
That is a lovely story Ashu ...Thumbs Up
Gauravc_More48 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 12:43am | IP Logged
Ashu naik well written my dear.. Awesome imaginatin..
Guggu_Minty IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 12:00pm | IP Logged

Thanks for liking the 1st part

2nd Part

In the morning,

Soham sitting on the bed, Manav confused which tie to wear he tries to ask soham, beta batao toh kaunsi tie pehnu yeh wali, yeh wali ki yeh…. Soham looking at him and smiling when manav wheres a black tie soham starts clapping with his small hands and screaming with joy.. Manav understands that this tie is good he says to him yeh wali bahut acchi hai na and goes and kiss him…

At that time archana comes and she tells manav – aap abhi tak yahi hai office nhi jana kya?, isliye kehti hu raat ko jaldi so jaya karo.. Manav naughtily says "tum sone do tab na"… Archana looks angrily at manav and says "accha toh main sone nhi deti ki aap sone nhi dete??, jayiye aab late nhi ho raha hai kya aap ko? Manav laughs and tells tumhe toh main aaj raat ko dekhta hun.. Waise aaj shaam tayaar rehna hum sachu aur soham ko lekar bahar jayenge.. Archan picks soham in her hands comes ouside the living room and tells baba ko bye karo.. soham waves his hand and manav also waves his hand and go… Archana tells soham chalo aab nahane jate hai sham ko baba ke saath ghumne jayenge…

Archana takes a contact of a good doctor from her friend and takes varsha to that hospital… Archana was having visits with varsha to the hospital daily as suggested by the doctor, sometimes satish also accompanied them.. Days passed varsha's health was improving.

One day when archana and varsha were in the hospital they passed by a ward, suddenly they heard a small little kid crying and the nurse putting all her efforts to stop that child from crying but she failed, Varsha goes to that child and asks the nurse to give him , the nurse allows varsha to hold that child varsha starts patting the kids back with love the small child stops crying. Archana goes there seeing this she smiles and asks the nurse where are his parents? The nurse answers "iss bacche ke maa-baap ki ek car accident mein death ho gayi, bhagwan ki krupa se yeh baccha bach gaya.. 5 din ho gaye abhi tak inke parivar se koi isse lene aya nhi hum kal isse anathashram bhej denge.." Archana and Varsha both feels sad.. Varsha handover that kid to the nurse he was asleep.. Nurse says accha hua aap ne isse sula diya kabse roye jar aha tha..

Archana and Varsha comes out. Archana makes varsha sits on the bench and she says her dekh varsha iss bacche ko bhi maa-baap ki jarurat hai aur tujhe bacche ki, tu isse aapna le aapne bacche ki tarah isse paal, samajh aaj iss bacche ke roop mein bhagwan ne teri suni goad bhar di hai, Agar tujhe manjur hai toh hum satish ji se baat karenge, Varsha stoods up and goes near that ward sees the child comes back to archana and hugs her and tells her that main iss bacche ko aapna ne ke liye taayar hu.. main iski maabanungi..

Archana talks to satish about this, he agrees.. they ago to that hospital talk with the doctor, doctor also agrees fill up some form complete all the formalities and finally varsha takes that child home. Archana also becomes happy for her sister.

So finally in this story varsha gets a child aab soham ka picha chod diya usne. Aab soham hamesha ke lye ArMan ke saath hi rahega..

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sushita30 Groupbie

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
superbbb ashu kya direction kiya hai tune  really ...welldone
blossom2283 Goldie

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 4:34pm | IP Logged
what a nice concept...i hope ekta and her CV's see this and give us such beautiful scenes like u wrote...keep up the gud work Thumbs Up
shootingstar27 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 7:11pm | IP Logged
Nice update Ashu Thumbs Up

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