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arta Goldie

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Posted: 20 April 2012 at 10:12am | IP Logged
good parts ,,,what's next ? :)

myviewprem IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 April 2012 at 7:41pm | IP Logged
Scene398 PRS and family leave to house

Police officer comes and PRS goes out to speak to him.

Police Officer: Maharaj, you here. Maharaj we could not find other kidnappers but we have done naka bhandi on roads

PRS in rage: What do you mean you cannot find other kidnappers?
PO: Sorry Sir, the crowd was huge and they all ran off

PRS irritated: Can I take my kids back home?

Police Officer: Yes Sirrr, now its safe. I will send police vans to lead your cars

PRS: Fine, catch those people immediately and I want report tomorrow morning

PO: Ok Sir

Arjun: I am very sorry Karan this all happened because of meee

Karan: No Arjun, its OK. Not your fault

PRS: Come angel and lifts Gunjan in his arms and helps Karan hold his shoulders and takes them to the car. Vikram, Manoj, Arjun and their personal security go with him.

Arjun: Sir, can I come along?

PRS: You will be late Arjun, go back home

Arjun: Please sir I will come till houseee

Arjun wants to make sure his siblings reach home safely and no other incident takes place. After all it was because of his negligence Gunjan was kidnapped he must have kept an eye on her and gone with her to restroom like he does with Raj. Today he realized how vulnerable and innocent Gunjan was although she acted bold and mature than her 10 years age. But in some matters she had no much knowledge and assumed what people told was the truth.

PRS: Okkk comeee

PRS and all leave. Just outside on road further end Gunjan sitting on PRS lap and watching outside

Gunjan shouts: See police auntyyy thereee daddyyy

All: Where?

Edited by myviewprem - 20 April 2012 at 7:42pm

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myviewprem IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 April 2012 at 9:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arta

good parts ,,,what's next ? :)
thanks pls wait for next parts as i cannot reveal right now
myviewprem IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 April 2012 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
Scene399 Karan's leg fractured

Gunjan shows far off: There there next to lamp post there down the road catching auto

Manoj(PRS driver) stops their car.  

PRS calls police and hands lady over to the police. PRS calls Yashu and Dadaji and tells everything. Yashu starts sobbing and praying to God.  

At palace Yashu and Dadaji tensed. As soon as car stops Yashu runs to the car and opens the door and lifts Gunjan who is sitting on PRS lap and kisses her non-stop on her face crying. Gunjan also starts crying in her mother's arms.

Dadaji asks her: Beta, how is my small baby?

Gunjan sobbing: Okkk dadaji

Dadaji runs to Karan: Karan, how are you?

Karan: I am OK dadajiii, fineee

Dadaji looks at blood on his leg: Blood

Karan: No, I am OK dadajiii

Yashu comes to him: Karan, your leg hand how did this happen

PRS: Lets talk inside Yashu

All go inside. Gunjan and Vikram and security start telling sequence of event to PRS, Yashu and Bade Maharaj. Gunjan scared after incident and sticks on to her mom and papa very close for safety. Arjun tensed where had he seen that kidnapper where? He had seen him before that is for sure.
Doctor comes in and checks Karan.

Dr: Maharaj, Yuvraj is fine except for skin peeling off and some cuts. But his knee cap is swollen and we must get an x-ray tomorrow. There is a tear in his knee cap right one because of the car hitting him with force. Get him to hospital tomorrow and we will do the tests. Do not allow him to walk much and keep ice pack on his leg. I have put pressure bandage already.

PRS: OK doctor, thank you very much

Vikram goes to see off doctor

PRS: Arjun, you go home. Its very late beta

Arjun: Butt Sirrr

Karan: Its OK Arjun, you leave. Thanks a lot for helping buddy. Raj will be alone

Arjun leaves to his house reluctantly.

Edited by myviewprem - 22 April 2012 at 6:16am

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mysticlover IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 April 2012 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
everything is somewhat fine! but i wonder when will arjun recognize the kidnapper.. and when he recognize some other twist is coming along.. i guess.. 
aparna4karanika IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 12:10am | IP Logged
Arjuhisis IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 2:04am | IP Logged
good update prem - hope RPS does not have a role in this kidnapping
pls continue soon
myviewprem IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 April 2012 at 7:18am | IP Logged
Scene400 Gunjan's superman

Gunjan crying: Baaa, why you risked your life for mee?

Karan hugs her and wipes her tears.

PRS goes and keeps hand on Karan's shoulder: Angel, how can your Baa keep quiet seeing his baby getting kidnapped in front of his eyes

Karan smiles looking at PRS. PRS hugs him tight proud to have a son who can risk his all including life to save his baby sister.

Dadaji: Beta, brothers and father's are sent on this earth to take care of their sister and daughters onlyyy. So what if your Baaa risked his life, that's his duty.

Karan laughs: No, you all are wrong. Chutki and I are one only so I was saving myself not chutkiii

Gunjan kisses Karan's wounds and peeled off skin on his hands to give him relief from pain

Yashu still in tears imagining the ordeal Gunjan and Karan went through.

Karan: Mom, please stop crying. We are fineee

Gunjan runs over and wipes her tears: Mummy, do not cryyy

Yashu crying: What if something happened to youuu?

Gunjan: Nothing can happen to me till superman is there

Yashu staring: Superman?

Gunjan: Chutki's Baa is superman nooo

Yashu, Dadaji and PRS smile looking at Karan

PRS looks at Karan: Yes beta, your Ba is indeed superman, superman baa and superman son(chokes)

Yashu laughs: Superman sonnn? That is joke of centuryyy Prithviii. Karan never listens to you ever and you are saying superman son.

Maids of the house come running from their quarters.

Rashmi: Karan bhaiya, how are you

Karan: I am fine Rashmi

Rashmi and maids run to Gunjan: Baby, what happened?

Gunjan tells them the story. All listen animatedly as if they are hearing some film story. Vikram adding inputs from his side. Sisodia family never sleeps that night. PRS ensures that Karan's and Gunjan's photo do not come on paper or TV or any media as their life is on threat.

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