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ff complications of life chapter 13 pg 35 (Page 20)

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Posted: 29 November 2011 at 2:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pari-Gupta

awesome updates
loved them
please PM me next time you update

thanks pariEmbarrassed yup i will pm uEmbarrassed

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Posted: 29 November 2011 at 2:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ananyashera

Clap awesome Clap...loved ur ff...thanks ananyaEmbarrassed

one request - please can u make index on first page, so that it will be easy to know about update of chapters & their page no.s...i will maintain itEmbarrassed

please update soon & send me the pm when u update...
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Posted: 29 November 2011 at 2:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cuteshrishti

hahah I loved it yaar.Abhiya cute moment was superb & Raichands family time was jst wow.Abahy is falling 4 Pia me happyEmbarrassed

thanks shrishtiEmbarrassed glad u liked thatEmbarrassed yup n soon they both will realize alsoWink

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                                                    chapter 8
next morning in the mount college -
abhay n kabir were walking in the coridor discussing sumthing . abhay's arm was around kabir's neck n shoulder . suddenly they saw misha n pia cuming , abhay's breath almost stopped looking at her . she was looking gorgeous in that white sleeveless top n blue jeans . kabir was about to faint looking at misha . she for the first time was wearing a white dress n was carrying light make-up . but her puppy face was making her look cute .
they both came n pia smiled
pia - hey guys
abhay came back to senses
abhay - hey hitler
pia- what did u just call me ?
abhay - m really sorry lagta hai dil ki baat zabaan pe aa gayi
n he laughed n hi5d wid misha .
abhay - n what is going on hun ? bhootni , (misha ) why r u dressed up
           like a human girl ? (n he pretended to be shocked )
abhay again started laughing but misha wasn't angry wid him instead she was laughing wid him too coz she preffered to be called bhootni instead of being called a bimbo !!
but pia was still angry . abhay noticed it .
abhay - hey m sorry !! i won't call u hitler again
pia - its OK
abhay - what about zombie ?
pia was left mouth opened .
pia - shut up abhay
abhay - achha sorry . i will call u ummm let me think
pia hit on his shoulder n they all laughed . suddenly he saw tashi cuming wid veer .
abhay - who is that guy wid my sister ? how dare he even go near her ?
abhay was about to move when pia stopped him .
pia- abhay
abhay - pia let me teach a lesson to that guy
pia - shut up abhay !! she is ur sister n having full liberty to chose her
       friends !! n tashi is an intelligent girl n can make her decisions on
          her own .
abhay - but pia what if
pia interrupted - abhay if u can play wid girls then why she is not even
                           chose her friends ?
abhay realized - pia u r correct !! m sorry actually i just feel insecure
                        about my sis n u know the reason
pia - i know abhay n i know that u care for her
tashi n veer came to them
tashi - hoola bro n pia u looking awesome blossom
pia - thanks tashi
tashi - this is veer . my new friend n my partner in the play
abhay - hi veer
veer - hi
pia - nice to meet u veer
veer - same here . tashi told me about u n abhay .
tashi - coz they both r best
n she hugged abhay
abhay - n she is the sweetest n the naughtiest sister
tashi gave her million dollar smile .
veer - oh freak !! kimmy !!
tashi - what happened veer ?
veer - i need to go tashi
tashi - y ? n where ?
veer pointed towards a girl cuming towards them searching for sumone
veer - she is kimmy . i will tell u the rest later
n saying this veer ran towards the canteen .
kimmy came towards them wid her rest of the "Titli "gang (her chamchis just like T has )
kimmy - hey u r tashi right ?
tashi - ya m tashi
kimmy - i saw u yesterday wid zenia , that chatter box . there is an
              advice , such a diva belongs to be a titli like us
tashi - no thanks m better wid my friends
kimmy - OK , ur wish if u wanna be wid us or those downmarket people
n saying this she left
pia - now i understand why was veer hiding
abhay - i understand how veer feels . i have gone through this !!
they all laughed .

                                      drama classes
abhay came dressed up as romeo . pia was waiting for him standing on the stage .
romeo (abhay ) - juliet , lets go from here
juliet (pia ) - booking ho gayi
romeo - Oops !! abhi book karta hun
n saying this he takes out his I-phone n does the bookings .
juliet - flight kab ki hai ?
romeo  - 9:30 pm
juliet - but at that time i watch my favorite show !!
romeo - its OK sweetheart !! i will mail them n ask for some other flight
juliet - that is great my sweetheart

teacher - fabolous !! this play is going to be awesome
abhiya - thanks mam

abhay went to change his costume . suddenly he remembered that pia forgot to take back her phone from him .
"oh freak !! i need to go  now " he thought n went to return it back .
at the changing room he didn't thought to knock at the door coz he totally forgot that boys were not allowed there coz he usually met his girlfriends there only . fortunately , pia was the only one there .
she was trying hard to unzip her dress from the back . for a while , abhay's heartbeats stopped looking at her . he kept standing n knocked on the opened door so that she realizes that he was there .
pia - cum in
abhay didn't say a word n pia wasn't aware that it was abhay . she thought it was misha .
pia - hey can u please help me
abhay got nervous . he had been wid girls before also but this time he himself didn't know y he was feeling like this .
abhay - urmm ...
pia - don't waste time yaar please do it na
abhay gathered some courage n tried to unzip it but he kept his eyes closed . touching her bare back was sending chills through her body .
for the first time pia felt so strange . misha's touch never made her feel like that .
she turned around n saw abhay standing wid his eyes closed . she got nervous .
pia - abhay u ?
abhay - may i open my eyes ?
pia - yes
he opened her eyes n pia's  beautiful face infront of him was like watching a divine angel right in front of his eyes .
abhay - actually i came to give u ur phone
he handed her phone to her . she was looking into his eyes n by mistake she kept her hand on his hand instead of the phone . she came back to senses n took the phone back . pia tried to move n by mistake slipped on abhay (nothing is mistake Wink) they both fell on the ground .
pia was on top of him . they both were looking into each other's eyes .
abhay moved a strand of her hair which was falling on his face n was disturbing him to watch her beautiful face. pia felt chills running down her spine . suddenly they heard sumone crying . they turned their faces n found T standing at the door crying thinking they both were doing their husband - wife things in front of the whole college n ran crying .
pia stood up getting embarrassed .
abhay noticed it n tried to make the atmosphere light .
abhay - its OK !! many girls fall looking at me
pia - can u please stop flirting wid me
abhay - how can i ? after all it is my nature n i can't stop myself
               especially when such a pretty wife is standing infront of me !!
pia lauged - tum nahi sudharoge !!

                                    raichand mansion
tashi entered at the evening inside after the college was over . abhay was sitting on the couch busy in chatting wid girls on his cell .
haseena came n looked at her .
haseena - my baby has cum after studying hun ?
tashi smiled n hugged her mom tightly .
abhay - she is no baby mom . she is 18 n i tell u shaadi karvado iski
he said teasingly coz he knew tashi hated it whenever talked about her marriage .
tashi - stop it bro !! u want me to go so soon ?
abhay - not at all sweetheart .
she came n hugged him .
haseena - but sumday u will have to go . i just can't wait to see that
                 moment when my daughter will be dressed up like a bride
tashi - mom please n btw bro is still left for that
haseena - don't worry baby at all . soon m gonna select a bride for him
              too .
abhay - mom y do u even wait for that moment ? m ready to marry
                tomorrow itself .
haseena - besharm !!
abhay laughed
abhay - sorry mom but actually i can bring my wife tomorrow .
haseena - what r u saying abhay ?
abhay - mom , m married n my wife is pregnant
haseena - what ? (she was totally shocked )
abhay couldn't stop laughing
tashi - mom please he is just kidding
haseena was relieved - thank god !!

                                                next day in the college
tashi was standing wid zenia n pia .
suddenly they noticed a girl entering . she was tall n looked pretty too .
she was wearing a red short dress . tashi didn't like her at all .
she passed by them n was accidently bumped wid tashi n tashi's books fell from her hands .
she picked them up n the girl was still standing there .
tashi - hey can't u look n walk ?
girl - listen whoever the hell stupid girl u r , no one is allowed to block
        my way n it was ur fault
tashi - hey it was ur fault
suddenly a boy came running .
boy - hey m really sorry for whatever my sis alina did .
alina - please jeh bro it was her fault
jeh - alina lets go
jeh - m really sorry for whatever happened
pia - its ok . lets go tashi

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Posted: 29 November 2011 at 5:08am | IP Logged
Fab Update Deepa!Smile

Kimmy n her Titli gang...ROFLLove this Modern Romeo n Juliet with advanced technology.Wink And your Romance ka tadka was Awesome!!!Heart Thanks for Pm dear.Big smile


Edited by prerna26 - 29 November 2011 at 5:19am
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Posted: 29 November 2011 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Smileawesome...loved it...

so abhiya scenes were excellentClap...

but now alina has entered in college...well i hope abhiya will realise their feelings soon...

cant wait for their confession...(well i'm still drooling over abhiya proposal in pkyek yesterday) ...

looking forward to mishka & veer-tashi story...

please update soon...



Edited by ananyashera - 29 November 2011 at 5:34am
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Posted: 29 November 2011 at 5:40am | IP Logged
 deepa beautiful update yr  i love it . abhiya s too good yr and omg jey and alina entry .   waiting for next thnx 4 pm sorry for  short comment i m not feeling well actually  i met an accident . my leg hurt very much its paining hope u forgive me . but i read its very lovely .

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