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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 11:18pm | IP Logged

SUPERB POEMS

Both are fantastic and heart touching

like it

keep writing

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 11:21pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Mehek25

Once again beautifully written...

So true that the heart is never wrong...but the mind can be wrong...

Beautiful thoughts most beautifully expressed...

Thanx for the lovely thought-provoking verses and also the pm...

thank u

I am very happy that u lved it

.Gwen.

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 11:22pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Tami_

SUPERB POEMS

Both are fantastic and heart touching

like it

keep writing

thak u

ya i will

.-VeVaH-.

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 11:22pm | IP Logged

it iz so Luvly n Pleasent
really vry True said
Hum always Dimaag ki he suntey hain ,
Dil ko Importance kum he dete hain
alwyaz Heart iz Ryt
Wish U do More n More Success
Ur Writting Skillz r Super
make it more Active
1 Day U will be here wth Flying Colourz

Gud Luck Gweny n Be Blessed

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 11:29pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by vevah

thanks di

thats so sweet of u

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 12:26am | IP Logged

Originally posted by gwentlend

DIL AUR DIMAAG

Dil aur dimaag dono hee

manush keliye pyaari hai

dono hee hum banate hai

dono ke bina jeena mushkil hai right

dono hee har kisi ke paas hote hai

lekin hum dil ko bhulkar dimaag

ke sahaare jeene ki koshish karte hai

kuch log jeete hai dimag ke sahare aur dusro ko hurt krte hai

lekin hum ye bhul rehe hai

dimmag dil ke sahaare use karein

to har mushli kaam aasaan ho jaate hai

dil har kisi ke naram hote hai

kisi ka bhi dil padhar jaise nhi hota

dimaag hee dil ko padhar banata hai

log dimaag ke kehna sunkar

dil se poochna bhul jaata hai

kyon ki dil hee har raaste ko aasaan banata hai

dimaag ke baat kabhi kabhi galat hote hai

lekin dil humesha sahi hota hai

correct

heart is on LEFT side bt it always RIGHT

well done

kash DIMAG se sochne vale log tumari poem pdh kr apni ankhe khol le

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 12:33am | IP Logged

Originally posted by gwentlend

DOSTI

Dosti sabse haseen shabt hai

sabse gehra sabt hai

kisi ek ko do banate hai

har rishte ki buniyaad bhi hai

Rishta jo bhi ho usse

mazboot bannane wala dosti hee hai

jis rishte mein dosti ki kami ho

wo rishta syada der tak nhi hoti

Jaise taare chaan ki saath

kabhi na chodthe

jaise bhul pavan ke saath

naachna nhi bhulthe

Jaise paani apni bahaav

kabhi na badalthe

Jaise samunder darti se

pyaar karna nhi chodte

waise hee dosti bhi

dosti se humari har mushkil dur hoti hai

dosti duniya ki sabse badi khushi hai

aur sabse badi dukh bhi

dosti ek rubber band ki tarah hota hai

agar ek chode to doosre ko dard hote hai

lekin agar hum ise sahi tarah nibhayein

to ye sabse badi khushi banthi hai

dost rehe ya na rehe

lekin unki dosti humesha rehta hai

lovely lines

jeete rho aur khush rho

dosti ek rubber band ki tarah hota hai

agar ek chode to doosre ko dard hote hai

lekin agar hum ise sahi tarah nibhayein

to ye sabse badi khushi banthi hai

corect beta

loved these lines most

kash tumari jaise soch sbki ban jaye

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 12:38am | IP Logged

GWEN...

Pretty Best Line in Ur Poem

Jaise taare chaan ki saath

kabhi na chodthe

jaise bhul pavan ke saath

naachna nhi bhulthe

Jaise paani apni bahaav

kabhi na badalthe

Jaise samunder darti se

pyaar karna nhi chodte

mera khayal hay IF mein Poet ki List mein ek Addition GWEN bhi hay...

per Baccha why Ur all Poem sounding Low??

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