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FebruaryFlower IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 December 2011 at 4:34am | IP Logged
Fab update hun!
I loved the last part where Arnav said I love you!
Looking forward to reading more.
Thanks for the PM.

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Dazlingdivya Senior Member

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Posted: 05 December 2011 at 4:51am | IP Logged

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mana2 Senior Member

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Posted: 05 December 2011 at 5:08am | IP Logged
Awesome udate
thanks alot fr da PM
continue soon

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arhi-fan Goldie

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Posted: 08 December 2011 at 8:53am | IP Logged
It was awesome update. Khushi back at rm. Hope she realises arnav's love.

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gansteress Senior Member

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Posted: 09 December 2011 at 7:15pm | IP Logged
hey everyone thank you for commenting and liking my update
i try to like everyone's comments back..sorry if i had missed anyone..
x x x

kushi had finally been woken up the bright sunlight that shined in her room making everything around her feel warm...she streched out her arms and sat up rubbing her eyes..she was disturbed by yelling and thought to herself what was going on...
she could hear arnav screaming at jai prakash for giving him a tasteless coffee...
hearing the tone of his voice made her jump so she decided to if everything was alright...
as she walked towards his door she saw jai prakash running out as fast he can...he was so shaken by arnav's temper that he hadn't noticed kushi standing nearby...

as she peeped her head through door just to check where arnav..she noticed there was pieces of mug scattered everywhere...she slowly waked in shocked to see the state of the room.

Arnav-kushi ?called arnav as he walked in from his poolside...
without any reply kushi walked out of his room and ran down the stairs.
arnav shook his head thinking she become weird by the day and walked down the stairs to catch up to her.
kushi! kushi! called arnav as he ran down.

Kushi-buaji! called kushi surprised to see her there...she quickly ran and hug her and started to burst into tears...she looked up at payal who stood next to her and hugged her so tight as well.
Payal-kushi come on...we..we are here to take you home...
Nani-atleast sit have just come...
Buaji-hai re nande kisor we have been sitting for half no more...i had come to take kusi so thats what i shall do...come on kusi said buaji holding her hand to walk away.

shouted arnav as he marched towards them...he looked at buaji holding on to kushi's hand...
he reached at his hands and pulled her away from buaji forcing them to break free from on another.

Buaji-how dare you! yelled kushi

Akash-payal ji please...please keep buaji calm..i'll...let me talk to minute...

Payal-one minute!!
you want one minute!! you had one night to sort this out! why didn't you akash ji???
do you know worried we were??
and all because of your bhai!

Akash-bhai please...pleaded akash trying to pull kushi away but arnav did not budge..he looked at buaji with his eyes popping out in anger...

Arnav-akash...i am serious if  anyone takes kushi away then no one...i mean no one is going to be worse than arnav singh raizada!
Kushi-arnav ji..let..go please...
Arnav-no kushi spoke arnav as he pressed her on his chest as if she was some kind of a teddy bear..i am not going to let you leave me...not ever...

is that how you want to play it..then fine!
okay then i will like to see how long you could behave like this...
do you understand...i will stay in this house

and that is my arnav singh raizada.

buaji took out her hand showing a stop sign..she was adamant to go in any extent to win.
thinking this was like another business contract that arnav had to win he decided to accept this challenge and warned everyone not to get in between.
akash looked at payal and felt his heart fall to the ground knowing she will be living with them.
he couldnt help himself smiling and thought maybe this wasn't such a bad idea.

Kushi-arnav ji please don't do this..
its not can...buaji...payal...stay...

you should be more happy they are..
i arnav singh raizada is allowing them to stay here
appreciate it kushi scoffed arnav with arrogance.
in this way they will be nearer to you and you wont need to worry about them...
don't you see everything i do finishes with making you happy and this way you my love will be happy...right?
spoke arnav and gave her a peck on the cheek
front of the entire family without any warning he looked up giving the"no way you are leaving me"look and walked off with a cheeky grin.
arnav couldn't careless who was in front of them..all he knew was kushi was his wife and he will treat her like front or behind his family.

nani asked jai prakash to take buaji's and payal luggage to the other guest room...
Nani-please come had a long journey...what would you like..tea,coffee or anything cold?
payal you too..please do not hesitate..consider this as your own house...

Mami-hello hi bye like we haven't had enough of pati saree now number 2!
no..this is a nightmare!!! weeped manorama...and ran towards her room waddling her arms like a penguin.
an irritated kushi could not stand to see her family in this state so she excused herself from everyone and told them she needed to go to the bathroom...
little did they know her intention was not to go to the bathroom but was to confront arnav for once and for all.

Akash-on behalf of my mother i apologize buaji..please..
Buaji-no dear..this is not your needn't to apologize son
it is your brother that should be apologizing...this is all his fault...
see payal..look at the difference between the two...
this a man that is so caring for others and him...
mr arnav singh raizada
doesn't care about anyone but himself..

Payal-buaji stop...
im sorry akash...for earlier...
akash smiled back and told them to not worry to much
nani got up and walked to the kitchen to see if anything was being prepared for the guest to eat.
Akash-buaji now you must eat
if you dont then i will understand that you hadn't too payal ji eat something...
buaji smiled at akash's politeness and agreed to his words.

Edited by gansteress - 09 December 2011 at 7:51pm

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_mahi_ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 December 2011 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
gangoo Hug its been so long since i made a comment any where heheLOL
so here i come hunWink
how are you?Big smile n howz everything?Wink well i guess you are doing great to see that ras*** being slapped by KKG LolLOL
so yeahBig smile... woww i love the possessive ASR in your ffEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
its just sooo hayyeee...TongueTongue
how he took her by force was not rightConfused but i guess when it comes to love.. everything is a fair game heheWink
i am in love with your ff hunnieeEmbarrassed.. its incredible.. Clap
do update soon hun n thanks for the pm Hug
much love.. mahi..Embarrassed

Edited by _mahi_ - 09 December 2011 at 7:41pm

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dumas IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 09 December 2011 at 7:39pm | IP Logged
asr is so in trouble that bauji will drive him nuts love the update thank for the pm missed you  was little worried 
awesome update 

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..Anita.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 December 2011 at 7:41pm | IP Logged
i am not allowed to like this :(
great update...i like the twist in the story...please update soon and thanks for the pm

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