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Posted: 31 October 2011 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
oh valiyah get well soon honey nd take care. Tongue

nd fiza its okay sweetheartSmile

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get well soon Valey
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Here is the update

Sorry haven't rplyd to u all…

U all know y..ramkhani repeat nhi ker rhi hoon

Sorry for delay valio is nt well thts ..

Lov ya all for liking n awein bhi..lol

Fiza n valioo

 

 

Chapter: 4

Mayank was sitting in the lounge, playing with remote, actually almost breaking the buttons with all the anger he has for himself he was pressing them…

NM: ab tum tu desert kha lo..moo bholay kyun bahitay ho

Mayank: hamesha yeahi kerti hai, galti khud ki hoti hai asay manipulate kerti hai k sab mjhy per aay..

SA: han tu tu bolny se pehly khabi sohcta hai

Mayank: han han woh tu  Phd ker k bolti hai…

SA: mayankkk

Mayank: ok fine…

He stod up n went inside the kitchen…to wch shilpa chukled…

Nupur was standing in her balcony facing the sky, finding an edge..she was watching the full moon today who was beautiful, glooming and the most soothing ..whn suddenly a bowl appears infront of her eyes..

She looked side way to found him beside her, without face her he was stnding beside her

Maaynk: mjhy pata hai I am a Greek God but abhi asay dekho gi tu yeah ice cream pori melt hojay gi..already woh meri hotness bardhst nhi ker sakti…

She looked at him un uter surprise n took the bowl from him…n sat on the bench there, whn he too accompany her

Mayank: chalo kam se kam is ice cream ki tu kismet achi hai, us ko dekh ker tum muskrat tu ho…

Nupur: yeah chocolate ice cream hai samjhy meri favt…

Mayank: mallom hai …..tum pehly tu asi nhi thi…

She looked at him and them turned back to sky in a flick of second, but his sight was moving in deep inside her…his special question in a soft tone was too much to take, plus his eyes who were not letting her gave time to handle herself, to hold her

Mayank: tum prove kya kerna chati hoo…

Nupur: kuch nhi…

Mayank: tu yeah pagal pan k attack atay hain tum ko…

Nupur: mein ny kaun sa pagal pan kerdiya ab..

Mayank: y r u working so much, n than why r u behaving like this

Nupur: I enjoy my work..and how I am behaving…

He was about to say sumthing whn her cell runged, she took it

Nupur: ji…oh thts gr8 ..yeah pls ek min hold  mein apka address note kerloo..

She put her bowl in his hand..n went to take the paper, n pen…

Mayank: jaldi ajao warna mein kaha raha hoon warna..

She came back..n sat down..

Mayank: ek min ap late hoti tu yeah kahtam hochuki hoti

Nupur: mayank plss,..tum yeah nhi kah sakty

Mayank: kyun

Nupur: tumhari aqal k sath sath yaadasht bhi gai…tum shayd bhol gay teeli k tum milk intolrence hai…

Mayank: booth nath ..tum tu antar yami ho….jaha tak mjhy yaad hai mein ny tumahin khabi nhi batya

Nupur: ha ha kasy bhol sakti hoon mein ….skool mein tum ny meri ice cream chora ker kahi thi…

Mayank: aur tum ny duniya bhar ki galiyan di thi mjhy …itna hungma majaya tha uff….

Nupur: aur chori k result..u were on bed…

Mayank: zalim aurat kitni khusih hoti ho tu…

Nupur: mjhy aurat maat bolo…

Mayank: hain….kya..nupurrr ….yeah kab hoa..jab tak tum ko mein chor ker gaya tha tab tak tu tum larki thi..tu ab..he looked her from upto down teasingly…seriously hain

Nupur: wht do u mean…mein abhi bhi..i mean I am a girl..ullu ..

Mayank: tum kitni confused ho..abhi kahti ho aurat mat bolo abhi kahti hu mein larki hoon decide kerlo…

Nupur: mein ny kaha hai.. K DONOT CALL ME AURRAT..samjhy..

Mayank: ohh tu ab mjhy kasay pata ur nt ..he said pretending to be blushing

Nupur: u know what mayank..she said in scuh a soft tone n he turn to look at her …in shock…U R SICK IDIOT TEELI…dil tu chata hai k is teeli mein aga lag do….ufff..

Mayank: ab mein ny kya kiya..yeah baatein tu tum ny shoor ki thi..mein tu bechara America mein rehny k bad bhi Sharma rahy hoo..

Nupur: yea pakro she puted a envelope in his hand….aur is se baat kerna dil khol ker sari…

Mayank: yeah kiya hai..

Nupur: picture …larki ki

Mayank: tu mein kya kero

Nupur: shadi

Mayank: mjhy apni zindagi buhat payari hai tum se shadi..life insurance double kerni paray gi

Nupur: uff…is envolpe mein ek larki ki tasveer hai, kal 11 baajy us ko meray office mein mil layna agr tumhain tasveer pasnd hai tu…ab samjh aaya

Mayank: ooohhooo…..kholo. he asked full on excited...sigh..he took a deep breath..closed his eyes..

Nupur: tum kitna over react ker rahy hoo..nautanki

Mayank: booth nath..meri dream girl bhi hosakti hai is k andhar…see my heart is racing…he took her hand n placed it on his heart..n leaned towards her..she pulled her hand back from his hold to wch he smiled ..

Nupur: uff..hindi film k hero bhi itna over react nhi kerta…

He opened the envolped and pulled out the piture..n smiled

Mayank: wao she is so beautiful….look at her eyes wao beautiful..he said dreamingly

Nupur: itna sara liner aur mascara lagay ga koi tu her kisi ki ankhein itni ahci lagy gi

Mayank: nupur mei us k shape ki nhi depth ki baat ker raha hoon..kuch tu hai in ankho mein

Nupur: tu us ki ghari mein doop ker marjo na…

Mayank: kal milta hoon …hosakta hai waqi maar jao…uff she is to pretty..i like ur choice booth nath…tu tumhain tu khush hona chaiy bora kyun lag raha hai

Nupur: mjhy kyun bora lagy ga…shadi kero..mera profit do aur meri jan choro….jitna jaldi hoo..

Next Day:

Nupur: hey priya..he is mayank..mayank she is priya…

He forward his hand , she was blushing like hell, she was smiling checking him all lost, and mayank was enjoying it smilingly…supresing his laugh

Mayank: hey priya….

Priya: haayyy…

This haayy was more than a prise rather to be a greeting, nupur was in uter shock how cum a girl can react like this…

Mayank: nupur its ok we will talk..ALNOEEE…

Nupur: han..tu ..sure u do…

She left like a speedy jet…

..

Mayank: so priya..how r u

Priya: pehly k tu pata nhi…per ab im too good…

Mayank: u know why we r meeting

Priya: ofocurse I know..n I have no problems with u

Mayank: u donot know even me…

Priya: no I knw..ur the most handsum looking guy I every saw…tum bulkily rajni kant ki tarah strong ho, tumhain pata hai I adore him…

Mayank: KYA….

Priya: wasy tu mein PRABHU DEVA ki bhi buhat bari fan hoon…uff jab woh dance kerta hai tu lagt ahi k bus us ko hi dekhti jaoo

Mayank: acha…apki choice kafi hat ker hai….ap mjhy prabhu deva ki tarha dance krny ko tu nhi kahaein gi na

Priya:  nhi nhi woh tu mjhy pata hia u cant dance…

Mayank: yeah ap ko kis ny kaha ..he asked a bit annoyed

Priya: nupur ji nay

Mayank: nupur ki tu…he said under hi breath….nhi priya I can dance ..nupur ko thori kuch pata hai….

Priya: acha tu u can dance like prabhu deva…hey hey…ur such a super hero

Mayank: really

Priya: han na…bulkily rajni kanth ki tarha …wasy tu Ra-one bhi hai..but woh pass time pas hai..…magar jo rajni dada hi woh koi bhi nhi

Mayank: ya nhi ra-one ..i mean Shahrukh bhi nhi

Priya: tum ny us ko dekhna nhi hai kya..asay koi glasses uter ker tu dekhy….nobody cant do it….uff…..tum yeah tu kerlo gay na

Mayank: han han kyun nhi practice kerolo ga…robert ki traha baat bhi kerlo ga..prabhu ki tarah dance bhi

Mayank yeah tu kaha pas gaya hai…he said uder his breath

Priya: hay ur sach mein my hero…the only super hero…khiar payr mein itna tu kar na hi parta hai

Mayank: han han….bulkil…pyar mein mjhy rani kanth bana paray ga….. chalo we will meet soon..oki bye

Priya: ya sure..we will …

She left n mayank went inside to nupurs office without trying to knck

Mayank: uff yeah kya tha bhi

Nupur: mayank I m in my office…

Mayank: hey rajat (sectary) ..how r u ..abhi ur mame is in meeting , ok

Rajat: sure sir…ma'am I'll cum later..

Nupur: no u wont…Mayank out cum later….mayankkk..uth yaah se

Mayank: kyun utho..kissi kism k pieces tha yeah jo tum ny meray galy bandy ny ka socha tha…us ko mein rajni kanth laga…

With that not only nupur burst in to laugh while rajat to…mayank glared at him n nupur signal him to leave..

Nupur: wah wah…dhish dhish rajni kathn…wah mayank…lol…oh my GOD…mein tu tum ko teeli kahti thi tum tu super hero nikaly…south ki films kab join ki mjhy kyun nhi bataya…yeah cheting hai

 uff just image fiza ko  kitnay sar sound effects likh ny paray gay…dash dish tht…ufff…..

Mayank: nupur..i'll kill u ..yeah sab tum ny jan boj kerkiya hai…

Nupur: mein ny kya kiya ..tumhar requirement mein yeah nhi tha k tumhain south Indian nhi chaiy…us ki ankho mien dekhty tu doob jatay …ab kiya hua..tumahin tu shakl ki achi chay thin a…aqal k baray mein u did'nt  mentioned

Mayank: acha tu tum ny yeah jan boch ker kiya ..hai na..

Nupur: mein ny kuch jan boch kern hi kiya…ab mjhy kiya pata woh rajni kanth ko dekhay gi tum mein….tum ny kya apna chashma uter ker asay dekhay tha us ko…hain mayanak

Mayank: uper se us ko Ra one bas awein lagi…

Nupur: kya…was obivious hai after all she was feeling rajni dada in u..how handsum

Mayank: nupur its not funny….mein abhi anty se shikyat kerta hoon k tum ny kiya kya hai…

Nupur: jao jao super hero

She was laughing non stop….plus she wasn't alone, it was mayank' s home, n nupurs mom, shilpa n nup[ur all for laughing al together non – stop n mayank was turing to high on fire

Mayank: hasy hasy ap loog sab hasy

SA: wasy u deserve it …tun ny bhi tu list mein ksis super heroine k qualities likhi thi..tu tujhy bhi tu bana paray ga…lool……too good…dada…

Mayank: maaa..plss….anty ap bhi…

NM: aray mera beta..mein tujh per thori has rahi hoon..mein tu us larki per has rahi hoon kya idem tha…

Nupur: waasy mayank tum bhi has sakty hoo..mana rajni dada don't laugh sala, but tum tu prabhu deva bhi hoo..u can dance,.shukar us ny tum ko papu nhi bolo….i wish mein waha hoti ..is teeli ki ini wat…waha waha

She burst in to laugh n mayank threw the cushion on her, a smile appered on his face wch he was truly he was suppressing

Mayank: just imagine, mein rajni kanth…mein asa kyun hoon…he too join laugh….



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Extremely sorry friends for this late update, hope to compensate soonSmile...!

Thanks Fizu for always being there, great update as ususal...!



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Cascade jana-------- hilarious update as usual..
lol lol- ye mayur ki biz ki war kab end hogi??
they alws trying to fight with each other..
BY GOD- hehehehehehe nups ne ye kaisa ladki dhoond li mayu k liye..
GOD bachaye mayu ko us ladki se---lol lol lol

accha sun- why nups has given importance to her work...?? i mean thik hai-lekin wo kuch jaida he time de ahe hai waha..
btw kya nups mayu se payar karte hai??pata nehi kyun lekin mujhe aisa laagta hain.. mujhe laagta hai mayurek dustre sepyar karte hai lekin batana nehi chate...lol lol
ab jaida maat ddant mujhe - jo karna hai kar. age likh

alley hope next time we will get an update frm u
get well soon hun
love u both


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res :D

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so cute and funny. I love it

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Posted: 02 November 2011 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
Fiza APIII...
thank u sooo much for updating today...
u know na ke it made me laugh like...ROFLROFLROFL
issilye kehti hoon ke "GMYH" n yeh ff dono ek sath update kiya karo...
though m still lil sad for dat...
bt m sooo happy n laughing like dis ROFL ROFLROFL for dis update...
sooo thank u...
n i love U...Hug

will comment abt d part later...now m off to sleep...Sleepy


ps: VALLIYAH Api...GET WELL SOON...Hug

pps: iss bar toh Valliyah api apko apke health ne bacha liya lekin agli baar agar jaldi update nhi kiya na toh hum sab nhi chorne wale apko...Evil SmileEvil SmileEvil Smile


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