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ABHIYA FF:LOVE THAT SLAUGHTERED ME(chapter 10 page 70)pms later (Page 70)

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Chapter 10 part 2

Piya crept inside the raichand mansion.c luked around as c didnt want 2 encounter chadeena.c was confident regarding her sheild of elements around her body bt c was tierd n cldnt hold her sheild 4 long so c let go of it.
Piya jumped wid fright hearing her name.c turned around 2 find arya standing behind her wid a gloomy face.
P:"oh! Its u arya.well how do I greet the queen of dark magic."
A:"wats the use of being a queen wen ur magic doesnt work at that time when it is most needed."
P:"why wat happened?"
P:"i knew it.its abhay.he did sth 2 u right?how do u even live wid him in the same house.theres nothing important 2 him dan his own self esteem.proudy,arrogant n self centered human...oops sorry nt human bt an evil dark wizard.i was a fool 2 come here widout obeying mom's order as I though he needed...4get it.rebi was right y wld he even need me..."
Piya kept babbling on n on till c saw dat arya luked damn serious.
P:"sorry I jst cant stop talking.y r u so sad.plz tell me."
A:"abhay...he is unconscious since the day b4.its been almost 18 hrs.i tried al dat I cld 2 wake him up n mom n dad r trying 2 do the same bt no use.piya u r a fairy.wld u please help us."
Piya's face fell.c nodded silently.arya led piya 2 abhay's room.piya slowly opened the door.the usually dark room was filled wid the soft glow of light.c luked around n found hundreds of candles lit all over the room.the 1st word dat came 2 her mind was "wow...".at the centre of the room abhay was lying lifeless in his bed.haseena n chand,4 the 1st time in their life were co-operating wid each other.a large bowl of silvery water lay infront of haseena wid a kind of herb it it.her hand was joined wid chand n their eyes were closed in concerntration.chand's left hand was on abhay's head n he was chanting something.piya could feel the scent of dark magic in the room.c stared at the unusually calm face of abhay.
"i never knew he cld luk so calm."
Though c tried 2 joke her heart was heavy.
Chadeena sighed in frustration n opened their eyes.
H:"its no use,its nt working at all.dat was the last spell I cld channel bt It didnt work either.nw wat r we gonna do?"
Chadeena luked up at arya n wen they saw piya,they seemed kind of relieved.nw their last hope was piya.the three of dem luked at piya in anticipation.though chadeena hated fairies n white magic 4 abhay they were ready 2 cooperate wid piya.
P:"wat?y r u al eyeing me in dat way?"
Ar:"nw u r our last hope."
P:"wat can I do?i dnt know anything abt magic n such stuffs."
A:"piya u dnt need 2 know anything.u r a fairy n ur power wik guide u automatically."
Piya felt helpless.
P:"ya I know bt m the most careless fairy in existence.i av neveq been able use ma power let me c wat I can do."
Haseena n chand left abhay's side n piya occupied dat space.c bit her lips trying 2 figure out wat 2 do.c glanced at abhax who seemed 2 be in deep sleep.c sprinkled some water on his face.
"silly piya,he isnt an unconscious human c whom u can sprinke some water n wake him up.use ur mind piya.aaargh...m useless."
C didnt know whether 2 touch him or nt.finally c closed her eyes shut n touched his forehead lightly.c felt ger new energy flowing out of her body n c felt very light as if a great burden had been removed frm her shoulder.c withdrew her hands wid a jerk feeling the pull.dat was when c saw abhay move.c didnt want 2 get scolded again so c decided 2 leave.
"arya m leaving.i think he is abt 2 wake up"
"bt piya..."
"no arya I must had grounded me and if c found out abt me sneaking out of the house,m dead."
Piya hurried 2wards the door.c opened the door n was jst abt 2 step outside c heard abhay's voice.

Part 3 posted below.

Edited by -srija- - 18 March 2012 at 8:01am

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-srija- Goldie

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Chapter 10 part 3

Piya was glued 2 the ground.c cldnt move.her heart skipped a beat hearing her name.c turned around n saw abhay looking at her bt the calmness in his face was replaced by a kind of irritated expression.
"i didnt asked 4 it anyways thanks 4 ur help."
"hey cant u even thank me in proper manner.oohh I 4got its great abhay raichand thanking a mere piya cld mr. Raichand b polite 2 some1 inferior 2 him.m just a stupid gal 2 anticipate politeness 4rm u."
P:"what?slug?u called me slug.i helped u n u r treating me in dis way."
Piya placed both her hands on her hips,pouted her lips n glared at abhay.abhay approached piya n came so close 2 her making her flush even more.c searched 4 words as c cldnt utter a single word.
Abhay took off a chain frm his neck.the chain was golden wid a large round brass locket wid various small words carved in it which piya cldnt understand.
A:"here..take it."
P:"r u ordering me?n y did u think I wld accept it frm YOU."
A:"if u wont take it den I wil make u take it"
Piya tried 2 gulp down her fear as c cld c abhay's eyes blazing with rage.c cldnt understand y c cld only c anger in those eyes.
When c made no movement abhay himself took the lead n clasped the locket on piya's neck which fitted her perfectly.the locket was beautiful.c absolutely loved it bt didnt want 2 admit it.
A:"nw leave.thats the way m expressing my gratitude.and remember dat locket is even older than our existence.dnt u dare mess with it."
Piya was dumbfounded.c just stared at him rising the discomfort widin abhay dat led him 2 turn his back 2 her.chadeena were still trying 2 digest the fact dat abhay was actually calm than any other day.arya was smiling inwardly though c didnt dare 2 smile infront of abhay.
Having nth else 2 do n since abhay ordered her to leave c waved bye 2 arya n left the raichand mansion.chadeena left the room as they wanted 2 get some rest after the tiresome day.
Arya:"bhai u helped her wid dat enchanted locket widout letting her know right.admit it bhai dat u care 4 her."
Abhay:"its nth lxk dat.c helped me n I returned the favour dats it.i dnt lyk 2 b burdened by others favour.and ya I wld do anything,even frenship wid piya if it wil bring hindrance in dat bitch maithli's plans. Arya u knew I hate lights rt.."
With 1 flick of his finger the whole room turned dark once again giving abhay the feeling of belongingness n superiority."
Piya was relieved 2 know dat rebecca had done the work of handling kamya very well.c silently entered her room nd stood infront of the mirror.the only thing c cld c was the locket which was glowing wid perfection.c touched the locket again n again.c was still dazed by the touch of abhay n his closeness.c cld feel dat c was falling in luv wid him all over again-n dis time nt in dreams bt in reality.

Next chapter:the diary.

Sorry guys I was stuck up wid my studies so cldnt update soon.please forgive me.hope u lyk dis chapter.
With love

Edited by -srija- - 18 March 2012 at 8:03am

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Res. Update soon waiting

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awsm update srija ..

Edited by hema_rawat - 20 March 2012 at 9:34am

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res (m late Cry) update soon we r waiting 
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lovely story..!!!! Big smile pls update soon... nd pls pm me wen u update.. Smile

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