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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 7:11am | IP Logged
PROLOUGE


The gentle breeze blew his dark hair.he slowly closed his eyes in concerntration.he felt the power rising inside him.a smile curved in his lips.


''Ah! the feeling of power is so great''


The gentle breeze slowly but gradually changed into a hurricane.


''Hey just stop it.its not good to use ur power whenever n wherever u want''.


Hearing her voice he smiled slightly n opened his eyes.the hurricane gradually ceased.she touched the broken tree,took a fallen leaf n pressed it betn her palms.she closed her eyes n muttered something.a bright dazzling white light filled the area restoring the damage caused by the hurricane.the environment retained its natural condition.


''i told u many times nt to use ur power jst to enjoy it''
''its my way of calling u.i knew you'd mend all ma destruction''
''but will i always be there with u.what if...''
He placed his fingers on her lips.
''shhh...''


he opened his eyes wide making the candles all around them glow even brighter.he looked at her worried face.he took her by her waist n pulled her towards him.he gently nibbled her earlobe.she closed her eyes feeling the growing passion inside her.
He spoke in her ear in a husky voice that made her grow weak on her knees.


''I'll never let u leave me.nobody can take u away frm me.do u understand''
''hmm..''


He slowly lifted her face to make her look at him.she stared at his deep blue eyes.Fire of passion was burning inside them n their eyes were reflecting the intensity of desire n love inside them.
He gently caressed her cheek n slowly bent his head.she felt his lips touch touch hers.the gentle kiss grew more n more passionate.both were drowned in uncontrollable passion in that euphoric moment.he slowly closed his eyes causing all the candles around them to blow off...
The moon gazed at the true lovers n feeling shy hid herself behind the clouds leaving them alone to spend their moment of love...

Character sketch: pg 2

chapter 1-page 6
chapter 2-page 10
chapter 3-page 12
chapter 4-page 18
character sketch 2-page 20
chapter 5 part 1 pg 25
chapter 5 part 2 n 3 pg 26
chapter 6 pg 32
chapter 7 pg 38
chapter 8 pg 48
chapter 9 part 1 n 2 pg 59
chapter 9 part 3 pg 60
Chapter 10 pg 70

Edited by -srija- - 18 March 2012 at 8:10am

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 7:20am | IP Logged
nice  story updated soon

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 7:44am | IP Logged
so the guy is Abhay v all know tht so is the gal Pia?Embarrassed.Anyway nice conceptEmbarrassed

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 7:54am | IP Logged
Good storyline...who is the girl? Hope its Piya.

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 8:50am | IP Logged
continue soon its just amazing n please pm me

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 9:06am | IP Logged
do continue..!!

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 9:14am | IP Logged

Awesum concept
i hope, the couple is abhiya
Thanks for the pm
do continue
tc

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 10:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by missglam



Awesum concept

i hope, the couple is abhiya

Thanks for the pm

do continue

tc

ya this couple is indeed abhiya.thanks 4 comment.wil continue asap.

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