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Thank you friends for loving the last part. I have replied to all the comments so please do read them.

 

Chapter 76 – Now I've had the time of my life

 

After the song dance floor was opened. As the special couple for tonight, Pari urged them to come forward. Geet held Maan's arms and sighed a little sadly - "Pari, tum bhul rahi ho….I can't dance…my stitches are still not healed completely." Maan could read hint of melancholy in her eyes at missing her first dance with him as a couple.

 

"Nahin Geet…aaj tum woh sab karogi jo tumne kabhi sapne mein bhi socha hoga…aaj no compromises." Saying this Maan lifted Geet in his arms and moved to the dance floor amidst hooting and whistles.

 

He placed her softly on his foot and danced with her.

 

Now I've had the time of my life

No, I never felt like this before

Yes, I swear it's the truth

And I owe it all to you

 

Cause I've had the time of my life
and I owe it all to you

Geet placed her head on his shoulder and they swayed to the music


I've been waiting for so long
Now I've finally found someone
To stand by me

We saw the writing on the wall
As we felt this magical fantasy

Now with passion in our eyes
There's no way we could disguise it secretly
So we take each other's hand
'Cause we seem to understand the urgency

just remember

You're the one thing

I can't get enough of

So I'll tell you something


This could be love because

Maan lifted her in his arms and twirled her around

 

I've had the time of my life
No I never felt this way before
Yes I swear it's the truth
And I owe it all to you

'Cause I've had the time of my life
And I've searched through every open door
Till I found the truth
and I owe it all to you

Maan brought her back down and brought her in his arms close to him.


With my body and soul
I want you more than you'll ever know

So we'll just let it go
Don't be afraid to lose control

Yes I know what's on your mind
When you say: "Stay with me tonight."

Just remember
you're the one thing

I can't get enough of

So I'll tell you something

This could be love because

Maan lifted her high so that her knees reached his shoulders and he held her in the lift pose turning slowly


Cause I had the time of my life
No I've never felt this way before
Yes I swear it's the truth
And I owe it all to you
'Cause I've had the time of my life
And I've searched through every open door
Till I found the truth
and I owe it all to you

Everyone could just gasp at the beautiful love of two hearts dancing in each other's arms.

 

After the first dance Maan took her and made her sit on the couch next to him. Geet's eyes felt teary at the amount of love this man had for her. He signaled Pinky to come closer.

 

Maan – "Pinky Geet ke liye please juice le aao"

 

Pinky nodded and went away. Geet – "Maan iski zaroorat nahin"

 

Maan – "Chup…bilkul…chup…medicines ke saath you need lot of energy and liquid intake…chup chaap peelo"

 

Pinky gave some juice to Geet which she quietly gulped under the watchful eyes of Maan. He sat with her holding her hand and talking to her for next 45 minutes or so till their loved ones danced and enjoyed themselves.

 

Later, Raj invited everyone to join dinner. As there were not many people, everybody sat at a huge table set in one corner where Nakul along with professional caterers served multiple types of food.

 

Maan and Geet sat together with Adi and Rahul sitting at their sides. They both fed each other first bites and then pretended to eat from their plates. Truth was their hearts thudded loudly as they became each other's. Maan had placed his one hand on her knee and Geet desperately wanted to just melt in his arms. As Pari moved around table making sure everything was good she noticed Geet playing with her pallu and Maan's hand on her knee. She realized their restlessness and desire to steal a moment alone. She motioned Rahul to come inside and told him to help them.

 

After dinner, Rahul got up. On pretense of a Geet's frail health and being a busy day, Rahul took Geet inside back to her bedroom. He asked her to wait as he sends somebody to help her.

 

Few minutes later Rahul came close to Maan – "Mr Jiju…your darling fianc is waiting for you so you can join her….but please 15-20 minute mein aa jana kyonki usse zayda der tak koi phone call par nahin rehta." Saying this he winked at Maan.

 

Maan grinned – "Thanks buddy…tu aur teri pyari Pari ke liye meri taraf se treat"

 

As Maan started to move, Rahul placed a hand on his shoulder – "Woh sab thik hai, but behave ok…meri bahen hai samjha"

 

Maan retorted – "Ji Saala sahib"

 

Before Rahul could change his mind, Maan slipped inside and went to Geet's room.

 

Geet stood in front of mirror with a smile on her face reflecting on the evening which just went by. She was already missing Maan as she didn't want to leave from there. She sighed and spoke loudly looking upwards – "Babaji…aapko bhi abhi meri tabiyat kharab karni thi…thoda aage piche adjust kar lete…aaj ke din bhi main unke paas nahin hoon…kaise lagega mera man…aaram karo…so jao…kaise so jaoon jab woh bahar hain…mere itne paas hain phir bhi door"

 

She was startled when suddenly she felt a pair of hands around her waist. Maan nuzzled her nose at the side of her neck – "Lagta hai koi mujhe bahut miss kar raha hai…hmmm"

 

Geet blushed as her heartbeats increased – "Maan!!! Aap bhi na…kisi din meri jaan le loge…chado…kya kar rahe ho…woh to meri personal baatein thi Babaji ke saath…kisi ne app ko yahan dekh liya to"

 

Maan nipped her earlobe slightly and responded huskily – "To? Ab to officially tum meri ho gayi ho so no one can object aur jahan tak rahi Babaji ke saath tumhari personal baat ki…ab humare beech mein mera tumhara kya…sab kuch humara hai to personal baatein bhi humari hai…hai na"

 

Geet turned in his arms – "Oh Hello!!!! ….sharam karo…abhi engagement hui hai shaadi nahin samjhe…chodo…chodo mujhe"

 

Maan tightened his grip and jerked her closer. Her curves collided with his chest as he closed the distance between their bodies. "Nahin…bilkul nahin"

 

Saying this he held her firmly and dipped closer to kiss her forehead, followed by her eyes, her cheeks, and her jaw line. By now Geet had totally melted in his arms. When Maan still not capture her lips she lost all her patience and pecked him long with force on his lips. Maan chuckled at her boldness and converted the peck to an open mouthed passionate French kiss.

 

They parted to grab some air. Maan kissed her forehead again – "Mujhe jaana hoga ab Mishti…Good Night Jaan"

 

Geet tip toed on her feet and kissed his forehead – "Good Night Jaanu"

 

Precap – Wild Flowers

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