SS Spirits of the nights(arni IPKKND last pg 34 - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it !!! It was just amazing !!!
Happy that they're together but waiting for Khushi to get up !!!
Thnx for the pm !!! Update soon !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
get up khushi..arnav neeeds u...he loves u so much!!1
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Posted: 12 years ago
tht is soo awesome love it  all 9 parts i love it
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its being a week Arnav was recovered ,he was worried for her as she was responding to his touch but not opening her eyes , he just plan to have her medical checkup again , the Dr found she had a small clot in her brain that is stopping her to open her eyes.

Arnav arranged the best DR team for the surgery,Dr team was 99% sure she will be fine after it will be removed.

her operation took place . she was still unconscious she was under anesthesia  it was being 12 hours she was gaining conscious slowly "bauji"

Arnav was sitting next to her holding her hand in his "Khushi"

Khushi: just slowly open her eyes she looked at him and pull away her hand

Arnav: just got up as he was excepting form her

buaji: khushi

Khushi;where i am where is Shyam?we met accident she just remember the last moment before closing her eyes .

Buaji: betiya

Khushi:where is he?

Buaji: here she just pull Arnav and made his stand in front of her

Khushi: Shyam he is not

Buaji: he is your husband 

Khushi: looked at him

Arnav : buaji he just pull her away "what are you doing ? she does not remember anything and you"

Khushi was looking at nani and anjali

Arnav: you just sleep dont take tension .he caress her 

Khushi felt his touch as if she hand sense it before .she just closed her eyes 

DR: came in he just examine her 

arnav told what blunder buaji had made ?

DR: ask him to take care of her himself not let any one else around her .

Arnav asked everyone to leave .

Khushi was looking at him on and off  she was trying to recollect him . his touch gave her goosebumps she was feeling strange , she needed rest he just made her sleep again

the next day 

as he was helping her to take the soup

Arnav: dont think please buaji na tou bus

Khushi: looked at him as he was sad "i really dont remember any thing"

Arnav: cup her face there was nothing to remember sweeti i just married you after you met accident, how will you remember me

Khushi:why?

Arnav: you will ask all question today?

Khushi: yes

Arnav: as you were hurt badly and for operation i had to travel with you so that is why

Khushi:why you marry a sick girl

Arnav: very difficult question 

Khushi: looked at him

Arnav: i was on dead bed my kidneys were failed , you were in the same hospital and i got your kidney ,you gave me life i gave you tit for tat.

Khushi:smiled  you cannot tell lies do you know that?

Arnav looked at her khushi placed her head on his heart . 

Khushi: few mins back when you were making me sleep i heard this beat and i remembered 

Arnav looked at her 

Khushi: shhh ghost 

Arnav: khushi

Khushi: i remember all what you did with me /

Arnav what i did he looked at her with open mouth

Khushi: you 

Arnav: i didnot do any thing  he shyly looked away

Khushi: jhoot 

Arnav: ok tell what i did ?

Khushi you stole heart of a girl on bed

Arnav: you

Khushi: what you thought?

Arnav: you get well first then i will tell you 

Khushi: you were in love with my spirit right 

Aranv: how you remember me ?

Khushi your touch and your heart beat  makes my heart restless 

Arnav: when you pull away your hand from mine i 

Khushi aap bohot bolta ha kissed him as she was thirsty for it for long she hand touch his lips many  time ,it just gave him a chilly feeling but this time the touch was warm.


Epilogue 


after few months

Arnav took her to her town,they both walked to the place which khushi liked the most "lasttime i came here and took pics but did was not able to see and she called me crazy now i will take pic and show her 


pull her next to him and click few pictures "now my spirit is real "


the end 

i am sorry i didnot do justice to this story ..as when i saw movie i was dishearten as it was same as my story ...so i stopped writing it ... i call my writing my baby and this was my neglected baby 

Edited by naddiya26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved it 2 d core.Arhi hav recovered & they united.Epilogue was d best.Now Anjali wil believe that Khushi is with him.Lovely picof Arhi.
This was ur best FF.So i won't believe that u cud not do justice 2 d story.
But 1 thing...u shud'nt hav neglected ur story just bcz some readers accused u of copying a film or just bcz a film resembles ur story.4 every writer her story is her baby.So neva ignore d story.It was a beautiful story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i loved this ss of urs sooo much... dnt gt disheartened dr... n d pic is awesome, i jst love it... 
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow yaaar after a long time updated thjis one...loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG..its ended..feeling sad..but loved it..loved how she still rem him..loved arhi alot..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww, what an ending, it was so cute and adorable. Thank you for the PM :D