...*Tum Jo AaYE*... { a niviren FF} chap 3 & 4 ud - Page 5

Hey bowya..lovely chapters...intro of Nivi was beautiful...pls continue dear..

Very nice chapters bowya.. waiting for ur next update... pls continue soon... 😊

very good chapters bowya.i really liked it.😊.waiting for next chapter dear continue soon.

bowya very nice dear...u are so talented..loved your intro of nivi...waiting for your new updates...please continue soon...

very very Very nice chapters bowya.. waiting for ur next update... pls continue soon... 😊

nice bowya... waiting for the next chapter... 

I read ur FF.. I felt i am reading a poem... it is that much beautiful... i loved each and every line of ur FF... u r an awesome writer dear... 👏...

Originally posted by: love_never_dies

<font color="#ff0000">hi friends,, i know my FF is not so gud,,, sorry for little errors and grammatical mistakes,this my first attempt,,,, If you did nt like it means tell me, i will stop this in the starting stage itself... Thanks for reading my crap...</font>

Who said it's crap???? Pagal it's really good
Bowya I honestly loved it and you have made an awesome start. Love the well-defined description of the mother and looking forward to learning more about the other characters. x

please continue soon its a really beautiful story

wow luvd da updates bowya :)