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El Duelo Esperanza
The Mourning Hope

Prologue

The wheels turned and the pieces fell as Destiny set her eyes on the two pawns. Manipulation written on her face as the calculating eyes checked the odds and with a determination like never before; she decided to throw them together on the board of life where every decision is part of a game. 

Bonita and Guardian were set to face the connivance of the Destiny herself.

Her opponent tactfully hid his surprise and with the spinning of the wheel; churned out the immaculate opportunity to show her; just how shrewd Fate could be. With a Cheshire smile on his lips; he set his eyes on the pawn that was placed at the other corner of the board. 

Nemesis was not aware of the plan that Fate held for him. 

The two players shared a look as the sand started spilling; the constellations moved and mist fell upon everyone ...

       A scream was heard. Followed by a silence. The bright lights dimmed as the mist cleared and all that could be seen was the dark night sky; under which Noor lied unconscious in front of the car driven by Kabir.

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Edited by JaeeDevRathore - 24 September 2011 at 4:24am

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Prologue - Page 1 (24th September 2011)


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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 4:38am | IP Logged
Intriguing start as always...
Though the introductory part was even more interesting...
With a Cheshire smile on his lips; he set his eyes on the pawn that was placed at the other corner of the board. 
perfectly moulded...
Happy writing!!!!!!

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 5:04am | IP Logged
loved the prologue (that's nothing new)

continue soon!!

Heart..
~jiya~

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 5:05am | IP Logged
beautiful start...fantastic as always...
 
love what u write...:):)

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 5:09am | IP Logged
YAAAY!
Finally Di your backkk :)
OH MY GOD! I am so glad your alrighttt!! That was really scaryy di :| :|
Take care of yourself properllyyy - okaay??
When I got your message after so long, I got so excitedd, I was thinking YAAAY di's back finallyyy!!! but then I read it, and I felt so guiltyy :( Your okay naa? Properllyy? how are the bruises noww?


Coming to the FF; WOW I am lovinggg it alreadddyyy :D
and of course it's your FF afterall, it will always be PERFECT <3


-Shanitaa
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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 5:20am | IP Logged
wow...
nice starting...
plzzz continue soon...
m sure m gonna loved it...
love ya...Hug

ps: dear plzzz take care of urself n get well super soon...
     May ALLAH bless u alwaysss...ameen


Edited by 18anila1 - 25 September 2011 at 1:32am

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 5:56am | IP Logged
very interesting prologue..can't wait to read the story 
do continue soon :) 
and thanx for the pm 

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