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Originally posted by pinkpearlz

My my! Girl this is getting better by each update. And the twists, what to say. Jai falling for khushi? Must say i didn't expect that. I like how he called her khush, hope he does that in front of arnav, lol how i wish i could he expression then (Wish it happens in the show, sum1 names her and call in front of him, that will awesome). Then shyam again saved by hair's breadth. Oh arnav, now am starting to feel sorry for him.
thank you sweet for the comment... x
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Originally posted by aadyakali

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Arnav-Di!  Di!
shouted arnav whilst coming down the stairs...
Anjali-whats wrong chotte...why you do you seem tensed...
Arnav-where is my newspaper...you know i start off my day with reading the newspaper...so where is it today...

anjali giggled...
Anjali-chotte...why are you so childish sometimes...your grown up to be a man but sometimes act like a little boy...
your newspaper...is...erm..
anjali looked around for the newspaper but could not find it...
its not here chotte...are you sure om prakash or jai prakash didn't put it in your room...
Arnav-no di...i have checked...its not there...
Anjali-if om prakash ji didn't put or neither did jai prakash ji...then...where...
have your asked jagdish prakash ji...??


Anjali- jagdish prakash ji..jagdish prakash ji
Jagdish prakash- ji anjali...arnav babu whats wrong...?
Anjali-have you seen chotte's morning newspaper...?
Jagdish-ji anjali...actually jai babu had taken to read it...
i was bringing it arnav babu's room but jai asked to read the newspaper...so..i gave it to him...
Arnav-what the..!

Anjali-okay jagdish prakash ji..you can go..
Jagdish prakash-okay anjali ji..
Anjali-oh and jagdish prakash ji..if kushi ji comes...please tell her i would like to see her..
anjali gave the "quickly go" look
anjali hurried jagdish prakash to leave before arnav scolds him...

Arnav-who does he think he is..taking my newspaper...
Anjali-chotte...why are you getting so angry...he is a guest...don't be rude...
Arnav-he is not a guest di...hes a uninvited guest...
and di..you know i don't like anyone touching my personal property..
so y is...

Jai-looks like someone is talking about me...
actually my character is the type to be talked about...
hope you not talking bad things about me..
jai replied from behind...holding the newspaper arnav was looking for...
arnav examined jai from head to toe...
Arnav's mind-what does kushi see in him...what does he have that i don't have...
Anjali-oh hi jai ji...good morning...
Jai-anjali ji..i think that arnav is not happy with me staying here...
Anjali-no no not atall jai ji..dont be silly...you are most welcome here...
jai gave a smirk to arnav...he knew deep down arnav disliked him but still he wanted to rub it in arnav's face that he is going to be here for a very long time...
jai held out the newspaper to give to arnav but instead
arnav ignored him and walked away...
Anjali-chotte..chotte...
anjali smiled at jai...erm don't mind him..he is just in a cranky mood...
anyway kushi ji must be on her way here...so i must prepare breakfast before she comes...
Jai-kushi..kushi is coming...??
Anjali-you seemed really excited hearing her name...mmmh
looks like someone missed her.right...?
Jai looked down with embarrassment...

DING GONG!
the door bell rang...
Anjali-jai ji..looks like kushi ji has come..can you please open the door
Jai-ji anjali...

jai walked towards the door excited thinking it was kushi who had rang the door bell..he had been looking forward into meeting her again

arnav also heard the doorbell from his room
Arnav's mind-kushi...kushi's here...??
his heart started to pound so hard...he was starting to get butterflies in his stomach thinking kushi had come...
he had also been eagerly waiting for kushi to come..arnav had few questions need answered..he had to see her today..
he quickly walked out of his  bedroom to open the main door when he noticed jai was also heading towards the door...
Arnav's mind-what the!
who does he think he is...
arnav quickly rushed downstairs  to get ahead...
he did not want jai opening the door for kushi...
it was like a race between the two boys...to see who gets to open the door for kushi...

the main door had been opened..kushi was standing there...she gave a big smile...and said...

Kushi-Hi...


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Posted: 06 October 2011 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
nice one!!!!!
very jealous of jai!!!!
who might hv opened the door!!!!
pls update soon!!!!

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Posted: 06 October 2011 at 3:12pm | IP Logged
this is a really nice update. love the competition between jai and arnav. very funny to read. i wonder who opened the door.i got a good idea but we'll see soon :P
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