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MG FF-Till Death Do Us Part Thread 5 - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago

Dil khush kar diya Di aapne kya update tha

Oh Geet is so lucky to have someone like Maan kitna khayal raktha hai wo uska she was feeling bad that she cannot dance with maan on the biggest day of her life
 
but maan ne tho uska khayal bhi rakha aur uski tamanna bhi puri kar di
 
their dance was so romantic and innocent
 
I so wish  I had someone like him in my life par kya kare meri kismat mein tho mere books hi haiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
khair loved Pari and Rahul
 
Geet ki personal baate Maan ne sunn li and then he was giving her a sweet torture par apni sherni kab tak chup baithi finally she gave him a peck😳 aur sadda munda toh humesha hi taiyaar rehtha hai gift k liye aur aaj tho geet ne khud hi green signal de diya
 
loved their romance
 
continue soon Di
 
love-Piya
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Dear... totally loved it...
 
Loved the Dance sequence... slow , soft and lovely...
 
Best I liked their reslessness... maan putting hands on her knees and she plying with her pallu... really it gave me something... kind of very natural...
 
Then the room scene and Geet's talk to Babaji... Maan coming from behind... their love... I loved them all...
 
I felt ke jaldi khatam ho gaya update...
 
It was awsome Dear... 
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Posted: 12 years ago
cute part Ritzy di..,😊
Maan ka Geet ko uthake dance karane le jana ws sooo cute... πŸ˜ƒ
Then Geet ko Maan ne apni nazron ke samne juice pilaya...heheheheh... πŸ˜›
pari ki aankhen to badi tez hain... Maan & Geet ka chota sa romantic moment dekh lia...hehehehe... πŸ˜†
Rahul & Pari ka conspire karna to help Maan & Geet meet alone was sooo cute... 😊
then Geet ki babaji se private talk (rathr ab Maan & Geet ka private tok..hehehehe) ws very cute... 😊
all in all.. Amazin part... I loved it... πŸ˜ƒ πŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
Maan is so sweet
Pari and Rahul are great
plz continue soon
krndr thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

The dance was just superb

And loved Pari and Rahul for helping them
 
Superb part
 
Enjoyed it a lot
 
Continue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Marvelous update,love the way the family help this lovely couple,the dance scenes was touching.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update.
thank for pm
pls continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
sweet part
looking forward to wedding
con't soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was awesome 😳
thanks 4 the pm
please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
loved it a lot...