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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vevah


it iz so Luvly n Pleasent
really vry True  said Clap
Hum always Dimaag ki he suntey hain ,
Dil ko Importance kum he dete hain
alwyaz Heart iz Ryt Embarrassed
Wish U do More n More Success
Ur Writting Skillz r SuperClap
make it more Active
1 Day U will be here wth Flying Colourz Embarrassed
Hug
Gud Luck Gweny n Be BlessedEmbarrassed



thanks di
thats so sweet of u

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 12:38am | IP Logged

GWEN...Hug
Pretty Best Line in Ur PoemThumbs Up

Jaise taare chaan ki saath
kabhi na chodthe
jaise bhul pavan ke saath
naachna nhi bhulthe
Jaise paani apni bahaav
kabhi na badalthe
Jaise samunder darti se
pyaar karna nhi chodte

mera khayal hay IF mein Poet ki List mein ek Addition GWEN bhi hay...ClapClap
per Baccha why Ur all Poem sounding Low??Confused

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 12:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gwentlend

DIL AUR DIMAAG

Dil aur dimaag dono hee
manush keliye pyaari hai
dono hee hum banate hai
dono ke bina jeena mushkil hai
dono hee har kisi ke paas hote hai
lekin hum dil ko bhulkar dimaag 
ke sahaare jeene ki koshish karte hai
lekin hum ye bhul rehe hai 
dimmag dil ke sahaare use karein 
to har mushli kaam aasaan ho jaate hai
dil har kisi ke naram hote hai
kisi ka bhi dil padhar jaise nhi hota
dimaag hee dil ko padhar banata hai
log dimaag ke kehna sunkar 
dil se poochna bhul jaata hai
kyon ki dil hee har raaste ko aasaan banata hai
dimaag ke baat kabhi kabhi galat hote hai
lekin dil humesha sahi hota hai

Hmmm...Ermm
Dil say Poochna...Wink
Dil is always Wrong BacchaOuch
ye hamesha Raahun mein Bhatka deta hay...Angry
Very Nice Attempt...ClapClap

GWEN try to write in Rhythamic way...Big smile

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 2:28am | IP Logged
Very Nice Poem Gwen !!!! Clap

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 2:29am | IP Logged
The second one is very Nice too !!!! Clap

Edited by GIRL_SHERLOCK - 29 August 2012 at 2:29am

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 4:07am | IP Logged
sweet n luvly poem gwen di ClapThumbs Up

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