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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 1:39am | IP Logged
Ohhh my god I love ittt!!! Please update the next part sooonn!!! :)

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hey this part is very very nice one 

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great one dear
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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tans_sugar_babe

Ohhh my god I love ittt!!! Please update the next part sooonn!!! :)


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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 7:10pm | IP Logged
Author's Note : Well here you guys! you wanted Arnav, here he is! With his Shabam of an entry! Tongue I hope you guys like it. Thanks for reading in advance! Guys, this argument that Arhi had is TODAY. Khushi's Birthday is not today. Tht wuz a flashback tht I will finish later as the story grows more.

Khushi opened the door and stared, her eyes open wide in shock and her mouth hanging.
    "Asan kyun ghooraath ho?? Kabhi hum ko nahi deekwa ho kya?? Hum hai Mami! Aur tumheri Sasuma! Turda respectwa karna sekhalo. Hai nay toh. Pata nahi kaha say chale aat thi hai. Ab hatwo bei ya pure saame humie ko stare karthi rahogi??, " Mami yelled shoving past Khushi.
    "Maaf kardigye ga Mamiji. Woh aap itna saamne lekar ayi...," Khushi stammered, rudely interrupted by Mami.
    "Aur nahi toh kya?? Tumhara liye nahi na! Raizada ghar ke bahuria ho yahi kaafi hai. Aur yeh saab to is ke liye hai," proclaimed Mami.
    "Kis ke liye Mamiji?," questioned a, now curious Khushi.
    "Arrey baba! Wahi! Jo soonwa ehi ghar mein Entry kargi," she continued to explain further when she saw the look of confusion on Khushi's face, " Arrey! Humara bahuria! Soonwa to be Daughter In-Law!". "Ab toh Arnav bitwaa ke bhi shaadi hogaya hai. Woh baat alag hai ki Arnav bitwaa ka tastewa badle gaya hai. Phelen toh kitna achaa khassa tha Arnav bitwaa, per pata nahi kya hogiwa, " Mami said staring at Khushi with scanner eyes which made Khushi feel that Mami would find out exactly why Mr. Raizada had agreed to marry. Especially her, the one person he could not stand.
    Nahi nahi! Hum kyun daar rahi hai? Ab toh hum Mrs. Raizada hai nah? Toh phir! Hume bhi na unko tera sahi ek akdoo sadu sa mood leke chalna chiye! Toh longe hum se be daar ga! She mentally applauded herself at her great idea smiling slightly. Arrey nahi nahi. Hume unko tere se na bhan na hai!! Haye haye sucho?! Humara bhi mooh unko tere sai hamesha tareeda rahi ga?? Hai Devi Maiyya! Hume maaf kardige. Hum bhi na pata nahi kya soche tha ratha hai. Chale Khushi bhag ja yahan, iske pehle Mamiji aur tumhe daat.
    "Mamiji, hum abhi aate hai. Hume lakdta hai ke hum apna phone kamre me bhool gaye. Ek minute," Khushi told Mamiji.
    " Hain hain. Kam karna pardta gaya toh bhaag ne lagyi? Jao jao, koi baat nahi. Hum apne Akash bitwa ke shaadi ka green singal ko kuch nahi hone dengiye. Yeh shaadi toh hoke hei rahi gi," Mamiji exclaimed.
    Khushi walked to their room shaking her head. Yeh Mamiji bhi na. Arrey shaadi ko masak nahi hai. Inko toh bus apne bahuria chaaiye. Aur uske liye inta saaman bhi liye hain. Par ab tak lardki toh nahi choose kar pa rahi hain Akash ki liye. Jo bhi lardki woh Akash ko dheekaha harian hai, woh mana kar dethi hai. Ab assa hota rahi toh Akash ki shaadi ka plan toh pakka cancel. Toh phir Mamiji kya karengi?? Hayi Devi Mayyia, yeh jo bhi Akash ko nah, tohdra sah akel teh doh.
    Khushi walked into the room and quickly walked to her phone. She picked it up and turned it on. There were no new messages. Disappointed, she also checked the missed calls. Shaayad phone kiya ho toh?? There were not any new missed calls. In frustration she threw the phone on the bed.
    Glaring at it she said " Jaaiye. Aap ko nahi phone karna hain nah? Toh phir theek hai. Hume ko farak nahi pardtha hai. Mathe kariye. Aab toh na aap phone karengi bhi toh hum nahi uthengi!". With that she walked out of the room only to backtrack at the same speed she had walked out. Hum na assa karethi hai, ki hum apna phone apne saath raakthi hai. Toh phir jab woh phone karengi, toh hume aur maasa aayga jab hum nahi utahengi. WahiKhushi, tu kabse intni smart hogaie?? and she walked out of the room to the dinner table since Naniji had called her urgently, with the phone in her hand, a smile on her face thinking about her "evil plan".
    ~~~~~~~~~Scene Shift~~~~~~~~      

"Aaj jiska bhi phone aayi, tun ignore kaerna. Mujhe kise sah bhi nahi baat karni. Samjayh tum?!" he roared.

The worker nodded his head to show that he understood and stood there, waiting for the owner of the company to finish.

Arnav turned around to glare at the worker.

"Tum abhi tak yahan hi ho? Tumhe koi aur kaam nahi hai kya? Jao hath joa yahan sei. Aur yaad rahi, no phone calls and no visitors. Mein abhi thodre dare mein jaa rahon hoon aur yeh baat tumhe kisie ko baatane ki zaaruwaat nahi ha. Tum bas jo bhiphone call mere leyiye aiye usko tum mere cabin tak forward kardena. Now get out!" Arnav ended.

"Gi Sir, aap jasaa kahan," replied the worker and quickly walked out the office thinking, Lagta hai Sir aaj bhoot gusse mein hain. Shyaad bhabhiji se fight ho gayi ho, smirking at the thought.

Arnav paced around his room. Yeh ho kya raha hai?, he questioned himself. Iss lardki nai toh mujhe paagal kar diya hai. Main toh is se sirf yahi puche raha tha ki mera handkerchief kaha hain. Phir jab bhaas kar nah lagi, toh maine bhi jaab de diya. Toh kya kare thi hai? Ek daam se lardne lagi mujhse! Pata nahi apne aap ko kya samaje thi hai, he muttered to himself.

Glancing at the clock he saw that it was 8 o'clock in the morning. Matlab yeh muj se itni shooba lard rahi thi? Theek hai Mrs. Khushi Singh Raizada, ab dehkna, Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada ka kamal. Tum muhese theek se baat nahi kar sakte na? Toh phir ab tum jujhese baat hi nahi koargi, he thought decisively. Whipping out his cell phone, he saw that he already had two missed calls from his wife. Smirking he turned off his phone. Pata nahi kya sahmaj thi hai apne apko. Shaadi kiya hai maine iss se par iska yeh matlab toh nahi hai key eh sach mein mere biwi hai. Maine bhas yeh shaadi Di ke leye kit hi aur ye baat ushe patahai.Choordho! Khood toh pagal hain mujhe bhi kar daaji, he mummered, finally sitting down and getting his work out.

 The time started to pass by and Arnav kept working. His phone was still off so he had not seen any of the calls Khushi had made. He looked up at the time.

Oh no! 7:30 toh yahi baj gaya. Mujhe toh aaj hotel bhi jaana hai, meeting ke liye. Kitne baaje ppch na tha? Shyaad 9 o'clock pe. Chalo abhi neekle longha toh jaldi se pooch jaonga. Khushi ko phone kar ke baatha deetha hone ke mein kahaana pe nahi a raha hoon. Aur ki who mera wait na kare, he thought and reached for the phone. His hand stopped just when he was going to turn his phone on. Nahi mein kyun baataon. Who mere biwi nahi hai na. Wsney subad kaha than a, ki who mere wife nahi hai jo mera kaam karahi. Toh phir theek hai. Agra who mere wife nahi hai toh who mera intezar kyun karah gi? Usko kya farak pardtha hai ki mein kahoon ya peeyon. Koi baat nahi. Main nahi phone karonga. Who cares?! Usko Di ek baar bholengi khalo toh who kahlagi, Arnav reasoned with himself and went to attend to his meeting without calling Khushi.

On his way out, he heard the office phone ring. He was going to pick it up when the worker came and picked it up. Arnav nodded slightly telling him to continue telling the story he was told to share with anyone who called, in the morning.

Author's Note: I hope you guys liked this. I know not much happened to move the story along, but it wuz rele important for you guys to figure out wut wuz happening with Arnav. Tomorrow is friday... so i mite update tomorrow too!

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Edited by aquablue17 - 29 September 2011 at 9:26pm

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 7:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vaishali667

hey this part is very very nice one 

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 7:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sosweetsumi

great one dear
do continue
bye sumi


glad you liked it !
nice to meet you sumi
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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 7:38pm | IP Logged
Nice part. Didn't at all expect mami to be at the door. Arnav bhi angry, khushi bhi angry. But am a bit confused, argument was when? I thot he left without saying anything? Or is another flashback to come?

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