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Posted: 12 years ago
i loved it...😊
i loved it...πŸ˜ƒ
i sooo loved it...😳
By God...it feels sooo gr8888 n releived😎
after reading dis ff...😳
ek toh woh tension se bhari ff "Gar mujh ko yakeen hota"😳
uske baad yeh ff parhke dil ko kyaaa shanti milti hain...By God😳😳😳
FIZA API...apna woh "GMKYH" n "SRTM" hamesha ek sath update karna...😳
coz uss ff ki sari tension iss ff parhke gayab ho jati hain...πŸ˜†πŸ˜³πŸ˜†
dats why i loved it sooo much...😳
so again another most HILLAROUS part...πŸ€£πŸ‘πŸ€£
jst tooo good...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
kya tha woh...Daan karna bukho ko khana khilana , kanjoos rishtey karwane wali aunty , kali teeli , stick , bhoot nath , fair n lovely ki factory...🀣🀣🀣 πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£ πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£
main toh hasteπŸ˜†hasteπŸ˜† ro pari...🀣
dat was mind blowingly hillarious...🀣πŸ€ͺ🀣
issi liye main 3times parhke phir comment kar rahi hoon...πŸ˜†
ohhh hooo so Mr.Kali teeli i mean Mayank waited for Nupur!!!!!!! han!!!!!!πŸ˜‰
why m smelling something is cooking or already cooked between MayUr!!!!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰
saccchi!!!!!!😳 unke clg days ke bare mein sunke toh laga ke Mayank used to b very caring for Nupur n still is!!!!!πŸ˜‰
n d way both smiled n Mayank saying dat u want to live alone n calling her arrogant n all...😳
yeh sab kuch parh ke kahin na kahin i felt dat dey both hv feelings for each other or may b der was smthing for sure...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰
nhi toh har bar Mayank usse kyun kehta hain ke tum toh baas akeli rehna chahti hoon n all n uski jo list hain usse bhi ab mujhe yehi lagta hain ke woh kisi aur ladki se shadi nhi karna chahta issiliye itne sare requirements hain uske...πŸ˜‰
smwhr i think Mayank love her bt she didnt accept it...😳
may b m thinking too much...heheheπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
jo bhi hoon bt i loved it...😳
awesome update APIs...β­οΈπŸ‘β­οΈ
waiting eagerly for d next update...
love u 2 APIs lodsss...πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

ps: next update jaldi ok!!!!!!!!!😳 coz iss bar ap dono ne 2 updates ka time liya hain ek update dene ke liye sooo hamari jo pending update hain we want it asap!!!!!!πŸ˜‰
Edited by 18anila1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fiza,

awesome update dear.

loved it.

totalll hilarious update.

mein ny tu kafi mana kiy atha...per than...ab mom ki tu addat hai..daaan kerny gi, bhooko ko khana khilany gi...

nupur was grt ... poor mayankπŸ˜†

awww ...mayank was so sweet ... he has been waiting for her 45 min ... grt yaarπŸ˜‰

i appreciate himπŸ˜ƒ

ROFL ... Jhasi ki rani funny play ban gaya πŸ˜†... isse funny baat kuch aur ho sakta haiπŸ˜† kya

par iss baat hi pata chalta hai k mayur ka co-ordination kitna perfect hai😳

SA: list nhi check list...tumhain pata hai yeah larki dekhny jata hai tu check list per chk n cross kerta hai


hilarious πŸ˜†... ye to kamal ho gyaπŸ˜† ... mayank is total hatkeπŸ˜†

hilarious fighting ... i totally enjoyed their fighting ... kali teeli ... fair and lovely ka factory ... they are too muchπŸ˜†

OMG!!! ye kya ho gaya ... ek sweet si fight, kitna bara ho gaya ... aur mayank ne kuch jaida hi bol diya

n his words hurts her ... n mayank too hurt after saying that harsh word.

waiting for next update..😊

continue sson.😊

love u




Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wao that was too funny
Mayank us ki buri kar raha tha ya indirectly tareefπŸ˜†
I really Loved it
Thanks for pm 
cont soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
hey,
such a beautiful story...
all the conversations between mayur is really funny...
gopi06 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely updt fiza
loved mayur conv..bothe are funny
thanks for the pm
-DreamzGirl- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update lovely conversation
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Posted: 12 years ago
🀣🀣🀣
another hilarious update.
OMG !!!! how are they ever going to fall for each other if they keep using endearments like "teeli" & "bhootnath"??
🀣🀣🀣

Edited by shubhsArti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
by god kanjoosh rishtey wali aunty, bhootnath, chudail...aur kya kya naam se bulayegi ye dono ek dusre ko...aur Mayank ladhki cross check karke dekhta hey...phir toh ho gayi uski shadi...maine Mayank ko Nupur ki khubsurati ki tarif karte bahut baar dekha par yaha jaise ki uha kabhi nehi dekha... 🀣
ankein dekhi hain tu ny khabi apni...itni bari hain k char admi ghoom ker bahr aajy..🀣
aur baal...chirolai jasy🀣cut ker jahroo lagany k kam aay...actually cut kerny ki kiya zaroorat hai...zara chuk jao..wasy hi jahroo lag jay gai...per kamar mein tu tumhari pahtar haina...toot jay gi jhoko gi haina...🀣

kaha se aise idea lekar ate ho tum dono yaar...b/w mujhe wo jhansi ki rani wali play dekhni hey...🀣...loved the update...hats off both of u...aur aagle update thora jaldi kar dena...take care...

Edited by -ridionasis- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow fiza and valliyah...fantastic!!...another funfilledand hilarious update...keep up guys...enjoyed it a lot...:):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
truely amazing
their fights r soo luvly