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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 12:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gwentlend

DIL AUR DIMAAG

Dil aur dimaag dono hee
manush keliye pyaari hai
dono hee hum banate hai
dono ke bina jeena mushkil hai
dono hee har kisi ke paas hote hai
lekin hum dil ko bhulkar dimaag 
ke sahaare jeene ki koshish karte hai
lekin hum ye bhul rehe hai 
dimmag dil ke sahaare use karein 
to har mushli kaam aasaan ho jaate hai
dil har kisi ke naram hote hai
kisi ka bhi dil padhar jaise nhi hota
dimaag hee dil ko padhar banata hai
log dimaag ke kehna sunkar 
dil se poochna bhul jaata hai
kyon ki dil hee har raaste ko aasaan banata hai
dimaag ke baat kabhi kabhi galat hote hai
lekin dil humesha sahi hota hai

Hmmm...Ermm
Dil say Poochna...Wink
Dil is always Wrong BacchaOuch
ye hamesha Raahun mein Bhatka deta hay...Angry
Very Nice Attempt...ClapClap

GWEN try to write in Rhythamic way...Big smile

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 2:28am | IP Logged
Very Nice Poem Gwen !!!! Clap

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 2:29am | IP Logged
The second one is very Nice too !!!! Clap

Edited by GIRL_SHERLOCK - 29 August 2012 at 2:29am

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 4:07am | IP Logged
sweet n luvly poem gwen di ClapThumbs Up

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Gr8 lines gwen..!!
Every1 shud read these lines in this world!!
emmm I think dil aur dimaag kaa combo acha rehta h qki dil humesha marwane wale kaam krta h..
Aur dil dimaag par kaabu kr leta h..
Keep giving ur thoughts a shape.. Smile
ALL THE BEST!


Edited by daya_angel - 29 August 2012 at 5:20am

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 5:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gwentlend

DOSTI

Dosti sabse haseen shabt hai
sabse gehra sabt hai
kisi ek ko do banate hai
har rishte ki buniyaad bhi hai 
Rishta jo bhi ho usse
mazboot bannane wala dosti hee hai
jis rishte mein dosti ki kami ho
wo rishta syada der tak nhi hoti
Jaise taare chaan ki saath
kabhi na chodthe
jaise bhul pavan ke saath
naachna nhi bhulthe
Jaise paani apni bahaav
kabhi na badalthe
Jaise samunder darti se
pyaar karna nhi chodte
waise hee dosti bhi
dosti se humari har mushkil dur hoti hai
dosti duniya ki sabse badi khushi hai
aur sabse badi dukh bhi
dosti ek rubber band ki tarah hota hai
agar ek chode to doosre ko dard hote hai
lekin agar hum ise sahi tarah nibhayein
to ye sabse badi khushi banthi hai
dost rehe ya na rehe
lekin unki dosti humesha rehta hai
thanks for pmEmbarrassed for inviting me,sorry for being so lateConfused but wow truly u made a congo poetry hunnn...very appreciable...Clap

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 6:02am | IP Logged

It's mindblowing and awesome Gwen!!!! Clap

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 6:03am | IP Logged
The second one is also awesome Gwen. I love how you wrote it!!!! Clap

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