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Geet & Maan OS:-The Date! (Page 2)

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 7:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Newdime

I have an Idea you all are writers..why not pick from where it was left...it would be interesting what say?

How about u fill the part about the ceremony and den maybe i can do something after that...?? Wat say? I have no idea what these ceremonies are and how they work...

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 7:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Newdime

Originally posted by Water.

It was a lovely OS.

All those times when Geet left the second invite...Maan wanted her to come with him rite??
And when Maan pocketed the invites earlier..she was jealous n a bit hurt cus he did not ask her?
Any chances of part 2...wanna know what happens at the function...maybe a dance...a kiss while coming back...lots of possibilities...walking in the rain in the parking...etc etc



Hope you will fill the res post...

No part 2...you can pick up from there may be your version..it has been long GF...

thx for the comments...56 views and only few comments and and 2 likes...LOL


Res has been filled!

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 7:13pm | IP Logged
Awesome !!!!

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 7:34pm | IP Logged
Great that I had a chance to comment before I slipped offBig smile

I am sure you are a big romantic at heart - judging from 24HOURS and this one.

I loved the OS immensely, I love mushy romances a lot..and your concept of a strong minded Geet, a professional yet soft hearted Maan and Office Romance is just too great...I go into dreamland whenever I read such stories..


Well the plan for the date was awesome...MSK also needs help, hmm? The sweet and simple gesture like dropping off one invi card which he didnt do this time should have served as a great hint ... Loved Maan getting everything ready for Geet through Adi 
and the naughty idea of introducing her to his date; Geet getting all jealous and insecure at the idea of meeting Maan's date LOLwas awesome...

I just love it that your Geet is always a strong minded individual - i hate lumpy character sketches showing Geet as a helpless person depending on Maan Angry

ooh cant stop gushing about it..it was too romantic Embarrassed

I quite love the idea of adding a part or two , will u try ?

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 8:03pm | IP Logged
So sweet!Big smile
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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 8:10pm | IP Logged
That was super duper cute!! Wish there was a Maan like that out in my community hehe :-)

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 9:26pm | IP Logged
Aw Embarrassed lovely and supercute OS Clap great work!

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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 6:06am | IP Logged
I guess after reading my comment everyone will pounce on me with jootas and chappals.LOLLOL

I dont want a Part II Ouch

Sometimes incompleteness imparts a certain aura and romanticism.Embarrassed

The beauty would be, each one of us will imagine the end in our own way and it would be different, the common ground being "happily ever after"Wink

But that does not mean I do not want another OS...samjhi tum *Maan ishtyle*WinkBig smile

I loved the story but more so I loved the characters especially Geet, I like girls who do not mix personal and professional. She is in love with the man, she gets jealous and hurt but that does not stop her from doing her job. Bravo.ClapClap

And Maan was yummilicious...call me old fashioned but I love men to take charge specially when it comes to wooing.BlushingBlushing

Fabulous piece of work.Clap

Loved it.Big smile

Thanx for the pm love.Hug

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