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part 12
    AN OMAM FAS PRODUCTION              
                WAR AND PYAR

iss baat ko abh do din guzar chukay thay………………..shija bilkul theek ho chuki thi…………..or iss liye abh us nay faisla kia tha k who esha ko aj hi parhanay jaye gi kyoun k agay hi us ki parhai ka kafi harj ho chuka tha……………..us nay eman ko phone kia k who driver ko bhej day……………….eman nay driver ko bheja or shija esha ko parhanay chali gaye…………..shija ko dekh kar esha bohut khush howi
esha:in a concern tone………………..miss abh app kaisaii hain
shija:abh main bilkul theek hoon…………….app sunaoo app ki parhai kaisi ja rahi hai
esha:theek hi hai…………….aj kal mujhay chachu parha rahay thay…………..chachu nay bilkul accha nahin parhaya(actually who kashish ko maska laga rahi thi)
itni hi deer main shahzeb wahan say guzar raha tha………..yeh baat sun kar ander aaya
zeb:aha………….agay peechay kehti ho chachu app bohut accha parhatay ho or aj……….miss kay atay hi chachu ki value kaam ho gai…………….miss shija app nay tau meri bhanji ko bhi mujh say door kar diya
shija:rookhay lehjay main………………bachoon ko yeh batanay ki zaroorat nahin hoti kay kia sahi hai or kia galat
zeb:likin yeh peechannay ki sekh bhi tau ap oog detay hain na
shija:dekhiye………..agay hi esha ki parhai ka kaffi harj ho chukka hai………..or main abh yeh time is fazool si bahes(lariye) main main zaya nahin karna chahti
zeb:tau main bara chahta hoon
shija:tau phir app chalay jain
zeb:meri marzi main jaoon………………esha ja kar apni miss k liye pani laoo………zara zara si baton pay gusa charh jata hai
esha wahan say chali jati hai
shija:app jatay hain yaan nahin
zeb:mujhay koi shok nahi yahan kharay honay ka……………….main tau yeh batanay aya tha kay aj akhri din hai……………agar kal tum nay mujhay meray sawal ka jawab na diya tau main bhaiya or bhabhi ko bhej doon ga tumharay ghar
shija:pointing with her finger………..dekho tum aisa kuch nahin karoo gay
zeb:us ka haath thamtay howay………..shija ka dil double raftar say dharaknay laga………….main sab kuch kar sakta hoon…….tumhain panay k liye……….or yeh baat jaan loo……………main nay um say pyar kia hai……….aur dekh lena tum ko apna bana kar hi choorn ga
he leaves her hand and leave from there
shija kafi ghabra gaye………or sofa per baith gaye
itnay main esha bhi pani lay kar aye……..shija nay us say jaldi say glass pakra or aik hi saans main sara pani pii gaye
shija:thinking…………….be cool………….who kuch nahin kar sakta………….tum aram say parhaoo
shija:now in cool voice but still angry as it was difficult 4 her 2 forget what hust happen ……………ok…………esha app apni English ki book nikaloo
esha:miss pehlay urdu parh lain
shija:main nay kaha na…………..pehlay English
esha ko patah chal jata hai k yeh waqt behes ka nahin………so who jaldi say English ki book nikal leti hai ……………….
Esha:miss…….kia karna hai
Shija:dictation………..jo app nay pehlay ki thi aj phir say wohi kar loo………peechli bar bari galtiyan howin theen
Esha yaad karna shuru ho jati hai……….or shija apna sar pakar kay zeb ki baton ko yaad kar rahi hoti hai………….or jaisay jaisay yaad kar rahi hoti hai waisay waisay us ka gusa bharta jata hai
Esha:thori deer bad………….miss yaad ho gaya hai
Shija usay dictation karwati hai or jab dekhti hai tau jo galtiyan us ki pehlay theen wohi galtiyan phir say howin……..shija ka gusa abh asman ki unchaiyoon ko chuuu raha tha
Us nay esha ka scale pakra or us kay haath pay mara
Shija:jo galtiyan pehlay howin wohi aj…………aik pari……………dehan say nahin parha jata kia……………shija nay iss bar jo scale uthaya tau who esha kay haath ki jagha uskay sar ko laga or jiss jagha laga who hisssa phool gaya…………haathon pay itni zoor ka nahin para tha scale…….likin jab sar pay para tau esha nay roona shuru kar diya……………us waqt na hi shahzeb ghar main tha na hi eman………eman thori deer pehlay bazaar gaye thi or zeb apnay friends kay saath bahir nikla tha…………shija nay jo esha ko rotay dekha tau usay apni galti ka ehsaas howa or us nay usay chup karwanay ki koshish ki or bari deer bad ja kar who chup howi…………..jaisay hi who chup howi shija driver k saath ghar chali gayee…………………..
Us raat shija ko apni galti par pachtawa howa
Shija:akhir main nay kyoun zeb ki batoon ka gusa esha par nikala…….us ka kia kasoor tha…………kitni zoor say para tha usay…………….janay who kaisi ho gi…………..akhir main zeb ki batoon pay itna over-react kyoun karti hoon………us nay tau apnay dil ki baat sachi sachi bata di…………phir kyoun main us say bhagti hoon…………main bhi tau us say pyar karti hoon……………
Apnay hi kahay howay ilfaz us kay kanoon main goonj rahay thay
'main bhi tau us say pyar karti hoon…………… main bhi tau us say pyar karti hoon……………'
kia main waqi……………..oh KHUDAYA yeh main nay kia keh dia………..kia baat sach hai…………main nay isay pehlay kyoun nahin peehchana………….likin abh main kia karoon…………..zeb esha ko bohut pyar karta hai……….who us ki ankhoon main aik ansoo bhi bardhast nahin kar sakta……………..or main nay tau esha ko choot phoonchai hai………………abh who mujhay kabhi nahin………………mujhay kal hi ja kar us say maafi mangni hogi…………….bad main jo ho so ho……..mujhay maafi mangni hi hogi
shija nay who raat bari betabi kay alam main guzari
who har pal bas yehi sochti rahi kay us nay apnay hi haaton say apnay hi paoon pay kulhari kyoun mari……………..

THE NEXT HALF PART


next day
shija bohut daray daray andaaz main shahzeb kay ghar dakhil howi………………….ghar main sanata chaya howa tha…………………koi awaaz na thi………………..darwazay kay kareeb hi zeb khara howa tha or roo raha tha……………..shija pehlay tau dari k kahin zeb esha ki wajha say tau nahin likin phir himmat kar k agay bhariii…..who chupke say uskay pass aye
shija:shahzeb
shahzeb turn around with tears in his eyes
shija:shahzeb…………..app…….app roo kyoun………..
shahzeb:teez awaz main…………khud ansoo day kar poochti hoo main ro kyoun raha hoon……………..tmhari …………sirf tumhari wajha say aj meri bachi……meri esha….aj zindagi or maut k bheech jhool rahi hai
shija:daray howay andaaz main…………kia howa esha ko……shahzeb does not reply…………main nay poocha…..kia howa esha ko
shahzeb:meri esha aj hospital main hai…………….sirf tumhari wajha say……..kal tum tau usay maar kar chali gaye………likin janti hoo k jab hum ghar aye tau esha ko behoos paya………….usay ghabrahat main hospital lay kar gaye………….doctors nay batay k usko koi shock laga hai or chot bhi bohut zoor ki lagi hai……..pehlay tau hum yeh sochtay rahay k shayad kahin say giri hai…….likin jab bhaiya bhabhi ghar aa gaye or main esha k pass ruka tau who behoshi k alam main chilaye………..miss mujhay maat maroo…………..miss mujhay maat maroo………………tab mujhay patah lag gaya k yeh sab tumhari wajha say…………tum nay kia meri phool si esha ka yeh khal………..jiss phool ko main nay aj tak kantoon say bacha k rakha………..uski har tarhan say hifaazat ki…………..us ki har zid poori ki k kahin who murjha na jaye or tum nay us dali ko toornay ki koshish ki……………u r heartless………itnay say bachay ko kia koi itnay zoor ka marta hai………..main abhi ghar aya tha ta k tum say pooch sakoon or bhiya or bhabhi hospital gaye hain us k pass………..
tears came in her eyes and she was losing her balance and atlast falls down……………..tum aisa kaisay kar sakti hoo………kia bigara tha esha nay tumhara…………kyoun kia tum nay aisa……….tum kissi ka gusa kissi par kaisay nikal sakti hoo
shija:in a loud tone………….yeh sab tumhari wajha say howa tha
shahzeb:in a low tone…………..meri wajha say……………
shija:in a loud and angyr tone……..haan…..na tum who harkat kartay na mujhay gusa charhhta or na yeh sab hota……
shahzeb:gusa dilatay howay…………likin gusa tau apnoo ki batoon ka charhta hai na………tau phir tumhain meri bataoon pay gusa kyoun charha
shija:gusay main……………….kyoun kay main tum say pyar karti hoon
then the world seems to be stop 4 each other……………….every thing was invisible………the only visible thing was both of them……………and the eyes of them which was filled with love
zeb:after a while…..kia kaha tum nay………..tum…….tum mujh say pyar karti hoo
shija:haan main tum say pyar karti hoon……………or tab say karti hoon jab say tum nay larayan shuru kin
zeb:dekho larayan main nay nahin tum nay shuru kin theen
shija:dekho……..abhi bhi tum laraiee kar rahay hoo
zeb:nahin…………..accha likin baatain tau tum aisi karti hoo jiss ki wajha say lariye shuru hoti hai
they cont to fight…………..or phir achanak esha main hall k darwazay say bhagti howi bahir ai hai.
Esha:chachu…….chachu
Shija:esha tum…….likin tum tau keh rahay thay
Esha:chachu…….mujhay yeh wali chachi nahin chaiyen…………yeh mujhay marain gi
Zeb:smiles………..sit on his knees…………..meray hotay howay app ki chachi app ko nahin marain gi
Esha:promise
Zeb:paka promise……………..he give her a kiss on her cheek and she return him back
Phir esha ander bhag jati hai
Shija was stunned between all that scene
Shija:yeh sab
Shahzeb:yeh sab natak tha ta k main tum say apnay sawal ka jawab maang sakoon…..kyoun k aj tumharay din khatam ho gaye hain……….iss liye bhiya or bhabhi tumharay ghr gaye hain rishta lay kay……….tumhari wajha say main nay esha k agay itnay papar belay hain ta k who us choot k baray main bhabhi ko kuch na bataye………….lkin aik baat hai tum nay accha nahin kia tha
Shija:smile a bit………….SORRY
Zeb:abh yeh tau esha or tumharay darmiyan ka mamla hai…………khud hi solve karna………………mischievely………..uski chachi bananay k baad
Shija:zeb………………..
Shahzeb:ahhhhhhhhhhh……………aj pehli bar tum nay mujhay zeb bulaya……….janti hoo yeh meri zindagi ka sab say special day hai……………..then zeb take out a box from his pocket which was having a beautiful diamond ring and said
Zeb:sitting on his knees…………………shija……………kia tum iss zindagi k safar main……….meri jawan say burhapay tak…………….meri ibtada say inteha tak………………meri zindagi say lay kar meri maut tak mera saath do gi……………..kia tum meri jeevan saathi banogi
Shija:smiles a bit……………..haan……..main tum say shaadi karoongi
Zeb put the ring in her finger and then they have a small chat and then zeb leave her to her house……….
In shija's house……..every body was tensed…………..shija k parents ko yeh rishta manzoor tha……….likin shija k jawab ka intezar tha…………..zeb nay sab ko keh diya tha k agar who uskay saath aya tau haan samjhiye ga………………or jaisay hi gari ki awaz aye saray khidki main jama ho gaye…………….pehlay tau shija nazar aye or gari main betha howa koi nazar na aya…………..kyoun k shija us scene k agay thi……..likin jaisay hi shija hati or zeb sab ko nazar aya sab nay dhom dharaka kia
Shija jaisay hi enter howi saray seedhay apni kamroon pay haath rakh k kharay ho gaye
Nazish see her what do u say look or shija Sharma kay us kay galay lag gayee
Shuja:oo balle balle
Do haftay bad…………….its wedding day
Saher k baray baray log ayae…………………..shija shadi k us surkh joday main kissi pari say kam nahin lag rahi thi……………….or zeb………..apni white sherwani main kayamat dha raha taha…………….bilkul aik romeo & Juliet ka coule lag raha tha……………farak sirf yeh tha k who mill na paye…………or abh kuch hi paloon main yeh do naamon ko aik karnay walay thay
Maulana sahab nay nikah parhwaya or papers par sign liye…………….phir sab nay iss nai jodi ki ani wali zindagi k liye khair-o-afiyat or khushkhali ki dua ki…………..nikah k bad shija k friends nay zeb ko gheer liya or dhoodh pilaye ka mutalba kia jiss k natejay main zeb nay unhain 10,000 rupay diye……………..phir shija ko QURAN k saye main vida kia gaya or who piya ghar sdhar gayye
Zeb kay ghar main usko khush amdeed kaha gaya………….eman nay doodh kay katoray say unh doonon ki nazar uteri or unh ki baliyen lin
Shija or Zeb say QURAN ki kuch ayatoon ki talawat karwaiye gaye or us k baad shija ko uskay kamray main lajaya gay………..jo k phoolon say bhara paar tha…………..zeb ko kamray main janay ki bhi kimmat chukani pari or akhir kar itni sari mushkiloon main jeetnay k baad who kamray main dakhil howa
Zeb jab kamray main dakhil howa tau shija ko dekh kar who aik dam hairan tha………..aj who who shija na thi jo us say larti thi……….jo usay kabhi aik larako nazar atti thi………..balkay aj tau aik aisii shija uskay samnay thi jo uski thi………..usay aik pari maloom hoti thi
Zeb dheeray dheeray uskay pass gaya or us ka ghoongat uthaya
Zeb:after seeing shija…………..aj aisa lag raha hai k chand khud meray angan main aa gaya hoo……….mera dil na janay kab say iss raat ka muntazir tha………….aj iss dil ki aik dharkan jo kahin kho gaye thi issaay wapis mill gaye hai…………..or dharkan k wapis milnay ka ehsaas kitna dilkas hai………………zeb apni pocket say aik box nikalta hai or uskay agay karta hai……
Shija usay khoti hai or usmain aik pyara sa pendal hota hai jiss pay SHIJA SHAHZEB bohut hi safiye say likha gaya hota hai……….zeb usay who locket pehnata hai or apnay khawab ki tabeer ko apnay samnay pata hai
Tab say who dono bohut khush hain……….KHUDA nay un ki khushi or barha di jab nh k ghar aik kali khili or us ka nam unhoon nay ALISHA rakha………
Eman k ghar aik betay nay janam liya tha jiss ka naam JAHENZEB rakha gaya
SHIJA or SHAHZEB aj bhi aik doosray say bohut pyar kartay hain or unh ka pyar har aik lariye k saath barhta hai

                                            THE END

i hope u guys like this story..........abhi main kuch deer tak koi story nahin likh paoon gi kyoun ki agay final papers aa rahay hain........so uski preparation karni hai........likin agar time milla tau zaroor likhoon gi
saar............don't ever say sorry yaar.........i hope we r friends right.......so no sorry no thanks
plz don't forget me

love u all guys
ana

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hi ana
      [:Y:]the end is absolutely marvelous and excellet and ana u have a [=D>] brilliant mind [L]i love that part jab zeb ne shija se i love u bolwaya i love it[>:D<]

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    its ok yaar studys [:P] always come first so study hard for ur final test and [:Y:] i wish u alll the best wishes and luck for the tests [>:D<]

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Hearthi ana
      Thumbs Upthe end is absolutely marvelous and excellet and ana u have a Clap brilliant mind Hearti love that part jab zeb ne shija se i love u bolwaya i love itHug

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    its ok yaar studys Tongue always come first so study hard for ur final test and Thumbs Up i wish u alll the best wishes and luck for the tests Hug

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wow ana lovely part... Clap
kya andaaz mei jawaab liya hai zeb ne maza aa gaya Clap 2 good yaar... nice ending... Clap
do write new story if time permits... Wink
all the best for ur final exams... Smile

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ana dear bohat achche.........i just loved reading ur story........... Big smile Clap

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haaaa wat an ending....taareef-e-kabil Clap Clap LOL ..ab please start a new one plz plz plzzz Embarrassed me lovve ur stories Clap Embarrassed

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sweet kulbin & richa jii
main aik aur story soch rahi hoon
aur ho sakta hai k kuch dinno main usay shuru karoon
so just CHILL
waisay richa.............mujhay bhi tumharay stories bohut acchi lagti hain.........so DKR k baad abh koi doosri likh do na
me alsoo saying
plz plz plz plz
haan

lots of love
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Ana darling nice part

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