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kriyaa haal-e -dil in train

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Posted: 22 September 2011 at 11:31pm | IP Logged

EmbarrassedWinkAngryAfter saying bye to chandu kriya proceed to their respective berth(which is not confirmed)

The berth are vacant as journey has just started .but after two station the train got crowded and a middke age couple fully desi couple arrived in kriya's compartment

.seeing kriya setting on their berth women started fightingwith pratigya

 

Women-yeah ladkiya uth hamri seat say.Angry

 

Pratigya –dekhiye aap ko galatfhami hui hai yaeh hamri seat haiSmile

 

Women- yeah sab humko nahi pata yeah hamri seat hai kyun jiEmbarrassed

 

Man-hai yeah hamri seat hum ticket katwaya hotum utho yaha sayAngry

 

Pratigya-dekhiye bhai sahib yeah hamri seat hai Krishna tum kuch bolte kyun nahiAngry

 

Krishna silentConfused

 

Women-yeah ladkiya uth na re ek dum dheth hai ka.uthAngry

 

 Pratigya- apni juban sambhaliye behenji yeah hamri seat hai aur kisi aur ki seat ko apne kehna gerkanoni baat hai.is tarah kisi aur ki seat ko apna kehne main apko sharam nahi aati koi insaniyat naam ki cheej hai bhi ya nahiAngry

 

Women-dekh yeha say uth eh hamri seat hai bas hum eh jante haiAngry

 

At that moment TTE arrived

 

Pratigya –dekhiye sir yeah hame pareshan kar rahi hai aur hamri seat ko apna keh rahi hai jo galat aur gerkanoniAngrybaat hia

 

Women –nahi shaheb yeah hamri seat hai hum ticktwa katwaye hai

 

Pratigya – (getting irritated)kya aap tab say ek hi gana gaye ja rahi hai ki ticket katwaye hai ticket to hum bhi katwaye hai kyun Krishna

 

Krishna silent againConfused

 

TTE getting angry and apna ticket dekhayiye aap dono.after seeing ticket TTe said yeah inki berth hai aapki to koi berth hi conform nahi hai

 

Pratigya in shock looking at Krishna and sad music in BGOuch

 

Women-badi aayi gerkanoni wali humko kanon sekhyenge.Wink

 

Krishna breaking his silence TTE babu kauno seat dedo humko paise leleo

Pratigya no lecture because she is in shock Krishna itna bada dhoka jo diya haiShocked

 

Krishna does setting with TT and takes a seat but a single seatWink

 

Krishna takes a seat and calls babu aayi jayo yaar kab tak khada rehboBig smile

 

Pratigya –tum humse baat mat karo .tum humse gerkanoni kaam kara rahe theAngry

 

Krishna –hum ka karte babu chanduya end time pe bataya aur tum kitna phudka rahi thi jane k liye designer purswa lit hi to hum tumra dil kaise todteCry

 

Pratigya –jhota motha anger dikhate hua

 

And break laga train ko

 

Pratigya in Krishna 's arm eye lock all( hehehe hahaha both male and female in BG)Wink

 

And in this way they landed in MumbaiBig smile

 

 

 

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Posted: 22 September 2011 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
Nice little fanfic Smile I do hope Kriya have a tension-free trip

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Posted: 23 September 2011 at 1:22am | IP Logged
Nice oneClap dear..mmhope prats doesnt give a lecture to krishna they have a happy tripEmbarrassed
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Posted: 23 September 2011 at 1:32am | IP Logged
very nice
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Posted: 23 September 2011 at 1:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by elle45

Nice little fanfic Smile I do hope Kriya have a tension-free trip

Thanks Elle,lets hope they will have tension free trip.
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Posted: 23 September 2011 at 5:32am | IP Logged
nice fanfic kriya 2011 really loved this.
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Posted: 23 September 2011 at 5:40am | IP Logged

Aww... Thats cho chweet
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Posted: 23 September 2011 at 5:41am | IP Logged

Tanu,
thoda extension milega.. Pleej..

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