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Posted: 10 March 2012 at 9:12am | IP Logged
its superb loved it...

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Posted: 18 March 2012 at 10:13am | IP Logged

oh mah Gawd! ShockedShockedShocked

no fair you knw. you have me going gaga over each piece of absolute epicness i read from your garden...Tongue

how the hell am i supposed to encourage other writers on this forum after reading your work? nothing seems to match up to it!

this was just a story i read in about an hour (yeah, when you have bugging younger siblings, you'd see that reading this in just an hour is a major accomplishmentLOL) and yet, somehow it over weighs every other ArHi SS i've ever read (not including your works)!!!Clap

i mean, the way you depicted the exposure of shyaam, the way khushi didn't immediately jump for joy and skip off to sunset with arnav when he proposed her but took her time to think instead, the way you described the almost-rape scene and how it made adreline pump hard through my veins...

and i loved the way khushi didn't just leap into the arms of her knight in shining armor, arnav, and took time getting over the horror of the events that had just happened in her life.. it was all absolutely spiffing!

and the hot scenes just left me breathless as if it was me there instead of khushi (yup, all girls imagine themselves as khushi and all guys imagine themselves as arnav while watching/reading ArHi; that's just the way phycology works!Tongue)..

like i said before... any words fall short when i talk about your writings..

all i can say is that you are truly the best writer i've ever had the fortune to come across and i am seriously addicted to this stuff!Big smile

oh, i'll just shut up and read the other stories...Embarrassed




Edited by misslaugheasily - 18 March 2012 at 10:19am

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Posted: 19 March 2012 at 2:29pm | IP Logged
wow i loved it 
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wow nice ending 
-Zara- IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 19 March 2012 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by misslaugheasily

oh mah Gawd! ShockedShockedShocked

no fair you knw. you have me going gaga over each piece of absolute epicness i read from your garden...Tongue

how the hell am i supposed to encourage other writers on this forum after reading your work? nothing seems to match up to it!

this was just a story i read in about an hour (yeah, when you have bugging younger siblings, you'd see that reading this in just an hour is a major accomplishmentLOL) and yet, somehow it over weighs every other ArHi SS i've ever read (not including your works)!!!Clap

i mean, the way you depicted the exposure of shyaam, the way khushi didn't immediately jump for joy and skip off to sunset with arnav when he proposed her but took her time to think instead, the way you described the almost-rape scene and how it made adreline pump hard through my veins...

and i loved the way khushi didn't just leap into the arms of her knight in shining armor, arnav, and took time getting over the horror of the events that had just happened in her life.. it was all absolutely spiffing!

and the hot scenes just left me breathless as if it was me there instead of khushi (yup, all girls imagine themselves as khushi and all guys imagine themselves as arnav while watching/reading ArHi; that's just the way phycology works!Tongue)..

like i said before... any words fall short when i talk about your writings..

all i can say is that you are truly the best writer i've ever had the fortune to come across and i am seriously addicted to this stuff!Big smile

oh, i'll just shut up and read the other stories...Embarrassed



Yay! found another comment of yours. thanks for the sweet words. cant wait to read your other verdicts.Embarrassed
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Posted: 19 March 2012 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
wow.. just read all the parts!! LOVED it.. you are awesome!!
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Posted: 11 May 2012 at 2:07am | IP Logged
This is really interesting! :)
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Posted: 11 May 2012 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Cleaned up and correct links.
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