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Posted: 22 May 2012 at 11:48am | IP Logged
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Posted: 07 June 2012 at 3:30am | IP Logged

APT DECISION

DAYA checking His Bike by Sitting… suddenly ABHIJEET who stand behind the Bike tell DAYA..

ABHIJEET: DAYA ek dum jhatkay say Sar mut uthana… dekho Bike kay Left Mirror per ek Larki dikh rahi hay na… main 5/6 din say Note ker raha hun kay ye tum ko chup chup kay dekhti hay…

DAYA (after seeing Girl Image on Mirror in naughty smile): haan tou main Pyara jo hun…

ABHIJEET (moving): acha phir tou main shadi ki baat ker hee aaon..

DAYA grabbed His wrist… ABHIJEET with smile again said…

ABHIJEET: agar tumhari Bike ki sewa samapt ho gayii ho tou ander chalein… yahan tou lug raha hay Main Pighal jaon ga…

DAYA: haan chalo… Garmi buht hee zyada hay… (both entered) (DAYA again) wesay yaar samjh nahi aa raha is Chutti ka Faida… itni Garmi hay… Banda kahein ja bhi nahi sakta…

ABHIJEET: kyun Sea side chaltay hain…

DAYA: good idea…

After taking Shower… both in casual form as wearing Tee Shirts and Jeans and DAYA wearing a Chappal… after seeing ABHIJEET also did…. Only took Valets and Cells and moved in DAYA's Bike… they reached at Sea… its quite crowdy because of Hot weather… DAYA and ABHIJEET moved Far away as they are Good Swimmers… after half an Hour both be back and purchased an Ice Creams… suddenly ABHIJEET signalled at Left…

ABHIJEET: DAYA wo dekh wohi Larki…

DAYA tried to check out but missed so He said to ABHIJEET that its only His Illusion… they both Strolling and enjoying their Ice Cream… a Girl came infront of DAYA and moved her Hand and introduce…

Girl: Hello… main SHERYA hun…

Its unexpected for DUO but DAYA Shook hand in bit Hesitation… She further included…

SHERYA: darasal main 5/6 din say aap ko Watch ker rahi hun… mujhy laga kay main nay aap ko kahein dekha hua hay per yaad nahi aa raha tha aur ab achanak… aap DAYA hain na CID Inspector… darsal mujhy PURVI nay aap kay baaray mein bataya tha aur aap ki Pictures bhi dekhayii thi… kesay hain aap aur aap nay PURVI ki khaber hee nahi li…!!!

DAYA without any Word moved towards his Right… ABHIJEET saw it and Introduce Himself against the Girl…

ABHIJEET: main ABHIJEET hun DAYA ka best Friend… kiya hua hay PURVI ko??

SHERYA: Sir wo tou jesay Khatam ho gayii hay… dunya say kut gayii hay… us ko bahar la he nahi pa rahay Hum… wesay DAYA nay usay kyun chor diya…??

ABHIJEET: aap nay ye sawal PURVI say nahi poocha??

SHERYA: Sir jub bhi us kay saamnay DAYA ka naam lo ya us ki koi baat karo… wo Ronay lagti hay… us ki Mummy bhi bus Qismut ko Dosh deti hain… magar wo Theek nahi hay?? Aap apny Dost ko kahein… main nahi jaanti kay kay hua tha… magar shayed ab kuch Acha ho jayey…

ABHIJEET: aap mujhy PURVI ka Address dein aur apna Number bhi… main aap say Contact karun ga…

SHERYA gave that and ABHIJEET moved towards DAYA and placed Hand on His Shoulder with…

ABHIJEET: DAYA chalo… buht aagay aa gaye ho…

DAYA see Himself in Sea so with ABHIJEET moved back… ABHIJEET take him to a Rock and after spending much time there in Silence… both take a Dinner and moved Back… at House Stairs ABHIJEET grabbed His hand and Sit Him on Stairs and sat beside Him and initiated…

ABHIJEET: DAYA main ye nahi keh raha kay Tum Ghalat ho aur Wo Saheh ya Wo Ghalat hay aur tum Saheh… main sirf ek Logical baat keh raha hun kay Wo Qasoorwaar nahi… us situation mein jub main khud apnay baaray mein Doubtful tha tou us ka Mujh per Shak karna Jaiz tha yaar… (DAYA Quiet) (ABHIJEET added) acha chalo Insaniyet kay natay hee us say mil lo… dekh lo…!!!

DAYA (strong): Tumhein jo karna hay karo magar Mujh say koi Umeed mut rakkho…

He moved Inside while ABHIJEET feel the Strong Tone of DAYA which has No Sympathy for PURVI… Next Morning DUO moved to Bearue… Here when DAYA moved with FREDDIE and SACHIN for a Case Investigation… ACP asked to ABHIJEET…

ACP (to ABHIJEET): kya baat hay ABHIJEET… DAYA kuch Ukhra Ukhra sa lug raha hay…

ABHIJEET told the whole and further said to ACP…

ABHIJEET: Sir DAYA kuch bhi kahy magar main jaanta hun wo PURVI mein Intrested tha aur Meray liyey Us nay Usay chor diya… meray ander ye Takleef hay kay Karan Main hun… magar DAYA kuch bhi samjhnay ko Tayyar nahi… wo ek baar chalay tou… milay tou…

VIVEK (interrupts): Sorry Sir… Mujhy bolna tou Nahi chahayey magar mera khayal hay DAYA Sir aisa nahi karein gay… Us Larki nay Aap kay ooper Ilzaam lagaya ye baat alug magar Us nay DAYA Sir kay saamnay Aap ko buht Bura Bhala bhi bola tha… DAYA Sir ye kabhi nahi Bholein gay…

ABHIJEET: VIVEK Gussay mein Insan buht kuch bol jata hay…

ACP: haan ABHIJEET Tum saheh keh rahay ho kay gussay mein Insan Buht kuch bol jata hay magar mera manna ye hay kay DAYA per zabardasti nahi karo … Tum chaho tou dekh aao… Phir dekhtay hain…

ABHIJEET moved BANGLORE and after seeing the whole situation… He shifted PURVi and Her Mummy to MUMBAI... He tells about His this Step to ACP after back to Mumbai as…

ABHIJEET: Sir wo buht Bemaar hay… Financialy weak bhi kyun kay Baap tou Jail chala gaya… dono Bhai Mar gayey aur Maa kya karay… Mujh say dekha nahi gaya…

ACP: Tum nay DAYA ko bataya…???

ABHIJEET: Sir abhi tou nahi magar batana tou paray ga…

At night He told DAYA about that and requested Him to Meet PURVI atleast for his sake… DAYA asked…

DAYA (rash): Tum kya chahtay ho kay main us say shadi ker lun… Theek hay… main ker leta hun Us say Shadi… magar yaad rakhna ABHI Tum responsible ho gay her baat kay…!!!

ABHIJEET was in Tension… He knew DAYA is the person who really jus for HIM marry with the Girl but after that if he did not Bother about that relation… what will be the result… he suggested sumthing against ACP…

ABHIJEET: Sir mera khayal hay main DAYA ko achanak he PURVI say milwata hun… shayed Us ki halat dekh ker DAYA kuch feel karay…

ACP: dekh lo magar mujhy kuch achi umeed nahi hay…

Basically ACP Sir knew that what ABHIJEET was doing just to solve the matter as He felt that He was the main Reason of DAYA's decision… He gives Him chance as He tried to reach any Conclusion and its gives Sooth to Both DAYA as well ABHIJEET…!!!

Here before this step ABHIJEET included RAHUL as well… who was completely shocked after hearing a Big News that there was a Girl in DAYA's life in Past… ABHIJEET took DAYA and RAHUL to a Place without telling them… DAYA did not have an Idea that RAHUL knew about that so He relaxed that the matter would be Casual not Special… when reached… all stepped out and moved inside… ABHIJEET initiated after seeing sumone behind…

ABHIJEET: PURVI dekho kaun aaya hay??

PURVI turned and DAYA Stunned as She gives the look of a Weak and Ill Person… Lost that beauty and Grace… her eyes looking to bit out from Orbit… She moved forward and tried to grab DAYA hand… DAYA deliberately step back… PURVI said…

PURVI: DAYA Tum nay Mujhy Maaf ker diya na… Tum aa gayey ho na Meray pass Wapis…!!!

DAYA gives a tough look to ABHIJEET and moved Fast from the Spot where ABHIJEET and RAHUL behind Him but He took the Cab and moved ahead… ABHIJEET and RAHUL moved with slow steps in Quillas… on way… ABHIJEET said to RAHUL…

ABHIJEET: DAYA ko aisay nahi karna tha… kitni aas aur wishwaas say Main usay yahan lay ker aaya tha… PURVI say Waada kiya tha kay Usay Us ka DAYA wapis dilwaon ga… magar…!!! (after a minute) RAHUL Tum poocho DAYA say… kuch aisa hay Jo Us kay ander hay aur wo Mujhy batana nahi chahta… ye sub lame Excuses hain kay MUJHY PURVI SAY PYAAR THA AB NAHI HAY, ya MAIN SHADI NAHI KARNA CHAHTA etc etc…

RAHUL: Tumhein malum hay abhi wo kahan gaya hoga…

ABHIJEET: haan Main Tum ko Ghar chor deta hun… Tum dekho aur Baat karo yaar… kuch tou hay per kiya…!!!

RAHUL moved His head in YES and ABHIJEET dropped Him and moved ahead… RAHUL ring the bell… DAYA opened it and both entered…

DAYA: Tumhein ABHIJEET nay bheja hay??

RAHUL (harsh): Mujhy yahan ka rasta malum hay DAYA… meray liyey tou yehi shocking hay kay Tumhari zindagi say main Waqif bhi hun ya nahi…

DAYA (in shame): ABHI ko bhi malum nahi tha… achanak he pata chala…

RAHUL: dekho DAYA mujhy nahi malum kay kya hua tha aur main janna bhi nahi chahta magar ab tou aisa ho sakta hay na… dekho yaar Maaf bhi kiya jata hay… kya Tumhari ABHIJEET say kabhi koi Larai nahi hui… kiya koi Narazgi nahi hui… per Tum nay ya Us nay Tum ko Maaf kiya na… phir…!!!

DAYA (in Rash): RAHUL baat ye nahi kay Larai ya Narazgi hui… Baat ye bhi nahi kay us nay Shak kiya her Rishtay mein aisa hota hay… Dosti say lay ker Ishq tak… kiya main nay kabhi ABHI per Shak nahi kiya… kyun nahi… per mujhy Dukh hua… Takleef hui… Pachtawa tha… Main nay Maafi maangi… magar PURVI ka wo kehna kay ACHA HUA… (teary tone) mujhy tour gaya…!!!

He starts strolling and chatting in Bit Painful Tone as…

Tum batao agar Tum apni Fiancee ko aur Us say related Rishtun ko Respect, Muhabbat aur Care do gay tou yehi Attitude Tum apnay Relations kay liyey bhi Us say expect karo gay… magar PURVI… Us kay liyey ABHIJEET sirf Mera Dost hay… Colleague hay… Saathi hay… Bus…!!!

Us nay mujh say Maafi maangi per ABHI say nahi… sub say zyada Nuqsaan kisay hua tha… sirf ABHI ko… wo Pagalun ki tarah Us Larki kay liyey Mujh say Lar raha hay… mujhy Mana raha hay… magar us Larki nay ek baar bhi Us say nahi kaha kay Mujhy Maaf ker do…

Usay apnay kiyey per koi Sharmindagi nahi… koi Pachtawa nahi… Dukh nahi… Usay sirf Apni Parwah hay… apni khushi ki… Usay Rishtun mein Respect, Muhabbat, Care kuch nahi aata… bus apna Swarth dekhna ataa hay…

Aur kahein na kahein Main buht Khush hun kay acha hua jo ABHI per Us nay Ilzaam lagaya aur apni Asliyet bata di… warna shayed us kay sath zindagi bitana meri Maut hee hota…

Suddenly he opened the door and Clutched ABHIJEET Arm and pull Him inside it with…

DAYA (rash): Chup Chup ker baatein sunna ek CID Officer ko shobha nahi deta aur RAHUL ko apna Messanger bana ker bhejnay ki zarurat nahi thi… agar Tum Mujh say Baat kartay tou bhi Main Tumhein bata deta… (anger) magar Tumhein tou us say hamdardi ka Bukhaar carha hua hay…

ABHIJEET: ho sakta hay Wo badal gayii ho…!!!

DAYA (after Inhale): Tumhein Practical ki aadat ho gayii hay ABHI… dekhna chatay ho na Tum… kal chalna… (to RAHUL) aur tum bhi…

Next day DAYA called RAHUL and told him to be at the Spot immediately where as ABHIJEET told all to ACP on His Query so He joined Him also and reached there… DAYA saw all Three and enterd while the Three still at Same Place… DAYA entered… PURVI shocked to see Him… DAYA grabbed Her Hand and sat Her infront of him… He takes a water glass placed at her bed Side, drank it, trying to Relax and then started…

DAYA (soft tone): dekho PURVI… jo hua Usay bhool jao… ab say hum ek nai zindagi shroo karein gay… ek Naii subah… magar…!!!

PURVI (confuse): magar…??

DAYA (easy mode): dekho ABHIJEET kay mujh per Buht Ihsaan hain… Main Usay akela nahi chor sakta… abhi bhi wo Meray sath rehta hay tou Shadi kay baad bhi Wo Humaray sath hee rahay ga…

PURVI (shock): kiya…!!!

DAYA: haan Us ka Meray siwa hay hee Kaun… aur…!!

PURVI (instantly in bit Harsh voice): tou DAYA Tum koi AASHRAM kyun nahi khol letay… haan… jahan!!!

Suddenly the Glass of water in DAYA's hand was Broken with voice and Interrupts PURVI sentence… DAYA's hand filled with Blood… PURVI instantly stand up with…

PURVI: main First Aid lay ker aati hun…

DAYA moved Outside after her Exit… ABHIJEET takes out His Handkercheif and Tied it with…

ABHIJEET: Glass Tournay ki kay zarurat thi… haan..!!!

DAYA (harsh): shuker karo us ki Garden nahi Touri…

DAYA in anger whereas ABHIJEET, ACP and RAHUL moved behind with relaxing… ACP knew the Result as at that Time ABHIJEET was Not with the Team when they Last visited to PURVI house and DAYA told there what easily understand Him that the PURVI Chapter was Closed in DAYA's life after that Minute…  !!! ABHIJEET stopped the Quillas with jerk outside the Ice Cream Parlour.. DAYA said in Shock…

DAYA (shock): arry mera Valet…!!!

ABHIJEET (whisper in anger): chal bay…. Drama…

ACP Sir and RAHUL obviously Confused where as DAYA moved with sweet smile and ABHIJEET in Tough jesture inside the parlour.. ABHIJEET sat with ACP Sir while DAYA with RAHUL… both seeing the counter and discuss sumthin..

RAHUL: DAYA ye Larki shayed Nai aayi hay…

DAYA: haan pehlay kabhi dikhi nahi…

ABHIJEET hit his foot on DAYA… he saw Him and ABHIJEET signalled that ACP Sir was also there… DAYA after that instantly changes the topic as…

DAYA (to ACP): Sir aap nay kabhi LAVA CAKE khaya hay??

ACP (in smile): DAYA jahan tak mujhy malum hay LAVA VOLCANO say nikalta hay… ye CAKE say kub say nikalnay laga…???

DAYA (with smile): nahi Sir ab nikalnay laga hay… wesay buht Tasty hota hay… aur yahan ka SLUSH bhi buht acha hota hay…

He gave the Order… here ABHIJEET in Tension after hearing the order and seeing the Price on Munu card trying to say something to DAYA but after seeing the scenario SMS DAYA as…

ABHIJEET (SMS): aby meray pass itnay paisay nahi hain…

DAYA (SMS): Tou tumhein kaun keh raha hay Bill denay ko…

ABHIJEET (SMS): tou kya RAHUL..!!!

DAYA (SMS with big smily icon): ACP Sir hain na…!!!

ABHIJEET moved His head and enjoying his LAVA CAKE with SLUSH like all others… Suddenly DAYA cell started ringing… He picked it up and in Tense voice…

DAYA: kya… VIVEK theek tou hay??? acha Hum log abhi aatay hain…

He puts off the call in Tension and signalled ABHIJEET to stand up and telling to rest….

DAYA (to ACP): Sir SACHIN ka phone tha… VIVEK ka Accident ho gaya hay… mujhy aur ABHIJEET ko jana hoga… (to RAHUL) RAHUL Tum ACP Sir ko chor dena aur haan Gadi lay jana… main Gadi Tumharay Police Station say pick ker lun ga…

After that both moved out in rush… here the Bill came as RAHUL feeling extreme embarrassment because he did not take His valet before coming here because of that emergency Call of DAYA… ACP gave the Bill… when they moved… on Way… RAHUL say in shame tone…

RAHUL: Sorry Sir wo mera Valet…

ACP (in smile): aaj in DONO nay theek thaak Phatka laga diya…

RAHUL (in shock): tou kya Sir…!!!

ACP: RAHUL ye comfort zone humein ek relaxing or Compatable mahul deta hay …

RAHUL moved his head… its really a New Experience for him…  He dropped ACP Sir to Bearue and moved to police Station… before entering to His cabin… he saw Constable grabbed a Tray having Juices and moved to His cabin… He moved fast and after seeing them… completely Stunned…

 RAHUL (shock): Tum Log…

DAYA (smile): tou Gadi lenay tou aana tha na… wesay kya kaha ACP sir nay???

RAHUL: keh rahay thay theek thaak phatka laga diya…

ABHIJEET (relax): chalo chalo itnay dino say kuch khilaya bhi tou nahi tha na…

RAHUL: wesay Mujhy itni sharmindagi hui kay…

DAYA: lo Sharmindagi kesi aur main nay tou pehlay hee sawdhaan ker diya tha kay meray pass Valet nahi… aur ye (signal to ABHIJEET) 4 rupay lay ker ghar say nikalta hay… ab wahan ja ker SMS ker kay kehnay laga kay itnay paisay nahi… Order wapis lena mujhy acha nahi laga tou kya karta…

RAHUL: wesay ACP sir tum logun ko Khana khilatay rehtay hain… Humray Higher Officers tou aisa nahi karty…

DAYA: jabhi tou kehtay hain kay Police walun ki na Dosti achi aur na hee Dushmani…

RAHUL (anger): tou Tum nay mujh say Dosti kyun ker li…

ABHIJEET (naughty tone): ab yaar kabhi kabhi Ghalati tou ho jati hay na…

DAYA (standup after taking Key): acha RAHUL buht maza aaya Tumharay Paisun say juice peenay ka…

RAHUL (shock): kiya… magar..!!!

DAYA: lo main nay tou pehlay hee sawdhan ker …

RAHUL (interrupts in rash): diya tha kay Tumharay pass Valet nahi… aur Tumhara BHAI 4 rupay lay ker Ghar say nikalta hay… etc etc…

ABHIJEET: Hoshyaar ho gaya ahy baccha DAYA…

DAYA: haan Boss…

DUO moved out immediately seeing RAHUL in Complete rash after a Big Laugh…

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 07 June 2012 at 3:43am | IP Logged
FW wale aur abhi sir to purvi ko bhul gaye par dada lagta h ap nahi bhule ho...
Daya sir's centric story will read it now only... Yipieee

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Posted: 07 June 2012 at 3:56am | IP Logged
LOL LOL surely ur bhai is pyaara EmbarrassedLOL ...& even the story too EmbarrassedClapClapClap

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Posted: 07 June 2012 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Lovely Story !!

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Posted: 07 June 2012 at 4:05am | IP Logged
Dada nicy story...
Purvi kaa chapter to close kr dete..
Lagta h ye story bs aapne apne dono bhaiyo kaa pait bharne k liye likhi h.. Bechare rahul n acp sir... LOL...

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Posted: 07 June 2012 at 4:05am | IP Logged
oho GD
story half hi parhi hun abhi class mei jana hai..baki cls ke baad parhungi..

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Posted: 07 June 2012 at 5:47am | IP Logged
Arre kya GD, Purvi ka chapter khula hi chor diya. LOL
 
Nice story. Bhai aur baare bhai maza aa gaya. Bechare Rahul aur ACP sir. LOL

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