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Abhay : I crave for YOU!

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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 9:50am | IP Logged

Phew! So after rattling my head in every possible way, i finally came up with Abhay's POV in a poem form. Its kinda mixture of Dil Ibadaat's English version with my twists. I hope it justifies Abhay's feelings cause. writing Abhay's pov in a poem format was not an easy task!

 I crave...!

The heart prays...

Listen to my heartbeats

I crave to make you mine it sings.

Let me revive these beautiful moments from life

I crave to make you mine it sings.

I crave to live every moment with you,

Whatever happens tomorrow I will live it through.

I crave to take every breath with you,

Whatever the roads may be I will walk with you.

Let me get doomed in your love

Making our heart one..

Shove away these distances,

These moments won't come back,

Hold it tight...don't let them go

Just entwine yourself

Deep within my soul.

Let me steal you away from yourself

And place deep within me.

Let me get drown in your fragrance,

Losing all my defenses as you make me yours.

Take me in your arms,

Hide me in your bosom,

Without you I have no place to go.

So I desire memories so pure

Craving them to be only mine.

Let me wake up in your dreams,

Let the world find me in your eyes,

I crave to make you mine forever because

You are my sunshine!  




Edited by Viviliciousgirl - 21 September 2011 at 9:51am

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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 9:54am | IP Logged
wow nice yr

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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 9:59am | IP Logged
Wonderful...

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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 10:02am | IP Logged

Nice - But why does my uff Abhay Uff have a forlorn look

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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 10:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by carisma2

Nice - But why does my uff Abhay Uff have a forlorn look


Thanks...this is because...here Abhay craves to be with Piya...and as we know Abhay hardly expresses his feelings...his eyes and face speaks his heart here. So i thought this pic would go well with my poem.

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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 10:13am | IP Logged
omG kya pic hai hayeeDay DreamingDay Dreamingi cant take of my eyes 
beautiful post...Embarrassed

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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 10:20am | IP Logged
wow lovely poem.I agree wid ur each & every wordEmbarrassed.Abhay really crave 4 PiaEmbarrassed

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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cuteshrishti

wow lovely poem.I agree wid ur each & every wordEmbarrassed.Abhay really crave 4 PiaEmbarrassed

Thanks Shrishti...u know when i was writing this poem..i only had Dil ibaadat playing on my player! It gave a totally different meaning to my poemWink

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