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Posted: 11 May 2012 at 1:35pm | IP Logged

JOYFUL RIDE

Two Vehicles Stopped… people came out with so many Accessories... Happiness Glowed their Faces… they chit chat with each other in Chilly mood looking be there for spending Time casually… Pleasant Weather also boost up their Chilly moods… when they entered towards their specific direction.. Initiates…

 DAYA (to ACP after wink ABHIJEET): Sir aap ko malum hay yahan na TIGERS hain…

ABHIJEET (added): aur DAYA yaad hay wo Forest Officer kiya keh raha tha kay TIGERS nay aaj tak jitney bhi hamlay kiyey hain na wo sub Shadishuda log thay…

FREDDIE shockingly seeing them… while all hides their smile… VIVEK asked…

VIVEK (bit scare tone): phir tou Sir… matlab FREDDIE Sir ko tou buht Khatra hay… unhein tou buht Sawdhan rehna hoga…

SALUNKHY: tou aur kiya VIVEK… (to FREDDIE) wesay FREDDIE Wife ko bata ker aayey hona… (to ACP) chalo acha hay Yaar Main apna Forensic Kit bhi lay aaya hun… yahein sub Malum ho jayey ga…

FREDDIE (pale with total fear): Sir Aap log kesi Baatein ker rahy hain aur Main usay bata dunga kay Main Shadishuda nahi hun…

ABHIJEET (anger): FREDDRICS… ye sabaq diya hay Tumhein Hum nay kay Tum Jhoot bolo…

FREDDIE: nahi Sir… nahi… per… haan…

PURVI (help her): Aap pareshan na hun FREDDIE Sir… hum us TIGER ko aap tak pohanchnay hee nahi dein gay…

FREDDIE relaxed… They fixed their Camps and after that moving Here and there Suddenly ABHIJEET grabbed DAYA arm and Scold…

ABHIJEET: DAYA Paani mein nahi jao… abhi abhi tou Bukhar say uthay ho…

DAYA: magar Boss… aur dekho Garmi kitni hay… arry kuch nahi hoga yaar…

ABHIJEET (call): Sir…!!!

ACP (during setting Chess): DAYA… ABHIJEET saheh keh raha hay…

DAYA (take out his arm from ABHIJEET hand and in angry tone): jee Sir… ABHIJEET he tou Saheh kehta hay…

DAYA moved out in Anger… ABHIJEET smiles on His Rash… all settled down… they really enjoying that Picnic a lot… at Night when in Carbine Lights ACP and DAYA on insisting of ABHIJEET and SALUNKHY  initiates Their Sweet Voices warm the aroma of environment and totally stole the moments… Everyone with Closed eyes felt to move in a Splash of Memories… the Magic Spell broken when they stopped singing and one after another moving to take some rest… ABHIJEET on DAYA's Head…

ABHIJEET: DAYA… ek tou abhi Bukhar say uthay ho aur itni Kum Light mein Parh rahy ho… pata hay Shadi mein kitna Bura Impression paray ga…

DAYA: hain… kis ki Shadi..???

ABHIJEET (rash): Meri aur kis ki… aby sub log kahein gay Dulha kay Bhai ko Kum dikhai deta hay… pata hay kitni Insult hogi…

DAYA embarrass whereas PURVI, SACHIN and VIVEK bursts their Laugh as they are behind ABHIJEET… ABHIJEET moved back and all Three Exit atonce… DAYA added…

DAYA: arry Boss… bus thora sa reh gaya hay… sach… Main thori der mein so jaon ga… bus Finishing Lines reh gayii hain…

ABHIJEET: Thori der matlab Thori der…

DAYA: Pakka…!!!

ABHIJEET moved to His Hut and DAYA still engaged with the Story… after finishing it… He feels that everyone was in Deep Sleep especially ABHIJEET as DAYA use sum Sleeping Pills which He took out from SALUNKHY Sir Forensic kit silently in His Meal and now after feeling that Medicine did his work… completely relaxed and moved…

DAYA: lagta hay Goli Kaam ker gayii hay… ab Maza aayey ga… Mujhy Paani mein janay Nahi diya tha na…

He quietly moved towards the lake which Called Him with his Weaving humming… He moved ahead without any voice as He used Medicine for ABHIJEET only… He dipped His Head and start swimming with a Thought…

DAYA: WOW… Raat kay 4 bajay aur itna Thanda Paani Boss… Maza aa gaya…!!!

He moved ahead and suddenly lose his balance… The water Gyres Spin Him and He totally vanished after few minutes….

His eyes Opened with the Ray of light saw himself Lying wrapped in water… He instantly get up and totally Stunned… He looks straight… Feel Something Different… His jeans and jersey flowed in Land… in Confusion he Folded His jeans and jersey Sleeves and quiet Amazed to saw his Hands and Foot… they looked so Thin… without Understand anything he stand up and Immediately Clutched his jeans which fell down at any minute.. He tried to tie it after making so many extra holes on His Belt… His Jersey looking so Big from His Size… he moved as the Road was so Clean and weather was so Chill so He did not bother about Bare Foot… he saw People they Wore different types of Cloths, Very Old fashioned which He only saw in Old movies… He looks Cars… very Old in Model… People stair Him and his Cloths and especially His bare Foot… he moved Fast to Protect Himself from those Eyes which have so many Questions… He moved ahead and saw some Shops without so many Decorations… He entered in a Food Bar and asked about a Water… the Person gave Him Water and when He take out His valet.. His Pocket was empty having so many Algae and shells as He was in Lake… He gave Back Water without a Sip to the person but He said…

PERSON: Pee lo beta…

DAYA: magar meray Pass Paisay Nahi…

PERSON(shock): Paisay… Paisay ka Paani kub aata hay…

DAYA Confuse but on Insisting Drank it… after that the person Offered Him a Breakfast… He Shy as he knew He don't have a Penny but the person still Amazed that GUEST are BHAGWAAN for them and They even don't think to take Money from BHAGWAAN… DAYA smiles on their thoughts… after take some Bites… He thanked the person wanted to ask about the Cloth Shop… The Person said that Cloth Shop was available at City area but He tell that He Directed Him to Tailor Shop… DAYA remembered that he did not have a Penny so asking about so many things was Meaningless… He again thanked the person and Moved out… Suddenly He saw a Paper which was looking weird because of the Font, Style and bit Pale Colour… He unintentionally grabbed it and read the Headline with total Confusion… moved up His Head and His Eye Caught the Reflection in a Small Mirror at the Food Bar Corner… The Newspaper slipped from His Hand and His Eyes Opened instantly after feeling a Light Pain on His Head… He saw ABHIJEET checked His Wet hairs… He instantly get up and looking ABHIJEET without any recognition… His Jeans and Jersey still Folded and His Foot and hand looking so Fat… He tried to check Himself by grabbing ABHIJEET Cell Camera…. ABHIJEET watched all His effort and grabbed His Hand and asking…

ABHIJEET: DAYA… Tum Theek hona…???

DAYA (absent mind): Main wo yahan… Main…

ABHIJEET: Tum nay swimming ki hay na…???

DAYA: haan boss… per Baat tou suno… yaar… Mian peechay chala gaya tha…

ABHIJEET (anger): aur wo yaqeenun Paani mein chala gaya hoga…

DAYA: arry Boss… Main apnay Past mein chala gaya tha… sach… Main nay Khud ko dekha…

ABHIJEET look at Him and left the place immediately after saying in Rash…

ABHIJEET (harsh): bahar aany say pehlay Jeans kay Folds ko Unfolds ker lena…   

DAYA in Embarrassing opened it and Immediately Opened His Belt either He feels his Tummy was Burst… He moved Out after Changing His Cloths… see all as it was… His Tongue still resists the Taste of that Breakfast so He avoids to take it with Team now… He anxious to tell everything to ABHIJEET but ABHIJEET did not Respond Him Once… after a Happy Joyful Journey… Team Left… ABHIJEET avoid DAYA Company so He sat with ACP Sir whereas engage SACHIN with DAYA… DAYA did not do anything… Both vehicles moved as all are feeling Tired so Sleeping in Vehicles whereas the Vehicles moved Slowly… DAYA quillas Weaved a bit and He Pressed the brake… ABHIJEET stopped His Vehicle and moved ahead at Driving Seat… He scolds DAYA…

ABHIJEET: DAYA… Naaend aa rahi hay kya..!!! abhi Accident ho jata… SACHIN Tum…

DAYA (grabbed His hand and whisper): agar tum meray sath nahi betho gay tou Main aisay he Sotay mein Gadi chalaon ga… 

ABHIJEET look at His hand which is still on DAYA 's Grip and take back His Decision… He replace SACHIN in His place and signalled DAYA to move to Passenger Seat and He started Quillas… on way they dropped first VIVEK and then FREDDIE and after that DAYA tell the Whole in Dreamy Voice… ABHIJEET look at Quillas Dash Board and take a Deep Breath…

DAYA: Tumhein lagta hay Main Mazak ker raha hun…

ABHIJEET: Tum nay Khawab dekha ho ga… wesay bhi Tum Book parh rahay thay… usay era mein chalay gayey hogay…

DAYA: magar Boss wahan Main nay Nashta bhi kiya tha…

ABHIJEET: OMG!!! Manna paray ga DAYA… tum Khawab mein bhi free mein Nashta ker aayey… hahahha… arry yaar acha waqt tha wo… saada Log thay… Sahulat Kum thi tou Zarurat bhi… nafrat aur jealousy bhi Kum he thi… aur aaj kal tou Facilities bhi necessaties ban gayii hain… MEHMAN ko BHAGWAAN samjha jata tha aur ab tou BHAGWAAN ko bhi MEHMAAN… dekho sirf Occassions aur Celebrations tak Yaad reh gaya hay… wesay Tum kesay dikhtay thay us samay??? (wink) SEENG tou nahi hongay…!!!

DAYA (naugthy tone): buht PYARA… per buht Kamzor… (in laugh) Jeans jesay handle ki Main hee jaanta hun…

ABHIJEET: hahahahhahah…  Khair Comics wagairah parhtay huay ya aisai Movies dekhnay say aisa ho jata hay…

DAYA (rash): Main Comics nahi parhta…

ABHIJEET: acha… tou CINDRELLA kaun hay…???

DAYA: wo ek Naukrani thi aur us ka Joota bhagtay huay uter gaya tha tou Prince nay usay Dhoond ker us say Shadi ker li…

ABHIJEET: matlab Tum Comics Parhtay ho… (DAYA embarrass) (ABHIJJET added in suspicious tone) wesay DAYA Mujhy tou CINDRELLA ek buht bari Planner lagti hay… (DAYA shock) dekho na… wo us samay mahal gayii jub Ghar mein koi Nigrani karnay wala nahi tha… phir jub pehlay usay JOOTA Fit aa gaya tha tou Utra kesay…???  yaqeenun PRINCE ko Phansanay kay liyey hee Us nay ye kiya hoga…

DAYA (laughing madly with): kya Boss… tum Comics mein bhi apna dimagh chalatay ho…

ABHIJEET (smiles): bilkul jesay tum Khawab mein bhi Free mein Nashta ker aatay ho…

DAYA embarrass but still in Dilelama either he was there or His Brain makes an Imaginative aura…!!!WinkWink

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Posted: 12 May 2012 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Good story DADA. Thumbs Up

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Posted: 12 May 2012 at 12:03pm | IP Logged

Thank UHug
MAX, PURNI DII, PARO n BACCHA...Big smile

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Posted: 12 May 2012 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
nice story GD.

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@ACHU...
THANK U yaar...Embarrassed

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Posted: 12 May 2012 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
Great story GD. Clap

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Posted: 12 May 2012 at 6:32pm | IP Logged
Wow very diffrent story...
Reminded me of book goosebums's story
Grt story dada

Edited by maggi.masala - 12 May 2012 at 6:33pm

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