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part 7
    AN OMAM FAS PRODUCTION              
                WAR AND PYAR

After reaching home shija through her bag on the bed
shija: samjhta kia hai khud ko.....................us ka..............us ka .............us ka amin khoon kar doon di.......har waqt mujhay irritate karta hai
uss ki awazainseema kay kan main bhi par jati hain or woh shija kay kamray main jati hai
seema:see her in anger.........kia howa
shija:main us ka khoon kar doon gi b-b(woh bhabhi ki bajye seema ko b-b kehti hai)
seema:kiss ka
shija:us zeb ka........samjhta kia hai khud ko..............abh dekhna us ko aisa sabaq sikhaoon gi k sari umar yaad rakhay ga
seema:zeb kaun?
shija:esha ka chachu? har waqt atay jatay mujhay irritate karta hai
seema:cool down............seema usay bethati hai..................dekho gusay say kuch nahin hoga.............tum us kay saath zayda baat hi na kia karoo......just ignore him...........tum jitna us kay peechay bhagoo gi.....woh itna hi tumhain tang karay ga.........or jab tum usay ignore karoo gi woh na hi tumhain tang karay ga.........na sataye ga........
shija:do u think it will work?
seema:ofcourse it will........dekho insaan us say hi baat karta hai jiss ko woh samjhta hai kay woh us ki baat sunay ga likin agar doosra us ki baat main apna intrest hi na dekhye to pehla bhi khud hi chup ho jata hai
shija:haan.........yeh baat to theek hai............thanx bhabhi
seema:quite surprise..........main aj b-b say tumhari bhabhi kaisay ban gaye..............jab kay shuja tumhain kehtay rahay kay b-b nahin bhabhi kaha karoo
shija:woh kia hai na b-b.................bhabhi tau meray moon say excitment main nikal gaya tha.......or main nay soocha kay aj aik bar kay liye hi sahi bhai ki baat man hi leti hoon...
seema:likin tum mujhay shuja kay samnay bhabhi keh k bulati to baat thi na
shija:woh din bhi aye ga...........kabhi na kabhi tau
usi waqt visal kay roonay ki awaz ati hai
seema::accha visal uth gaye hai...........main jati hoon............likin meri baat per amal karna
shija:of-course
seema go from there and shija feel quite relex now
shija change her clothes and lie on the bed
shija:shukar hai b-b theen.............warna main na janay kia karti.
usi waqt neechay say nazish ki awaz ati
nazish:shija.....chalo neechay aoo........khanay per sab tumhara wait kar rahay hain
shija:aaye mama
shija neechay khana kanay chali jati hai...
shija:sit on the dinning............mama aj kia bana hai
nazish:aj tumhari favorite biryanai bani hai.................
shija:wow...biryanai..........b-b.plz mujhay pass karoo na
shuja see her and said under his breath.............yeh larki nahin badlay gi
shija:wow.........mom.........its delicious
nazish:yeh main nay nahin tumhari b-b nay banaye hain
shija:b-b.............app ki yeh silahiyatain kahan theen abh tak haan.........likin i must say u r a superb cook
shuja:abh itni bhi tareef maat karoo kay tumhari bhabhi hawaoon main urna shuru kar dain
seema nay shuja ko koohni mari
shuja:dekha na
all laugh

next day

shija went to shahzaman's house and start teaching esha
after some time zeb come there
zeb:from the door..........hi there
shija just ignore him and this thing made him feel strange..........
he come inside
zeb:lagta hai yahan kay halat kuch bigray howay hain..................aj tau accha mausam hai.....likin phir bhi na janay garmi kyoun lag rahi hai.............shija ko gusa charh raha tha likin woh bas esha ko parhanay main lagi thi
shija:esha app apni math ki book tau dikhaoo
esha bhi usay hirangi say dekh rahi thi
zeb:yani kay hali garmi hi nhain parh rahi balkay lou(means garam hawa)bhi chal rahi hai............aj tau mausam waqai beiman ho gay hai
and then he starts singing the son
AJ MAUSAM BARA BAIMAN HAI
BARA BEIMAAN HAI
AJ MAUSAM           

shija ko gausa charh raha tha likin woh usay zabt(control) kar rahi thi
zeb:lagta hai gana pasand nahin aya................koi baat nahin main doosra ga leta hoon
just then shija look at her with eyes full of anger

zeb again start singing
ZALIM NAZROON SAY TUM NA MUJH KO DEKHO MAR JAOON GA
O JANEE JANA MAR JAOON GA     

shija say abh gusa bardasht nahin ho raha tha............so iss liye us nay esha ko kaha
shija:esha.....apnay chachu say keh do kay tumhain parhna hai so iss liye woh chalay jain
esha look at him with pleading eyes
zeb:esha........apni miss say keh do kay un ka koi haq nahin hai k woh mujhay order dain
esha look at shija:............miss
shija:esha..........apnay chachu say kaho kay plz woh yahan say uth jain
esha look at zeb having confusion
zeb:apni miss say keh do kay mera ghar hai.....main jahan marzi bethoon
esha look at shija
shija:tau phir theek hai main hi chali jati hoon
shija nay apna bag pakra aur wahan say uth kar chali gaye
zeb:to esha.........isay aj kia howa hai
esha:patah nahin..........tears come in her eyes.......abh main kia karoon......kal mera maths ka test hai or abhi unhoon nay mujhay parhana tha
zeb:looking at esha............tum roo maat karoo main kuch karta hoon
zeb run behind shija woh was about to sit in the car
zeb:shija...shija.............rukiyee aik min
shija gari main beth jati hai jab zeb car tak poohnchta hai
zeb:putting his hands on the door..........dekhiye agar mujh say koi galti howi hai tau main us kay liye app say maafi chahta hoon likin app mera gusa esha par maat nikalyee.............us ka kal test hai or usko preparation karwa dijeyee........main nahin chahta kay meri wajha say us ka nuksaan hoo.............app mera gusa us par maat nikalyee
shija:to the driver...........chaliye
zeb:to the driver.........thehroo.............to shija...........dekhiye main wahan nahin bethoon ga.......main app ko aj nazar bhi nahin aoon ga but plz app esha ko parha dijeye......main sab kuch bardhast kar sakta hoon likin us ka roona nahin..............plz
shija ko esha ka liye zeb ka pyaar gari say utarnay par majboor kar deta hai or woh gari say utar jati hai or seedha study main jati hai.........or esha ko parhana shuru kar deti hai....likin baqi pooray time shija ko shahzeb apnay irid girid nazar bhi nahin aya

guys thanks 4 ur comments
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ana lovely part... too cute... plz post the nxt part soon... Smile

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lovely part continue soon yaar

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too good ana nani.....cont soon plzzTongue
waise wheres niddo ajkal LOL LOL

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part 8
    AN OMAM FAS PRODUCTION        &n bsp;     
                WAR AND PYAR

aglay din jab shija esha ko parhanay gaye to usay zeb nazar na aya..................woh iss baat say khush thi kay zeb abh usay tang nahin karay ga..........likin us kay dil main kahain na kahin usay aik bar dekhnay ki khwahish machal rahi thi....woh khud bhi nahin janti thi kay aisa kyoun hai likin woh usay aik bar dekhna chahti thi................likin woh nazar na aya..........woh esha say poochna chahti thi kay zeb kahan hai likin phir woh yeh soch kay rukk gaye kay woh kia sochay gi kay pehlay to miss khud hi unhain dekhna nahin chahti thi or aj jab woh samnay nahin aye to abh pooch rahi hain......iss liye woh esha ko parhnay main hi busy rahi likin us ka dehan musalsal kain or tha or iss baat ka andaaza esha ko bhi ho raha tha kyoun kay us nay esha ki english ki copy pay urdu ka or urdu ki copy pay english ka kaam likh diya tha...........jiss ki wajha khud shija ko bhi maloom na thi.......phir us nay jaldi say usay erase kar kay sahi tarhan likha or jaldi jaldi kaam karwa kar chali gaye

ghar main bhi sab nay yeh mehsoos kia kay shija kuch chup chup si hai.............sab nay yehi soocha kay zaida parhna ki wajha say usay thakan hai iss liye aisa hai..............kyoun ki aglay din us ka paper tha............likin koi bhi us kay dil ki baat na jaan paya.......kaisa janta kyoun kay woh khud bhi nahin janti thi....

AT DINNER TIME

saray family members dinning per akathay hotay hain or khana shuru kartay hain
shija:wants some rice..............she was upset so she said..............bhabhi plz mujhay rice paas kijeye ga
shuja:who was drinking was.....spill it out.............kia
nazish:woh was about to eat stop at the time..........kia kaha
shija was lookin at them in surprise........thinking......inhain kia hoga.........actually usay khud bhi pata nahin laga kay us nay kia kaha hai.
seema and shams were only laughing by seeing the expressions of nazish and shuja
shija:app ko kia howa
shuja:abhi tum nay kia kaha
shija:main nay kia kha.......main nay bus kaha kay bhabh...iiii.............she stop herself and start laughing
shuja:tum nay aj pehli martaba bhabhi kaha hai
seema:wrong..........doosri martaba
nazish:pehlay kab kaha.
seema:kal
shuja:mujhay tau apnay kanoon per yakeen nahin aa raha........main nay yeh kia sun liya
actually abh wogh saray shija ko tang kar rahay thay
shija:getting annoyed which was clear by her expressions but by looking at shuja she also laughs
shams:baas bhi karoo abh tang karna meri beti ko
shuja:abbu kaisay karain.............hum sab keh keh kay thak gaye likin majal ho kay iss nay hamari baat mani hoo
shija:abbu abh bhai ko kahin kay baas karay
shams:shuja.....bass
all gets back to eat there dinner......
shams:to nazish...........abh mera kaam itna nahin howa karay ga..................shayad abh main jaldi ghar bhi aa jaoon
nazish:woh kyoun
shams:woh shahzeb nay bhi abh factory ko join kar liya hai............abh shahzaman ki gair hazri main abh woh hi sambhalay ga
nazish:yeh to accha kia hai us nay
shams:nahin............zeb to kab say factory join karna chahta tha likin shahzaman nay usay mana kia howa tha
nazish:woh kyoun.................shija was listening all the conversation very intrestingly
shams:tum to janti ho kay riffat or sami nay shahzaman ki shadi kitni jaldi kar di thi.........phir us ay bad hi unh ka accident hogaya.................tau iss liye shahzaman to yeh chahta tha kay us ka bhai zindagi ko bharpoor tareeqay say guzaray........baap ban kar pala hai us nay.............eman nay bhi usay maan ka pyar diya hai.............or esha.......esha tau uski jaan maan loo.....shahzeb tau kab say keh raha tha kay woh office join karna chahta hai likin shahazaman kay agay uski aik na chali.........likin janay abh kia howa.............sahahzaman kay mana karnay kay bawajood woh factory ko join kar raha hai..........iss liye shahzaman ko bhi har manani pari
nazish:bohut accha bacha hai.............hamesha apnay ghar kay baray main sochta rehta hai.....khuda uski umar daraz karay..
khanay kay bad shija baahir loan main tehal rahi hoti hai
udher shahzeb bhi kafi deer tak office main ruka............patah nahin kyoun likin us ka ghar janay ka bilkul dil nahin kar raha tha iss liye woh kaam ka bahana bana kar ruk gaya...........likin jaisay hi ghari nay 9 bajaye usay laga kay kahin bhabhi pareshan na ho rahi hoon.......tab usko hoosh aya kay woh kissi ka ghusa kissi per nikal raha hai
ghar per eman bhi pareshan ho rahi thi kyoun kay shahzeb itni deer kabhi nahin karta tha..........tau us nay fooran office main phone lagaya
shahzeb:hello
eman:in an angry tone.......chilatay howay........kahan ho tum.........itni deer kyoun ki haan..........banda aik bar phone hi kar deta hai........jantay ho main kitni pareshan ho rahi thi
zeb:relex bhabhi.............main office main hoon...............kaam tha iss liye late ho gaya or phone bhi na kar saka...........sorry bhabhi
eman:in a cool way.............ok ........chal abh jaldi ghar aa ja.............main tumhara intezar kar rahi hoon..........tumhari wajha say main nay khana bhi theek say nahin khaya
zeb:now its turn of zeb to shout.............kya................bhabhi app ko apna khayal rakhna chaye na.............main aa raha hoon aa kar dekhta hoon....( he loves her as his mother so he also deal her as is she is his mother)
zeb apni car ki keys leta hai or bahir nikalta hai
uskay ghar kay rastay main shija ka ghar parta tha...............iss liye jab uski gari shija kay ghar kay agay say guzri tau uskay dil main yeh khawahish ubhri kay aik bar zara uskay ghar kay bahir tehray.............shayad uski aik jhalak hi mill jaye
yeh wohi waqt tha jab shija loan main tehel rahi thi...................shahzeb apni car say utra or gate kay pass aya..........pehlay usnay ghar ki khirkiyoon ki taraf dekha likin tab koi na dikha
zeb 10 min tak uska intezar karta raha
loan main us waqt andhera tha iss wajha say zeb shija ko na dekh saka................udher shija bhi apnay hi khayaloon main gum thi......woh zeb kay baray main soch rahi thi..........likin kya or kyoun.........yeh woh khud bhi nahin janti thi..........usay janay kyoun bechaini mehsoos ho rahi thi............thandi hawain jany kyoun usay zeb ka ehsaas dela rahi theen............woh janay kyoun zeb kay baray main itna soch rahi thi
jab zeb thak har kar jany laga...........tab hi usay aik awaz suniyee di jo kay seema ki thi
seema:shija.........chaloo ander aoo....................kal tumhara paper hai.........chaloo chal kay soo..........zeb nay mur kar ander dekha likin usay koi nazar na aya................likin phir usay aik jani pehchani awaz suniye di
shija:ayee bhabhi
shija andheray say thori roshni main aye..............usay dekh kar zeb ka dil khil utha..........us kay chehray per khud ba khud muskurahat ubher aye likin iss bar........woh apnay dil say hasa...............pechlay din apni bhabhi or bhai kay samnay woh sirf zahiri toor per hasta tha.............likin uska man hamesha udaas hi rehta.............likin shija ko dekhtay hi uskay chehray par bahar chah gaye or woh hansta howa gari ki taraf mura............or ghar gaya jahan eman uska intezar kar rahi thi
zeb:salam bhabhi
eman:kahan tha haan......
zeb:bhabhi batay na busy tha...............likin app nay khana kyoun na khaya jab app ko doctor nay sakhti say kaha hai kay khanay peenay par tawajha dain haan.............(actually esha ...........di banaye wali hai)
eman:wh main tumhara
zeb:cut her..............kya mera...........bhabhi abh main office janay laga hoon.........thori deer tau ho hi jaye gi na...........plz bhabhi apna khayal rakah karoo........ok.............abh mujhay promise karoo kay laparwahi nahin karoo gi
eman:ok............i promise
zeb:thats like my bhabhi................accha esha or bhai kahan hain
eman:zaman esha ko kahani suna rahay hain..................chaloo abh tum fresh ho jaoo phir hum saath hi khana khatay hain
zeb:nahin............app yahan betho.............woh usay sofa per bethata hai..........main khana garam kar kay lata hoon
eman:nahin main......
zeb:nahin wahin kuch nahin............app betho main atta hoon
zeb khana garam karta hai or woh dono saath main khana khatay hain
between the dinner
eman:zeb main tum say aik baat kahoon
zeb:kahiyee na bhabhi
eman:main kal say dekh rahi thi kay tu kuch udaas sa hai.........main kal hi kehna chahti thi likin mauqa hi nahin milla....kia baat hai............sab theek hai na
zeb:in a light way............haan bhabhi sab theek hai
eman:jhoot maat bool............tumhara jhoot pakra jata hai...............chalo bataoo kia baat hai
zeb:bhabhi aisi koi baat nahin hai
eman:kha meri kasam
zeb:bhabhi..............yeh kya baat howi haan
eman:yai koi bat hai............chal boal
zeb:bhabhi woh darasal...........main aik larki ko pasand karta hon.........likin hum jab bhi miltay hain hamesha hamara koi na koi jhagra hota hai.............likin iss bar kuch serious hi masla ho gaya hai...
eman:tau yeh sab aik larki ki wajha say hai haan.................chal chal na bata
zeb:bhabhi abhi nahin.............jab sahi waqt hoga tau main app ko bataoon ga......
eman:or tu jiss din mujhay us ka naam batye ga main usi din tera rishta uskay ghar lay kar jaoon gi
zeb:promise bhabhi
eman:promise...............likin tum loog jhagartay hi kyoun rehtay hoo
zeb:woh actually kia hai na bhabhi .........woh mujhay gussay main bohut acchi lagti hai
eman:mamla serious hai
zeb:haan bhabhi.................likin mujhay patah nahin kay woh meray baray main kia sochti hai
eman:kia.....................tum nay abhi tak usay bataya nahin.........tumhari batain sun kar mujhay laga kay baat pakki hai
zeb:baat tau pakki hai bhabhi..............meri taraf say........or mujhay patah hai kay uss ki taraf say bhi...........likin
eman:likin wakin kuch nahin.................tu kal hi us say baat kar...............woh haan hi bolay gi..........or waisay bhi meray handsome say devar ko koi na thori karay ga
zeb:sach bhabhi
eman nodded in yes
zeb:thanx bhabhi..........u r such a sweet heart.............
eman:yeh mujhay nahin usay bolna
zeb:kya bhabhi........app bhi na
eman:chalo abh ja kar soo jaoo...............or abh tension na lena.........ok
zeb:good night bhabhi
eman:good night

this part is dedicated to ADI as its his birthday today
HAPPY BIRTHDAY ADI

and 2 all of u............HAPPY VALENTINES DAY

have fun
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richa fikar maat karoo
niddo aa raha hai

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Posted: 14 February 2006 at 7:35am | IP Logged
lovely part
ana
tomorrow on 15th feb is my birthday so dedicate next part to me lekin aacha hona chahiye ok
i just luv ur story Big smile

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