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SUNSHINE (MG) Epilogue PAGE 136 (9th/Nov/2011) (Page 62)

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 1:08am | IP Logged
Awesome...
wow maan confessed...
luved it..
continue soon 

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awsome update dear

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Part 16

 

he said, 'then shall I talk to Baba' she blushed and hid her face in her palms, he pulled her hands and lifted her chin, 'Geet, please say it' she looked in his eyes and they were lost in a pool of emotions, he cupped her face and traced his thumb on her lower lip making her moan, taking that to be yes he leaned down to seal them and they were lost in a deep passionate kiss.

 

There was no stopping, they just took a break to breathe and after quite some time finally when they were out of breath they inhaled deeply just to be disturbed by a burning smell, and shocked they turned to find that the milk has long back vanished and the vessel was all red black and hot, Geetika's first reaction was to hold the vessel but sensing it MK held her hand and turned off the gas supply and said, 'Geet, holding a hot vessel will do no good, first cut off the fuel supply and then wait for it to cool you can clean it after that, if you try to hold it you will end up burning your fingers' she nodded, 'but if it is put immediately under water the burn marks will easily go' he lightly punched her nose and said, 'they will anyways go with time, vigorously scrubbing it, you can always scrub it with adequate pressure, and marks will gradually go with time' she smiled and hugged him and said, 'you are right, so I get an intelligent man as bonus' he chuckled and said, 'come lets go' she said, 'no, we will first have the breakfast then we will go' he said, 'you will cook now' she made a baby face, 'no, Pinky had made something' he frowned, 'will it be enough for two, I warn you I eat like an elephant' she laughed, he looked at her with desire evident in his eyes, she fumbled and said, 'we can share it' he said, 'are you sure?' she nodded, 'yes, when I am ready to share my life with you, then this is only breakfast' he teased her, 'what all have you decided to share with me' his naughty look made her conscious of their nearness and she pulled him to the dinning table.

 

He pulled her back and lifted her, cradling her in his arms, as her feet left the ground she chuckled, 'what are you doing?' he rubbed the tip of his nose on hers, 'practicing' she said, 'what?' he supplied, 'the place where I am taking you I want you to enter it like this' she gave him a confused looked and he added, 'in Christians after marriage the groom carries the bride in his arms, so I am practicing to carry you, what if I failed' she hit him on his arm and jumped to stand, 'after marriage' he pulled her making her back hit his chest, 'that wild act that you showed few minutes back is also allowed after marriage' she gave him a shocked look, 'WILD' he said, 'yes, look at my face and clothes and hair, you are a tigress' she looked at him and blushed hard noticing his swollen lips she had also had bitten them to bleed, his hair were a mess and his coat, OMG what has she done. He laughed seeing her shocked and red pink, and said 'you can also have a look at yourself they are my perfect reflection' she pushed him in the guest washroom saying, 'straighten yourself, I will also see to myself'

 

There was more then enough, for both and MK said, 'it looks Pinky knew I am coming' she nodded, he smiled and said, 'and she also consulted Adi as to what I like to eat, that makes it two who know I am here' she smiled and forced pie in his mouth.

 

After a hearty breakfast they headed to the car, and he escorted her in, she asked him, 'where are we going?' he pressed her hand and said, 'my house my home' she said, 'but I have been there many times' he held her hand while driving and said, 'no, Geet the place where I live is a house I purchased a year ago, it is not my home' she said, 'then where is your home?' he said, 'remember Geet I told you about my Baba' she nodded, he smiled, 'he was more then my father, he was an architect, and when I completed my architecture he let me construct my dream house and there we two, I and Baba lived for 14 years, it's the place where my heart is' she looked at the content look on his face, and somewhere inside she knew that something was going to be wrong, he continued, 'that house, my home you know Geet, I and Baba both use to sit for hours discussing about how a certain wall should be constructed, what paint we should use, what type of furniture should be place, I used to argue with him on every point and he would also fight back, oh Geet it was so good, but' and he paused increasing the grip on her hand, and continued, 'but, in the end he decided to snatch it from me, and give it to his unseen unknown grand daughter' he paused and rubbed his temples freeing her hand, and said, 'but Geet I am buying it, getting back my home, and I want you to be the first person to enter it' she was all he time listening and calculating the road they were driving and as they were proceeding she was sure that he was referring to KM, then she with a lot of courage praying to the heaven's above asked him, 'your Baba, I mean who was he?' he smiled, 'a very known and renowned architect, you have read about his works, he was Ram Kapoor' he said proudly.

She closed her eyes and remembered that he said that he hates that girl to cores of his existence

 

As the car entered the KM premises she lost all hope and felt like crying, she cursed her late grand father for doing this to him to her, she did not understand how to tell MK that she is the same girl he hates.


 
sorry for being late please don't nail me I was struck  please forgive  me I will try to be punctual
please comment I know I am a fool to keep you waiting but your are angels for dropping a comment for hungry me   you are they always are
send in your love in form of comments ...this is mine for you

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comment on as to what do you think about the this part
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part 17 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1794363&TPN=66&#47922289



Edited by smj1977.shruti - 16 October 2011 at 10:49pm

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 7:24am | IP Logged
hai

this is awesome and great
update soon

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 7:30am | IP Logged
part 16
damn why did u stop here?
so Geet has realized shes the girl Maan hates...
oh no will she hide it or tell Maan and the reaction to face?
cont ASAP dear...

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 7:34am | IP Logged
oww our geet is such a jungli billi...meowEvil Smile
loved da update as usualBig smile

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 7:37am | IP Logged
Awesome update
first half was awesome
loved that to cores
and second half was the dhamaka
that has to come
so will you change the ending or write it on the same note...\
will be waiting for next update
continue soon
 

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 7:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by softly_spoken

Awesome update
first half was awesome
loved that to cores
and second half was the dhamaka
that has to come
so will you change the ending or write it on the same note...\
will be waiting for next update
continue soon
 


IDK where I will head to
but I have a long way to go
and yes it will be like DK but with a touch of a novel
in serial you can't show certain things but in novels there is no limit
well hope that I am doing justice to DK
in the drama Ahmer hardly touched her 4-5 times that to a flying touch , he only once held her hand when helping her climb down, bu here Maan can do many things to her ... so I wrote that love scene... and as many were demanding for some nearness I felt it should be given... a kiss is quite normal these days ... so no harm done... well keep guessing what is to come... but for sure it will be like DK... with a tadka 

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