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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 2:08am | IP Logged
ok! karan is becoming a saint..

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 4:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mysticlover

ok! karan is becoming a saint..
 
 
not really. i have modeled karan as a good person
 
may be in real world such peopler no longer exist in 2010 but may be 50 years back they did exist
 
he is just a good human who loves his family very much, cares for his sister very much as she is small and innocent and unwell, and is a true friend
 
he is more of a fictional character such people are not there in real world hence i created his character who will be the ideal person
 
but sometimes he also can do a few errors, hide, tell lies to family like he did hid arjun' background from his parents which is betrayal of his parents trust on him. An ideal person should have told his parents the truth about arjun's family background and that he is married to arohi. But karan hid it as a way of returning favour for arjun for saving gunjan from mall seige. so he is not exactly a saint as you tell but yes he is a good human caught between family and his friendship to arjun a criminal background person
 
 


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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 8:14am | IP Logged
good parts
but i'm still curious about the past of prs,rukmini and yashu
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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 9:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arta

good parts
but i'm still curious about the past of prs,rukmini and yashu
 
 
arta definetly i will dwell on their past but at the right moment
 
 

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 10:58pm | IP Logged

Scene377 Karan warns Arjun

 

Karan: Will you tell me one thing?

Arjun: Yes

Karan: How did your hands get hurt?                                                                                       

Arjun fumbling: I               I got angry and smashed my hands against glass table

Karan: Angry on whom?

 
Arjun thinking: I cannot tell truth. I cannot tell him my life truths. Karan is too clever. He may piece everything together and come to conclusion that I am his brother. My truth may come out.   

Arjun: I                I got angry on myself

 
Karan: On yourself

Arjun: Yeah myself. So in anger I smashed my hand against glass

Karan: You are telling truth haan

Arjun bends his eyes: Yes

 
Karan thinking: Tell this cock and bull story to someone else not Karan buddy. Something is wrong somewhere. But you are hiding. Its OK. I will find out one day.

Karan ordering tone: Do not do such things again OK else

Arjun smiles: Else

 
Karan angry: Else Else I will give you two slaps

Arjun shocked: What?

Karan irritated: I am very serious. Do not go and remove anger of others on yourself on your hands legs OK

Arjun laughs: OK Else you will give me two slaps

 

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
Scene378 Arjun's dadaji
 
 
 

Karan gets irritated and starts going out: I am going you are making fun of me

Arjun runs and holds his hand: Sorry baba sorry. Do not get angry please and holds his ears- I am sorry dadaji

 
Karan angry: I look like dadaji to you

Arjun pulls his cheeks: Dadaji, no ways. You scold and act like my great great great great grandfather. I am scared of this par dadaji(and laughs)

 
Karan initially shocked Arjun sometimes acts like a close family member with him like pulling cheeks, crying on lap etc. As a royal no one dared behave like that with him ever in life till now.

Arjun thinking: I was thinking Karan is like a baby brother and son to me and I will take care of him. But it is reverse he is taking care of me and treats me like I am his grandson.

 
Karan shakes his head thinking: If you keep doing things like these I have to become your pardada only to advice you and get you to correct path

Arjun: What are you thinking Karan?

 
Karan: Nothinggg, I have to leave now

Arjun hugs him: Karan, thanks a lot(chokes) for forgiving me for accepting meee for

Karan cuts in between: Welcome Arjun, welcome.  Take care and all the best for your new life

Arjun: Thanks

 
Karan: Never think you are alone, you have any problem remember to dial me or ask my help ok do not hesitate ever

Arjun nods his head.

 
Karan: Ok bye buddy, I have too much work

Arjun: One minuteee Karan

Karan stops. Arjun goes to his desk and takes two daaga's and gives to Karan.



Edited by myviewprem - 08 April 2012 at 11:21pm

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
good one prem - pls continue

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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 5:33am | IP Logged

Scene379 Miracle in Arjun's life

 

Karan: What is this buddy?

Arjun: Holy thread, last week I had gone to Delhi Birla mandir and got them. Its for you and Gunjan

Karan chokes: You got this for me and chutkiii?

 
Arjun: Yes

Karan: Thanks a lot buddy thanks

Arjun: Welcome, Give, I will tie to your hand

 
Arjun takes the thread and ties it in Karan's hand.

Karan smiles: You have become quiet religious I see, chutki had told that you never go to temple or believe in God much

 
Arjun: Yes, but now I have been converted from a disbeliever to a believer

Karan: Usually that happens when God makes miracles in life. What miracle did God do in your life?

Arjun smiles: Many, I cannot count so manyyy
 
Karan: Really, I did not see any of them, your life is the same as before. As far as I know you never got any new project, never got a jackpot nothing so what miracle took place buddy

Arjun: One is in front of meee

 
Karan: Means
Arjun: God gave you as my friend, isn't that a miracle.

Karan smiles: Then he did a miracle in my life too. Got you to save my chutki from mall siege and made you my friend

 
Arjun thinks: That's not a miracle, indeed baby coming in my life as a friend was the greatest miracle because through her I found you, mom, papa, Dadaji my family.

 

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