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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
Beautiful update...
Cont soon...

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Posted: 15 November 2011 at 12:51am | IP Logged
exceptionally well written naz ( well i really hope i can call u that Embarrassed) u indeed hv a very beautiful name just like ur exceptional capability of penning down emotions...!! hats off to u naz bcos not 4 a sec it seems like this is ur 1st ever attempt...!! tremendous job!!Hug

@fiza- thanks a lot 4 updating it dr...Hug but i m still hell angry with u coz of GMYH...

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Posted: 15 November 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged
how thye fight!!!

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Posted: 17 November 2011 at 7:17am | IP Logged
Nice part

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Lovly update.

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Posted: 17 November 2011 at 8:33pm | IP Logged
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Thanks soo much for all good wishes and prayersSmile...and sorry for being this late but again i am not the one to be blamedEmbarrassed...but  to compensate here is another update by me again...hope u guys like it the way u liked the previous one...thanks for bearing with the late updates will try to be regular from now onSmile...!

@ suja...dear Naz restaurant to nijei chole tomar kache ashe, address neye aar ki kaaj tomar boloEmbarrassed...!

@anila...thanks soo much for your continuous good wishes prayers and DhamkisSmile...hope this update satisfy you...enjoy...!

@Palz...thankyou for your lovely commentSmile...im overwhelmed...glad you like my nameEmbarrassed...and sure you can call me Naz Smile...!

                             Enjoy update Embarrassed...!


It was noon Mayank and Nupur were heading to meet the next girl in Mayank's car.

 

M---waise tumne abhi tak mujhe details nahi diye ke hum kisse milne ja rahe hai.

N--uff itne utawle kyun horahe ho'ja to rahe hai na khud hi pooch lena.

M'arre yaar ajeeb musibat hai ab kuch to pata hona chahiye na'akhir shaadi karni hai..aur yaha mujhe naam tak nahi pata...ab yeh kya baat huyi.

N'oye teeli tum first meeting ke liye ja rahe ho'waha koi mandap nahi saja ke jate hi shaadi karni hai'aur intro bhi I think first meet mein hi hoti hai'to thora sabar rakho'tum to lagta hai ghori pe sawaar ready hi ho'.and giggles.

M'hogaya'..accha atleast naam hi bata do.

N'oho mr dulhe raja ko kitni besabri hai apne hone wali ke naam janne ki'.accha chalo tum bhi kya yaad karoge ke kis dildar dost se pala parha'.naam bata hi deti hun..uska naam Tamanna Rajvansh hai'.Rajvansh industries uske father ki hai..woh apne father ki business sambhalti hai..

M'not bad bhoothnath'and smiles a broad smile.

N'ha tum bhi kya yaad karoge ke kya rishta dhunda hai..lekin tum manner less insaan ek thanks nahi bola jaata.

M'o hello'not bad rishtey ke liye nahi kaha..

N'phir..

M'arre akhir tumhare mun se dost woh bhi dildar dost'yeh news nahi hai kya'.isiliye kaha'.waise Tamanna yeh bhi not bad han'lets see yeh mere dil ki Tamanna hai kya'.aur kya kaha tumne tumhe thanks'madam aap koi free mein nahi karrahi yeh sab okay'pura fees liya woh bhi bina koi discount diye phir thanks kis liye..

N'makes a straight face'accha thik hai ab bak bak kam karo aur jaldi chalo woh tumhare dil ki Tamanna punctuality ki misaal hai'aur jis speed se tum chal rahe ho pata chala jab tak hum pahuchenge usne kisi  aur se shaadi karli aur tumhare dil ki Tamanna aansoo mein beh gaye..

M'mun accha na sahi kam se kam baat to acchi kiya karo'bhootni kahi ki'.ab kya gari urha ke leke chaloon..

N'han aur tumhare mun se to jaise phool jharte hai nai'apni shakal dekhi hai kabhi'bacche darr jaye aisa hai.

M'lekin bhoothnath to tum ho..

N---opens her mouth to say something but mayank cuts her off saying'

M'mun bandh karo ander lunch karte waqt kholna'and points her towards the hotel that they reached'.their meeting place'.ab chale bhoothnathhh and giggling comes out of car.

N'tumhe main dekh lungi teeli'jale huye kaale teeli'

M'anytime lekin abhi pait ki jalan meeta le'chale'mujhe sach mein bhookh lagi hai yaar..

N'bhukkar kahin ke'yaha khana khane nahi larki dekhne aaye hai.

M'accha matlab larki dekhne par khana mana hai kya..yeh tradition kabse shuru hua'

N'tum thori der apna mun bandh nahi rakh sakte..

And they proceed towards the table booked for them while fighting and pulling each others leg'.

 

They approached their table were a girl in her mid twenties wearing formals seemed waiting for them''nupur gestured mayank  through her eyes'''..mayank observed her from head to toe and whispered'..

 

M'nupur pakka na yehi hai.

N'irritated'.mayankkk

M'arre nahi yaar isse dekh kar lagta nahi shaadi ke liye aaye hai'lagta hai kisi business deal ke liye..and smiles a naughty smile..

N'mayank woh abhi shaadi nahi karne aayi hai..bas milne aayi hai'.aur seedhe office se aayi hai isiliye'..waise tumhe larki pasand karni hai..uske kapre nahi'and glares'ab chalo'.

M and N----hello'

Girl'.gives a stern look and says...hi hello ka time khatam'.aap log pure 5 mins 30 secs late hai'so can we come up to the exact point as i don't want to beat around the bush..

M'face hungs open and gives a look to nupur as kya cheez hai yeh..

N---sure why not'.and she introduces both..

N---mayank yeh hai Tamanna aur Tamanna yeh hai Mayank..

T---its Tam only Tam'

N---right'.and whispers mayank'ab tumhare dil ke tamanna ka kya hoga'yeh to dil ki Tam nikli and suppresses her smile'.

M'gives a look tumhe mein baad mein dekhta hoon..and smiles to Tam..

T---so kya ab hum interview shuru kare'

M and N'interview'.

Tam---han jo bhi formalities hai jaldi pura karo mujhe doosre meeting attend karni hai.

M---formalities?

T'yeh kya laga rakkha hai'mera echo sound karna bandh karo aur shoot.

M---to nupur yaar yeh larki hai ya AK-47.

N'glares and continues to Tam'.waise tum kyun nahi shuru karti'yeh thora sharmila hai u see'

M'gives her a look as its gonna be her last day on earth'

T---I don't mind infact I love to be in first place'always'.and starts shooting mayank like AK-47 ( mayank's pov).

T'kya karte ho'kitna kama lete ho'ghar mein kaun kaun hai'yeh sab mujhe janne mein interest nahi'.kyun ke tum jo bhi karo mujhe koi farq nahi parta'shaadi ke baad ghar ka charge lena hai'. Kitna kama lete ho yeh bhi zaroori nahi kyun ke jitna main kamati hun aur hai woh 7 pusht baith kar khaye to khatam nahi hoga isiliye farq nahi parhta'.ghar mein kaun hai yeh bhi zaroori nahi kyun ke shaadi ke baad mere ghar mein rehna hai'.ghar damaad ban kar'.jo zaroori hai who yeh ke'shaadi ke baad badal na tumhe hai mujhe nahi'.ghar badal na'life style badal na kyun ke I don't like ur dressing sense'.and makes a face'..tumhare ghar mein jo bhi hai tum unhe mere ghar mein la sakte ho'.han mujhe apne life mein koi interference nahi chahiye bas'.waise ghar ka kaam dekh lete ho na'.agar nahi to abhi se shuru kar do time hai seekh jaoge'.aur yeh sab isiliye keh rahi hoon kyun ke I approve u'shaadi material types ho chal jaoge'.waise bhi kisi na kisi gadhe ko approve karna hai kyun ke dad peeche hi parh gaye hai'so why not u'..not bad'..atleast tumhe bardasht karna thora kam muskil hoga I think'.okay aaj se infact abhi se kaam shuru karo khud par'.aage main inform karwa dungi'wait for further instructions'.ab mujhe jaana hai'.tum log late aaye lekin mujhe meetings mein late hona hargiz pasand nahi'.see u byeee'.

 

 

And with this she flies away like a jet'.leaving Mayank and Nupur in daze'



Edited by valliyah - 24 November 2011 at 4:14am

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