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DreamyDeepz28

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Posted: 08 October 2011 at 12:08am | IP Logged
Yeh Kahani meri khaas dost ko mein dedicate karthi hoon and offcourse to my favourite duo Abhijeet and Daya. Meine yeh kahaani apni dost ke real life se thoda liya hai.Jab mein usseh milli aur uski kahaani suni i was shocked Shocked ki yese bhi insaan ho sakhthe jo pyaar mein paagal ho sakhthe hain.I dedicate this to all the brave people all over the world jinhone apne doston ke liye khaaskar apni jaan diya ho.Meine iss kahani mein poora importance DOSTHI pe diya hain.I have tried to create every khas moments joh every viewer chahtha hai ki woh CID mein dekhe.Agar yeh kahaani padkar ek bhi insaan ko lagega ki useh bhi yese bahadury dikhaani hai toh yeh mein apni success maanthi hoon .Without wasting much time iam giving you my first story Read it and ENJOY !!!!!!!!!!!!! SmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmile
 
 PAGAL ASHIQUE KE KHOONI KISSE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Yeh jagah ek puraani building hai waha
A girl lying in a pool of blood shot with gun on her heart.someother girls are sitting beneath her and crying out loud around her and 2 of the girls lift and try to get lift from the strangers on road. Another one girl calls CID.
 
At bureau:
 
Fredericks: Hamesha mujhe apni wife se sunna padtha hai gaali
Vivek        : Kyaa hua Freddy sir Bhabhi ne phir jhagda kiya kyaa??
Fredericks: hmmm too toh baat hi mat kar...
Vivek        : Sir bataayiye ne kyaa baat hai...
 
Abhijeet Daya bureau aathe hai saath saath...
 
Daya        : Kyaa hua Freddy phir se shuru tumhare jhagde??
Fredericks: Sir iss Vivek ne meri wife se kaha ki mein kuch kaamhi nahi kartha yahape sirf apni wife ke baare mein complaint kartha rehtha hoon...
Abhijeet   : Vivek tumne yese kaha humare Freddy ke baare mein aisa kahaa??!!!!
Vivek       : Arey nahi sir mein toh aise hi...
Fredericks: Aise hi ...
 
Suddenly ACP sir enters on the scene:
 
ACP  : Kyaa ho raha hai yaha??
Daya : Kuch nahi sir yeh aam jagde freddy ke apne wife ke saath
 
Bureau mein call aatha hai aur Vivek receives the call:
 
Vivek         : Hello Kyaa Goli laagi!!! Kahaan pe??? Hum aathe hain abhi..
Vivek to All:Sir Malad mein ek purane building mein ek ladki ko goli marke ek aadmi bhaag gaya hai sir..
ACP          :toh chalo malad chalthe hai...
 
 
Jise goli lagi hai uska naam Deepika hei aur doosre ladki ka naam Naina hai. joh Naina ke saath hain unka naam hein Heena and Manju. ACP, Daya,Abhijeet,Fredericks, Kaajal, Sachin ,Vivek aur Nikhil aa jaathe hai waha pe.
so they come and see the conditon of the girl. 

ACP      : Oh my god Daya.. Ahijeet  itna khoon behgaya ambulance aayi ki nahi..
Daya     : Nahi sir pata nahi itna dher kyun ho raha hai.
Abhijeet: Sir yeh sar se bhi khoon nikal raha hai.Daya tumhare paas handkerchief hai? Isske sar pe rakhne keliye...  khoon thoda rokne keliye...
Daya     : Haa yeh lo Ahiijeet.                                                                             
Naina(crying): Koi kuch karo meri dost ko bachao... meri wajaah se woh iss halat mein hai...(weeping).. Cry.
Fredericks    : Sir ambulance aa gayi
ACP            : jaldi jaldi utao ladki ko .Kaajal,sachin aur Nikhil   tum Naina ke saath jao
Kaajal, Sachin  &  Nikhil  : Ji sir.

 
Till then the ambulance emerges and Daya and Fredericks help them to carry away the girl to the van.still everyone is crying  and the scene gets tense.
So now CID goes into usual investigation about how the girl Deepika was shot.

ACP          : Daya yeh 4 ladkiyaan iss sunsaan jagah par kyaa kar rahi thi?
Daya         : Kyaa Pata sir. Ho saktha hai koi gunde peeche pade ho
Abhijeet ,Vivek and Fredericks enquiring Heena and Manju
Abhijeet   : Kyaa hua tha yahaan?? yeh Deepika ko goli kaise lagi???
Heena      : Baat bohot puraani hai sir mein kahaa se shuru karoon.
Fredericks: Kuch bhi ho bolna toh padega hi.

Heena and Manju ek doosre ko dekhthe hai
Vivek        : Arey aap dono humein batavoge nahi toh pata kaise chalega?

ACP and Daya Sir jo doorh pe hai baatcheet sunkar paas aa jaathe hai.
ACP       : Kyaa hua Abhijeet?
Abhijeet: Nahi Sir yaha yeh donoon ek doosre ko dekh rahe hai
ACP: (Unke chehra dekh kar woh aur pyaar se baath karte hai) Aaap toh bohot dareh hue lag rahe ho.. Chalo koi baath nahi aaram se bureau chalte hai aur waha pe baath karthe hai... chalo

At bureau
A call comes on ACP's phone
ACP    : ha kaho Sachin kyaa hua?
Sachin: Sir yahan hospital mein Doctor keh rahe hai ki Deepika ke bachne ka chance kam hai..
ACP    : Kya?!!!!? Achcha aisi baath hai... theekh hai tum mujhe ek ek minute ki baatein phone karke bataana theek hai...ok..ok                                                         
ACP Heena aur Manju ki taraf mudke kehthe hai
ACP    : dekho Heena aur Naina Deepika ki condition serious hai aur iss halat mein tum donon humein kuch nahi batavoge toh hu m aageh kaise jaa payenge... gunehgaar ko kaise pakdenge...
Heena and Naina rone lagthe hai...
Abhijeet: Dekhye hum aapki madath karna chahthe hai ...toh please...
Vivek     : Aaap paani peejiye... leejiye... befiker hoke batayoye
ACP sir  vivek ko ghoor ke dekhthe hai Geek
ACP      : ha ha bataao...
Heena   : (rothe huve)  CrySir darasal baath bohot puraani hai... ek ladka tha sundar Manju    :woh Naina ka relative tha woh Naina ko paagalon ki tarah pyaar kartha tha...ek din usne Naina ko bada sa chitti bheja parcel ke dwaara... yeh dekh ke Naina uss chitti ko ghar leke gayi aur apne dad se shikaayat ki
Heena   : Tab uske dad'ne Sundar ke parents se shikhayat ki aur kaha ki aayinda woh yese harkatein na kare...
Manju    : Uske parents ne toh agree kar liya ki hai hum sambhaal lenge ...
Heena    : lekin woh apni harkaton se baaj nahi aaya sir
ACP        : Kyun ? Kyaa kiya usne??
Heena    : woh fir se Naina ko pareshaan karne laga tha... isliye usne sundar se kaha ki woh kisi aur se pyaar karthi hai...
Abhijeet : Phir kyaa hua??
Heena    : Buss Phir kyaa tha... usko gusssa aa gaya tha... aur woh Naina pe nazar daalne laga tha...
Manju    : woh uske class ke sabhi ladkon ko Naina ke naam pe ashleel sms bhejne laga ...
ACP       : Ashleel matlab kis tarah ka asleel...
Heena    : (ek bohot badi silence ke baadh)  yese messages... jaise... jaise...
Manju    : Jaise...ki...ki... Ermm
Daya      : Sharminda hone ki koi baath nahi hai tumhe... khulke kahiye...
Manju    : jaise ki ... mera badan pyaasa hai... mein pyaasi hoon ...aaj raath... (rone lagthi hai)... Cry
ACP       : Darinda jaha bhi hoga chodenge nahi usko#**** Angry uske baad kyaa hua!!
Heena    : Sir uske baadh toh Naina ko yeh sab pata nahi tha ki woh uske yese sms uske naam pe bhej raha hai ...
Manju    : Uske classke boys kitni bhi sims change kare unko gande message aathe rahe sir... toh ek din ek ladke ne Naina ka insult kardiya sir...
Heena    : Toh uss ladke sab logon ke saamne Naina se kaha ki woh ... yeh sab business college ke baahar ...rakhe andar yeh sab na kare...
Manju    : Tab Naina ko pata chala yeh sab aur usne uss ladke ko sab samjhaaya...
Heena    :uske bohot baaad bohot police ko batake usse pitwaaya sir toh woh theek hua lekin... dhamkiyaan nahi rukhi sir...
Manju    : Deepika aur uski dosthi bobot time baadh hua... aur yeh kahaaniyaan baadh mein pata laga...
Heena   : tab ek din Naina ne khulke apni madath karne ke liye unke ghar gayi aur unse madath maangi
Manju    : Pehle toh parents ne mana kar diya lekin Deepika unke advise ke khillaf gayi aur ghar se nikal kar Naina ka saath dene ka decision.
Heena    : tabse Deepika ne apne parents ko thyaag diya sirf apne dost ke liye sir...
Daya      : yeh sab baatein toh theek hai... lekin yeh bataao ki yeh haathsa kaise hua??!!!
Heena    : Sir ek din hum sab ne yeh pareshaani hamesha ke liye khatam karne keliye advertisement diya ki Naina weds Nithin.
Manju    : tab kyaa tha woh paaglon ki tarah aa gaya jaha bhi chupkar baitha tha... woh aaya aur Naina ko maarne ke liye badha...
Heena   : tab Naina ko bachaane keliye jaanboojke Deepika saamne aa gayi sir... (phir se rothi hein)...Cry

Donon ko rothe dekh aur kahani ko sunke Daya, Abhijeet,Vivek emotional ho jaathe hai... Lekin ACP sir kehthe hai

ACP  : Hmm Deepika ne toh apni dosth ko bacha liya ab humein kuch karna padega Approve.

ACP sab ko ek side pe bulake poochthe hai
ACP      : Kyaaa lagtha hai tumko ???
Daya     : Sir humein Deepika aur Neethu ko protection dena chahiye sir... kyaa pata woh unhe khatam karne ki koshish kare...
ACP      : aur inn dono ka kyaa??
Abhijeet: Sir endono ko hum yaani mein aur Daya saath rehke daya ke ghar pe rakhthe hein sir... kaafi dari hue lagthe hai...
ACP      : kuch baath ho toh mujhe batana
Daya: nahi sir hum dekh lenge.
ACP      :ok

Yaha hospital mein:

Naina : Mein kyaa karoon... meri dost... Cry
Kaajal: Naina sambhaalon apne aapko...


Naina yeh kehthe kehte behosh ho jaathi hai  toh kaajal Sachin aur Nikhil waha bench peh usse litake rakhhte hai aur paani daalke uthaane ki koshish karthe hai

ACP sir saari kahaani Sachin ko bataathe hai aur Sachin Nikhil aur Kaajal ko...
Sab baatein sunke unko ek bohot proud feeling aa jathi hai Deepika ke liye... ki aaj kal koi apnon keliye ye sab nahi kartha toh Deepika ne apne dost keliye ye sab ...

Yaha Daya aur abhijeet Daya ke ghar pe Heena aur Manju ko le jaathe hai:

Usual jo unhe comfortable karne ke liye unse kuch baatein karni ki koshish karthe hai..
Daya      : Aao andar... aao ... isse apne ghar hi samjho ... Smile
Abhijeet: Hey Daya... sirf baatein keh rahe ho ki khana waana bhi hai!!!! Tongue
Daya      : Arey yaar tumhe toh pata hai ki mujhe khana waana banana nahi aatha toh ... meri madath karo na yaar...
Abhijeet: Chalo kuch banathe hai..
Tabhi dono Heena aur Manju kehthe hai: Sir hum kuch madath kare.
Abhijeet: arey nahi nahi aap humare guest ho.
Daya     : Excuse me yeh mere ghar hain aur yeh mera dialogue cheen liya tumne yaar..(hasthe hue)
Abhijeet: Kyaa farak padtha hai tum kaho ya mein ek hi baath hai na...

 
Heena aur Manju muskuraane ki koshish karthe hein lekin udaasi mehsoos hoti hai unhe... ek tarah se unki achchi dost ki yaadein unhe Day Dreaming pal pal yaaad aane lagtha jaise uski muskurahat... Smile uska hasna sharmaana... Embarrassed
Tabhi Abhijeet kehthe hai:

Abhijeet: kyaa hua kaha khoye hue ho Question... baitho na hum abhi aathe hain...
Guest ko hall mein chodke woh kitchen ki taraf jaathe hai...

At kitchen

Daya     : kyaa yaar abhijeet unke chehre dekha tumne? Kitni dard thi ghabraahat thi... abhi bhi... hai na??!!!
Abhijeet: haa yaar, ladkiyaan hai aakhir... aur waise bhi goli khaatey hua dekh aam insaan ek dum ghabrajaayega... lekin inn  ladkiyon ne toh bohot bure din dekhe...
Daya     :Hmmm sahi keh raho hao yaar... lekin yeh ladka paagal hain yaa ashique khoon karne pe utar aaya yeh toh
Abhijeet: yeh paagal kabhi aasique nahi ho sakthe aur ashique ko paagal nahi hona chahiye... Pyaar mein kurbaaniya kathe hai apni jaan dete hain... kisika jaan khud ke matlab keliya lena toh nafrat hai pyaar nahi...
Daya     : Tum bohot jaanthe ho pyaar ke baarein mein... Taarika ne sikhaaya kyaan tumhe??!!!!! Wink
Abhjeet: Meri taang kheechne mein badi khushi milthi hai tumhe Big smile... waise koi toh hein mera jiska taang keech sakhthe ho...
Daya     : Ha ha ... bolo apne man ko kholo... udavo mere mazak... Stern SmileBroken Heart
Abhijeet: Arey tum toh serious ho gaye main toh mazaak kar raha tha yaar.. LOL.
Daya     :  Ha  ha tumko toh mazak soojhtha hai...
Abhijeet: Achcha chalo tumhari zindagi mein bhi koi na koi aayegi... don't worry.Tongue..

Then woh saari khane keliye dining pe laake rakhte hain...aur Heena aur Manju se baatein karthe hai...
Daya    : Arey Heena... Manju... aao na khaana khaathe hai...
Heena aur Manju aake dining pe baithte hai...
Abhijeet: chalo Daya tum bhi aajavo yaar bohot bhook lagi hai...

 
Daya athe hai aur dekhthe hai ki Heena aur Manju kuch kha nahi rahe...
Daya: kya hua... tum log kuch lete kyun nahi... Question

Heena aur Manju ghabrahat mein rothe dekh Cry daya kehthe hai:                               
Daya      : Gahbrao mat tum dono ko kuch nahi hoga iss bath ka hifasat hum kaarenge
Heena   : Sir humein iss baat ki chinta nahi lekin hum agar yen waqt par himat karthe toh goli chalne se rok sakthe theh... ab toh..Unhappy.
Abhijeet : Chodo yeh sab baatein issse ab kyaa faayda... buss Deepika theek ho jaaye is keliye prarthana karo... ab khana khao theek hai..

Sab dinner hone ke baadh sone nikalthe hai aur Abhijeeth aur daya ek room mein aur Heena aur Manju ko alag room dete hain.
Lekin yeh sab kuch kehne ke baadh bhi unko tasali nahi hoti aur woh yeh sab sochth huve newspaper padthe hain ... dono front page dekhke upset hojate hai aur... woh sochte hai ab kuch nahi bacha except sucide ...
Usi waqt raath mein abhijeet ko pyaas lagne ki wajah se woh paani peene keliye utha hai tab woh  light mein bati bhujthe dekh useh kuch gadbad lagtha hai aur seedha andar gus jatha hai aur dekhthe hai ki dono ek rasi pe thadap rahe hai tabhi.
Jaldi bhaagke donon ke pair pakadtha hain aur jor jor se daya ko bulatha hai...tabhi daya awaaz sunke bhaag ke aathe hai aur donon ko rasi se nikaal ke bistarh par sulaakar doctor ko phone karthe hai.

Uske baadh ACPsir ko phone karthe hai:

ACP  : Kyaa hua daya itni raatko phone kiya.. sab theek toh hain?!!!!!!
Daya : Sir baath yeh hain ki Heena aur Naina ne suicide karne ki koshish ki...
ACP   : Kyaa????!!!  D'ohShocked Lekin kyun... Shocked

 
Daya sab baatein kehthe hain ACP'se
ACP  : teek hai daya mein abhi aatha hoon...

Yeha doctor aathe hain daya ke ghar pe.Aur dono ko check karne ke baad daya aur abhijeet ke paas aake bolthe hain
Doctor                  : Unke gale ke aaspaas bohot jyaada strangled ho gaya hai... agar thodi derh aur ho jata tho maut hi ho jaathi... kher achcha hua aap ne jaldi hi bacha liya unhe... kher main yeh dawaayiyaan likh deta hoon... time pe ye de deejiye... theek
ho jayenge donon... aur haan yese depression phir se ho sakhtha ...khayaal rakhyega... ho saktha hain phir se woh yesi harkat karein...
Daya aur abhijeet: Hum dekhlenge Doctor saab,Thanks Doctor.
Doctor                  : Thanks ki kyaa baat hain yeh toh mera kaam hai. Smile

Tab tak ACP sir aa jathe hai..
ACP      : Kyaa hua Daya  Shocked woh dono theek hai na..
Daya     : Haan sir Lekin..Ermm...
Abhijeet: Sir agar mein waqt pe jaake nahi pakadtha toh maut ho jaathi sir.
ACP      : Oh my god.!!!!.. ab kahan hain woh... unko hosh aaya ki nahin??!!
Daya     : Nahin sir abtak nahin Doctor ne injection lagwaya toh hai... shayad thodi der baadh aajayega...

ACP seedhe unke room mein jaathe hai aur waha ladkiyon ke paas baithke unke maateh pe haath pherthe kehthe hai:
ACP      :Bichari ladkiyaan... inko yah sab achi tarah grasp karna mushkil hoga... pehle toh sundar ki dhamki aur phir kofnaak tarike se goli chalathe dhekna woh bhi apni dost ki ore aur apne aap ko jimedaar sochke toh aur jyaada bura laga
hoga... Daya .. Abhijeet agli baar yesa na ho paye khayaal rakhna...
Abhijeet: Sir aakhir ye dono ladkiyaan hain sir thoda ajeeb lagega agar hum unke kamre mein unpe nazar rakhe toh...
ACP       : ok toh yeh Kaajal ko bulalo yaah phir nayi officer Purbi'ko...
Abhijeet: Sir yeh Tarika ko... (a sweet boyish grin)

 
Daya tries to hide his smile behind... Evil SmileLOL
ACP       : (looking at both Daya and Abhijeet with a grin) theek hai.. theek hai... bulalo...
Waapas jaathe hue ACP ko hasi aathi hain yeh sochke ki Abhijeet ne Tarika ka naam liya... LOL

 Forensic Lab mein:

Saalunkhe: Yeh goli se ab woh Sundar ko kaise dhoondega ACP???!!!!
Taarika     : Sir aap toh hamesha hi ACP sir ko challenge karne mein lage rehthe ho...
Saalunkhe: Kyaa matlab ... mein koi kaam nahi kartha sirf Pradyuman mehnath kartha hai mein yaha araam kartha hoon...
Tarika       : mera kehna ka matlab yeh nahi tha sir...
ACP          : Arey Saalunkhe kyaa chal raha hai??!!!!
Saalunkhe: Aaayiye aaphi ka inteaar tha...
ACP          : Tum... aur mera intezaar... ho hi nahi saktha... kher yeh chodo batao kyaa pata chala...
Saalunkhe: dekho yaar yeh goli ek pistol se chali hai... waise jyaada bolne ke liye gun toh mila nahi jisse fingerprint mille...  Aur Deepika kaisi hein boss??
ACP          : arey yaar tumhe yeh naam kaise pata?
Saalunkhe: woh Sachin ne bataaya yaar.
ACP          : achcha woh bohot serious hai... hosh nahi aaya useh abhi tak...
Tarika       : Arey sir bohot dukh hotha hai jab yese case aatha hai ki dost dost ko bachane keliye aage aajaye aur woh hi iss halat mein...
ACP          : ha tarkia hum kar bhi kyaa sakthe hai... jab mujrim yese ho toh...


At Hospital:

Yaha pe toh Naina hosh mein aathi hai par bohot dull aur beemar si dikh rahi hai... kapde khoon se sane hue aur roh roh ke bura haal ho chuka hai... Deepika ko woh ICU mein dekh dekh ke apne aap ko rokh nahi paa rahi hain...Tab Naina ke haaton mein nurse uske dress aur baaki cheeje thama deti hain usmein ek chitti milti hain useh... Sachin,kaajal Nikhil bohot gaur se ek saath chitti ko padthe haain usmein likha hota hai:

Naina,

      Mujhe bohot pehle laga hi tha ki kuch aise hi hone waala hai... mein toh apni family ke ya kisi aur ke kaam nahi aa saki lekin meine bohot pehle socha tha ki jab mauka milega toh tumhare liye jaan bhi doongi... agar jaise mein soch rahi hoon waisa kuch ho jaata hai toh marne se pehle meri ek aakhri khwahish hai ki mein apne mata-pita se ek akhri baar milna chahthi hoon... meri taraf se mere ghar pe call karna Naina aur unko bula lene meri taraf se...
 
Tumhari dost
 Deepika...

Yeh sab padke Naina ko bohot aasu aathe hain... tabhi Sachin,Kaajal aur Nikhil samjaathe hai ki woh useh uska ghar ka number de... aur Sachin call kartha hai Deepika ke ghar pe...


Sachin:Hello main Sachin bol raha hoon CID Mumbai se
Parent:CID???!!!!! Kahiye kyaa seva kar sakhtha hoon aapke liye??
Sachin: Ji aapki beti Deepika ko yaha city hospital mein seriously admit kiya gaya hai... toh uski ichcha thi ki woh aapko mille isliye call kiya aapko
Parent: Dekhye Sachin'ji mere liye meri beti mar chuki hai... jab woh iss dehleez paar karke Naina'ke liye ghar chodke gayi thi... uski yahi sajaa hai ki woh hamara moo dekhe bina hi mar jaaye... aur iss baat ko leke yaha call mat keejiyega
aayinda...
Sachin:Lekin suniye hello...

Phone cut jaatha hai... Kyunki phone loudspeaker pe rakha tha toh sabne sunliya... aur Naina phoot phoot ke rone lagthi hain Cry aur Kaajal useh gale laagake useh samadhaan karti hain... Hug(yeh sochke Naina ko bura lagtha hai ki woh Deepika yeh khwahish poori nahi kar sakhthi hai) sabki aankhen namm ho jaathi hai yeh sab sunke... lekin woh apne aapko rokhte hain...

Kuch derrh baadh Sachin Naina se bataate hain...


Sachin: Dekho Naina kab tak aise baithe rahogi yeh kapde badal lo Kaajal kuch kapde laayi hain... aur kuch kha lo Naina... aise baithe rehne se ya khaana na khaane se kuch nahi hone wala...
Naina  : Nahi mujhe kuch nahi khaana... mein kahi nahi jaoongi ... jabtak Deepika hosh mein nahi aathi tab tak yese hi baaitoongi...
Kaajal: Dekho aise rehne se tum beemar ho jaaogi... aur mujhe poora yakeen hai agar tum shraddha aur bhakthi se yahaan maata vaishno devi mandir jaoogi vahan toh tumhaari dost ko tumse koi nahi cheen saktha...
Naina : Sach????
Nikhil : Muchch... Ab agar Deepika hosh mein aaye toh humse complain nahi karegi ki humne uski dost ki theek tarah se dekhbhaal nahi ki... chalo kuch khalo... mandir hum kisina kisi ko bhejenge tumhare saath...
Naina : Theek hai maine chalthi hoon Smile.
Sachin: Kyaa hua yaar Nikhil usne tumhaari baat phat se maan lee Evil Smile...
Nikhil  : Arey nahi sir aap khamakha baath ka batangad banaa rahe hai Embarrassed
Nikhil looks glaringly into Naina's eyes...  Tongue when she turns back...

Yeha Daya ke ghar pe Tarika bhi aayi hue hai:
Heena aur Manju ko hosh aatha hai aur Daya aur abhijeet unhe dekh kar kamre mein aathe hai
Daya    : Ab kaise ho tum dono??
Heena aur Manju chup hain...
Abhijeet: (Pyaar se) dekho Heena... Manju... Jo bhi hua useh bhool javo yeh davawi kaho...
Heena aur Manju phir chup hai... Toh Abhijeet Aur Daya Ishaaro se Tarika ko donon ke saath baath karne ko kehthe hai... aur kamre se baahar jaathe hai..
Tarika  :(Pyaar se) Hello Heena, Manju... Kaisi ho tum dono aaj?!!!
Heena  : Theekh hai... Aaap kaun?!! Confused
Tarika   : Mein aapki dost samajh lo... Dekho Heena Manju tum donon ki dosth jinda hai aur hum sab ko uske liye prarthana karni chahiye ... lekin tumne toh ...kyaa sirf yehi baath thi tunhare suicide karne ki?
Heena  : (thode time ke baadh) Nahi Tarika'ji sirf yehi baath nahi hai humari suicide karne ki wajah...
Tarilka: Toh phir?
Manju : Tarika'ji darasal baath yeh humne CID ke officers se nahi bataaya... actually humein kuch saal pehle ek bacha road pe se milla tha... aur Naina ne ussi time usss bachhe ko uthaya aur usse apnane ka faisla kiya...
Tarika : Phir??!!
Heena : Tab se Naina uss bache ko apne bache ki tarah pala tha... Deepika aur humsab ne bohot kaha usse ki usse kahi aur orphanage mein dete hai yaa phir advertisement deke uske ma-baap ko ddondhte hai lekin woh apni jidh pe adi thi isliye
ussne humare ek bhi nahi suni...
Manju: Phir yeh baatein Sundar ko jab pata chala toh uska khoon kholne laga...kyunki usse jyaada agar kisi aur se woh pyaar kare woh Sundar hargis bardhaash nahi karsaktha tha... isliye ek hafthe pehle ussne uss  ladki ko kidnap karliya...
Tarika: Aapne kyaa naam rakha uska?? umr kitni hai bachi ki ab?
Heena: Hum usse Meena bulaathe theh aur ab uski umr 6 saal hai...
Tarika:phir kyaa hua??
Manju:Phir woh dhamki pe dhamki le aaya ki woh usse maar daalega... isliye humne milke tarkeeb banaaye ki Naina ki shaadi ki jhooti advertisement dete hai... tab yeh sab ho gaya...
Tarika: Toh abtak woh bachi uss Sundar ke haath mein hain..?!!!!
Heena: kal raath jab hum akhbaar pad rahe theh toh humari nazar ek news item pe padi ... jisme ...jisme...(rothe huve) Cry
Manju: Jisme ek bachi ki boiler mein maut ki khabar likhi thi... uske deeldol ke description se yehi laga ki woh Meena hi thi...
Tarika: Achcha... tumne yeh sab CID'se kyun nahi bataaya?? Shocked
Heena: sach kahain toh hum dharam sankat mein theh aur humne socha bhi na tha ki woh yesa kar saktha hai... yeh toh tab pata chala jab usne Deepika ko goli maari...
Tarika: Acha... tumhare paas uska photo hai, Meena ka?        
Manju: Haan yeh leejye...
Tarika: Ghabrao mat... ho sakhtha hai woh Meena nahi thi... mein dekhthi hoon ki tumhaari kya madath kar sakhthi hoon... theek hai...
Heena: Ji Tarika'ji...

Tarika seedhe jaake Abhijeet aur Daya se jaake bolthi hai saari baatein..Yeh sab sunke Abhijeet aur Daya shocked ho jathe hai aur ACP ko saari baatein batathe hain...Aur ACP kehthe hain ki woh seedhe bureau aaye..


At bureau:


ACP, Vivek and Fredericks ko pata chalne lagtha hai ki Nikhil is falling in love...
Vivek        : Sir mein soch raha tha ki waise ki Kaajal ne achcha idea diya hi hai toh Vishno devi mandir jaana chahiye Naina ko...

ACP          : Nahi nahi vivek akele nahi bhej sakhte useh yese kaise...
Vivek        : Mein kaha keh raha hoon ki akele jaaye sir...
ACP          : (busily looking files) toh phir Question
Vivek        : Maine toh yeh keh raha hoon ki...
ACP          : Kya... ki??!!!!
Fredericks: Sir Vivek yeh kehna ...chahtha hai ki ...Nikhil ko bheja jaye sir...
ACP          : hmmm... samjh raha hoon sab...
 
ACP speaks on phone to Nikhil
 
ACP          : Hello Nikhil kab jaa rahe ho vaishnodevi mandir??? Ha theek hai theek hai... jab bhi ho... tum jaoge Naina ke saath samjhe...jyaada khush hone ki baat nahi hai... uski protection ke liye bhej raha hoon tumhen...theek hai...ok ok...
Nikhil       : jee ok sir...
 Nikhil ke waha se nikalne ke baad ...

Fredericks: Heh bhagwaan yeh Nikhil ka pyaar toh kabool karwa doh ...is baar uso bhi niraash math karna bhagwaan...
Vivek        : Arey Freddy sir iss baar bhagwaan sab kuch theek kardega...
Fredericks: Vivek too toh baat hih mat kar tum jab mooh kholthe ho tak kuch ap shakun hojata hai...
Vivek        : kyaa sir aap bhi mein achi baat keh raha hoon aur aap apshakun bol rahe ho..
Fredericks:bohot acha kehte hon tum...(ghuse se)
Daya, ACP and Abijeet aathe hai bureau pe ek saath

ACP          :Kyaa ho raha hai yaha pe?? Angry
Fredericks: Kuch nahi sir...
Daya         : Nahi kuch toh huva hoga Vivek aur tumhaare beech mein tabhi toh tum ghussa ho...
Abhijeet    : Sir humein jald se jaldh yeh Meena ki body hai kisi aur ki hain yeh dekhna chahiye sir...
Vivek         : Ab yeh Meena kaun hain sir??
ACP sab kuch batateh hain unse...
Fredericks : Sir iss Sundar ka toh mein kachoomar banadoonga... ek baar haath toh aaye...
Daya         : Haa Freddy ek baar uski gardaan aa jaye mere hath mein... Sir humein us bachi ki body ko hospital se yeha forensic lab ...se mangvaathe hain sir...
ACP          :Kyaa hua Daya tum itne toothke baatein kar raho ho...
Daya         : Sir itni choti bachi ke saath... ye sab..Unhappy.
ACP          : Mein samajhtha hoon Daya... jab apraadhi khatarnaak ho toh yeh nahi issse jyaada hi karjaata hai...

ACP Abhijeet se kehthe hain ki woh Hospital se body ko Forensic bhejne ka procedures kare...

ACP          :Fredericks tum hospital...
Fredericks:Sir iss baar mujhe baksh deejiye sir..Unhappy. mein nahi jaa sakhtha...
ACP          : Toh kaun jaayega hospital ...Vivek... tum
Vivek        :theekh hai Sir mein jaatha hoon ...
 
Sabke chehre pe ek mayoosi hai Unhappy yeh sochke ki itni choti bachi ke baare mein sochke...

At forensic lab:

Yaha body ko lab pe pahoonchane ke baadh Vivek waha pe intezzar karta hain. iss baar Tarika ke absence pe Sonaali aayi hain Saalunke ko help karne ko...
Saalunke:Yeh forensic lab mein bhi kyaa kyaa karna padtha hai...
Sonaali   : Saalunke iss nanhi si jaan ka scan karthe huve bohot bura lag raha hain
Saalunke:haan Sonaali, ab kyaa kare yeh hamara kaam hain na...
Sonaali   :Saalunkhe meine sab test karke DNA test ke liye bheja hai...
Itne mein ACP,Daya,Abhijeet,Fredericks aathe hain...
ACP        : Kyaa hua Saalunke?? Pata chala ki yeh laash Meena ki hain ya nahi??
Saalunke: Nahi yaar, DNA test aane ke baad pata chalega...
ACP        : yeh khopdi se pata nahi chal saktha kyaa??
Saalunke: Haan main samajh gaya wahi kar raha hoon yaar...
ACP        : Achcha...
 
Toh saare waha pe khade hoke Saalunkhe ko chehra recreate karthe huve dekhthe hain...aur last mein Saalunkhe ka mood down ho jatha hai

ACP        : kyaa hua Saalunke??
Saalunke:Boss buri khabar hai ... yeh laash Meena ki hi haain...
ACP        : laash kiski bhi ho dard toh ek hi hain... lekin ab un ladkiyon se lagaaav ho gaya hai ki aur bura lag raha hai... kher ab iska antim sanskar karna hai toh... unko bataana padega...aur Naina se bhi...
Saalunke: useh mandir waapas aane toh doh tab bata dena...

Itne mein hospital se sachin ka call aata hain ACP ko:
ACP    : Ha Sachin bolo kyaa huan??
Sachin: Sir buri khabar hai ki Deepika ki haalat kharaab ho gayi hai sir aap jaldi Naina,Heena aur Manju  ko khabar keejiye 
ACP    :  Achcha ok...

 

 Next scene mandir mein hain:
Naina aur Nikhil ek saath mandir mandir ke dwaar pahoonchne ke liye seediyan chadrahe hain peeche bhajan gaathe hue bohot saare bhaktjan aarahe hai...bohot jyaada chalthe chalthe neethu thakh jaathi hai usne dostke jaldi theek hone ke liye
mannat ki hothi hein ki bhagwaan ke dwaar pe pahoonchne ke liye chapal nahi pehnegi... thabi chote chote pathar ka tukda pairon mein ghuskar khoon nikhalne laga yeh dekhke nikhil kehtha hai.

Nikhil: arey Naina tumhare pairon se toh khoon nikal raha hain..chalo chalo yaha baitoh mein dekhtha hoon...

 
Naina baith ke sochchthe rone lagthi chupkeCry se...
Nikhil khoon ko handkerchief'se pochthe hue aur pani dalte hue Naina ki aur dekhta hai aur poochtha hai...

Nikhil: Kyaa huan Question... bohot dard ho raha hai kya???!!!!!
Naina: Haaa par chott lagne se nahi apni dost ke baare mein sochke... woh mere liye yese... aur mein...
Nikhil: Hum bhagwaan ke darrh pe hai aur yesi baatein mat karo... waise kehthe hai ki  yaha joh apne sache dill se muraadh kartha hai uski ichcha poori hoti hai... tumhaari bhi ho jaye ki...
Naina: Sach Shocked
Nikhil: Muchch... Big smile
Dono haste hue... LOL
kehthe kehthe woh upar mandir pahoonch jaathe hai aur waha mandir pujaari kehthe hai...

Pujaari:  Yeha ddheron bhakht apni parishaniyon ka hal nikhalne aur shaanthi pane ke liye aathe hain... tum apni joh bhi pareshaani ho maiya sab pareshanniyaan theek kar degi... Poori shraddha se apni mannat maangoh Maaiya sab poori kardegi...
Naina emotionally apni ankhen bandh karke... prarthana karthi hain... lekin Nikhil uske aur  hi dekh raha hai...

Pujaari: Yeh kaun hein beti tumhare saath tumhara boyfriend hai kyaa????!!!
Naina   : !!!!!!?????? ShockedErmm
Nikhil   : Haan mein uska...
Naina   : Arey nahi pujaari'ji..Ermm. yeh mere saath aaye hain busss...
Pujaari : Phir bhi tum dono ki jodi khoob achi hai...Smile

Nikhil blushes... Blushing Naina thodi sharmajati hain sunke... BlushingEmbarrassed

Mandir se waapas aathe hue car mein Naina poochthi haain
Naina: Tum pujari se kyaa kehne waale theh???
Nikhil: yahi ki mein tumse bohot pyaar katha hoon...
Naina: kyaa??? aap yeh kyaa keh rahe hain?? Mein ... aap mere baare mein kyaa jaaante hain???
Nikhil: Mein kuch nahi janna chahtha tum jasi bhi ho mein tumse bohot pyaar kartha hoon... shaadi karogi mujse...
Naina:Mein bhi aapko pasand karthi hoon par meri ek sharth hain...
Nikhil: sharth kaisi sharth???
Naina: Deepika'ne mere liye apne ma-baap ko chodke mera saath diya mere khaatir bohot saha aur goli bhi khaayi ... jiss tarah  aapne baataaya agar bhagwaan ne meri dost ko maut se bachata hai toh mein chahoongi ki mein uska saath doon...
phir chaaye uske parents ne useh apnane mana hi kyun na kiya ho... mera farz banta hai ki mein uska saath doon ...
Nikhil:Mein samaj gaya Naina... ab tumhe kuch kehne ki jaroorath nahi...Deepika bohot khushnasib hain jo tum jaise dost mila..Smile. Mein intezaar kar sakhtha hoon ... koi jaldi nahi hain Naina... Agar tum chaho toh mein bhi madath karoonga
uske liye ladka doondne ke liye...
Naina: (muskurathe huve) Thank you so much ki aap...
Nikhil: Aaap nahi mujhe Nikhil kehke bulao mujhe Naina...
Naina: Ok.Thank you so much Nikhil...Smile

 
Tabhi Nikhil ko phone aatha hai aur ACP saari baate baatate hain ki meena aur uske dost ke suicide ke baare mein bhi... aur kehthe hain ki jab tak woh waha nahi pahoonchte woh yeh sab usse na bataaye...

Nikhil: Ok sir theek hai sir...
Naina: Kyaa hua???
Nikhil: Humein hospital jaana padega Deepika ki haalat kharaab ho raha hai...
Naina: (jor se rone lagthi hain)  Cry jaldi chalye Nikhil ...

Sab hospital mein intezaar kar rahe hothe hain ,... naina jaise nikalthi hai ACP sir sabse pehle Meena ke baare mein kehthe hain aur kehthe hain ki Deepika ko kuch bhi na bataaye...Naina  rothe rothe hi Deepika se milne ke liye bhaagthi hain...waha Andar dekhthi hain ki Deepika bistar par baiti hain...Naina bhaagke Deepika ko gale lagaathi hain...


Naina: Deepika...  Paagal itna rulaya mujhe tumne mein kabhi maaf nahi karoongi...(kehthe kehthe jor se rone lagthi hain) Cry

Yeh bohot emotional moment hotha hai sabke liye... Ouch

Deepika: Tumhare liye toh meri jaan bhi...
Naina    : (Deepika ke moo pe haath rakhkar) yesa kabhi math kehna... mein ab tumhare bagaair zinda nahi reh sakhthi...
Heena aur Manju bhi khushi se rone laghte hain Cry...aur unke saath CID bhi...

Deepika se saab baatein karne lagthe hain :
Naina    : Yeh lo Deepika tumhare liye maine yeh prasaad laaya hain vaishno devi mandir se...
ACP      : Achcha Deepika ek baat batao tumsab ne Police'se complaint kyun nahi ki.
Deepika: Sir humne toh complaint kiya tha par koi response properly nahi milla toh akhir hum kab tak police station ke chakkar kaattheh sir... isliye humein majbooran khud yeh kadam uttaana pada...
Daya     : Acha toh tumhe kaise pata tha ki Sundar bhaag'ke aayega yeh sunkar ki Naina ki shaadi honewaali hain?
Deepika :Sir aakhir woh Naina ko paagalon ki tarah pyaar kartha hai mujhe andaaaza tha ki woh jaroor ghuse se paagal ho jaayega aur aayega jaroor ... aur socha tha woh Meena ko layega... waise Meena aapko mili kyaa??
Naina     :Nahi Deepika Meena ko woh dhoondh rahe hain...
Abhijeet:Tum abhi araam karo... hum baadh mein bhi baath kar sakhthe hain...
Deepika: Ji...

 
Sabhi CID team waha se nikalthe hai...

Deepika:Kyaa baat hain Naina... sab ke chehron pe maayoosi hain...
Naina    : Aisi koi baat nahin hai yaar... tum araam karo mein Doctor se milke aathi hoon... tum Heena aur Manju se baatein karo...
 
Aur Deepika aur woh baatein karne lagthe hain...

Yaha Naina Doctor se milthi hain:
Doctor: Humne toh umeed hi kho diya tha ki Deepika bach paayegi... Anyways itz a miracle. Smile..iss waqt Deepika ko jyaada dukh bhari baatein na sunaya jaye toh achcha rahega... usse jitna khush rakha jaye utna acha hai..
Naina: Theek hai ... Thank you Doctor..Smile

Ussi shaam ko CID ke sabhi Meena ki antimsanskar ke liye upasthith hothe hai... aur sab apni akhri widaai karne keliye khade hai...lakdiyaan meena ke upar rakhe jaathe hai aur ACP aake kehthe hai Naina aur doston se ki woh akhri baar .   Meena ka chehra dekhti hain..tab sab aake dekhte hain aur uske upar Naina ,Heena aur Manju apne aap ko rokh nahi paateh Cry aur Meena ...Meena kehke chilane lagthe hai. Wacko.. tab Kaajal aur Purbi aake unhe doorh lejate hain aur unko santhwana dene ki koshish karte huve gale lagaathe hai .Chita ko jalaaya jaatha hai aur sab door khade rone lagthe hai.Hug.. Lekin Naina ki cheeke sunai pad rahi hain...Wacko.. tab Nikhil jo bohot derr se door khada usko dekhraha tha useh aake gale lagatha hai...  ShockedHug

Aur Naina jore jore se karaahne lagthi hai aur behosh ho jaathi hai . ..Nikhil uspar paani daalke usseh hosh mein laata hain aur Daya sir ke ghar pe chodtha hai aur Sachin,Nikhil,Purbi aur Kaajal hospital jaathe haain Deepika ki security keliye...

Lekin Deepika iss sab baaton se bekhabar hospital mein leti hoti hai Sleepy... useh iss baat ka ehsaas bhi nahi hotha ki Meena mar chuki hai... Dead..
Deepika Kaajal aur Purbi se poochthi hai ki Naina aur baaki dost kaha gaye tab Woh kehthe hai ki Naina sabke saath Daya sir ke yaha gaye hai aur agle din aa jayenge...


Purbi: waise kyunki woh vaishnodevi mandir gayi thi toh uske pairon se khoon nilkal raha tha toh useh humne hi majbooran rest karne keliye waha bheja hai
Deepika:Yeh baat mujhe pata nahi tha...
Purbi aur Kaajal Nikhil ko dekhke muskuraathe hain aur Nikhil starts blushing.

Ek do din baad At bureau:
ACP aur poora team bureau mein baaiteh yeh soch rahe hai ki Sundar ko kaise pakada jaaye...
ACP : Iss darinde ko kisi bhi haalat mein pakadna chahiye...lekin kaise...???
Daya:Sir hum Deepika hi tarkeeb phir se karthe hain
ACP: Yes,... Chalo Nikhil tumhaari shaadi karvadethe hai Naina se

 
Nikhil bohot khush ho jaatha hain and also blushes...EmbarrassedBlushing Big smile

Naina aur Nikhil ki shaadi ka ek aam advertisement diya jaatha hai ki kal shaadi hone waali hain 12:30 ko...aur Naina Daya sir ke yaha baithe pareshaan ho jaathi hai...


Daya : Kyaa hua Naina bohot pareshaan lag rahi ho??!!! Confused
Naina: Nahi Sir, Mein actually Deepika keliye bohot pareshaan hoon... woh waha akeli ... mujhe uske paas hona chahiye tha... Unhappy
Daya: Itni phikar mat karo woh Deepika se kahenge ki tumhare pairon se khoon nikalne se tum rest le rahi ho...
Abhijeet: Waise bhi wahan humare officers bhi haan aur Nikhil bhi hain waise...
Naina sharmajaathi hai Blushing... aur Heena aur Manju yeh dekhke muskuraane lagthe hain...WinkSmile

Next day shaadi ki tayaariyaan ho rahi  PartyDancinghain yese lag raha hai ki aski shaadi ho...Nikhil bohot saj dhajke taiyaar ho raha hai aur Daya sir aur Abhijeet uski khoob khichai kar rahe hain...


Daya: Arey Nikhil tumhaari barbaadi hone jaa rahi hai aur tum khush ho rahe ho...LOL
Abhijeet: haan haan Nikhil yese mauke sabko nahi milthe shaadi ke jode mein naam ke vaasthe ghusne ka... warna asli shaadi hoti toh ladke ka mooh shaadi ke baadh bandh ho jata hai  LOL
Nikhil:Arey sir yahaa mein iss ek problem mein hoon ki Kahi woh sachmuch Naina ko chot na pahoonchaye... aur aap hain ki... mazaak sooj raha hai... Angry
Daya: Arey Nikhil tum toh serious ho rahe ho hum toh majaak kar rahe theh.. Tongue
Vivek: Lagtha hai Sir ki Nikhil sach mein bohot pyaar Heart kar baitha Naina se...
Sachin: Haan Sir Pyaar yesi cheez hai ki kisi ko bhi ho jayega Day Dreaming.

Yeha dulhan ke yaha:
Naina:Kaajal'di mujhe toh bohot ghabrahat ho rahi hain...
Kaajal:Ghabrao mat Naina hum sab hain yahaan aur tumhare dost hain Deepika bhi aayegi...
Naina:Deepika,woh kaise?!!
Purbi: Useh wheelchair par layenge kyun ki woh abi chal nahi sakthi na... isliye...Deepika aur tum sab mandap pe hoge taaki hum sab tumhari aur dhyaan rakh sakeh...
Naina: Kahi aapsab suchmuch mein meri shaadi toh nahi karvarahe hain... Wink
Kaajal: Kyun tum pyaar nahi karthi Nikhil se ??!!!!! Shocked
Naina: Yesi baath nahin hai didi... lekin mein Deepika ki shaadi ke pehle nahi shaadi kar sakhthi... Unhappy
Purbi:ghabraane ki koi baath nahi hai... tunhaari shaadi se pehle hi Sundar aayega jaroor aayega Stern Smile


Deepika, ACP aur Fredericks aajathe hai mandao meinaur hall mein suchmuch bohot khachakach log bhare hain jaise satchmuch shaadi ho rahi ho... Daya aur Abhijeet sir bohot handsome lag rahe hai kurthe pyjame mein bohot chamak rahi Hain saara CID Cool.Kaajal aur Purbi bhi kuch kam nahin hain achi chamak damak saadi pehna hai unhone.  Cool..Dulha Nikhil mandap mein aake baait jaatha hai
Panditji:Kanya ko bulaayiye...
Naina bohot sajdahjke aathi hain poori tarah se sundar dikh rahi hain Laal joda pehne hue hai, joor jor se dill thadak raha hai Heart aur Nikhilki nazre Naina ki aur jaathi hain.. Tongue. aur woh apni nazar hataa hi nahi paa raha hai...

 
Pandit: Mangalam bhagwaan vishnum mangalam ... mangalam kundali...mangalaye tanohari...om...
ACP sir aur saari CID ki nazreen charon aur idhar udhar dekh rahe hain
Pandit: Ab pheren leejiye...

dono war wadhu pheren lena shuru karthe hein... 4... 5...6...7 ...
 
Pandit: Ab var dhahini aur aur vadhu baayi aur khade ho jaaye ... ye leejiye mangal soothr...

Nikhil mangal soothr letha hai aur pehnane ko aage aatha hain tab Daya dekhthe hain ki koi khada goli chalaane wala hai aur woh jaldi bhaagke Nikhil aur Naina ko neeche giradete haain aur baaki sab log Sundar ke peeche bhaagthe hain...
bohot bhagam bhaag ke baadh Sundar pakda jaatha hai...

At bureau:                                                                                                                
Daya sir ek laafa maarthe hai Sundar ko aur poochthe hai..
Daya   : Tumne uss choti bachi ko kyun maara...Angry
Sundar: Ouch Mere sar par khoon sawaar tha aur mein hargiss bardaash nahi kar saktha ki meri Naina kisi aur se pyaar kare... isliye maine usse maut ke ghaat utaar diya...
Abhijeet: Pyaar baantne ka naam hain cheenkar paaneka nahi... aur tumhara naam Sundar nahi Badsoorat hona chahiye tha...Angry
ACP       : Kitni badsoorati se tumne bachi ko maara... aur toh aur Naina ki izzat pe daag lagaaya sms se aur Useh maarne ki koshish ki... Tumne toh Deepika ki bhi zindagi daav pe daali...
Daya      : Tumhain toh maut ki saza milni chahiye... par afsos aajkal maut ki saza jyaada diya nahi jaa raha,..

 
Sundar jor jor se paagalon ki tarah hasta hain...

ACP         : Fredericks le jao isse...
Fredericks: Ji sir... Chalo...


2 months ke baad:

Deepika baisakhi pe aathi hai...Naina,Heena aur Manju ke saath  hain...Smile


Deepika:Sir kyaan mein andar aa sakthi hoon Big smile
 
Tab ACP,Daya,Abhijeet,Vivek,Kaajal,Purbi,Sachin,Fredericks,Kaajal ki nazren bahar hoti hain...

ACP     : Arey aao aao Deepika,Naina,Heena, Manju...aao baithe...
Daya    :Deepika tum abhi tak theek nahi huvi...
Deepika:Nahi sir abhi poori tarah theek hone mein time lagega... ab Hospital se discharge ho gayi hoon busss checkup keliye jaana padtha hai...
Abhijeet: Achcha...
Heena   : Sir waise Tarika'ji kaisi hain??
Abhijit Blushes Blushing
Daya     : Woh Forensic Lab mein hain..
Manju   : Forensic Lab Mein ??!!!!!! Shocked
Abhijeet: Haan woh Foreignsic Doctor haain... hamaari...
 
ACP looks at Abhijeet's Expressions...
 
Daya    : Waise humne as a friend waha Tarika ko laaya taaki aap joh humse chupa rahi hain woh bhi bataaye...
Manju  : Oh!!!!
 
Abhijeet is in his own world now... Day DreamingSilly
 
Daya:(Disturbs in between)  Aham aham... Tongue
 
Abhijeet comes out of his dream D'oh

Deepika: Sir meine suna ki aapne bulaya kyaa baat hai sir???
ACP      : Dekho Deepika humne decide kiya hain ki tum sab Daya ke ya abhijeet ke ghar ke paas rahoge taaki aayinda yeh haathse tumhare saath na ho...
Deepika: Lekin Sir hum... kaise...Ermm
Daya     : Kuch nahi bologe tum log ab tum humari family jaise ho humare liye ... toh humara kehna nehi manoge kyaaa... Confused
Deepika: Sir ab aap itna kehrahe hai toh na kaise kar sakhte hain Smile
ACP       :Toh apna saaman nikaalo aur yeh Nikhil, Kaajal aur Sachin jao inke saath...
Sab kehthe hai: Ji sir..

Deepika,Naina, Heena aur Manju CID ke saath jaathe hai aur samaan pack karne keliye madath karthe hai...

Tab Nikhil Sachin se kehtha hai
Nikhil:Sir mein Naina ke saath bahaar jaana chahtha hoon.Tongue..
Sachin: Hmm tum shuru ho gaye... acha khayaal rakhna agar ACP sir ko pata chala woh mera kachoomar bana denge... jaldi aa jana Nikhil...
Nikhil gaadi shuru karthe huve Naina ko aageh bithake poochtha hai...Wink

Nikhil: Toh Long drive pe chale kyaaa... Wink
Naina Hasti hain... LOL Aur yahaan se shuru hoti hai ek anokhi prem kahaani Big smile
 
 
My Conclusions on my story:(Sorry i used BIG font to emphasise the importance)
Meine  issh kahani mein bohot saare different twist aur turns laaya hai.Yeha ho saktha hai ki yese scenes CID mein na dikhaayi padeh.Jaise Nikhil pyaar mein padraha hai... Kaajal aur baaki CID emotional hoteh hai...etc.yeh isliye kyunki har CID ke artist ko apne chance milna chahiye mere hisaab se... Mujhe bhi pehle woh pasand nahi theh... but now they are a full fledged part of CID so i think keeping of our partiality sab ko chance diya hai kyunki jab har chahracter pyaar mein pad raha hain toh why not Nikhil. ??Tongue...Mein yaha pe bohot emotional aur filmy huvi hoon Cry i hope aap woh sequences dislike na kare... Kyunki yeh thodi sachi kahani hain... i had to include some more emotional scene. Aur sach kahoon toh yeh sab meine apni dream mein dekha jab mere friend ne apne saath huve yeh sms incident bataaya... baaki baatein kaalpanik hai aur sach se koi vaastha nahi.Kyunki meine sapne mein apne aapko bhi dekha isliye Story mein khud ko include kiya hai.Mujhe apni usss dost pe naaz  Thumbs UpClap hai jisne bohot bahaduri se uss paagal ashique kaa samna kiya... Isliye iske jariye mein unsabhi bahaduron ko salaam karna chahoongi jo pal pal apne saahas ka pradarshan karthe hai. Mere hisaab se hum sab mein ek hero hain aur hum sabko usse jagaane ki jaroorat hoti.I hope ki meri kahaani aapmeinse kuch logon ko zindagi mein bahaduri se aage baddne ki prerna mille.Kyunki meri zindagi mein bhi mein asli hero toh nahin lekin koi film ya iss dost ke baare mein sochthi hoon toh ek himmat milthi hai mujhe... Umeed karthi hoon woh ek energy aapko bhi mili hogi.Mein agkli baarh sapna dekhoo toh jaroor kahaani likhoongi.Tab tak ke liye... Alvida... Keep dreaming kyaa pata kabhi na kabhi aapke sapne sach jo jaaye... waise sapney dekhne mein kyaa jaata hai...
 
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Mystery of Mr. Smith

In bureau

All the team members except Daya & Abhijeet are seating on their respective desk. ACP is also present in his cabin…….

Fredy (whisper to Vivek): Sham ke 7 baj gaye koi case bhi nahi hai… yeh Abhijeet sir or Daya sir kaha gaye…. Woh hote toh kamse kam ACP sir se ghar jane ki permission toh nikal lete….

Vivek: sir aap ko bhi toh Abhijeet sir or Daya sir jintana hi time hua hai ACP sir ke sath kam karte hue….. aap bhi toh puch sakte hai…….

Fredy (In irritation): bas issi liye mai tumhe koi bat nahi batata tum humesha muse aapni bato mai uljhate ho or phir muse dat padti hai……

ACP hears the loud voice of Fredy……. He came out from his cabin…

ACP: Fredy kya bat hai…. kue rone jaisi shakal bana rakhi hai…….

Fredy: (Is confused but in hurry) nahi sir woh yeh Vivek puch raha tha ki kya hum ghar ja sakte hai……

Vivek suddenly stands up from his seat…. He is not expected this kind of answer from Fredy…….

ACP (In angry tone): Vivek kya tumhe ghar jana hai…………

Vivek (he is still surprise & not able to stabilized himself fully): Sir Nahi woh….. Woh mai nahi…….

Fredy, Kajal, Nikhil, Purvi and Sachin are giggling……….. ACP noticed it &

ACP: Vivek yeh woh woh kya kar rahai ho……. Saf saf batao ki kya tumhe ghar jana hai……… (now he is looking towards other team members) or kya hua tum logo ko koi kam nahi hai kya…….

Here Sachin try to save Vivek……. 

Sachin: woh sir DAYA sir or Abhijeet sir kaha hai…..

ACP (in anger): Sachin bat ko ghumane ki koshish mat karo……. Haan toh Vivek kya keh rahai the tum……

Sachin gives a helpless look to Vivek……………. But suddenly from door side……..

Daya: Arre Vivek tum ab tak gaye nahi……..

All are surprised including Vivek as he doesn't know about which place Daya is talking…..

ACP: Daya kaha jaane ko kaha tha tumen isse……

Daya: Sir woh Vivek ghar ke pass ek naya HEALTH CLUB chalu hua hai….. maine soch ki mai ek bar jake aayu…… iss liye maine Vivek ko kahatha ki jara jake pata kare…. Aaj waise bhi koi case nai tha…. Toh…..

ACP (ACP see towards Vivek who is standing with innocent face…. He is feeling relax now as he knows that now his DAYA sir will save him from ACP sir's anger): Vivek tumne pehele kue nahi bataya……. Chalo abhi jao……

Daya (interrupt): Nahi sir….. Vivek kabhi bad mai information nikal lega….. Haina Vivek….. (Vivek just node in yes)….. Haan toh Abhi yeh file lo or issame ki sari information computer me feed kardo……

ACP (to Daya): Daya tum or Abhijeet ek sath gaye the na…. toh Abhijeet kaha hai………..

Daya: Sir woh Abhijeet forensic lab gaya hai……

ACP again in anger….. before he shouts on Daya…..

Abhijeet: sir woh Gaya tha….. mai yaha aagaya hue sir…. 

He came forward and stands near to Daya……

Daya (in slow tone): accha hua boss tum aagaye…. Warana Rawan abhi meri pared chalu karta……

Same time DIG enters in to bureau….. He is looking quite serious…… full team greets him…..

ACP: Sir aap yaha…. Koi khas bat

DIG: haan Praduman bohot hi jada khas do bate hai……

Abhijeet: sir do bate…… per sir aap bohot pareshan lag raha hai…..

DIG: Abhijeet CID Mumbai ke liye ek khush khabari hai…. US se India visit per ek security commission aane wala hai…… jisme ek Mr. Smith special Mumbai Visit pe aan wale hai woh Mumbai ke kuch top most surkasha adhikario se mulakat karan chahte hai……

ACP: Haan sir maine Suna hai iss ke bareme uss meeting me aap or DIG sir bhi included hai…….

DIG: Haan Tumne sahi kaha Pradyuman……. Mr. Smith US me chal rahai drugs business ke uppar kam kar raha hai... inquiry ke doran unhe pata chala ki yeh gang pure world ke Metro cities mai jada active hai or ussme se ek sheher hai Mumbai…… per issi wajah se Mumbai me Mr Smith ki jaan ko khatara hai…… toh unke Mumbai me aanese leke Mumbai se bahar jane tak ki surksha ki jimedari CID Mumbai ko di gayi hai…..

ALL are happy they share smiles with each other

ACP he is very happy: sir yeh toh humare liye gurve ki bat hai……… Hum aap se wada karte hai unki surksha me koi kami nahi rahegi

DIG: ACP muse tumse or tumhari team se yahi umid hai…..

Daya: Sir hum iss umid per khade utarenge….

DIG: Daya woh toh hai per iss bar tum aapni team ka sath nahi de paoge….

All are shocked…… Daya about to ask the reason but……

Abhijeet: sir kya Daya ko kisi or kam pe bhej rahai hai aap?

DIG: Nahi Abhijeet…. Daya kisi mission pe nahi jar aha hai…. balake…. (He takes a pause)….. Daya ko forced leave pe bheja ja raha hai

All glance to Daya who is still…… Abhijeet who is standing near to Daya…….. are also in shock…..

ACP (Confused): sir forced leave….. sir aap kya keh raha hai…. forced leave matlab ek tarahse Daya ko suspend kiya ja raha hai……… per kue sir

DIG: Praduman…… Tum jante ho ki Daya ke hathose ek bar jisne jhapad khaliya woh usse kabhi nahi bhulta…. Per bichme 2 -3 case me Daya ki Jhapad ki wajah kuch logo ki ek ears se sunane ki shakti kam hi gayi hai…. Human Rights walo ko jab pata chal tab unhine court mai Daya ke khilaf case file kardiya….. or court se order mila hai…. ki Hume Daya ke khilaf inquiry bithani hogi…. Or tab tak Daya kisi bhi case me hissa nahi le sakta…….

All are angry after hearing this…..

ACP and Abhijeet try to console Daya….. but Daya silently went to his desk…. He took paper pen……. and write… his leave application…. And hand over to DIG….. then he take out his gun and batch….. Put it on the table…..

ACP(convincing) : Daya tumhe suspend nahi kiya hai….. tum toh sirf leave pe ja rahai ho…..

Daya did not reply…. He just leave bureau…… Abhijeet try to follow him…. But due to DIG sir he not able to follow Daya……..

DIG: Praduman all the best aaj se hi surksha intajam pe lag jao….. Mr. smith parso subah Mumbai pohochenge…………

DIG left the bureau all are filling gloomy…. For some time nobody is talking to each….. Abhijeet still in shock….. he trying to understand what exactly happened….. he silently went towards Daya's desk….. which they usually share……  ACP is looking at Batch and Gun lying on the table…… after few minutes ACP broke the silence…..

ACP: Abhijeet…. Mr. Smith ki surkshaka plan tayar karna hai…. tum mere cabin aaoo… or baki sab log ab ja sakte hai…. kal subah sab jaldi aana…. Kalse hume kam shuru karana hai…… or Daya tum……. (he suddenly realize the current situation and he stops…. He silently went in his cabin)

Abhijeet: Sachin Vivek… jara ek kam karo…. Tum dono sidhe yahase Daya ke ghar pe Jana…. Jab tak mai waha nahi aata tum log ussake sath hi rehna……. Samjgaye…..

Sachin and Vivek: yes Sir……. And they leave for their destination…..

Then he went to ACPs cabin for the discussion…..

ACP and Abhijeet are discussing in the ACP's cabin…… suddenly Abhijeet mobile rings…. He see the screen its…. Vivek……..

Abhijeet: Haan Vivek bolo kya bat hai…… Kya…… (his facial expressions are changed….. it's the fear which is clearly visible) kaha ho tum log…. Acha thik hai…. hum aate hai…. (he cuts the call and)  Sir woh sir….. sir hume chalana hoga…..

 

 

In hospital 's corridor……

Abhijeet enters in full speed….. ACP and Salunke are following to him…….

They saw Vivek and Sachin who are standing with sad faces in front of ICU…..

Abhijeet: kaha hai woh…. Aain!!!! Kaisa hai…..

Nobody response

ACP: arre bolte kue nahi ho tum log……

Sachin: Sir woh Doctor ne ab tak kuch bataya nahi….. per sir khoon bohot beh chukka hai…..

Doctors came out from ICU…. Abhijeet and ACP stop him…..

Abhijeet: Hum CID se hai…. mai Sr. Insp Abhijeet…… Doctor kaisa hai woh….

Doctor: Dekhiye khoon bohot beh chuka hai….. samane ka shishs itani jore se tuta hai ki  kanch lagne se chehera buri tarah se ghayal hai….hath ki huddi tuti hai… or ek pair ki…. Baki pure body per bohot sare scratch hai….. woh utane hi strong hai iss liye ab tak coma me nahi gaya….. agar or koi haota toh shayad ab tak coma me gaya hot aya phir…..

ACP: Doctor….woh thik toh ho jayegana……

Doctor: dekhiye ghabaraiye mat….. woh bilkul thik ho jayenge…. Per itani bhari chotose recover hone me waqt lagat hai…..

Abhijeet: kitana waqt Doctor

Doctor: dekhiye kamse kam ek mahina lagega unhe puri tarah se recover hone me…. Per aane wala pura ek hafta unhe ICU me hi rakhana hoga…….

Salunke:  Kya hum usse mil sakte hai….

Doctor: nahi abhi nahi… thode time bad abhi maine unse nind ka injecction diya hai…. dekhiye innki shakal toh pehchan me aana thode din possible nahi hai….. per kya gadi se aap ko inki pehchan ho gayi hai…… Please aap inke rishte daro ko bula lijiye…..  unse muse bohot important bat karni hai…..

Abhjeet: Sir innke ghar pe koi nahi hai….. inka pariwar hum log hi hai….. yeh Humara Insp. Daya hai doctor…….

Doctor: oh…. Ab mai samja ki jab se yeh dono CID officers inhe leke aaye hai tab se itane udas kue ha…. Dekhiye inke dimag me kisi bat ka pressure hai…. Issi ki wajah se shayad…. Yeh accident hua hai…. abhi behoshi ki halat mai bhi yeh ussi pressure ko mehsus kar raha hai toh unhe ICU me seductive pe rakhana hi behtar hai…..

ACP: thik hai doctor……

Its morning…. Team is seating outside the ICU……. Doctor came out and

Doctor: dekhiye unke jaldi hosha me aane ki umeed kam hai…. aap unhe dekh sakte hai…. per haan dursehi……

All look at Daya from the glass door …….  With watery eyes

ACP: Abhijeet chalo… hume Smith ki surksha ka intajam karana hai…… (alll wants to say something… but ACP contibnue……) Yah Doctors or Hospital ka staff hai Daya ki care karne ke liye…..

 

 

In bureau

Sachin Kajal Vivek Abhijeet Purvi Nikhil and ACP are there

ACP: Dekho plan me thoda change hai…. Smith Kal subah ki jagah aaj sham ko yaha aa raha hai…. CM ne usse dinner ke liye invitation diya hai or ussane woh man liya hai…. toh Abhijeet tum sham ko usse airport se surkshit CM ke banglow per leke jaoge…. waha ki security ki jimedari CM ki surksha team ko di gayi hai…. per fir bhi tum pura time ussake sath hi rehna…. Sachin Nikhil tum airport se leke CM ke banglow tak airport police ke sath unki gadi mai Abhijeet ke piche rahaoge…. Taki agar kuch gadbad hoti hai toh tum backup de sako…..

CM banglow to Hotel… ka safar lamba hai or andhere me khtara max hoga toh Abhijeet or mai ek gadi mai smith ko leke niklenge…. Humse pehele 5 minute Vivek or Fredy tum bike or ek local police van ke sath ussi raste se gujaroge…… or Sachin or Nikhil tum humare piche thodi duri per ek bike or  police van leke rahoge……

Kajal tum or Purvi…. Local police ke sath hotel ki surkasha dekhogi……. Abhijeet tum hotel mai Vivek or purvi ke sath rahoge or mai Sachin or Kajal kal ke conference venue pe rahainge

Kal subah tum teeno Smith ke sath venue pohoch jaana…. Local police ki ek jeep apne sath rakhana……

All says yes sir & then ACP discuss the security plan of hotel and conference venue with all the team……

 

 

At Airport

Abhijeet is waiting at the exit point….. Mr. Smith …….. A Young gentleman with height more than 6 ft….. a white man……. Came out……

Abhijeet: hello Mr. Smith….. I am Sr. Insp Abhijeet from CID Mumbai….. welcome to India sir

Smith: ohhh…. Hello Mr. Abhijeet……Thank You very much… its glad to meet you…..

Abhjeet: lets move towards vehicle….

Smith: haan haan chalo

Abhijeet got surprised by hindi

Abhijeet: aap ko bohot hi achi Hindi aati hai…

Smith: oh that's not a big deal…. My mother belongs to India…. Though I never come to India I heard so many things about India from her……

Abhijeet: Oh that's gr8….. chaliye pehele hum CM bungalow jayenge & ussake bad Hotel jayenge

Smith:  ok sure….. they take the car after some time in car we can see Abhijeet and Smith in deep sleep… Driver laughs……

Here at bureau ACP gets information that Smits Car is untraceable by Sachin…..

ACP and team reached at airport…….

ACP: Sachin Nikhil itani badi laparwai kaise hogayi tumse…… maine kaha tha na koi laparwai nahi chahiye muse……acha ab yeh batao…. Kaha tak tum unn ke piche the

Sachin: Sir hune western express highway cross kiya or mahim port pohoche or sir ussake bad woh gadi kaha chali gayi kuch pata hi nahi chala…..

Vivek: Sir maine Abhijeet sir ka mobile track karne ki koshish ki per woh swiched off hai sir…… sir maine pata kiya hai… unka last location Mahim port hai sir…..

Sachin: sir aap ko or kuch batana hai….

ACP: ab kya hai…….

Sachin: Idhar aao….. (one person with bleeding forehead comes in front of ACP)

ACP: yeh toh Insp Mathur haina joh driver bane the uss gadi ke jisme Abhijeet or Smith gaye the…. Inhe kya hua….

Mathur: sir mai gadi ke pass khade ho ke Abhijeet sir ka intajar kar raha tha….. tabhi mere piche kuch aawaj hue toh usse dekhane mai piche muda…. Or kisine jore se mere sir pe mar diya……sir  jab hosh me aay tab maine Abhijeet sir ko phone lagaya per unka phone switched off aa raha tha… sir phir maine Sachin ko phone lagaya…….

ACP: matab kisine badi planning se pehele…. Mathur ko ussaki jagahse hataya…. Phir Sachin tumhe chakma diya or Abhijeet or Smith ko utha ke leke gay

Vivek: sir per Abhijeet sir ko pata kaise nahi chala ki Driver seat pe koi or hai or unhe kahi or leke jaya ja rah hai……

ACP: hmmm yeh toh sochane wali bat hai Vivek…. AKhir hua kya tha…… chalo jaha Abhijeet ke pass wale transmitter ki location mill rahi hai waha chalte hai….

 

 

Its small lane…. A slummy area……

team got Abhijeets mobile phone, watch, and smith's luggage at that place…..

They also found the car in which Abhijeet and Smith are traveling….. 

ACP: yeh sab jan bhuj kar yaha choda gaya hai…. taki hum inn galiyo mai unn dono ko dhundte rahai…… per agar unn dono ko yaha nahi rakha gaya hai toh phir kaha hai woh dono….. Vivek tum smith ka saman check karo dekho woh joh files laya tha woh hai kya ussame….

Vivek: (check the bags….) nahi sir….. issame aaisa kuch nahi hai…….

They found another tyer marks which conclude that kidnappers takes Abhijeet and Smith in another vehicle. The evidences which Smith brings from US are also stole by them…..

Team ask peoples from nearby area but all are saying that area is Dark in the night so no body takes the risk to go at that place in night time…..

Dr. Salunke concludes that in CAR chloroform stress is there……. Drive must have cover his face so that he is not suffered by chloroform

After this investigation Dr. Salunke wants to match all the figure prints they found in car with CID record but ACP stops him saying kidnappers are so sharp they do not make such kind of mistakes……

After this ACP tells team to concentrate on the security of conference venue…. He engaged Fredy with Mathur to do night duty in conference all……

 

 

In the morning At conference hall….

ACP and team is monitoring all the security measures

Vivek to Fredy: Sir Conference chalu hone mai sirf adha (1/2) ghanta bacha hai…. ab tak hume Smith or Abhijeet sir ke bareme koi lead nahi milli hai….. yeh ACP sir yeh conference cancel kue nahi karte…. Agar sare officers yaha aagaye or bad me unhe pata chala toh…..

Fredy: toh bohot bada tufan aajyega Vivek….. yaha aane wale sare jan higher authorities ko belong karte hai…. pata nahi ussake bad kya hoga…..

Vivek: sir yeh sab bate toh ACP sir ko bhi toh pata hogi fir bhi woh yeh sab kar rahai hai….

Fredy: Vivek, woh ACP Praduman hai…. woh agar jore se sanse bhi le na toh samaj jao…. Ki ussaki bhi koi khas wajah hai…..ACP sir koi bhi bat bina wajah nahi karte….

Vivek: Sir etane salo mai yeh bat toh mai bhi samaj chukka hue…

Sachin who is listing all this things from distance interrupt: Shayad unhe Abhijeet sir pe pura bharosa hai ki woh Smith ko leke aa jayenge….. per pata nahi iss bar Abhijeet sir yeh kar payenge ya nahi……

Vivek: Sir aap aaisa kue bol rahai hai….

Sachin Bas aaise hi iss bar woh akele hai or Daya sir ko leke pareshan bhi….

Fredy: woh Abhijeet sir hai….. woh apni duty ke waqt emotions ko control karna bohot achi tarah se jante hai…. woh jarur aayenge

Here ACP moving here and there in frustration… he continuously watching at entrance….

Now all the invitees are slowly entering in to conference room

All team take their position……

The conference started…….. Smith is not yet came….. the conference talker announced the name of Mr. Smith…. Everybody started talking about absence of Mr. smith……

Suddenly Mr. Smith appears from the left side of podium….. a Man in his early 50's…. hight around 5.6 feet….

He came to podium ACP is present on podium but he is looking towards some very keenly all team is surprised their eyes are now hunting for their Abhijeet sir…….

Mr Smith: hello gentlemen You all are the part of the forces which are working day and night for the security of general public of Mumbai…. Me also belongs to same motive in US….

While working on my current project I got some news about Drugs mafias which are spread all over world mostly in metro cities…... As we all know Mumbai…… one of the major Metro cities is also not safe from this kind of drugs mafias…………

Here I want to share some person's data…. Which are active in Mumbai…..

Mr. smith went towards his Bag

At the same time…..

A man from the first row shouts

Yeh aadami Smith nahi hai…. yeh koi or hai…… ACP Praduman tum Smith ki suksha nahi kar paye toh kisi or ko Smith banake leke aa gaye…….

ACP: DCP Nayak yeh aap kya keh rahe hai…… Yahi Mr. Smith…. Ek bar inhe sare sabut aap ko dikha dene digiye phir aap faisala kijiye ki yeh Smith hai ya nahi

DCP Nayak: yeh Sabut zuthe hai tumne banaye hai ye sab sabut…..

DIG Rathord who is the Senior of Mr. Nayak stands up and say

Nayak tum kya keh raha ho tumhe kuch samaj mai bhi aa raha hai ya nahi…..

DCP Nayak: Sir mai sahi keh raha hue… yeh Mr. Smith nahi hai

ACP: yahi Mr. Smith hai…… Mr. smith aap sabut dikhaiye

SCP: nahi hai yeh Mr. Smith nahi hai…….. mai dawe se kai sakta hue……

ACP : Ki sabut hai aap ke pass yeh sab joh aap keh rahai hai usaka…..

DCP: kue ki asali Mr. Smith ko mere aadami kab ka uppar pohocha chuke hai……..

And he realized that he makes blunder mistake he took outs his gun holds on

ACP:All team starts moves and suddenly Mathur took out his gun and pointed to Smiths head and

Yen smith hai ya nahi hume nahi pata… per ab isse marna hi behtar rahaiga…. ACP try to move… but Nayak makes a fire which quite near to Smiths left leg

All are shock….. Mathur and Nayak starts moving towards exit point Smith is still on gun point… they move towards exit the go out and all are about to move behind them and a voice of Gunshot……

Nayak and Mathur….. enter with Abhijeet………. Nayaks right hand is injured…..

After that the real Smith shows all the information to invitees it includes some big names from Film and fashion industry…..  but does not includes Nayak and Mathur

DIG gives order to arrest both Nayak and Mather….

 

In bureau

Team back to bureau but dullness on all faces…… Fredy enters in to bureau

Sachin: Fredy kaise hai DAYA sir….

Fready: Pata nahi……

Vivek: sir pata nahi per aap toh hospital gaye the na?????

Fredy: haan mai gaya tha per doctor ne milne hi nahi diya kaha ki bohot hi buri halt hai unki toh hum nahi dekh sakte…..

The same time Abhijeet enter in to bureau in hurry…..

He directly went to the drawer of DAYA where he put his gun and batch….. he take out DAYA's gun and batch….. other team members are stared feeling sad again as they are thinking that Abhijeet is missing Daya badly……

Vivek and Fredy move towards Abhijeet

Fredy: Abhijeet sir sambhaliye aapne aap ko…… Daya sir thik ho jayenge

Abhijeet gives a disgusting look to Fredy: Fredy Kya hua hai Daya ko….

Vivek: Sir woh Daya sir ko…..

Haan kya hua Daya sir ko

A voice changes everybody's faces……   everybody faces showing mix expression of happiness and Shock…. All eyes turn towards door…. Its Daya standing there…. He is safe not even a scratch on his face….. ACP is also there with HIM….

Abhijeet goes near to DAYA…… he handover his gun and batch to him….. and DUO shares there precious smile and ACP pat on Duo's shoulder

ACP: well done boys…. U done it……..

ABHIJEET: sir We done it……….

Daya: Haan sir…..

And whole bureau fills with The aroma of TRIOs smile

Team is still surprised….

Fredy (in the tone of childish complaint): sir yeh galat hai…. aap log humesha kuchna kuch planning karte ho or hume batate bhi nahi ho… iss bar pata hai hum log kitana dar gaye the…. Daya sir ke bareme sunkar….

Daya: Loh Bhai Fredy humne kan pakadliye…… (TRIO with naughty smile touches their ears) (Fredy gives ashamed look to them and other team is giggling)  per iss bar humne kucnh nahi kiya joh kuch bhi kiya woh DIG sir ki order thi……

Nikhil: sir matlab yeh sab DIG sirka plan tha….. matlab woh kidnapping bhi nakali thi

ACP: haan Yeh sab plan DIG sir ne banaya tha….. bas woh Kiddnapping chodke

Fredy: sir ab mera sir ghumne laga hai…….

Abhijeet (laugh) : Fredy aapne dimag per jor mat do…. Mai bata hue…… jab US government ne Maharastra government ko bataya ki unka ek officer Smith Mumbai ke drugs mafiya ki details leke aa raha hai toh Mumbai ke top Police heads ki ek secret meeting hue or ussame yeh decide hua ki Smith ki visite khufia rakhi jayegi….. uss meeting ke liye ACP sir ko bhi bulya gaya tha…..

Daya: Jaise ki tay hua tha….. ACP sir ne yeh bat hume bhi nahi batai….. per aaj se char din pehel mere ek khabarine muse bataya ki US se aane wale Smith ki jaan ko khtara hai….. maine yeh bat Abhijeet ko batayi or fir hum dono ne ACP sir ko

ACP: mai heran reh gaya ki yeh khabar bahar aayi kaise…. Hum turant DIG sir ke pass gaye… waha discussion ke bad hum iss natije pe poheche ki humare departments ke kuch log unse mile hue hai… or unka plan smith ko india mai pohochtehi khatam karne ka hai…..

Abhijeet: iss sab ke bad hum jab bahar aa rahai the tab humne dekh ki humper kuch log najar rakha rahai hai…. Hum teeno ke ghar pe bhi najar rakhi ja rahi thi……

Daya: humne socha ki Mr. Smith ki puri surshaka plan hum log sabke samane banyenge….. local police ke kuch logo ko bhi sath me lar lenge….. per Mr. smith ko hi badal denge…

Sachin: toh woh dusare Mr. Smith aap the sir….

ACP: haan Sachin humne Daya ke kad kathi se milti ek dummy banyayi….. joh hospital ke bed pe padi thi…… Humne accident ka natak kiya……….. Iss me humne Hospital ke ek doctor or ek nurse ko humare sath mila liya….. woh doctor mera purana dost hai usse mai apne health checkup ke bahane mila or usse kaha ki woh mera sath de…. Issase humpe najar rakhe hue logo ko shak nahi hua

Daya: Uss din jab mai bureau se nikala tab mera kam tha ke mai mere picha karane wale ko chakama du…..

Abhijeet: or Daya ki driving skills ne yeh kam bakhubi nibhaya,,,, Daya ne aapni gadi jhad se thoki per puri savdhanise…. Or uss gadi se utarke…. Woh Doctorne joh ambulance khadi ki thi ussame baitha…… ussane thoda make kiya…..

Daya: tab tak vivek or Sachin aa gaye or innke sath musape najar rakahne wala jisko maine chakma diyatha woh bhi aa gaya….. ussane wahi dekha joh tumne dekha….. phir doctor ki madat se mai piche ke raste hospitalse nikal gaya…. Or flight se Delhi pohocha…. Waha Mr. smith US ki jis flight se aayethe….. maine unhe waha replace kardiya…..

Abhijeet: asali Mr. Smith do ghante bad ki flight se Mumbai aaye… jinhe DIG sir ke bte Dhiraj ne receive kiya or unhe woh DIG sir ke thane wale ghar leke gaya…….

Sachin: per sir aap kidnapped kaise ho gaye….. or phir waha conference mai kaise pohoche

Daya: Sachin maine Daya urf nakali Smith ko airport pe proper receive kiya or usse leke jab gadi ki or badha tab maine driver ko dekhtha…. Woh musase muh chupane ki koshish kar raha tha….. tabhi mai samaj gaya ki yaha kuch gadbad hone wali hai…….

And Flash back started……

Abhijeet keenly watching the drive…. He gives a glance to Daya (nakali Mr. Smith) and grabs his attention towards driver…. Daya by expression told him…. Its ok

Abhijeet took language of Daya and move towards dikki…. Daya follows him…..

Daya: (whispers) Abhijeet ab humara joh hona hai hone do…. Agar abhi isse kuch kiya toh inhe shak hoga or Mr. smith ki jan ko bhi khatara ho sakta hai

Abhijeet: Hmmm chalo phir……

Abhijeet and Daya seats in the Car… its clearly sees on drivers face that he is annoyed because Sachin is after him…. But at a signal he manage to escape from Sachin's sight……  then he put something near AC…… till the time Abhijeet and Daya keenly watching what he is doing they give smile to each other…. And after sometimes… they becomes unconscious……

Driver stops the car and he came out…… now he is birthing very fast….. 2 -3 persons came near to him….. one of then

Pakya: Kaliya thik haina tu

Kaliya: haan woh sans roki thina iss liye…. Tum log issake pass ke sare gadgets nikalo…. Yad haina Mathur sahab ne kya kahatha…. Woh sari chije nikao….  Shiva tu dikki mainese saman nikal….. raja yeh sari chije waha uss kachareke dibhe mai dal….

Pakya went towards the another car…. Other took out Abhijeet and Daya………

A black shabby place…..

Pakya: dal do inn logo ko yaha pe….. hath per bandha do dono ke…. Mathur sahab aake batayenge kya karna hai tab tak ke liye…… band kardo inhe ek kamreme……

After some times

Daya come in to consciousness…… he try to move but his hands are not supporting him…

He then recognised his mouth is also closed due to tape on it……. He looks to Abhijeet who is still in unconscious stage….

He tries to move towards Abhijeet….. Abhijeet came in consciousness………….

Now the effective communication between two best friends started….. for which they never require any words to be spoken….. no touch is required… their eyes are enough to tell each other that what is in the mind of other….. as they know thinking power of each other……

Abhijeet signals something to Daya……

Daya closes his eyes two times…. Means he is agree and understand what Abhijeet wants to say…..

Someone comes in to room Both pretended that they are still unconscious……

Kaliya: yeh mathur sahab ab tak nahi aaye or nahi unka phone aaya hai…. rat ke 2 baj gaye hai…. Pakya tu yahi baith thodi derme Raja aayega…. Inn dono ko 2 minute bhi akela nahi chodna hai…….. khas karke iss Abhijeet ko pata nahi kab kaise kahase chut ke humare samne khada ho jaye bhut hai yeh bhut……

Then Kaliya leave…..Pakya seats on the chair in the room…. Duo open there eyes but bit carefully they look here and there for Pakya….. Abhijeet signals Daya that Pakya is behind Him…. Daya gives an appreciative look at Abhijeet…..

Its next day morning….. around 9.00(its same time when ACP and team is busy in conference room) Duo open there eyes…. They saw Kaliya is standing in the room…..

Pakya and Raja enters… and they start talking to each other…..

When they are talking to each other Abhijeet and Daya do some ishara to each other…..

Kaliya: Mathur sahab ne phone kiya tha…. Kaha hai ki inn dono ko khatam kar do…..

Pakya: toh der kiss bat hai… udda dete hai…..

Pakya and Kaliya take out their guns…. And turn to shoot DUO…. And surprise to see that there is on one other floor……. They about to move But Daya catch holds Pakya from back side…. And Abhijeet holds Kaliya…. Both took guns from their hands … at the same time Raja took out his gun…. He is standing behind Daya and about to shoot towards Daya… but Abhijeet's gunshot make his all efforts useless ……

But same time Shiva opens the door and about to bang a hard rode on Abhijeet's head but till the Daya is after taking care of Pakya…. He holds that bang on his hand before it touch to Abhijeets head….. and then give his favorite slap food to Shiva… till the time Kaliya also on the floor…

Daya: Abhi…. Tum thik toh ho…….

Abhijeet: tere hote hue muse fikar karne ki jarart hai kya…… per uss golise kahi tumhe toh chot nahi aayi na…..

Daya: Boss goli mere sharp shooter dost ne chalayathi….. or jab woh goli chaleta hai na…. tab goliki bhi himat nahi hoti ki woh muse chuke jaye…..

Abhijeet gives his precious smile to Daya and Daya gives same to him………

Return from flash back

Duo are standing smilling and looking at each other….. ACP and team giving proud look to them…..

Daya: ussake bad Abhijeet ne kaliya ki awaj mai Mathur se bat ki ussase kaha ki ussane Smith ko mar diya hai….. or Mathur ne Nayak ko inform kiya or

Abhijeet: Daya ne muse conference hall choda or woh unn charo ko unki jagah leke gaya….

Daya: per ab tak ek guthi nahi sulaji ki….. akhir Mathur ne hume marne ke liye subah tak ka wait kue kiya……

Sachin: shayd sir woh unn sabuto ka intajar kar raha hoga…..

Abhijeet: nahi Sachin Daya nakali Smith ke sath sath kuch nakali papers bhi leke ayya tha….. jinhe unn logo ne rat kohi jala diya tha….. muse jalane ki smell ayi thi…. toh phir kue kiya ussane aaisa

ACP: kue ki rat bhar usse unn logose bat karne ka mouka hi nahi mila……

Duo shares a shocking look to each other…….

ACP: chocko mat… tum dono kitane bhi bade detectives ban jao…. Bapse bade nahi ban sakte samje…..

DUO smiles to each other

Daya: sir woh toh hume pata hai…. per

ACP: Daya…. jab tum dono ki gadi me Mather ne uss gunde ko bithya…. Or kud ke sir per halkisi chot laga di…. Or humse kaha ki usse kisine sir pe marke behosh kiya….. per jab maine usaka jakham dekha tabhi mai samaj gaya ko woh jhut bol raha hai….. maine police control room mai usaka phone tap karwaya…. Or waha se muse pata chala ki tumhe or Daya ko kidnapped karne mai mathur ek bohot hi bada part play kar raha hai ….. or phir maine ussake piche Fready ko laga diya or ussase kaha ki Mathur ke sath puri rat chipke rehana….. or un dino ko confirance room ki surak sha me laga diya…..

Fready (with proud): sir maine puri rat usse ek minute ke liye bhi aapni najar se dur nahi hone diya or nahi phone pe bat karne di……

Vivek: sir per aapne aaisa kue kiya……

ACP: Vivek mai rat ko Mathur ko chance milta or woh waha inn Abhijeet or Smith ko khood ke hathose marne ya dekhane pohochata toh….. woh nakali sabut bhi pehchan jata or fir nakali Smith bhi pakada jata….. or mathur gunhe gar hai yeh mai jata tha…. Per Abhijeet or Daya nahi….. toh shayad woh inko chudane aane ka bahana karke inke sath wapas aata or kisi tarah se aapne baki sathiyo tak yeh bat pohocha deta…… or phir Abhijeet or Daya ko khud ko chudane ke liye puri rat bhi mill gayi…….

Abhijeet to Daya: in low voice… Yaar aaj rawan khoosh hai 2 dino ki chute mang lete hai…..

Daya: good idea boss manglo….

Abhijeet: mmm mai….. aare kya kar rahai ho yaar…. Tum ACP sir ke ladle Chiranjiv ho…. Toh tum hi puchlo……

Daya: kue marwana chahte ho boss

Fredy over hears all the duos talk: (and in hurry) arre jaldi pucho na aap dono take mai bhi…..

ACP: kya tum bhi Fredy kya tumbhi…..

Fredy: sir woh chuti sir…..

ACP: fredyyy

Fredy: sir woh mai nahi sir Abhijeet sir or Daya sir

Abhijeet takes the advantage of the situation

Abhijeet: haan sir woh do din…..

ACP: nahi bilkul nahi….. bhul gaye yeh sare drug mafias ko pakdna hai or woh vikrat ke boss ko bhi….. (refer my previous story Friendship Bond)

Abhijeet and Daya in sad tone yes sir….. and they go to their respective desks……

ACP: acha chalo ab latki hue shakal thik karo abhi tum dono ki chuti per kal subah time pe aa…….

Before ACP complete his sentence DUO said yes sir in hurry and rush out from the bureau….

And then a loud laughter change the bureau mood…..



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i dunt know whenever i WRITE this story and MISSED itConfused... i think wen MAGGIE lost her CHASHMA in a ROAD ACCIDENTCry... its my CHASHMA LAST WISHCry... HE is so CRITICALCry and at ICUOuch... he  only MURMERING MAGZ, her CHASHMA n DOGGIESCry...
ROOP n her CHANE ka JHAARCry...
SHIVZ n her CHASHMACry...
SHRUTI n her SHARP SHINECry...
pllz pray for HIMCryCryCry...
that HE will coming back from DYING STAGECryCry
(request of BHAI CHASHMA n LENSOuch)





there are sum IMPORTANT IDENTIFICATION in CID... and their
VALUE was NOT MINIMUM wen relate with their CHARCTERS...
so now i placed all them... enjoy their CONVERSATION...
thier NAMES are
DAYA Sir CHASHMA (SPECS)
DAYA Sir LENS
DAYA Sir STRAPE SHIRTS
DAYA Sir BRACELET
DAYA Sir FINGER RING
DAYA Sir QUILLAS and its KEY...
DAYA Sir CELL

ABHI Sir COAT
ABHI Sir CHECKS shirts
ABHI Sir FINGER RING
ABHI Sir JEEP and its KEY...
ABHI Sir CELL

FREDDIE MARRAIGE RING

VIVEK CHASMA

SACHIN GOOGLES

SONALI GOOGLES

KAJAL PONY
KAJAL LONG BOOTS
KAJAL PINK/GREEN shirts
KAJAL WAIST COAT

TAREEKA CHASHMA

ACP Sir RED TIES
ACP Sir INDEX FINGER

sum GUEST APPEARANCE
MAGGIE's NEW/OLD CHASHMA
ROOP CHANE ka JHAAR
DONA/DONI
DADA CAR

CID Bearue is filled with VOICES and HAPPINESSBig smile... DAYA's CHASHMA BEST buddy
resumes his post backSmile... all are enjoying chatting with themselvesSmile...
suddenly ABHIJEET CELL starts ringing... his FINGER RING picked up the call...
after few minutes... he cutt the CALL and tell the TEAM...
ABHI Sir FINGER RING: LOCAL POLICE kay through CITY HOSPITAL say khaber aai hay kay hum say ek CHASHMA milna chahta hay...
DAYA BRACELET: kyun Boss!!!
ABHI FINGER RING: ye tou wahan ja ker hee pata halay ga DAYA... chalo...
ABHI FINGER RING, his COAT, SHIRT, DAYA CHASHMA, BRACELET n FREDDIE MARRIAGE RING moved in QUILLAS...
they reached there and met with the VICTIM... saw a BROKEN CHASHMA... he said...
BROKEN CHASHMA: Sir main MAGGIE ka purana CHASHMA hun... parsun wo aik NEW CHASHMA pasand ker kay aayii thi aur kal achanak college say wapsi per... (start cryingCryCry)(after few min) us nay mujhay jaan ker gira diyaDeadAngry... aur main is buri tarah toota kay ab DR keh rahay hain kay main kabhi kisi ki AANKHUN per nahi lug saktaCryDead...
after that he is CRYING alotCryCry... DAYA CHASHMA see on ABHI FINGER RING and asked...
DAYA CHASHMA: us ka COLLEGE kahan hayQuestion???
BROKEN CHASHMA: MALAD mein...
DAYA CHASHMA: tum ko kya MAGGIE per shak hayConfused???
BROKEN CHASHMA: nahi Sir... magar MAGGIE kay NEW CHASHMA perEvil Smile...
ABHIJEET FINGER RING: acha tum ro nahi... hum dekhtay hain... aaram karoSmile...
after exit... he ordered to FREDDIE MARRIAGE RING to call MAGGIE NEW CHASHMA at Bearue... they moved to Bearue told everything to ACP n all... suddenly a DUCK came inside with loud CRYINGCryCry... SACHIN GOOGLES seated him...
ACP INDEX FINGER: kaun ho tum aur kyun ro rahay hoQuestion???
DUCK: Sir mera naam DONA hay... aur meri MRS kal say ghayeb hayOuch...
ABHIJEET COAT: ghayeb matlabConfused...
DONA: Sir kal wo MALAD kay raastay apni MAA kay ghar ja rahi thi... magar wo waha pohanchi hee nahi aur na hee wapis aayiCryi...
he again started CRYINGCry... then PLUCKED his FEATHER for cleaning his NOSE and EYESWinkLOL... he looked really TENSE n GLOOMYCry...
ACP INDEX FINGER signaled DAYA CHASHMA n ABHIJEET FINGER RING and said...
ACP FINGER RING: kahein ye us CHASHMAY walay case say LINK tou nahi krtaConfused...
DAYA CHASHMA: magar Sir us CHASHMAY nay kisi EYE WITNESS ka zikr nahi kiya thaConfused...
ABHIJEET FINGER RING: ho skta hay DAYA wo wahan say durr hunGeek...
FREDDIE MARRIAGE RING entered with a NEW CHASHMA... team asked QUERIES to him...
KAJAL PONY: kya naam hay tumharaQuestion??
NEW CHASHMA (anger voiceAngry): mujhay yahan kyun bulwaya gaya hayAngry??? kiya kiya hay main nayAngry??
ABHIJEET COAT: buhat aawaaz nikal rahi hay tumhariAngry... ye batao tum MAGGIE kay PURANY CHASHMAY ko kub say jaantay hoAngry??? kub say us ko maarnay kay PLANS ker rahay hoAngry... HAINAngryAngry!!!
NEW CHASHMA: arry kaun sa MAGGIE ka PURANA CHASHMAShocked... main nahi jaantaOuch...
DONA: kiya tum MAGGIE kay CHASHMAY hoShocked... (towards ACP INDEX FINGER) Sir MAGGIE kay DOGGIES humaray CAGE kay saamnay rehtay hainConfused... aur her waqt meri WIFE ko hee dekhtay rehtay thayWinkLOL... yaqeenun unhun nay hee meri WIFE koCryAngry...
ACP INDEX FINGER signaled DAYA CHASHMA... he moved forward and slapped him with his HANDLEAngryAngry... he said in SHIVER...
NEW CHASHMA: Sir main nay kuch nahi kiya... mujhay tou bus us CAR nay kaha tha kay kal shayed wo kuch zabardast sa karayCryCry...
SACHIN GOOGLES: kahan hay wo CARQuestion???
NEW CHASHMA: mujhay nahi malumDead...
DAYA CHASHMA again forward... he SHIVERED and said...
NEW CHASHMA: MALAD mein ek tooti phooti jagah hay... wo CAR wahan rehti hayCry...
ABHIJEET COAT: chalo dekhao humein wo jagah... aur DONA tum bhi chaloSmile...
he ordered VIVEK CHASHMA to take out MAGGIE DOGGIES at Bearue and interrogated them well... all moved to the specific spot... found sum FEATHERS... DONA recognised that these are his WIFE FEATHERSOuch...
DAYA CELL recieved VIVEK CELL call who told that DOGGIES still not accept that they did anything WRONG... even they said that they were bz to attend their FRND WEDDING in that dayBig smile... they were OUTSIDE of MUMBAI... VIVEK CHASHMA also told that the DOGGIES were CORRECT abt their absenceThumbs Up... DAYA CELL gave all detailes to team... they searched and heard a loud voice... HUSKY voice...
VOICE: dekha... kesa badla liya main nay MAGGIE sayQuestion??? arry itni bak bak krti aur meray bajayey METRO mein jaati hayAngry...
team entered... saw CAR... CAR ignited and moved fast... here QUILLAS saw it... and it also geared up... CHASING startedStar but after few miles QUILLAS got the CAR... it hit on CAR BUMPERThumbs Up... CAR BUMPER got so much DENTSOuch... team also rushed there...
took CAR to Bearue... at CONFESSION CHAIR...
CAR: haan main nay hee ye PLAN banaya tha... MAGGIE meray bajayey zyada tar METRO say jaati thiAngry...
ACP INDEX FINGER: tou tum nay socha us ko raastay say hee hata doAngry... magar us ka CHASHMA bechara beech mein aa gaya.. hain naAngry!!
CAR laughing alotROFL... DAYA BRACELET n ABHIJEET FINGER RING exchanged glaces and bit confuse... they took him towards INTEROGATION room...
here TRIO discussed... ABHIJEET FINGER RING had sum PINCH on that laughConfused... he raised and said...
ABHIJEET FINGER RING: Sir samjh hee nahi aata kay wo hansa kyunShocked!!! DUCK bhi us kay pass say nahi miliConfused... aur DOGGIES kasam khanay ko tayyar hain kay unhun nay kisi ko bhi khanay ki koshish nahi ki hayConfused...
DAYA BRACELET: Boss... phirOuch!!!
ABHIJEET COAT: Sir koi aur bhi mila hua haySmile???
ACP INDEX FINGER: kaunShocked...
ABHIJEET COAT: Sir aik minute...
he called to sumwhere and a SMILE cums on his COLLERS and POCKETSBig smile... he turned and said...
ABHIJEET COAT: Sir pata chal gaya hayClap...
he told the NAME... both shockedShocked... but!!!
at NIGHT FREDDIE MARRIAGE RING and VIVEK CHASHMA following sumone silently... saw a FIMILIER thing... bit confusedConfused but after seeing SUMONE with HIM... raided their n took all to BearueAngry...
here...
BROKEN CHASHMA: MAGGIE ko mujh mein intrest khatam ho gaya thaAngry... METRO mein mujhay buht mushkil hoti... main kuch bhi dekh nahi pata tha... rash kay karanAngry... phir ek roz main apnay puranay dost CAR say mila...hum dono nay MAGGIE ko samjhany ki buht koshish ki kay wo CAR say hee ghar jayey... METRO say nahi... magar wo kehti kay CAR ka FARE buhat zyada hayAngry...
ABHIJEET COAT: phir tum logun nay ye PLAN kiya aur NEW CHASHMAY ko phansa diyaAngry...
BROKEN CHASHMA: haan SirCry...
DAYA BRACELET: aur is DUCK ko kyun paker kay BANDAK bana ker rakkha thaAngry...
CAR: is DUCK nay mujhay MAGGIE kay CHASHMAY ko giratay huay dekh liya thaCry...
DAYA BRACELET (again): aur isay JHAAR kay ooper kyun chupayaAngry...
CAR: ta kay aap ko kabhi EYE WITNESS na mil payeyCry...
CHANE ka JHAAR: Sir mujahy tou malum hee nahi tha... in logun nay kaha kay ye buht beemaar hay aur is ka PATI is kay liyey Dr lenay gaya hay tou main is ka khayal rakkhunConfused...
ACP INDEX FINGER: khair aainda bina jaankaari kay yunhe kisi ko nahi rakh lenaSmile...
aur DOGGIES... sorry kay tum ko hum nay paker kay rakkha... magar haalat aisay ho gayey thaySmile...
DONA came in... saw her WIFE... move ahead... HUGGED herEmbarrassed... after that SCENE... case wrapped and all moving out...
ABHIJEET FINGER RING: DAYA mera khayal hay mujahy bhi ab SHADI ker leni chahyeyBig smile...
DAYA BRACELET: TAREEKA kay CHASHMAY sayWink...
ABHIJEET FINGER RING saw his SHINE and say in NAUGHTYNESSWinkLOL...
ABHIJEET FINGER RING: nahi... is CHANE kay JHAAR sayWinkWink...
both laughed alotLOLLOL...


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