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Omfggg, FINALLY Her Rescued Her :) 😍 But What Happened To Khushi ?! Continue Soonish 🤗

^^ I Meant He Instead Of Her On The First Line Hon ;) 😆

OMGGg what the hell? why did you leave like that? Oh no whats wrong? did she faint or something else? Gosh update soon man. i cant waittt. And yaaay Go Arnav gooo. Shyam deserved that. Muahahahha babua!

😲 What happened to kushi ??

nice update dear...👏👏👏

Thanks for the comment guys!!!! i'm just wondering should i write the next one now, or 2moro, lol

very nice...cont soon and thanks for the pm:)

Edited by -Zara- - 10 years ago

me 1st! awesome Zee! loved it!

fav line :

Khushi whispered: i would rather die than have shyamji touch me in a way that only you should touch me..

awesome awesome...the fact that she would rather die than letting shyam touch...her...wah too good.😊