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ABHIYA FF:LOVE THAT SLAUGHTERED ME(chapter 10 page 70)pms later (Page 69)

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Posted: 30 November 2011 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ilove99

lovely!!!!!!!!!!!!but who else wants peaceErmm
thanks meera.wel dats a secret.u sld wait 4 it.

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Posted: 30 November 2011 at 8:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cuteshrishti

wow srija its awesome I mean I jst loved it especially last part.thanks shris.glad u liked it.Abhiya bonded 2gether as soulmates wow.kavi na kavi toh milna hi thha.I evn love rebi-ryan romance.glad u liked their chemistry.U know this FF of urs is my fav so try 2 continue this as soon as possibleEmbarrassedm in 7th heaven nw.wil try 2 update asap.
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Posted: 03 December 2011 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by peehu24

awesome srija..loved it...thanks dear.

reb-ryan were superb...their relation is different...attraction..repulsion..love..blood lust..beautifully described...
hope i did justice wid their emotions.

[STRONG]and though their was no abhiya 2gether..but loved the bond they share..piya needed help..and abhay helped...i loved this part of update...piya called out abhay...and like a true soul mate..he helped her...now they are bound to each other more tightly...
they r bound 2 be tgether tied by heart,love,soul n power.

[DIV]waiting for next part..thanks for pm..
wil try 2 update asap.


Edited by -srija- - 03 December 2011 at 11:49am
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Posted: 03 December 2011 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bellaaa

plz update soon badly missing ur ff
kya kare yeh jalim schedule update karne hi nahi dete.
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Posted: 03 December 2011 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by madhuri16

srijuHugHug...its awesome...i luvd both d chapters 2 d core...thanks madhu.
they were awesome..Star.
sukriya ji sukriya.
i know u r gonna kill me.Unhappy..m really sorry..i didn't comment on any of ur ff 4 a long time...coz of exams...n later i forgot that i didn't comment.Cry.Cry.no need 2 say sorry dear.mein toh kisike vi update pe comment nahi kar pati.hota hai kavi kavi.
i luvd rebecca n ryan...they r my fav...gosh they both r such an awesome pair...m drooling on ryanEmbarrassed..he is passionate n wild...their kissing part was mind blowing..BlushingEmbarrassed.
after al they r my fav couple.
i luv piya n rebecca's convo...
sisters n their chit chat.
abhay helped her...n they r soulmates...m on my seventh heaven...Day Dreamingsoulmate ko problem me nahi 6odsakta na.
so kamya is gonna understand abhay!!!!!!!!!...they fainted!!!..continue soon...m waiting eagerly!!...luv u loads n take careHug...u r not gonna end this one right...Smile
kamya dnt know abt them being soulmate.yup they both r unconscious.wil try 2 update asap n ya i wont discontinue dis ff.luv u too.


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Posted: 03 December 2011 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by prerna26

Srija, Please update this FF Asap.Smile
i myself dnt like 2 make u wait 4 the update par kya kare m damn busy yar.

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Posted: 03 December 2011 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
@akshi.
Sorry dear wil try 2 update soon.

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Posted: 03 December 2011 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
Chapter 10 part 1

The pale moon light fought through the darkness of the forest nd brightened the isolated cave in the hilltop of dehdaradun.it seemed as if the moon was trying to drive away the evil force out of that place.metz opened her eyes wid a jerk.
"its..its nt possible.its absurd."
"y is my lady in so much anger?"
"sid no joke plz.i cant biliv dat my connection wid piya was disturbed.somebody actually dragged her out of my trance."
"wat do u mean?u were sure dat nobody wil b able 2 break it."
"ya I know.theres no 1...hold on...its abhay...he can break through it...no..no nt him...i didnt feel him around then who cld it be.."
"relax metz...i think u lost ur concerntration.dnt worry we'll do it again bt nt 2day.2day we av some major issues regarding our fellows."
"may b u r right"
****
Piya opened her eyes slowly feeling dazzed.c was feeling different as if c was bounded 2 sth or 2 some1.c saw rebecca by her side n woke her up.
"rebi rebi wake up"
R:"piya u awake?"
P:"1st answer me.u r ok rt n wat abt mom n dad.they r fine rt?"
R:"relax piya.everything's alright.u jst ad a bad dream dats it.calm down sis."
P:"rebi I want 2 c every1 rt nw.plz cal them all."
All the jaiswal family members gathered round piya.
Kamya:"piya we al r fine.u jst ad a bad dream.so dnt panic dear."
Piya hugged her mom n cried her heart out.
P:"momma I was so afraid...metz is so evil.she..she.."
K:"stop it piya.jst 4get it.nw my dear daughter freshen up n come downstairs.u must b hungry."
P:"ya rt mom.m really very hungry.i want a huge breakfast."
Every1 smiled looking at piya n her cuteness.they were glad dat her charm returned back.sth struck piya's mind n c eyed kamya pleadingly.
K:"no piya m nt going 2 let u out.remember u r grounded 4 a week."
P:"dats nt fair mom."
K:"nt again piya.dats ur old dialogue.try sth new gal"
P:" MOOOM"
****
Aman was staring at his cell phone.it was constantly ringing bt he was tryin his best 2 control himself frm answering the call.meera noticed his dilemma.
M:"aman wats the matter.y arent u answering the call?"
Aman jst ignored meera's question.meera was sad luking at dat state of her bst fren cum uncle who seemed so lost n distracted.c didnt want 2 break thru his mind bt widout aving any other way c decided 2 use her charm.

"no I wil nt meet her but...but how wil I stop myself...after all I ... I love her."
Meera smiled knowing aman's thoughts.
"oh so its al because of a gal.dnt worry aman I wil defo help u."
****
Piya was feeling restless.c was feeling as if sth was calling her.c was feelin as if sth was calling her.c was feeling as if some1 needed her badly n the only name dat came 2 her mind was 'abhay'.
P:"rebi"
R:"hun"
P:"i dnt know y bt m feelin dat abhay needs me."
R:"u mst be joking piya.y wld dat arrogand self centered person need u?oh oh I 4got u av been in luv wid him thru dreams."
P:"m serious rebi.its nt abt the childhood dreams or crush.m really feeling restless.i need 2 go n visit him."
R:"n be kicked out right?"
P:"rebi plz.i need ur help.plz persuade mom 2 let me out."
R:"no no nt wid mom.i dnt want 2 get grounded again n again."
P:"plz rebi.for umm...ya ryan.please."
R:"piya u r blackmailing me.its nt so lyk u."
P:"i know"
R:"wat if mom grounded u again?"
P:"i dnt care bt 4 nw I need 2 go n visit him.m goin 2 sneak out.plz handle mom till I return.luv u rebi."
R:"piya wait..."
Bt who could stop piya.c rushed 2wards raichand mansion.c was feeling energetic yet restless.c just wanted 2 c abhay as soon as possible.


Part 2 posted below.

Edited by -srija- - 18 March 2012 at 7:54am

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