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FRIENDSHIP BOND

ABHIJEET'S HOUSE

Abhijeet standing in front of a picture of DUO…….

Abhijeet: Daya kya kabhi iss sab ke liye tum muse maff kar paoge…… Sahyad yeh humari dosti ka….. ek dusare ke uparke bharose ka imtahan hai………

Daya (who is standing aside of Abhijeet): arre Abhijeet aaise akele akele kya bate kar rahai ho…….

Abhijeet (clear his voice and eyes): arre Daya kuch nahi yaar bas aaise hi…. Tum kab aaye or yeh choro ki tarah ghar me ghusane ki aadat kab chodoge………….

Daya (in teasing tone): dekho boss mai koi choro ki tarah nahi ghusata….  Chabi laga ke tala khol ke ghusata hue samaje…… yeh toh kher karo ki tarwaja tod ke nahi ghusata……

Both share a laugh….

Daya (on dining table): Boss yeh achanak diner ka plan kaise banaya……..

Abhjeet: kue mai aapne dost ko khanepe nahi bula sakta……..

Daya: Abhijeet mai tumhe pichale 14 salo se janta hue samje…..Chalo ab bata bhi do kya bat hai….

Abhijeet: Daya yaar kya bat kahu….. kuch ho toh batau na……… kuch bhi toh nahi……

Daya (In angry tone): toh tu muse nahi bataoge………

IN BUREAU

Vivek: Fredy sir, Ye DAYA sir or ABHIJEET sir kaha gaye…. Pichale 2 din se na bureau aaye hai… or nahi phone kiya hai….

Fredy: Pata nahi Vivek…  

Sachin: In dino ACP sir bhi bohot preshan hai….

Fredy: Haan…..

Before he could say anything….. ACP enters in the bureau…. He is in tension…… he is trying to  call someone but the person's phone is switched off…… at the same time… bureau gets the call informing that one parcel is at gate for ACP sir… Fredy move out and enters with the parcel…….He scans the box…. And he shocked… he carefully opens the box and finds two CID batches….. And a letter…………

ACP opens the letter and read it loudly: ACP tum khud ko kya samaste ho…. Ab dekho tumhare dono officers ke sahare mai kya karata hue…….

Fredy: dono officers…. Woh kone…

Sachin: yeh Batches to DAYA sir….  Or… Abhijeet sir ke hai…..

 (Everybody shock) ACP: Sachin is letter or Batches ko Salunke ke pass leke jao…..

Sachin left….

Fredy: Sir kya aap ko pata tha ABHIJEET sir or DAYA sir kaha gaye the…..

ACP: Nahi Fredy muse nahi pata ki woh Dono kaha gaye the……….

AT FORENSIC LAB

Salunke: Boss ye khat ka paper ek dum aam hai…. per haan ek ajeeb bat hai….. iss paper ka jab mai chemical test kar raha tha…. Tab muse essake upper se sona(gold) mila hai….

Sachin: sona yaane gold…… per woh paper pe kaise pohocha….

Fredy: shayad ye kisi sone ki khan ke pass rakha hoga….

Vivek: Ya kisi jewelry shop mai….

Salunke: nahi aaisa kuch bhi nahi hua hoga…. Kue ki sona paper pe nahi pen ki ink mai hai….

ACP: yane ye koi itana kimti pen hai jiske ink mai sona hotahai….

Salunke: nahi boss… muse lagata hai… ye koi aaisa pen hai… jiska likhane ka point sone se bana hai….. kue ki sona har letter mai nahi hai… bohot kam jagah pe hai…..

ACP: Soneke point wala pen…. Aaisa pen toh Abhijeet ke pass hai….. pichali bar jab ussane ek bada case solve kiya that oh maine usse gift kiya tha…. Tab se woh usse humesha aapne pass rakhta hai…..

ACP: Salunke yeh joh letter aaya hai issaki hand writing check karo…

Salunke: Boss kisase check karu……. Kahi tum Abhijeet ki handwriting se toh match karne ko keh raha hai ho………..

ACP: Haan Salunke….  

Salunke (in irritation) opens a drawer where some files are present he picks out one…..

He started matching the handwriting……….

Salunke (bangs the file on table): arre yaar yeh chakar kya hai……………

ACP: Salunke paheliya mat busao…… kya bat hai saf saf batao……….

Salunke: Boss iss letter ki handwriting Abhjeet se nahi Daya se milti hai…..

All are shocked to hear it……..

IN BUREAU

Fredy: Sir ABHIJEET sir or DAYA sir ki phone ki last location pata chal gayi hai….. woh dono bhi Abhijeet sir ke ghar ke area mai the….. or haan sir unke records bohot normal hai…. last call DAYA sir ne Abhijeet sir ko kiya hai… 3 din pehele… wahi hai… or usake bad mobiles band hai…..

Sachin: kahi sir…. Yeh letter ABHIJEET sir or DAYA sir ne toh nahi bheja hai hume…..

ACP: muse bhi kuch aaisa hi lag raha hi Sachin… per kue…..

Fredy: Sir ABHIJEET sir or DAYA sir ke phone toh band hai…

Vivek: sir shayad unhone numbers change kar diye honge…..

ACP: ho sakta hai…. per pata kaise chalega……

Vivek: Sir ek tarika hai….. Sir…. Hum unke Phone ke IMEI number…. Sari phone companies ko de dete hai….. aagar unhone number badla bhi hoga to unke IMEI number se pata chal jayega…

ACP: Per vivek agar unhone Mobiles set hi change kardiya ho to…… bhulo mat Vivek woh dono Abhijeet or Daya hai……. Chalo thik hai ek chance leke dekhate hai…

Some time latter they got one number which is issued against DAYA's mobile set….. They trace that number and reach to a market place

AT MARKET PLACE

Sachin: Sir yaha itani bhid mai pata kaise chalega ki DAYA sir hai kaha…..

ACP: Vivek tumne jo naya number liya hai ussase woh number ko dial karo….

They heard a ring nearby…… After some efforts they got a person carrying that number…. Its not DAYA……

Vivek: Ye mobile kisne diya tumhe…..

Person: Maine Kharida hai isse…… tum kon hote ho puchane wale…..

Sachin Dekh jhut mat bol…… hum log CID se hai….

Person: CID…..

ACP: haan CID…. Ab sach bol waran phone chori ke iljam mai jail jayega……

Person: Mai sach kaih raha hue sir… maine isse chori nahi kiya hai…. ye phone muse do din pehele. Mila tha…… ek jagah pada hua…..

ACP: Toh jaanene ki koshish nahi ki kisaka phone hai….

Person: Sir woh itana acha phone dekhake lalach aa gaya tha man mai….

ACP: Lalach aa gay tha…. Vivek jara check karo dekho DAYA ka koi message hai kya…. Or tum dikhao kaha mila tha yeh phone tumhe…..

Person shows a road side where he found that phone….. but team does not get any clue form there….. 

Vivek: sir iss phone mai to DAYA sir ka ek bhi contact number nahi hai… or messages bhi delete mare hai…

ACP to person: kya kiya tumne haan pata hai…. issame se hume kitan important surag mil sakta tha……

Person: sir muse maf kardijiye…. Galti ho gayi… per sir issaka draft msg kuch aajeeb tha…. Muse paheliya suljhan acha lagta hai iss liye maine usse rakh liya soch isse solve karunga…….. yeh dekhiye….

The msg contains following letters galaxy ke tare jamin pe aaye………. Dekho kahi inhke sath koi or na aajaye…..

ACP: yeh kya ho sakta hai… or DAYA ke phone ki last location Abhijeet ghar ke pass thi…. or yeh jagah bhi Abhijeet ke gharke pass hi hai…. issaka matlab DAYA yaha tha….. per kisine kuch dekha kaise nahi hai….. Kya chal raha hai….

Sachin: sir phir iss msg ka matlab kya hai… or DAYA sir ne message bheja kue nahi…..

ACP: looking at the msg….. kahi koi musibat toh nahi aane wali……

A CLOSED MILL

ABHIJEET enters in to mill…… he is looking help less….. he move upstairs…..10-15 peoples surrounding DAYA…. who is tied up with ropes…. Some blood on his forehead…..

ABHIJEET (pain in his eyes): DAYA… yaar muse maf karade….. meri wajah se tumhe ye sab sehana pad raha hai…… (he move forwards…. Suddenly take out his gun….. Pointed it on DAYA's head) 

ABHIJEET: DAYA muse yakin hai ki tumne kuch gadbad nahi ki hogi…..

DAYA: ABHIJEET…. Tumse muse ye umid nahi thi…. tum muse gun dikha rahai ho…. Arre ye sab musase karwane se acha hai….. tum muse goli mar do…… Ya hath kap rahai tumhare muspe goli chalate hue….

ABHIJEET: Inspector DAYA…. tum to muse achi tarikese jante hona mere hath goli chalate hue nahi kapte…. Tumhai to mai hi marunga…… jarur marunga per pehele mera kam to pura ho jaye….

AT BUREAU

Everyone is thinking about code….. Suddenly phone rings its from hospital…….  Every one moves towards hospital…..

AT HOSPITAL

Team enters….. They move to reception where one doctor is also present….

Doctor: Aap CID se hai…..

ACP: haan Doctor….. Kisne phone kiya hume…. Kya hua hai yaha pe…..

Doctor: Sir yaha pe ek aadami admit hua hai… koi usse humare hospital ke gate per chod ke gaya tha…. Bar bar CID CID kahai jaraha tha… issi liye humne aap ko bulaya hai….

Sachin: Kaha hai woh…. Kya hum usse mil sakte hai….

Doctor: Sir woh to behosh hogaya hai… or Jada khun behene ke karan coma me ja sakta hai…. per haan behosh hone se pehele ussane mussase ek kagaJ diya hai…..

Doctor Hand over a paper to ACP…. ACP read it loudly…..

ACP: DAYA……2409 1930 KG

AT BUREAU

Sachin: sir yeh paheliya toh meri samaj se bahar hai………

ACP: Sachin ek CID officer ki tarah socho get oh yeh paheliya bohot aasan ho jayegi….. 1st paheli likhane wala CID office hai or dusari paheli likhnae wala CID ka purana khabari…..

Vivek: sir kahi yeh dono paheliya ek dusare se judi toh nahi

ACP: Vivek kuch toh hai…. jo hume nahi pata….  Sachin, Vivek… DAYA or ABHIJEET ke phones ki last location thi Abhijeet ka ghar thi…. Ek kam karo… Abhijeet ke ghar pe jakar dekho… shayad waha kuch mil jaye……

ABHIJEET'S HOUSE

Team reaches at abhijeet's house……. They enter in to it…… all searching different rooms…..

They found one envelope which is similar to the envelope which is similar to what ACP sir given to them…….(refer my last story named 'CONFUSION')

AT BEREAU

All team present except DAYA and ABHIJEET

ACP: Haan Vivek tum phone pe keh raha hai the DAYA ke ghar pe tumhe kuch Mila hai

Vivek: haan sir yeh envelope mila hai

ACP: yeh toh wahi envelop hai joh DAYA ko maine diya tha….. kholo isse….

Fredy: sir per……

ACP: Fredy Mai keh rha hue kholo isse………..

Fredy opens the envelope…. It contains a paper…. Fredy give it to ACP………. ACP: Fredy Vivek  tumhare later pe kya likh tha……

ALL: sir humare letter toh blank the……. Ussape kuch bhi nahi likha tha…..

ACP: Or yeh Abhijeet ka letter bhi blank hai….

Fredy: Sir per yeh blank papers kue diye gaye the…..

ACP: Fredy maine sab ko balnck papers hi diye the….. tum log kitana secrecy rakh sakte ho iss bat imtehan tha woh… acha chodo woh sab….. ab humre pass do codes hai…. kisi bbhi halat mai jald se jald hume unhe brake karana hi hoga……

AT CLOSED MILL

Daya is trying hard to get free him self

Abhijeet: arre Daya mat karo yeh koshish kuch nahi hoga issase.. kya mai tumhe nahi janata ki tumahari strength kya hai……….. tumhe musase behtear kone janega….. iss liye yeh koshishe chod do…..

Daya: Abhijeet hosh mai aao tum kya kar rahai ho yeh tumhari samaj mai bhi aa raha hai ya nahi……………

Abhijeet(tears in his eyes): Daya yaar tum toh jante hona ki mai tumhe aaise nahi dekh sakta….. tumhari aaise halat muse emotional kar deti hai….. (a sudden laughter change the atmosphere)agar tum yeh sab musase expect kar raha hai ho Daya toh woh ACP tumse sach kehta hai ki tum Sentimental full ho……. Abhi bhi nahi samaje…….

Daya: Abhijeet…..

Abhijeet: haan janta hue Daya….. tum bas ab wahi karo joh tumse karne ko kaha hai…. tumhara kam khatam or bas sab khatam…….. tumpe pura iljaam aa jayega or mai aapna kam khatam kar dunga……….. waran yad hai na mai kya karunga…….

Daya: kya karoge haan…… muse mar dalo ge toh mar do na……

Abhijeet: nahi Daya tumhe kue marunga... mai khud ko mar dalunga (& he pointed gun towords himself)

Daya (In pain): kya karana hoga muse……

Abhujeet: Jada kuch nahi tuhe bas yeh bags apani jagah tak pohochani hai….

Daya: thik hai per issake bad tum yeh sab chod ke mere sath wapas chaloge…….

Abhijeet does not ans the Q. but he just laugh…… while moving out he told to one man tum issake sath jaana or haan yeh BUG aapne pass hi rakhan issase muse tumhari sari harkte sunai deti rahaingi…….

AT BEREAU

Two peoples are seating on chair of culprit one of them is Daya….

ACP: Daya yeh tum kya kar rahai the jante bhi ho……. Unnn bags mai RDX tha……

Daya: haan sir yeh sabka jimedar mai hi hue…….. aap muse arrest karke joh chahe woh saja dilwa sakte hai……

(while speaking all this Daya stands up and over power the person seating next to him) after that he shows a BUG on that persons dress to ACP and ask for pen and paper……

Daya wrote something………. On paper and show it ACP…

AT CLOSED MILL

10 - 12 peoples are standing….. one person whose only shoos are viewable are seating(BOSS)…..

Two men enter with Abhijeet…….

BOSS (in anger): Abhijeet tumse kaha tha maine ki agar mere plan mai kuch gadbad hue toh mai tumhe jaan se mar dunga….. or yaha toh tumne sare plan ko hi bigad diya…..

Daya ko mere hatho se bacha liya…….. Divya ko bhi bhaga diya…. Or toh or mera mal bhi pakada gaya…. Per koi bat nahi tumhare pyaare dost ne tumhe bachane ke liye sara iljam aapne sir pe le liya hai……

Toh ab tumhara dost waha jail mai sadega or tum yaha mere hatho maroge…..

Suddenly a voice pope up

Aaise kaise maroge…. Haan….. itana aasan samaj rakha hai….sab kuch……

All CID team enters except Daya…. all culprits are catch hold….. but Boss manage to skip from the grip of Sachin and pick up his gun and poited it on Abhijeets head…… but same time a hard punch push him back on floor……..

Its Daya….. he free Abhijeets hand give a tight HUG to him.. Abhijeet feel relax after this…..

ACP(to Abhijeet): Abhijeet yeh sab kya hai…..

Abhijeet: Sir….. yeh (point to boss) Vikrant hai….. yeh or issaki wife Divya…. Muse 2 sal pehele mile the ek dost ki party mai…. Humari thode hi time mai bohot achi dosti ho gayi… aaj se kariban 4 din pehele muse achanak Divya milne aayi or ussane kaha ki yeh Vikrat kuch smuggling ke kam mai involve ho gaya hai…. Divya ke jane ke bad mai soch rah tha ki mai aage kya karu ki muse iss Vikrant ka phone aaya ki agar maine kisi ko kuch kaha toh woh Divya ko mar dalega…. Ussane kaha ki mai or ek CID officer ko leke ussake aade pe aajayu per ussane kaha ki mai uss CID officer ko kuch na bataue….. musper najar rakhaneke liye ussane muse ek chota spy camara laga diya……. CID ka or ek officer…. Toh sab se pehele mere dimag me DAYA ka khayal aaya…. Kue ki mera bina kuch kahe meri bat sirf wahi samaj sakta hai….

ACP: woh sab toh Thik hai abhijeet per yeh tumse logo se karwana kya chata tha….

Daya: sir ab toh yeh hi batayega ki woh karna kya chata tha (Daya gives his jhapad dose to vikrant)

Vikrant: Mai bohot pehele se chote mote smuggling ke ekam karta tha….. issi bich meri dosti Abhijeet se ho gayi…. jab mere boss ko pata chala ki CID officer Abhijeet mera dost hai….. mere boss ne muse kaha ki agar me usaka ek bohot bada consignment joh Mumbai ke bahar pada hai usse Mumbai me entry karwadu or kisi tarah se Inspector Abhijeet ko fasadu toh woh muse 10 crore rupaye dega…….

Mai paiso ki lalach mai aaya or maine ek plan banaya…. Maine Jan bhuch kar Divya ko khabar lagne di ki mai smuggling ke business mai involved hue…… muse yakin tha ki woh sidhe jake Abhijeet se madat mange gi…. Ussane waise hi kiya….. or maine usse kidnapped kar liya…… mai janta tha ki Abhijeet kabhi bhi ek masum ki jaan ko khtare me nahi dal sakta….maine Abhijeet ko black mail kiaya or woh Daya ko diner ke bahane behoshi ki dawa deke……. Humare pass leke aya…..

Abhijeet: I am sorry Daya per mere pass or koi chara nahi tha………

Daya: Abhijeet kya itane salo ke bad tumhe yeh sab kehene ki jarurat hai……

Vikrant: maine Abhijeet ko majbur kiya ki woh Dayase woh letter likhwaye….. Daya ko hurt kiya or usse yeh jataya ki yeh sab Abhijeet ke kehene per ho raha hai…..

Abhijeet: mai iss sab mai Daya ko kabhi bhi kuch bhi nahi bata paya kue ki spy camera Meri her ek bat per najar rakha hua tha……

Vikrant: mera plan tha ki CID officer agar woh consignment leke jata toh usse koi check nahi karta or consignment aapni jagah pohocha ne ki bad woh Abhijeet ke khilaf gawai dede……… iss tarah se mere dono kam ho jate… per pata nahi kaise yeh daya consignment ke sath aap logo ke hath lag gaya…. Or ussane Abhijeet ka naam nahi liya balke khud ke uppar sara iljam le liya…..

Abhijeet: Vikrat uss din mai jab daya ko leke aaya tha tab yaad tumhe tumne ek aadmi ko pakada tha spy karte hue or usse  jakhmi karke choda tha or maine tumse kahatha ki woh mar chukka hai darsal woh ek CID informer tha…….. maine usse hospital ke samne dala tha or jab mai yeh sab kar raha tha tab maine ussaki jeb mai ek kagaj dala tha Jispe likha tha  DAYA….2409 1930 KG   or issase phele Daya ko leke aate waqt maine Daya ke cell ke draft mai ek msg chodatha…… joh tha…  galaxi ke tare jamin pe aaye………. Dekho kahi inhke sath koi or na aajaye…..

Vikrat: iss kaya mat lab hai…..

ACP: jab maine yeh do msg dekhe toh muse laga ki Abhijeet ya Daya inn dono mai se koi muse koi secret msg dene ki koshish kar rahai hai……………

Jab humne socha toh inn msg ka mat lab hum ye laga paye……. Ki Galaxi ke tare jamin per matalb Galaxi naam ki woh jagah jaha stars aate hai… mat lab Galaxi Theater……  Dekho kahi inhe  sath koi or na aajaye ka matlab hai koi aaisa insane jise waha nahi aana chahiye….. yane koi apradhi……

2409 matab 24th September aaj ki date…… 1930 matlab 07.30 PM……. Ab bacha tha KG…. jise humare Fredy ne solve kiaya….. KG means Kala Ghoda…… agar Mumbai ke bahar se aane wale ko Galaxi theater jana hai toh Gala khoda se hoke hi jayega….. usme likha tha Daya matlab hume Daya ka itjar kana tha……

Daya: jab maine ACp sir ko waha dekha toh mai samj gaya ki Abhijeet ne musase yeh kue kaha tha ki muse sirf wahi karan hai joh ho raha hai…. ussake bad naam mera or kam Abhijeet ka…… iss ke alawa jab hum waha se nikal rahai the tab Abhijeet ne mere sath wale admise kaha tha ki tere BUG se mai sari bate sunata rahunga iss liye bureau mai maine sara ilajam aapne sir pe liya or ACp sir ko likhke bata ya ki woh mere sath chale or unhe leke yaha aagaya….. kue ki muse pata tha….. Jab tumhe pata chalega ki mai ilajam aapne sir pe liya hai tum befikar ho jaoge……

Abhijeet: maine moka pake Diya ko bhi tumhare pakadse aajad kar diya…….. take agar Daya meri bat samaj chukka hai toh woh Jab CID ko leke yaha aaye toh tumhe pakadne mai koi bhi adchan na aayye…. Or Agar Daya nahi samaja hai toh atleast Diya ki jaan bach jaye…..

ACP: Abhijeet Daya….. chalo kam pe lag jao….. iss vikrant ke boss ko pakadna ab humara naya mission hai

ABHIJEET & DAYA see towards each other and exchange a grin……

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Lost



The hope is yet to be done,
The friendship journey is yet to rebegan..

That care and Concern for Each other,
That hand of Assurance always on Shoulder..

The support of a brother & Naughtiness of a friend..
That was most beautiful thing for me on this land..

That friendship that taught us the meaning of a friend..
But Now it luks like going out of the hand..

When Everyone steppd back,that friendship came aloud,
But now it seems to be Sumwhere lost in the Crowd..

That art of understanding the other wdout asking a word,
It seems that friendship from FW's vision is blurred..

That friendship that showed us How to Sacrifice even ur life for the other,
But now it luks that about Each other they dont bother..

I want that friendship back at any Cost..
Never want it in Crowd to be lost..

The hope is yet to be done,
The friendship journey is yet to Rebegan..


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..Missing Report..
After being unable to find that Smile Everywhere,
I went to Police Station to File my Report there...

"Officer,Officer !!" I called out,
Officer came out asking "Wats dis Noise all about ??"

I requested him Sir,I want to file a Missing report,
Hav tried to find it with all efforts..

He asked me,Wat exactly is Missing?a thing or a person?
I said that it is a precious Smile wich lost without any Reason..

At first he thought I am Mad,as I was jumping like a tribe,
then putting his thoughts apart,He asked me to Describe...

I said that the Smile is pure,gentle and cums directly from heart,
And no one Can Explain it Even the Scholer of Art..

The smile came when he did naughty deeds,
the Smile used to cum when he Shyed..

The Smile was very beautiful and Still very Rare,
But nowdays it is Sumwhere lost in thin Air..

I said it is Daya sir's cute Smile and Started Day dreaming there..
Officer Said'Ahem Ahem?U knw it must hav lost where?

I said i dont knw Sir and started Crying there..
Then he called his officers n odered them to find That Smile Everywhere..

I said sir please find it or Rather,
Many hearts around the world will Surely Shatter..

He assured me that he will find where the Smile has lost..
And will give it back to its owner at any Cost..

Still waiting for the day wen he will find that thing..
Smile at many faces that thing will Surely bring...


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Friendship is a treat to have..
Without it its a life in grave..

Friendship is a promise to Keep..
Friends r there when U weep..

Friends take Care of Us throughout our life..
and they tear our Sorrow just like a Knife..

I cant describe what is friendship for Me..
but it is the most beautiful relation in to be..


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plz every PRAISE is for CANDY... cz she provided me the PLOT... so plz FEEDBACK her on that STORY... i jus gave WORDS to her FEELINGS...
THANK U CANDY... for BELIEVING ME...



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now a day's DAYA was very busy in his official work,  did not give much attention on DIVYA,  he engaged a NANNY for her look after but he also understand that he was losing his attention and not fulfill his responsibility properly,  he discussed it with ABHIJEET as well,  who relaxed him that don't be so tensed, in few days he will be back to his casual routine,  but meantime, on Saturday night he got a call from DIVYA NANNY,  ABHIJEET was not at Bearue so DAYA reached fast and after entering saw lots of hustle bustle,  NANNY told that someone tried to enter but because of the inclusion of neighbors ran away,  they searched DIVYA and found her in shivering behind the Fridge, in crying and tightly embraced DAYA she told that AMIT wanted to take her, at the meantime ABHIJEET called him and after hearing the all incident reached to his house, saw DAYA still trying to relax DIVYA and her NANNY from the bad they handled, after so much time spending with them, DIVYA slept with her NANNY so DAYA and ABHIJEET sat at terrace and discussed about that matter,

DAYA: yaar ab kiya hoga, DIVYA buht darr gayii hay aur us ki NANNY bhi.

ABHIJEET: do teen Constable lagwa do ghar per, ho sakta hay us nay daranay kay liyey aisa kiya ho, wesay main malum karwa chuka hun wo Jail say apni saza poori ker kay bahar aa gaya hay.

DAYA: yaar samajh nahi aa raha, khair kal subah main thora late aaon ga.

ABHIJEET: haan theek hay, aur ab tum bhi ja ker aaram karo, kub say aisay he pareshan ho rahay ho, sub theek ho jayey ga, ok, gud nite.

DAYA: haan, gud nite boss.

After ABHIJEET exit, DAYA checked DIVYA room and after seeing her in sleep moved to his room and wanted to take a sleep.

 Next morning DAYA wakes up and after getting ready himself, moved after so many days to drop DIVYA at her school, DIVYA looking happy after moving with his Uncle who is very much dear to her, she enjoyed her journey very much, when they reached, she hugged DAYA and after say her bye with smile moved inside the school, DAYA moved his quallis towards bearue. ABHIJEET before his reaching, placed 2 Constables at his house so he was quite relaxed and after DAYA coming at bearue, told him about that so he was also satisfied with his frnd help, they were busy in their work, at afternoon DAYA gets a call from his house, he picked it.

DAYA: hello, kiya hua RICHA???

RICHA (in cry): sahib wo DIVYA baby aaya nahi tou main nay school phone kiya, wo log bol rahay hain kay DIVYA baby ko koi lay gaya.

DAYA (in shock): kiya, dimagh theek hay, acha ruko.  

He cutted the call and dialing DIVYA School Number, they said that DIVYA went with his Father by herself after recognizing him as his father and the guy had sum evidence that he was DIVYA's Father so they were allow him to take her daughter.

DAYA was in anger, he called ABHIJEET who was outside for some work with VIVEK and then moved to School as early as he could, after reaching, he saw ABHIJEET waited for him there, so he, ABHIJEET and VIVEK moved inside, talked to Management and after listening and watching every evidences, they backed to their position.

DAYA (tears in his eyes): boss, najany kahan hogi DIVYA?

ABHIJEET (consoling tone): yaar, ghabrao mut, abhi saaray shehr ki naaka bandi karwa detay hain, wo DIVYA ko shaehr say bahar nahi lay ja payey ga.

DAYA: pata nahi yaar, DIVYA wesay hee itni dari hui thi. ab tou pata nahi kya haal hua hoga us ka, aur AMIT!

ABHIJEET: VIVEK aisa karo, her akhbar aur news channel mein DIVYA ki picture day do, kay jo bhi is bacchi ko kahein per bhi dekhy, foran CID ko khabar karay, picture DAYA kay ghar say lay lena.

They all tried a lot but the RESULT was same, no news about DIVYA, here DAYA had going through a bad mental n physical phase, Team also felt DAYA was totally cut off from his work mentally n physically, ABHIJEET is always there to supports him, but obviously with the passage of time he really tensed about DIVYA and about DAYA as well, even from past two days DAYA did not take meal told to him by DIVYA NANNY so he moved to his house, discussing about the recent and then added,

ABHIJEET: RICHA, kuch khanay ko tou lao???

DAYA: haan ABHI ko bhook lagi hogi.

ABHIJEET (instantly): aur tumhein!

DAYA: mujhay bhook nahi hay yaar, jub tak DIVYA nahi mil jati, (tears in voice) main!

ABHIJEET (interrupts in rash): bhooka rahun ga, good, RICHA rehnay do, main chalta hun, bye.

DAYA (confuse n behind him): ABHIJEET, arry yaar.

But he rushed away, DAYA was bit sad because he knew ABHIJEET will also don't take meal probably tonight.  At next morning, a guy came to bearue and asked from the security officer that he wants to meet some official person now and he has something to tell them , security guard called inside and permitted him to moved inside after granted from ACP, the guy moved, here inside bearue,  ACP welcomed him with.

ACP: main ACP PRADYUMAN hun, aap???

GUY: Sir mera naam Dr. ASHOKE hay, main is Picture (watch him DIVYA picture pasted at NP) kay baaray mein kuch batana chahta hun.

ABHIJEET came near, ACP n he exchanged glance, DAYA was absent right now, ABHIJEET asked.

ABHIJEET: jee kahyey, kya aap nay is bacchi ko kahein dekha hay?

Dr. ASHOKE: arry dekha, main nay is ka ilaaj kiya hay.

ABHIJEET: ilaaj!

Dr. ASHOKE: Sir main aaj he DHERADHONE say aaya hun aur jub pichlay teen din kay papers dekh raha tha ek khaber ko dhoondtay huay tou is item per nazar pari, wahan DHERADHONE mein meray pass ek aadmi aaya, buht ghabraya hua tha, kehnay laga kay us ki bacchi buht bemar hay, tou main usay dekhnay chalun, phir wo mujhay wahan say (take pause) aankh mein patti baandh ker lay gaya.

ACP: aankh mein patti!

Dr. ASHOKE: Sir wo clinic band honay kay baad aaya tha, main us waqt jaany hee wala tha (scare) us kay pass gun thi.

ABHIJEET: acha, tou kiya wo bacchi?

Dr. ASHOKE: haan wo kafi beemar hay, koi sadma laga hay usay, buht ro rahi thi, baar baar behosh ho jati, kisi uncle uncle ko aawazein deti, main nay us kay baap say kaha bhi kay us kay uncle ko bulwa lo, magar Sir wo mujahy gun dikha ker bola, jitna kaha hay karo, main nay bacchi ko treatment day di hay, per us ka bachna, agar aisi hee halat rahi tou buht mushkil hay.

ACP: kiya aap humein wahan lay ja saktay hain?

Dr. ASHOKE: Sir meri aankh per patti bandhi hui thi, tou ye batana tou mushkil hay, magar haan meray clinic say us jagah ka fasla 4/5 km say zyada nahi hoga, beech mein ek ghanti bajnay ki bhi aawaaz sunai di, jesay mandir mein hoti hay.

ACP (to ABHIJEET): ABHIJEET tum DAYA aur FREDDIE ko lay ker wahan jao aur dekho, Dr. ASHOKE ko bhi lay jao…

ABHIJEET: jee Sir.

He instantly called DAYA n FREDDIE, tells them all and after preparation all moved to DHERADHONE with Dr. ASHOKE too, DR took them to his clinic first, ABHIJEET took help by the local police specially for naka bandi, he also tell them to bring a MAP at clinic, after their arrival, he saw the MAP after placing it on Quillas bonut, he said,

ABHIJEET (to DAYA): yaar 4/5 km tou zyada nahi hain, matlab isi area kay ander wo hay, magar!

He turned towards DR and asked in tension.

ABHIJEET: kiya aap humein direction bata saktay hain, matlab kis taraf say gayey thay, left say ya right say?

Dr ASHOKE: Sir ye kehna tou mushkil hay, kyunaky meri aankh per tou patti thi.

DAYA: boss, ek kaam kartay hain, main aur tum left side chaltay hain aur FREDDIE ko police party kay sath right per bhejtay hain, AMIT aur DIVYA ko pehchanny ka koi masla nahi tou DR ko yahein chor detay hain.

ABHIJEET: nahi DAYA, DR ko sath lena paray ga, kyunkay wo ghar pehchany ga.

DAYA: haan ye tou hay.

ABHIJEET: aik min, (he asked to police) yahan per kis taraf mandir hay?

POLICE: Sir left side per ek chota sa mandir hay.

ABHIJEET: chalo.

 Quillas and police jeep moved towards left direction with the Dr, after 5 km, DAYA stopped the Quillas, he saw ABHIJEET and ABHIJEET looked at Dr who looks so confuse, at last he said.

Dr. ASHOKE: Sir meray liyey aisay batana buht mushkil hay kay ghar kaun sa tha, meri aankhun ki patti tou us nay ghar kay ander ja ker kholi thi.

DAYA (in rash): matlab itni der say tum humein pagal bana rahay ho, pata hay wo bacchi kitni important hay, beti hay meri wo (tears in voice) koi ihsaas hay ya aisay hee pagal samjh liya hay.

ABHIJEET relaxed him after placing his hand on his shoulder and signaled him to wipes his tears who are anxious to rolled over his checks, he looked towards window, Dr looked also tensed, ABHIJEET told the Dr.

ABHIJEET: dekhyey ye buht zaruri hay, kuch tou dekha hoga, soch tou lejyey, koi nishan, ghar ka color, kuch tou.

Unexpectidely Dr exclaimed in loud voice.

Dr. ASHOKE: arry wo raha us bacchi ka baap.

DAYA instantly opened the door and nabbed him with great force, ABHIJEET, FREDDIE and police party behind them, DAYA slapped him with extreme force, police party as well ABHIJEET tried a lot and out him from DAYA irony hands. DUO rushed towards inside and after seeing DIVYA, DAYA keel over for few second, ABHIJEET clutched his arm and pat on his shoulder and signaled him to take DIVYA and moved to Hospital instantly, he engaged FREDDIE and an inspector with him, DAYA moved forward, after clutching DIVYA, some of his tears cant restrict now and fell on DIVYA face, they moved fast, here ABHIJEET grabbed AMIT and moved out with rest of the people presented there. he takes him to MUMBAI in bearue, here DAYA with FREDDIE also moved with DIVYA to MUMBAI after initial treatment.

Here AMIT on confession chair after hard treatment of ABHIJEET, he said in crying.

AMIT: haan main ek acha insaan nahi, main bura hun, buht bura, per main bura baap tou nahi hun, sach sir, meri biwi ko mujh say buht saari pareshaniyaan hongi, ye bhi saheh hay kay main usay maarta tha, tang karta tha, shak karta tha, lekin main nay kabhi apni beti ko nahi maara, wo mujh say darti thi, shayed apnay maa ko mujh say maar khatay huay dekh ker, magar main us say buhat pyaar karta hun, wo mei beti hay, kya aap ko wo phatay aur kharab haalun mein mili thi??? kya wo bhooki thi??? nahi na, Sir main usay kabhi nuqsan nahi pohanchata, DAYA nay usay buht pyar diya, buht khayal kiya, main nay in chaar dino mein apni beti ki DAYA say attachment dekhi, us ka dard dekha, bina rishtay kay bhi wo juray huay hain, per Sir kya aap DAYA ko kahein gay kay wo usay kabhi kabhi mujh say milnay day day, main usay bilkul nahi chuon ga, kuch la ker bhi nahi dunga, bus ek nazar dekh lunga, (grabbed ABHIJEET hand) aap ko bhi DAYA buht chahta hay, wo aap kay liyey jaan bhi day sakta hay, aap us ko bolein gay na Sir, main bura baap nahi hun Sir, sach, mai.

ABHIJEET saw him, his own hand which is still in AMIT grip and little wet with AMIT tears and look at DAYA who was at the door and after ABHIJEET look, moved outside completely with teary eyes. FREDDIE and VIVEK also had tears in their eyes, ABHIJEET met him at night in Hospital, DAYA was quiet but after few minutes he said.

DAYA: ABHI, mera khayal hay DIVYA ko apnay baap kay pass hee rehna chahyey, AMIT saheh kehta hay, MORESHA say us kay jitney bhi issues thay, magar apni beti ko wo dewanun ki tarah chahta hay, main nay DIVYA kay munh say behoshi mein PAPA suna hay, wo kabhi kabhi neend mein bhi ye kehti hay, aur yaar uncle tou uncle hee hota hay na, phir main shayed wesay us ka khayal na rakh paon. main!!

ABHIJEET pulled him and hugged him tightly, he knew about DAYA, DAYA really need that hug, his tears silently absorbed on his buddy shoulder. he called AMIT and gave her daughter to him with so many warnings, DIVYA was not ready but DAYA told him that he n her ABHI uncle moved for some office purpose to another city for 3 months, its quite difficult to take her with them because she had a school, so AMIT take care of her with her NANNY, she was little scared with her dad but DAYA gave him his number, told FREDDIE and VIVEK to check her regularly and after that four days experience DIVYA also relaxed that her Papa is not bad for her whereas had many issues with her mom. She moved with her father after so many promises taken by DAYA and DAYA was totally did everything in force, ABHIJEET take him to his house just to relax him for some time, he said.

ABHIJEET: DAYA aa ja yaar, kuch kha lay, tu nay kub say saheh tarah nahi khaya aur main nay bhi Subah say kuch nahi khaya hay, plz yaar!

He knew his Please always successfully played its role, DAYA back on his place,  both started eating… after few bite,  DAYA stopped his hand.

DAYA: wo mujhay bhool tou nahi jayey gi na ABHI?

ABHIJEET: nahi, hum usay milnay jatay rahein gay.

DAYA did not say anything, he feels still lousy and sad, he moved to guest room, after an hour ABHIJEET opened his room door and saw him lying on bed in deep sleep but his tears still in his face and on that doll which he had in his arms because DIVYA forgets it to take and DAYA took it from her house in sadness, ABHIJEET felt sorrow and moved outside, he knew that after sum time DAYA came back,  but right now it's really PAINFUL for him.

 

 

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