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MG FF-Till Death Do Us Part Thread 5 (Page 129)

cloudflower Senior Member

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Posted: 12 October 2011 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
beautiful update
loved every bit of it
poor pari Cry she was so sad as her uncle has broken her trust that se hold for him till now Ouch
glad she understood why geet hid everything from her
loved pari's confession  Smile it clearly showed how she is good at her heart
geet's parents care and support towards pari was so heart touching , loved it
although pari lost her parents she was indeed lucky to has such loving in laws in her life
she was right , geet is truly an angel who was gifted by god to their family
really happy at last pari found her complete family who love her beyond limits
aww geet was also sad as she thought she has hurt pari
but loved the way how maan made her understood as it was not her mistake
maan is really a caring lover whom any girl would wish to have in her life , lucky geet na WinkEmbarrassed
wow loved the way how he distracted geet with his spell bounding kissy wissy Embarrassed
it was so sweet how they cheered up pari Smile
this the dream family anyone would love to have which is full of love and care towards each other
oho precap seems very interesting Wink
eagerly waiting for next part Embarrassed
thanks for the pm
please continue soon dear

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Mehek25 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 October 2011 at 12:54am | IP Logged
Awesome update dear.
So happy for Pari.
her mama did not love her but now she has the love of a whole family. She richly deserves it.
Loved the bonding between all the family members.
Pls continue soon. 
Thanx for pm dear.

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minnie_tweetie IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 October 2011 at 1:26am | IP Logged
arrrey wah di kya update dia hai
loved it
thank god pari accepted that
she is also a good person...
continue soon di

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 October 2011 at 1:27am

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prerna1 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 October 2011 at 1:50am | IP Logged
nice part
plz continue soon

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seemamary IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 October 2011 at 2:00am | IP Logged
Amazing, awesome. Superb update.

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mystique_girl Goldie

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Posted: 13 October 2011 at 4:28am | IP Logged

I have finally finished reading all the chapters which I missed during my vacation...

I must say that the story is moving beautifully with the love flowing freely around among the lovebirds and the family.

Love the bond that Maaneet share, your ideas of innovative gifts and ways to tease them (specially the under table incident), the new year party on the terrace and recap of Pari's past..

Hope to see lots of interesting plots in the coming updates..

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Tyro IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 October 2011 at 9:10am | IP Logged

liked how pari confessed everything...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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ritzy09 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 October 2011 at 9:40am | IP Logged


Thank you friends for you lovely comments. I am travelling tomorrow and hence will not be able to update. So in lieu of that I aa giving an update today. Next update will be on Monday.


Chapter 85 – Sexy Red


22nd January Evening


Geet strode down the stairs all ready to attend a business party. Rahul wanted to spend some time with Pari as she was going through a tough first trimester.


Maan sat with his parents, Annie and Geet's parents playing cards. He looked up as he felt Mishti's aroma around him. He gaped at the sight in front of him. Geet was clad in a blood red dress coming just above her knees. It has a layered neck and flowing skirt beneath the waist. Though the dress was simply red but it made Geet look very sexy as it fitted her curves properly. She had minimal makeup and her hair was in an elegant bun with tendrils floating around her neck. She had no necklace and the tendrils made her bare neck look long and elegant like a swan.


She looked out of the world and Maan was astounded the way her creamy skin contrasted with bright red color making her look delicious.


He was totally lost in her as she walked down. He was so lost that he did not realize that 5 pairs of eyes were looking at him intently. Finally Annie took her hand and placed it under his chin and closed his mouth.


Annie – "Bhai….bas karo…mana aapki hone wali biwi hai lekin seriously aise dekh rahe ho jaise pehli baar dekha hai"


All the elders were laughing loudly.


Geet stood there rooted and blushing hard.


Maan said dismissively – "Aisi koi baat nahin hai".


Rishab chuckled – "Oh really…."


Juhi – "Bahut sundar lag rahi ho beta. Kisiki nazar na lage meri laado ko". Saying this she put a little kajal dot behind her ear.


Nisha – "Kyon Maan tum kuch nahin kahoge"


Maan tried to play it cool – "Haan…off course she is looking good"


Geet said bye quickly and left the place. Maan lost whatever semblance of sanity was left in him as he saw her back. Dress had a deep V neck with a diamond clasp in the middle of her back and the arch of her spine was clearly visible leading to a clear imagination of the rest of it.


Maan was left breathless and hell angry at the same time. "How can she go in front of others like this and that too alone…God every man in that party is going to be eyeing up my Mishti"


After that Maan could hardly focus on the game. Flashes of Geet's beautiful image kept on disturbing him. Finally he gave up.


Maan – "Guys…I need to go…I suddenly remembered I had to meet Adi today as Pinky is with Uncleji tonight."


Nisha – "Kyon Kya hua"


Maan –"Nahin kuch hua nahin…Bas Uncleji usse miss kar rahe the to who chali gayi…I promised Adi I will spend some time with him."


Saying this Maan walked out of there and drove to Adi's house.


Maan – "Yaar Adi….I am going to meet Geet. If anyone asks, I met you as you were supposed to be alone as Pinky was suppose to go to her maika but she didn't"


Adi – "Are you mad….You are engaged for god sake…abhi jhoot bolne ki kya zaroorat hai"


Maan – "Maine koi jhoot nahin bola….see I am here to meet you right….so where is the lie…moreover I just want to give a surprise to her"


Pinky – "Oh wow….how smart….and you are going to gate crash a party…sharam karo Dr Maan Singh Khurana"


Maan – "Whatever"


Maan went to the hotel where party was arranged. Manager recognized him instantaneously. Maan inquired the whereabouts of the party and the guy escorted him to the room without even bothering to check if he had the invitation or not.


Maan eyes were searching for Geet. He stood behind a pillar trying to find her. He saw her standing in a corner with a group of men deep in discussion. Maan noticed as her brows furrowed together in concentration as she focused on the discussion. But he also noticed what she had failed to see. There was almost a line of young business men trying to enter the discussion pretending to be useful just close by. But his anger was replaced with grave concern when he saw someone standing behind her and ogling her with a look which made his fists curl.


Maan quickly moved towards the bar picking up a glass of whisky. He neared the person behind her back and promptly bumped into him dumping the entire drink on his white shirt.


Maan – "Oh!!! I am sorry dude….I am really sorry"


Man moved from there to clean his soiled shirt.


Geet was startled as she felt a hand encircling her waist and was surprised to see Maan standing next to her.


Maan – "Hello Honey, sorry I am late"


Geet was bewildered to see Maan and almost chocked when he said "Honey". She was conscious of media around and regained quickly to ask in a similar tone


Geet – "Maan Darling!!! I am glad you could make it. Guys, this is my fianc Dr Maan Singh Khurana and these are my business associates – BA1, BA2, BA3 and BA4" (Sorry guys too lazy to make up names right now)


Maan said a customary hello.


After exchanging pleasantries, he guided Geet to the dance floor and started swaying with her gently.


Geet – "Maan….what the hell was that aur aap yahan kya kar rahe ho"


Maan glided his hand from her waist upwards to touch her naked back. Geet gasped as she felt his warm fingers on the cold skin. He pulled her closer and whispered in her ears – "Mrs. Khurana….do you really think I will let you be alone in front of so many men and that too when you look edible….They are able to see you is enough treat for them and I am not magnanimous enough to give them anything more. Trust me…right now I want to peel out their eyes out for feasting on my Mishti"


Geet blushed hard as blood thundered to her cheeks. She looked down and gasped – "Maan".


Maan just pulled her closer so that now her second hand was not holding her hand but was on her waist. Geet reached up to encircle his neck and they were almost hugging each other. She shyly looked up to see passion, possessiveness and love all rolled in to the searing gaze by which he was looking at her.


Geet could not hold his gaze and looked down – "Irada kya hai Dr Khurana"


"Tumhein churane ka"


Precap – Caught!!!

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