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ff complications of life chapter 13 pg 35 (Page 5)

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Posted: 01 October 2011 at 9:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by peehu24

aww...that was a cute update..i liked it..continue soon...

thank u dear but i don't think the next one is going to be cute n i will surely try to continue it soon

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Posted: 01 October 2011 at 9:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sivaranjani

Nice start!! But why is Abhay angry on his parents? Because he thinks they are responsible for his Di's death?? What is the mystery behind it..?

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ya actually coz of sum misunderstanding he thinks so . thanks for commenting  n i will surely pm u Smile

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Posted: 01 October 2011 at 10:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cuteshrishti

wow dear nice update.I so loved it yaar.Cute update.Waiting 4 Abhiya meetingEmbarrassed & was tht shadow talking abt seperating Abhiya?Confused

glad u liked it shrishti . n about that shadow i will reveal soon
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Posted: 02 October 2011 at 8:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chill-sneha

nice ff ,i am waiting more and more ff from you 

glad u liked it n thanks for ur sweet comments dear n m already writing 2 ff u can read the other one dark secrets alsoSmile
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                                              chapter 3
            jungles
that shadow was standing near a tree , she felt  a masculine hand on her shoulder . she understood who it was .
shadow - jeh bhai please , u know m not gonna listen to u then y r u
               trying to convince me .
jeh - alina , please try to understand ! what was piashree's fault
        in all this?
alina - it was her fault ! i can never forgive her
                                        flashback
21 years ago in dehradun . it was a calm day . alina was wid her best friend abhyendra as usual . they used to go for a morning walk daily together . alina started liking him , or she already had a crush on her best friend . but he was still stuck in luv wid her , alina 's rival , piashree . abhayendra n piashree first met in the palace of pandher , while their college trip ( guys don't laugh coz 21 years pehle colleges hote the LOL) . they became good friends , alina remembered the process of abhayendra n piashree's luvstory while abhyendra in the walk continously  speaking sumthing .
abhyendra - alina , alina , where r u lost ? planet zoltar ( u will find this planet in my almost all posts coz m a big fan of it LOL)

alina cuming back to senses - oh nothing abhyendra , i was just
                                 luking at those flowers .
abhayendra - i don't understand y my parents kept my name
                       so big ? u can call me abhay also ! ( actually i was
                       having prob in writing such a big name LOL)
alina - fine , i will call u abhay n i don't need any order to call u
          wid any name , i can call u abhay , abhi , abby , n ya i can
       call u abby chabby also !
abhay - u can call me anything but please not abby chabby !
they both started laughing .
                                        flashback over
alina cums back to senses n sees that jeh is already gone . she dials a number . the other end picks up the phone .
voice - don't worry i will do it as soon as possible .
alina - make sure that u do it . i don't want any mistake in this
         work .
voice - i told u na no mistake ! trust me .
alina - fine !
she cuts the call n thinks " this time i will not let them even get close, before they even start to think about a relation i will cum in between ."
                       
                                    college
abhay n tashi r entering in the college . everyone is staring at them coz abhay often told about his sis but no one of his friend saw her coz abhay wanted to keep his sis secure from others though he himself was a big casanova ! tashi saw pia n misha talking . she took permission from abhay n went to them .
tashi - pia di , its u ?
pia - oh tashi u ? kitne time baad mil rahe hain
they both hug each other n misha is looking at them she is not aware about tashi . she asks
misha - hey pia who is she ?
pia - oh misha , i just forgot to tell u , she is tashi . my dad's
        friend's daughter . n i think her bro is also in this college
         only but i don't know him coz he never came wid his family
        n aferall we met 2 years ago only .
misha - ok fine i just asked about tashi , y r u giving me whole
            bio data ? oh ya now i remember tashi ko tum bhool jaogi
            but her bro whom u never met uske baare mein yaad hai .
            really yaar , u r also becuming a despo just like tracker .
pia - shut up mish ! aisa kuchh nahi hai !
they all started laughing .
misha - by the way tashi , who is ur bro ?
tashi - abhay , abhay raichand .
misha - then i know ur bro coz hum dono saath mein chhup te hain
           miss D se !
tashi n pia - what ?
misha - wo actually we both r usually late in the class so we met
            when miss D gave us punishment . we made a plan to
           escape from attending the class . hum dono class mein
         aate hain n then chupke se bach ke nikal jaate hain .
pia - OMG mish ! u r unpredictable , but if he is in our class then
       y i never saw him ?
mish - kya tumne mujhe class mein kabhi dekha hai ?
pia - no , tum to humesha class bunk kar leti ho !
misha - exactly yaar ! he is my partner in all this !
tashi - bro bhi na always crummy things karta hai !
misha - crummy , what 's  that ?
pia - that 's her language jo kisi ko bhi samajh nahi aati !
they all started laughing n then went to their respective classes.

guys abhi ke liye itna hi padho . mujhe pata hai that it was not a good chapter but next will contain abhiya . i will update next part today only . so for now please hit the like button n comment.



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Posted: 04 October 2011 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
nice update!!!!!!

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Posted: 05 October 2011 at 12:25am | IP Logged
Hey dear awesome update.Who said its bad?So Alina is evil here?.Koi na.I hope Abhiya jaldi mile.Me waiting 4 their 1st meeting.Plz continueEmbarrassed

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