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"Why can't I forgive him? It's been one year now. And it wasn't his fault after all. Woh to Vicky ne plan kiya tha..."
Her mobile rings...
"Who's calling me at this time? I should have switched it off. Hello!"
"Shut up" she cuts the call.
"Kaun paagal hai jo itni raat ko mujhe call kar raha hai...How did he get my number?"
Again the bell rings, this time she doesn't pick the call. She takes the mobile down into the sitting room where her father and uncles were watching late night news.
"Geet, beta what happened? Aap apne bed main kyun nahi hai?"
"Pappa...Look at this ...some guy is calling me on my mobile and talking nonsense."
He takes the mobile and looks at the number...and suddenly the bell rings again...
He takes the call
"Kaun hai be tu...Raat main ladkiyon ko phone karke pareshaan karta hai...Aisi dhulaee hogi teri ki phir kisi ko bhi phone nahi kar payega...Badtameez...chal phone cut kar abhi...aur aayanda yahan phone kiya to samajh teri shamat aa gayi hai..."
(Ooops...it was not the loafer...it was Maan this time)
"Hello...Dekhiye I don't know why you are talking like this? I'm Maan, Geet's schoolmate and I just wanted to talk to her."
"Maan" he says loudly. Geet is shocked to hear that name.
"Ji haan, Maan...kya main Geet se baat kar sakta hoon"
"Bilkul nahin...this is no time to call a girl...she's sleeping."
He cuts the call and wonders why he decided in the first place to even call her.
Geet looks at her father who looked really annoyed.
"Geet, here,take your mobile. Switch it off and go to sleep."
She goes inside wondering why he was calling her at this time, or why was he calling her at all.
Maan is restless...
"Why can't I go to sleep? Why 'am I so desperate to hear her voice? Is it because of my guilt...Yes that's it, that's the only reason" he told himself, "but why can't I get her off my mind? Her thought is troubling my very sanity."
Then he remembered what Geet's dad had said, "Oh so she's sleeping peacefully. Meri neend uda kar she sleeping...toh mujhe kyun itna farak pad raha hai...I don't care what she does...I'm off to sleep...Tomorrow I have to go to college also."
Geet tosses in her bed from one side to another thinking about Maan.
"Why was he calling me? Zaroor koi baat hogi...Pappa ne usse kitna rudely baat kiya...Geet why are you worried? Accha hua...he deserves it...kya raat ko koi ladka kisi ladki ko phone karta hai? Maan is also no different than that loafer who called earlier...Sheee, Geet what are you saying? Maan and loafer...nahi nahi...he's different...woh itna bura bhi nahi nahi hai...he saved me..."
She sat up and looked at her mobile, picked it and looked at his number.
"I should call him...Pappa doesn't know that he helped me, but I know that and kya pata kuch zaroori baat ho...otherwise woh akdoo thodi naa mujhe phone karta."
She called his number...
Maan got up and picked his mobile, and looked at the number...
"Geet?? She's calling me?? Pehle toh apne Pappa se mujhe dant pitwati hai and then she herself is calling me...yeh ladki bhi na mujhe paagal kar degi."
He picks her call, the moment she hears his voice, she cuts the call nervously.
"Hello Geet, is that you? Phone kaat diya...This girl I say will drive me nuts."
He called her number, but she wouldn't pick up.
"Hadd ho gayi...apne aap ko samajhti kya hai...Main kya uska koi deewana, sirphira aashiq hoon...jo she's not taking my call."
After many sleepless minutes, finally she fell asleep...
She felt someone touching her cheek...She blushed in sleep and said,
"Maan kya kar rahe ho..."
"What? Geet uttoh..."
"Dekho mujhe sone do...poori raat tumhari wajah se main soyi nahi..."
"What? Meri wajah se...OMG yeh poori ki poori sadme main hai...lagta hai kal raat ka kuch zyada hi effect pad gaya hai...but gundon ne toh mere sar par danda mara tha...toh effect isko kyun ho raha hai..." he stopped wondering and tried again to wake her up, "Geet?" he whispered in her ears.
Geet smiled and said in sleep, "Dekho you also sleep and let me also sleep peacefully. Theekh hai you can sleep here but please don't disturb," she then pulls him and he falls next to her on the bed. He angrily tries to get up, but is mesmerised by her beauty. He keeps on looking at her not moving at all. He even forgot to breathe. He slides his fingers into the hair locks over her face and strokes her cheeks gently while tucking them behind her ear. She moves with his touch and smiles in sleep. Maan clean bowled...
Geet slowly opens her eyes and is petrified to see him on her bed, right next to her.
She springs up and almost falls, when Maan holds her and pulls her close, so that she doesn't fall.
"Tum?? Mere ghar ke andar, in my room? What are you doing here? If my father sees you he'll tear you to pieces...murder you..."
"Geet, tumne mujhe call kiya tha..."
She was shocked to hear that, she never thought he would do such a thing.
"Achha call maine kiya tha ya tumne...aur uske liye tum yahan aa gaye "
"Maine kiya tha, but your father said you were sleeping...to phir tumne mujhe call kyun kiya..."
"Tumhara dimag kharab ho gaya hai...Why would I call you? My brain is still functioning, I'm not brain dead jo main tumhe phone karoongi..."
"Oh really...nahi phone kiya...toh yeh dekho, phone records...your number is here, last call made from your number, ab mujhe batao why did you call me?"
~End of Ch 16~
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