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Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon

OS: Based on ASR's Character dheela promo!!

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
This OS is based on the most recent promo of IPKKND. And this thought has been buzzing in my head... Hope you like it!!






"Yeh Delhi main bulbs bhi kitnay mehngay hotay hain, humaray Lucknow main toh itnay paison main poray chorahay kay bulbs aagaen" said Khushi as she entered the Raizada House. She tip toed towards Lavanya's room to make sure she did not have another encounter with that Raakshas cum paani ka bulbula... Kabhi bhi phat parhta hai.. she added to herself while creeping towards her destination.


"Yeh Lavanya ji kay room main itna andhera kyun hai". She saw a shadow sitting on the armchair at the corner near the window. She went towards the shadow exclaiming, "Lavanya ji aap itni pareshan hain Arnav ji kay faislay ko lay kar kay andheray main baithi hain?... Please aap chinta mat karein. Hum kuch aur sochtay hain." She bent forwards towards the person and put her hand on the shadow's hand in a consolatory gesture. As her skin made contact with the stranger skin, she felt an unfathomable familiarity in the touch. It was as if her soul knew this touch, she just couldn't put her finger on it. The next second she realized that the touch was not feminine, and that her hand had touched a male's hard, tough hand.

She immediately withdrew her hand but before she could move back herself, the stranger lit up a lighter right in front of his FIERY INFERNO eyes. Khushi couldn't help but feel herself hypnotized in his eyes, now magnified in the light of the flame... turning crimson at the edges due to extent of the anger he was feeling. She felt suddenly paralyzed as she stared into his gleaming eyes (red) burning against the black background of the room. In her state of hypnotism, her mind went blank, and she staggered forward towards the flame of the lighter and stopping just inches before it. Her breath came out in wheezes, while his completely calm with the lighter being the only instrument separating the two of them.


Gathering herself, she realized the awkwardness of her position with the lighter just before her and Arnav's face right behind it and her body arched forward. She straightened up and asked, "Lavanya ji kahan hain? Aur aap yahan andheray main Lavanya ji kay kamray main kya kar rahay hain".

 "Main nay tum se kaha tha na .. kay mujhe tum say baat karni hai, aur aaj tumhara koi bhi paintara kaam nahi aayega Khushi Kumari Gupta... Mujhe jo kehna hai woh main keh kar rahonga... Aur tum kya is dunya main koi bhi aisa nahi jo meray faislay ko challenge karsakay." Arnav replied in a silent but deadly tone.

Khushi: "Par humain aap say koi baat nahi karni... hum yahan Lavanya ji ko sikhanay kay liye aatay hain. Aap say humara koi lena dena nahi hai...Samjhe aap?...Agar Lavanya ji yahan nahi hain toh humaray honay ka bhi koi matlab nahi hota. Hum ghar ja rahay hain, Lavanya ji ko bata dijiyega."


"Just hold it right there!... Oh wait tum aise nahi rukogi... is baat kay bhi paise logi kya? .(Arnav smirked).. dhoka dena toh tumhari fitrat main hai, jaisay aaj chakaranay ka bahana bana kar nikal gai thi... Mujhe sab pata hai, tumhari jaisi larkiyon ki chaalain, bolo kitnay paisay chahiyen?" Arnav's bellowed in a slightly higher tone.

Khushi couldn't believe anyone could sink so low. She looked at Arnav with disgust in her eyes: "Arey haan, aap jaisay aadmi say aur tawaka (expect) bhi kya kiya ja sakta hai?.. Har cheez ko paisay main toltay hain na aap?.. Lavanya ji kay saath apnay rishtay ko kis category main toltay hain aap... Aik aisa rishta jis ka koi naam hi nahi...Boliye is bay naam rishtay ko kya naam doon?"


Arnav: "Main aur Lavanya jaisay bhi rahein... that is none of your business samjhi tum. Apnay kaam say kaam rakho. Is say aagay barhi na toh..."

Khushi:
"Toh kya?... Toh kya Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada?. Aap kya kareingay, aap kar bhi kiya saktay hain humain zaleel karnay kay illawa. Nani ji kehti hain kay Lavanji ji ka Character Dheela hai. Par humain toh Lagta hai kay aapka Character Dheela hai samjhay aap. Aap jaisa khud garz insaan hi kisi larki kay saath bina shadi kiye reh sakta hai."

Arnav was shocked beyond words, hearing Khushi's last sentence. That was the last straw. He felt as if something snapped inside him.

"Character dheela kya hota hai, yeh main batata hoon tumhain" and moved towards Khushi and pinned her against the wall with his arms barricading her in that restricted space. She felt petrified seeing Arnav in this state. "Main batata hoon character dheela kya hota hai?" Arnav with one hand clutched Khushi's bangles and broke them. He then lounged forward towards her lips while she turned her cheek sideways in a state of deep shock, and terror. He stopped barely a few centimeters from her left cheek , the place where a few seconds ago her lips had been. A tear trickled down her cheek while at the same time thunder raged outside. In a fit of rage, he hammered the wall with both his fists once scaring the daylights out of Khushi. He seemed like a caged animal who had no means of letting out his energy. She stood there, her face turned to the right... her left cheek exposed but her lips out of harm's way. She was so terrified that her teeth started chattering and her lips started shivering.

"Devi Maiyya" the name escaped Khushi's lips. The shivering of her lips, the uttering of the name and the stillness of her posture raised the curtain of anger from over him and brought him back to Earth with his senses now in place.  She turned and gave him a stony look filled with FRIGHT, ANGER, and a trace of HATRED. Arnav had seen Khushi angry before lots of times but this time, he knew he had gone too far. There was something in her expression as if something shattered inside her. He realized it in that despicable moment. He felt guilt overpowering him, he released Khushi from his prison like arms, and she ran from the room without another word or another glance. This time it was his fault, and he was the one who had tried to wrong a girl. His knees gave away, and he fell not only on the carpet of Lavanya's room but deeper and deeper into the abyss of the guilt of the sin/ crime that he was on the verge of committing. He broke down at the horror, and shame of his actions.




Edited by mahi0809 - 21 September 2011 at 7:11am

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
That was enthralling...Thumbs Up

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 11:41pm | IP Logged

that was just fantastic!!

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lotsav_phun

That was enthralling...Thumbs Up


Thanks sooo much!!.. I'm honored!

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
It was Amazing..AWSUM...FABULOUS!!LUVD IT!!

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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 12:01am | IP Logged
WOW...superb... 
very well written 

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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 12:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by littlemoi

that was just fantastic!!



Thank you loads!!... Takes a virtual bow!!LOLLOL
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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 12:03am | IP Logged
OMG Mahi this is oohhh soo very good!! wow brilliant!!! loved it!!! Just WOWOW!!! i just wrote an OS too on the promo lol, but mine seems like nothing after i read ursLOL!! too good yaar!!!

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