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WAR & PYAR..........SK STORY BY COOL_SK (Page 6)

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Posted: 15 February 2006 at 12:28am | IP Logged
ana very nice part... Clap now plz cont soon... Smile
write more abt zeb & shijja... plz... Wink
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Posted: 15 February 2006 at 12:36am | IP Logged
hi ana
this is my 1st day to read this story i read the 1st part and i love it so i read all other parts and they all are aweesome gr8888 wowww adorible good job yaar

now i dont have any words to tell u abt ur story but i have to tell u that its different than other stories

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Posted: 15 February 2006 at 12:54am | IP Logged
hmm ana nani... cutie cutie part Embarrassed Clap
& adi dada n genious Happy Birthday!!!!
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Posted: 15 February 2006 at 1:16am | IP Logged
thanx richa, sara, kulbin and genious
thanx 4 ur lovely comments...............
thanx sara 4 liking it
thanx kulbin...........i will write yaar
thanx genious...........i will surely dedicate the next part 2 u but i m busy now-a-days so will write it soon haan..............and HAPPY BIRTHDAY 2 U
richa..........next iss say bhi zaida cutie hoga
so just wait and watch haan..........
lol
ana
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Posted: 15 February 2006 at 1:40am | IP Logged
gr8 part Tongue
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Posted: 15 February 2006 at 1:51am | IP Logged
thanx tanasha

ana
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Posted: 18 February 2006 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
when u will sending the next part
i think u r 1st one who change rajeev and aamna from sujal and kashish
and
i think u r from khi becoz u wrote zeb lives in gulberg i really love Clap it i m also from khi
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Posted: 19 February 2006 at 5:18am | IP Logged
part 9
    AN OMAM FAS PRODUCTION              
                WAR AND PYAR

woh raat shija or zeb par bhari guzri...............................zeb par bhari kyoun yeh tau app jaan hi saktay hain...........oh yehi soochta raha kay bat kaisay kahay..............kahan say shuru karay................likin shija...........us kay liye kyoun bhari thi............iss liye nahin kay us ka paper tha......................balkay iss liye kay us nay aik poora din zeb ko dekhay bina guzara................usay ghutan ho rahi thi................woh bechain thi..............woh khud bhi na janti kyoun.......likin reh reh kar zeb ka khayal usay aa raha tha...............janay woh kaisa hoga............kahain usko azab main dalnay wali main tau nahin.........meri wajha say us nay office join kia.............ta kay woh meri nazroon kay samnay na aa sakay..............shayad mera us din ka rawiya theek na tha...............woh usay sorry kehna chahti thi
shija:mujhay usay phone karna chayee
she pick the phone and start dialing no
shija:likin iss waqt woh shayad so raha ho..........so she put the phone down..........and lay in the bed to sleep..............likin bechaini us ka peecha nahin chor rahi thi.................mujhay aik bar try tau karna chaye
she again pick the phone up and start dialing his no.......................and after 2-3 beeps he pick up the phone
zeb:hello
shija:h....h....he...lloo
zeb:his heart skip a beat........app kaun
shija:jee main shija.......
zeb:jee kahiye.....kia baat hai
shija:kahain main nay app ko distrub tau nahin kia na
zeb:app kar bhi dain......tau app ko kia farak paray ga.........app nay kaun sa sorry bolna hai
shija:change her mind and in angry tone........theek kaha app nay..........main nay app say sorry nahin kehna......main tau sirf itna batana chahti thi k app apni bhabhi ko bata dejeye ga kay kal mujhay anay main late ho jaye gi kyoun kay kal mera paper hai second time..............tau plz woh driver ko kehain kay mujhay 4 bajay fatima jinnah medical college kay agay say pick kar lay kyoun kay meri car kal papa nay lay kar jani hai..........ok
zeb:keh doon ga......keh doon ga...............ok.....
shija:bye
zeb:sweet dreams.......bye and put the phone down
shija was very much astonished my his last words..........sweet dreams................these words were constantly wandering in her mind..................she was anger at first but later on she felt very much happy and went to sleep.

next day
shija went to college to take her exam..........................woh pehlay tau kafi nervous thi likin paper k samnay atay hi uski sari nervousness khatam ho gaye kyoun k paper kafi easy tha.......................usnay paper diya............or khushi khushi examination hall say bahir aye..................bahir nikaltay hi us nay eman k driver ko dhoonda likin woh nazar na ay.......woh gate tak aye or road par idher udher dekha likin koi faida na howa............likin jab mayoos ho kar us nay samnay dekha tau hanstay howay shahzeb ko aik gari k pass khara paya......................niddo bhi gari ki aik window say bahir jhank raha tha.............shija pehlay tau usay dekh kar bohut khush howi kyoun ki aj usnay zeb ko pooray teen dinon bad dekha tha.............din......yeh din us nay kaisay guzaray thay ye wohi janti thi............likin us nay din aisay kyoun guzaray.........akhir itni bechain kyoun thi..........yeh woh bhi na janti thi...................yaan jannana hi nahin chahti thi...................uska dil kar raha tha k woh zeb k saath jaye......likin aik dar bhi tha.........k kahin agar zeb or uski phir say lariye howi tau woh gusay main kuch aisa na bool day jo woh nahin boolna chahti..............iss liye us nay zeb ko ignore kiya or college k saath foot path per uskay bilkul opposite chalna shuru kar diya
zeb pehlay tau usay dekhta raha likin us kay doosri taraf chalnay per kafi heran howa...............us nay niddo ko bahir nikala.....or kaha
zeb:niddo aj tau us say kehna hi hai.....right
niddo barks : boow ..............which means yes
they both cross the road and start running behind shija
]niddo reach first and stand before her and start barking.........................shija abhi bhi us say darti thi iss liye us say bachnay k liye wapis palti tau zeb samnay tha
zeb:kahan chali miss...........banda gari laya hai
shija:koi zaroorat nahin.........main taxi main chali jaoon gi
zeb:aisa kaisay ho sakta hai.................adhi raat ko mujhay phone kar k kaha kay lenay ana
shija:excause me..........main nay tumhain nahin balkay driver k liye kaha tha
zeb:woh driver ki aj tabiyat kharab thi iss liye main lenay aa gaya........................or abh jab aya hoon tau khali haath tau nahin jaoon ga.............kyoun niddo
niddo:boow...................which means yes
shija:app chahtay kya hain
zeb:app say do sawaloon ka jawab?.........or main nay app ko aik baat kehni hai...........jiss ka jawab mujhay baad main chaye
shija:kaun say
zeb:akhir jab bhi hum miltay hain kya hamara jhagarna zaroori hai
shija:nahin...........likin app batain hi aisii kartay hain k jhagra ho jata hai
zeb:in anger.......main jhagra karta hoon
shija:dekh lain abhi bhi app shuru kar rahay hain
zeb:calm down....theek hai...............doosra sawal...................main app ko kaisa lagta hoon
shija:kia............iss ka kia matlab hai
zeb:matlab.........meray khayal main main nay bilkul seedhi baat ki hai.......k app ko main kaisa lagta hoon
shija wants to ans.....but can't do that
zeb:chalain.......................app nahin bata saktain likin main tau bata sakta hoon na.....................mujhay app bohut acchi lagti hain
shija look at him in surprise
zeb:aap ki hansi.........app ka gusa.............app ka esha k liye pyar..........app ki har ada............app hi har baat...............app ka darna.................app ka larna..............mujahay yeh sab bohut accha lagta hai...........(thora sa hans kay)actually...........mujhay lagta hai k mujhaypyar ho gaya hai............i m in love with u........................app ko kia lagta hai
shija:feels quite happy........but don't show it............mujhay lagta hai k mujhay late ho raha hai or esha intezar kar rahi hoo gi......accha hoga ka app mujhay janay dain
shija turn and start to leave when again niddo came in her way and stop her
zeb:theek hai app ko jana hai tau jain likin meri baat ka jawab mujhay app kay papers k baad chayee.............warna bina poochay hi rishta lay kar aa jaoon ga
niddo cam to zeb and shija leave.........................zeb went to office b-coz he have 2 sign some papers and shija went to teach esha............
issi tarhan din guzartay gaye or iss bar phir shahzeb shija ki nazroon say door tha..........................woh iss liye ta k shija per koi dabaoo na ho or woh aram say soch sakay..............

dekhtay hain.................shija ka jawab kia hota hai
guys yeh story aglay 1 yaan 2 parts main khatam honay wali hai.........iss liye is chotay part say guzara kar lo

lol
ana

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