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.Saraa. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 October 2011 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
good,so finally confessed

Haniibee Senior Member

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Posted: 13 October 2011 at 12:51am | IP Logged
Finally!!!!!!! YES!!!!! Oh God! The day this hapens in the drama I AM LITERALLY GONNA DIE!!!!!!!
Thanks a lot for the PM!!!
Great UPDATE but as usual you left it at a cliffhanger!!!!
This is better be continued soon!!
*wagging finger*
gansteress Senior Member

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Posted: 13 October 2011 at 3:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pinkpearlz

Totally loved the update, and got the answer to my question. The advantage i mentioned?Was asking why didn't arnav say, what he had wanted to at home, that's why he dragged khushi out so he'll have her alone and then can say it and she will listen(i've a problem of going into lengthy confusing sentences, lol). Now love the way it burst out of him, the build up to that was very good. babuji's trust in his daughter's is soo touching, i mean most parents do trust their kids but dont allow certain things considering what the society will say, rather than what their kids want to.
What's gonna happen now, will khushi accept? I doubt if she will this soon. And

My name is Fareha, what's yours? Thanks for the pm.
hey fareha Tonguemy name syeda 
how are you?
awh thank you really happy to know that your enjoying my ffEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Embarrassedim always worrying if i am making it boring..
gansteress Senior Member

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Posted: 13 October 2011 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
arnav had finally confessed his love...
they both stood in eachothers arms still drenched from the rain...
kushi was shocked to hear these words from him finally...arnav huffed in anger trying to calm himsef down...he held kushi so tightly that his grip started to hurt her...he looked at kushi waiting for her to react but kushi was still in shock...

Arnav-kushi..?? said arnav shaking her slightly trying to get her attention
Kushi-ji arnav ji?...said kushi in a teary voice...
arnav let her go of her arms realizing he was hurting her
and turn away embarrassed...he walked towards the window and slammed the wall hard... really very sorry kushi said arnav with a broken voice..trying to control his emotions..but his tears would not stop flowing from his eyes...making it red...
i didn't meant to...i mean...what i meant was... mumbled arnav trying to find the right words to express
seeing arnav in state kushi had also calmed down...
she walked toward him and put her hand on his shoulder puling him to look at her...
Kushi-arnav ji...what you said did you mean it...
do you ...i mean...i also...
but before kushi could say anything else arnav pullled her towards him and hugged her tightly...her heart started beating fast...she wanted to hold him back...but didnt know how to...
Arnav-i love you very much kushi
arnav stroked kushi's wet hair...which made her feel tingle a little..making her get butterflies in her stomach...

the sound of the rain pouring down made them feel more cold...the wind was howling so loudly making kushi shiver in arnav's arms...she  closed her eyes tight feeling scared of the sound...realizing she was stillin his arms she turned around trying to get away but before she could move a single step forward arnav held onto her hands...
kushi struggle to get away...
Kushi-arnav ji..what are you doing...let me go...
said kushi going all red with embarrassment.
Arnav-no said arnav pulling her towards his chest...
not until i get to hear what i want to hear from you...
arnav put his hand on her cheeks rubbing it with admiration..and smiled...
kushi looked down blushing...but couldn't help giving a little smirk...
Kushi-arnav ji..please...let go...
Arnav-no...not until you say it...
Arnav-nope not listening

Kushi-AAAGH!!! screamed kushi
Arnav-what happened??
Kushi-A SPIDER!!!
arnav-spi...spder??? where???
he looked arund trying to find it...but before arnav could realize kushi was playing a trick..she had already run to the bathroom...locking the door so that arnav could not get in
Arnav-WHAT THE F...
kushi! kushi open the door now! said arnav pounding the door what this...does someone play this kind of jokes...look kushi this is not done...i've said it to its your turn to say it back
kushi started to giggle..
Kushi-no arnav ji...i will not...
Arnav-kushi..thats it if you don't open the door before i count to three then im leaving...
im giving one last chance the door
kushi started to giggle even more knowing arnav was squirming to hear her says those 3 words
kushi stopped giggling hearing the sound of the door being slammed shut...she quickly open the door to run after arnav...
Arnav-so you finally opened the door
said arnav smirking at kushi giving"now where you going to run"ook
even i know how to play tricks...its a two way street...

kushi laughed nervously...but like always kushi was about to run when arnav held on to her and picked her up...

Arnav-now where are you going to run miss kushi kumari gupta

Edited by gansteress - 13 October 2011 at 3:13pm

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tina_1234 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 13 October 2011 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
aww cute part
angili Goldie

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Posted: 13 October 2011 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
oh dear god it was great but you are evil just lke the cvs once we start enjoying you stop not fair
but neverless you deserveClap fgor this update and ff

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SublimeSanaya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 October 2011 at 3:09pm | IP Logged

wow .. wht an update ... simply amazing 

so romantic ... both are mischievous brats i suppose ...

nicely done 

- - badra

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gansteress Senior Member

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Posted: 13 October 2011 at 3:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by angili

oh dear god it was great but you are evil just lke the cvs once we start enjoying you stop not fair
but neverless you deserveClap fgor this update and ff
awh thank you sweetsEmbarrassed x x x

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